Units 1-5 期中作文专题及范文2022-2023学年人教版八年级英语下册(含解析）

人教版八年级Unit1-5期中作文专题及范文
1．英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运。” 在生活中，一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。请你以“Good habits make me ________”为题写一篇短文（词数80—100）。
要求：
1.补全标题（参考词汇：better, happier, healthier, stronger等）；
2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。
Good habits make me ________
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence (影响) us a lot in many ways. I think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Good habits make me healthy
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think good habits make me healthy. As we all know, good habits and good health are twins. Good habits can make people healthy, for example, getting enough sleep, having breakfast, and doing exercise regularly.
I had such a experience, in the past, I often went to bed very late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said, so I couldn’t learn well. Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o’clock and little by little, I have developed this habit. Now I feel much better, I can follow my teachers in class and learn well.
From my experience, I know having good habits are so important that I take up forming more good habits. I believe I will certainly have good health. Good habits will also make me better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：根据以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：已给出部分作文标题及参考词汇，考生可根据给出的提示写出符合题目要求“好的习惯对人的影响”的作文，注意单词的正确拼写，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接表达自己的个人观点。以“好的习惯让我健康”这个观点为开头，简单举例说明好习惯有哪些；
第二步，具体阐述关于“好的习惯让我健康”的个人经历。以过去的坏习惯（熬夜）和现在的好习惯（早睡）来形成对比，突显出好的习惯对自己的好处；
第三步，书写总结。表达对于“好习惯”的认同和“自己会养成更多好习惯”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know正如我们所知
②for example例如
③in the past在过去
④little by little逐渐地
⑤take up doing sth.开始做某事
⑥better and better 越来越好
[高分句型]
①I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said, so I couldn’t learn well.（“pay attention to sth.” 句型，及what引导的宾语从句）
②Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o’clock and little by little, I have developed this habit.（“ask sb. to do sth.” 句型）
③From my experience, I know having good habits are so important that I take up forming more good habits.（“so+形容词+that+结果状语从句）
2．有句话说“帮助他人，快乐自己”。志愿活动在中国已经很流行了。你愿意帮助他人吗？如果你有机会成为志愿者，你愿意做什么工作呢？为什么？请根据提示，写一篇文章。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：be going to； have a chance；would like to；not only...but also...
Volunteering is becoming more and more popular in China. We are making ourselves happy while we are helping others. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Volunteering is becoming more and more popular in China. We are making ourselves happy while we are helping others.
If I have a chance to do volunteer work, I’m going to work in a hospital. Being a nurse is my dream. I would like to help those who are sick. To make them feel happy is the most important and meaningful thing for me. Not only can I get some experience about taking care of patients but also I feel good about helping others. I think I will do my best to work for people who need my help!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，提出自己愿意做的志愿者工作：成为护士；
第二步，详细介绍要成为护士的原因；
第三步，相信自己一定可以做好志愿者工作。
[亮点词汇]
①do one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I would like to help those who are sick. (who引导的定语从句)
3．书面表达
学生做家务不仅可以培养劳动意识，而且有利于掌握一些生活技能。假设学校正在开展“珍爱亲情，我爱做家务”的征文活动，请你针对该话题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范。
2.词数100左右，文意开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.
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One possible version:
As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.
First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent. After all, I can’t depend on others all my life.
Second, doing housework can help share my parents’work. It can also improve the relationship between my parents and me.
Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.
In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求对学生做家务这一话题，发表自己的看法，讲述学生做家务的一些好处。这是一个话题作文，题目中只给出了写作的话题，而具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行详细地阐述。短文应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。
例文点评：例文写得非常优秀，文章是总分总的结构，层次清晰。第一段点明文章主旨，下面从三个方面叙述了做家务的好处，使用了First, Second和Finally，叙述详细、清晰。最后用一句话作总结。句式结构文章，符合英语的表达需要。语法规范、语言准确。
高分亮点：
短语：As a middle school student；is good for；look after；After all；depend on；all my life；keep my room tidy；have a comfortable place to live and study；In short。
句型：I think doing housework is good for me.；First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent；Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.；In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home
4．中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。根据下面的提示，以“Should middle school students do housework ”为题写一篇英语短文，就家务劳动发表自己的观点。
内容包括：
(1)你经常做家务吗？一般做什么家务？
(2)你对中学生做家务的看法及原因(三点)；
(3)呼吁更多的人参与家务劳动。
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Should Middle School Students Do Housework
Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Should middle school students do housework
Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives. So I often do housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor and cooking.
As for me, I think middle school students should do housework. Here are three reasons. Firstly, doing some housework can help us grow up, because we can’t depend on others all our life. Secondly, doing housework can keep us healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Finally, we share our parents’ work when doing housework. They must be happy if we can help them.
In a word, in order to make ourselves better persons, it is necessary for us to do housework at home in our free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，标题已给出；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，应注意补充三点原因，同时注重表达的逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己会经常做家务，并介绍自己常做的家务；
第二步，具体阐述对中学生做家务的看法，并补充三点原因，可阐述做家务的好处，要注意表达的逻辑需要清晰，突出重点；
第三步，呼吁中学生要多做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②depend on依赖
③be regarded as被视为
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Doing some housework can help us grow up, because we can’t depend on others all our life. （动名词作主语）
②It is necessary for us to do housework at home in our free time.（it is+adj+for sb+to do sth句型，表示某人做某事是如何的）
5．写一篇80词左右的作文，讲述一个令你难忘的记忆。
要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语言流畅，书写整洁。
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One possible version:
Last summer holiday, I worked as a volunteer in the city library. Every day, I got up early and got there on time. My job is to help organize the books on the shelves. It was not an interesting task for many people. But to me, it’s so exciting, because I could find many new books and know their categories. The only problem was that many people didn’t return the book to the right shelves, and sometimes I had to walk a long way to put the book in the right place. I hope every reader could not only take knowledge from the books but also be a civilized reader.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求描述一段令你难忘的回忆，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点；
第二步，叙述事情的经过；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期许。
[亮点词汇]
①work as a volunteer做志愿者
②get up early起得早
③not only...but also不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①The only problem was that many people didn’t return the book to the right shelves（that引导的表语从句）
②I hope every reader could not only take knowledge from the books but also be a civilized reader.（宾语从句）