课件18张PPT。七年级(下) Modules 11-12第三部分 高频话
题写作指南校园旅行
写作导图
从全国近五年校园旅行相关话题书面表达的命题来看,通常会从旅行前的准备(旅行目的、旅行地点、出游交通方式、必备物品、出发时间等)、旅行时需要注意的事项(保护环境,不乱扔垃圾、遵守规章制度、积极主动帮助他人等)、旅游方式的描述及旅行后的收获四方面进行设题。以(2014桂林)为例:A trip to
BeijingBeginningDuring the tripEndingWho, when, whereFirst day…Second day……Feeling (wonderful)亮点句型速成
常用句型:I had some experience. I travelled
in Beijing.
推荐句型: I had some experience when I
travelled in Beijing. 常用句型:I could go travelling to a tourist
attraction. I enjoyed myself in
the summer holiday.
推荐句型: I could go travelling to a
tourist attraction to enjoy
myself in the summer holiday.开头句:
1. I’m so excited about my trip to Hong
Kong.
2. Every month, we go on a school trip to
a museum or a theater.
3. As for me, travelling is the way to
relax.
4. I want to travel to the Great Wall one
day.中间句:
1. I’m very glad to be your guide.
2. You’d better wear your sports shoes.
3. I don’t know which place is the most
beautiful.
4. The Summer Palace is really worth
going. 5. The reason why I want to go to Beijing
is that there are many places of interest.
6. We have only one day for New York.
7. Hainan is the most beautiful place that
I have ever been to.结尾句:
1. I will meet many people and make
friends with them during my trip.
2. I hope you will have a good time here.典例剖析(2014桂林)
你的美国朋友Tom非常喜欢中国文化,去年暑假你和他一起从桂林出发去北京旅游了几天,你们参观了一些著名景点,还品尝了一些有名的小吃……请把你们的旅游经历写成一篇短文。
要求:1. 文章字数在80~100词之间,要点齐
全,可以适当发挥。
2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等
信息。 My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A Trip to Beijing
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.本题要求写一篇记叙文。记叙自己和汤姆一起旅游的经历,写作时主要用第一人称,写汤姆时用第三人称。
2.记叙的是过去的事情,主要用一般过去时。【高分范文】
A Trip to Beijing
My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. The next day, we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. It was a fantasticexperience, but we felt tired. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world! Tom is interested in Chinese culture, so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally, we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin. The trip to Beijing was short, but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.【检测菜单】
1. 拍了很多照片_____________________
2. 奇妙的经历________________________
3. 世界上最美味的食物
_______________________________________
4. 对……感兴趣_________________
5. 最后________
6. 购物_______________
take lots of photosa fantastic experiencefinally the most delicious food in the worldbe interested indo shopping7. 旅途虽然短暂,但是很精彩。
____________________________________________The trip was short , but it was wonderful.