Unit 1 What's the matter?写作训练 作业（含答案）

第六课（时）作业：
Unit 1 What’s the matter
写作训练
作业一
每个人都渴望拥有健康的身心，都希望享受美好的生活。但是身体不舒服的时候，你该怎么办？当遇到定发事件时，你会急救吗？你对健康的生活有什么好的建议呢？
写作任务
假如你是李华，得知你的朋友李明患感冒了。请你根据以下要点给他发一封电子邮件，并给他提出一些建议。要点1.测量一下体温，看看医生，好好休息，按时服药；
2.多锻炼，远离垃圾食品，吃健康食物；
3.养成健康的生活习惯，早睡早起。
思路点拔
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
(
提出问题
表达问题
针对问题
提出建议
表达祝愿
How to get
better soon
How to keep
healthy
I
’
m sorry to hear that you have a
Cold. A you feeling better now
temperature, doctor,
test, medicine
exercise, junk food,
fruit and vegetables,
Go to bed, get up
I hope you
’
ll get better noon.
)
【遣词造句】就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。
1.你应该马上量一下体温并去看医生。
You should right away and .
2.你应该好好休息，并按时服药。
You should and .
3.你应该多锻炼，最好坚持每天运动一小时。
You should ,and you'd better .
4.你应该远离垃圾食品，多吃水果和蔬菜。
You should and .
5.你应该每天早睡早起。
You should and every day.
【巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。
本文中，可以使用first,second,finally 等表顺序的词来介绍保持健康的几个方面的内容，使文章显得有层次性。
佳句妙用
1.No sports,no life. (没有运动就没有生命。)
2.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
(一天一个苹果，医生不找我。)
3. Health is better than wealth.(健康胜于财富。)
4. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
（早睡早起使人健康、富有而聪明。)
【连句成篇】
自我检查：通读一遍，找出是否有时态、人称、要点、拼写等错误。
写作实践：
越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目 English Corner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。
要求：
1.80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：
1.运动安全的现状和重要性；
2.运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则…·…)
3.……
参考词汇：热身运动 warming-up exercise
范文赏析(书写工整，得印象分）
第六课（时）作业：
Unit 1 What’s the matter
写作训练
作业二
一、话题分析
本单元话题是如何表述身体的种种不适、如何描述突发事件以及如何给出恰当的建议，使学生养成健康的生活方式。通过学习本单元使学生学会关心他人身体健康，并且能够提出一些建议，同时让学生了解健康的生活方式的重要性，懂得如何通过调节饮食、保证睡眠时间、劳逸结合、加强体育锻炼来增强体质，提高学习效率，并掌握日常生活中的急救常识。
二、写作方法
“总一分—总”法对健康与急救提建议
总：总说健康的重要性；
分：针对如何拥有健康，分层次、具体地提出建议和方法；
总：总结概括以上提出的建议和方法，提出愿望。
三、素材积累
1.对健康及急救提建议常用的词汇：
healthy,important, necessary, doctor, keep,fruit, strong, exercise, sleep, stay up, feel sick, lie down, have a (good) rest, go to hospital, take breaks,give up,be in control of
2.对健康及急救提建议常用的句型：
Health is very important to...
It is necessary to...
We should/shouldn't..
We need to...
You'd better (not)...
四、写作任务
请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
注意： (1)语言表达要准确，内容要客观；
（2）80词左右。
参考词汇：balanced diet均衡的饮食；stay up 熬夜
五、写作模板
(
Exercise:
总
(引出话题)
分
(具体建议)
总
(总结观点
)
Eating:
Sleeping:
Importance: Health is very important to us. So it is necessary to.….
have a balanced diet/eat
lots of fruit and vegetables
never work too hard/
never stay up too late
Do as these. I am sure...
play sports a lot every day
)
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us.
自我检查：通读一遍，找出是否有时态、人称、要点、拼写等错误。
写作实践
新型冠状病毒（Novel Coronavirus）引发的具有传染性的病毒性肺炎影响了人们的生活。请你用英文写一篇短文，谈谈如何预防新型冠状病毒肺炎（COVID-19）。要点如下：1.尽量不去人多的地方；2.外出时佩戴口罩；
3.勤洗手；4.……
注意：1.词数：80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：口罩mask
第六课时.作业一
【精彩范文】
Dear Li Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you have a cold. Are you feeling better now If not, you should take your temperature right away and see a doctor. As long as you have a good rest and take medicine on time, you will get better soon.
Here is some advice for you to keep healthy. First, no sports, no life. You should take more exercise after school.Second, stay away from junk food. You should eat more fruit and vegetables. Finally, get into a healthy living habit. You should go to bed early and get up early.
I hope you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作实践
More and more people try to keep healthy by playing sports. But we may hurt ourselves unless we know something about sports safety. Sports safety is really important for us.
We must stay safe while doing exercise. We should choose the sport that is suitable for us. It's important for us to wear sports clothes when we play sports. They help us feel comfortable and act freely. We'd better take warming-up exercise before we play sports. Knowing the rules of the sport also helps us stay safe.
All in all, we do exercise to keep healthy, not to hurt ourselves. Pay much attention to sports safety.
第六课时.作业二
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us. So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy.
We should have a balanced diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. They are good for health. Don't eat too much. And we should exercise a lot every day to keep strong. Also, we should sleep for about 8 hours at night,and never work too hard. Remember, it's not good to stay up too late.
Do as these.I am sure we can keep healthy.
写作实践
One possible version:
Because of the Novel Coronavirus, we had a special time. Nobody wants to get the disease, but how should we prevent it and protect ourselves Here are my suggestions.
First, we should try not to go to places where there are many people. Second, whenever we go out, we should wear masks. They can protect us from catching the frightening disease.Third, we should develop a habit of washing our hands frequently. Last but not least,we should drink more water have more rest and do a proper amount of sport at home, which will certainly make us stronger.
I strongly believe we can keep healthy if we follow the suggestions.