Unit 1 What's the matter?书面表达 2022-2023学年人教版八年级英语下册（含答案）

八下unit 1 书面表达
书面表达：一
你的朋友Jack由于长时间在手机(mobile phone)上玩游戏， 现在头痛、眼睛痛、背痛， 并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介 绍一下他的情况， 并给出你对他的建议。
要求：1. 内容包含所提供的信息， 可适当发挥；
2. 书写认真， 句子通顺；
3. 词数：80左右。
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One possible version:
Jack is my friend. He likes pl aying games on mobile phones very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn't sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day. I think he should take breaks away from the mobile phone. He shouldn't use the mobile phone for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
点评：
本文运用了“总—分—总”法提建议，总体介绍存在的问题(He likes p laying games…for too long without moving. Now he has a headache…so he feels tired every day. )；针对问题给出具体建议(I think he should take breaks away from…He shouldn't use the mobile phone…He should do eye exercises…at night. )；最后总结，表达祝愿(I think if he has a good rest，he will feel well soon. )
添彩点：
1. 恰当运用本单元所学的 sit in the same way, without, sore, should和shouldn't等词汇表达自己的思想。
2. so, do eye exercises, I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon. 等词句运用得恰如其分，使文章增色不少。
书面表达：二
每个人都希望自己健康。那么，如何保持身体健康呢？请围绕这个话题并结合你自己的实际情况，写一篇英语短文，简要地谈一谈你的做法。要求70个词左右。
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One possible version:
It’s important for everyone to keep healthy. As for myself, how do I keep healthy First, I take exercise every day. I like many kinds of sports such as running, swimming, playing basketball, etc. Second, I eat a balanced diet. I have a good eating habit. I like vegetables and fruit very much, and I seldom eat junk food. Third, I sleep for at least eight hours every night. I think the best way of relaxing is sleeping.