课件18张PPT。八年级(下) Units 5-6第三部分 高频话
题写作指南难忘的事情
写作导图
从全国近五年有关“难忘的一件事”相关话题书面表达的命题来看,此类作文通常会从和学生学习或日常生活相关的难忘事情或经历两个角度进行设题。预计安徽考查此话题以学生日常生活难忘的事情为主,下面以(’14贵阳)为例:Unforgettab-le eventsWhat eventsBeginning a new student, weak in Englishwe helped himhe made progressgreetingremembering many thingslisten and speak moretake noteswrite diariesFeeling put your heart into the thing, you will succeed亮点句型速成
常用句型:I will never forget the class. It
gave me an important lesson.
推荐句型: ①I will never forget the class
because it gave me an important
lesson.
②I will never forget the class
which gave me an important
lesson. ③The class which gave me an
important lesson is unforgettable. 开头句:
1. I still remember the day last summer when I went for a picnic with my father.
2. Everyone has an unforgettable thing
in his life. So do I.
3. During the long time, there was one
thing that I will never forget.中间句:
1. There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born.
2. I still remember the time when I
received the beautifully packaged gift
from my father. 3. Then he told me to keep studying hard
and he would support me all the time.
4. Suddenly, a little boy behind me, stood
up and made room for the woman.
5. There is no doubt that parents have
given me a lot since I was born.
6. These magic words touched my heart
and I will never forget him.结尾句:
1. These magic words touched my heart and I will never forget him.
2. In my opinion, friends are the persons who can share happiness and sorrow.典例剖析(’13黔东南州)
我们即将结束三年的初中生活,初中阶段必定有很多值得记忆的事。
假如你是王海,请用英语给你的英国笔友Susan写一封信,谈谈你初中生活中最难忘的一件事。
要点如下:
1. 事情发生的时间、地点、经过;
2. 你从这件事中明白了什么道理。要求:
1. 意思连贯,语法正确,层次清楚;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名等个人信息。
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 短文主语为第一人称。
2. 文中是描述过去已发生的事情,所以时态应以一般过去时为主;描述自己所得到的启发应为一般现在时。【高分范文】
Dear Susan,
How are you? I’ll graduate from my school right now.I feel really sad to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates. I have remembered many things during my school life. For example,last year there was a new student coming to our class.He was really weak in English. English.Most of us helped him,including my teacher.We told him to listen and speak as much as possible, take notes in the class and write a diary in English very often. So,in the last English exam, he made great progress. The result cheered him up.From him, I know if you put your heart into the thing you want to do,you will succeed in the end.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hai【检测菜单】
1. 毕业于________________
2. 对……说再见_________________
3. 在……方面很差_____________
4. 尽可能多地听和说
______________________________________
5. 记笔记___________
6. 写日记___________graduate fromsay goodbye tobe weak inlisten and speak as much as possibletake noteswrite a diary7. 取得很大进步______________________
8.结果令他振奋。
____________________________
9.如果你用心做你想做的事,最终会取得成功的
__________________________________________
________________________________________make great progressThe result cheered him up.if you put your heart into the thing youwant to do, you will succeed in the end