2025届考生必备中考英语热点话题写作指导学案 Lesson 11 乐于助人类
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Writing Lesson 11 乐于助人类
学校发起 "新时代雷锋精神" 英语征文活动，请以 “Small Acts, Big Heart: My Role Model Yang Min”为题，写一篇短文。内容需包含：
人物事迹：具体助人行为 + 持续时间 + 社会影响
个人感悟：从杨敏事迹中获得的启示
行动计划：结合 "志愿服务时长认证" 等新时代公益元素
时代意义：雷锋精神在当代的价值
一．审题要点
人称：第三人称（描述事迹）+ 第一人称（感悟与行动）
时态：现在完成时（事迹持续性）+ 一般将来时（行动计划）
结构：采用 "榜样事迹→精神提炼→个人行动→时代呼吁" 四段式，增强逻辑层次感
二、提纲优化与细节拓展
段落 内容 细节/亮点（红色为可积累词汇搭配）
第一段 （榜样事迹） 杨敏的具体助人行动 volunteers at Sunshine Nursing Home every 15th and 30th of the month （每月15日和30日在阳光养老院做志愿者） has provided over 200 umbrellas to strangers through her Rainy Day Help Stand（已经通过她的“雨天帮助站”为陌生人提供了200多把雨伞）
第二段 （个人感悟） 从杨敏身上学到的品质 her quiet dedication shows that kindness is not about grand gestures but consistent care（她安静的奉献表明，善良不是大姿态，而是始终如一的关心） small acts of service can create a ripple effect in society（小小的服务行为可以在社会上产生连锁反应）
第三段 （准备建议） 结合学校志愿活动的具体计划 join the school’s '100-Hour Volunteer Challenge' （参加学校的“100小时志愿者挑战赛”） launch a book-sharing program for rural schools with my class （和我的班级一起开展农村学校图书共享计划）
第四段 （诚意与期待） 雷锋精神的当代价值 In the digital age, Lei Feng’s spirit reminds us of the power of human connection（在数字时代，雷锋精神提醒我们人与人之间联系的力量） every volunteer hour is a step toward a more compassionate world（每一个志愿者的时间都是迈向一个更富有同情心的世界的一步）
高级词汇积累
公益组织名称：the Lions Club（狮子会）、book-sharing program（图书共享计划）
志愿服务术语：volunteer hour certification（义工时间认证）、knits scarves for homeless people（为无家可归的人编织围巾）
时代精神关键词：Spirit of Lei Feng（雷锋精神）、social responsibility（社会责任）
四、遣词造句升级（附中考高频表达）
基础句型 升级句型（高分句型） 句式解析
Go to the old people’s home twice a month. For six years, Yang Min has faithfully visited Sunshine Nursing Home on the 15th and 30th of each month, where she cuts hair, washes clothes, and shares stories with the elderly. six years时间词，以及具体的活动cuts hair, washes clothes, and shares stories 都将她的精神具象化
Offer umbrellas on rainy days. She sets up a 'Rainy Day Help Stand' near the subway, providing free umbrellas and raincoats to over 20 strangers on average each rainy season. sets up发起、组织 on average each rainy season 平均每个雨季 数词将行动量化
I want to help others. Inspired by her, I’ve pledged to complete 50 volunteer hours this year, starting with mentoring primary school students in English. pledged to 发誓、承诺 starting with动名词做伴随状语 mentoring primary school students in English 辅导小学生英语（事例具体化）
五、句型总结（新增中考高频句型）
1. 事迹描述：
For years, Yang Min has been a regular volunteer at..., where she...
（现在完成进行时强调持续性）
（多年来，杨敏一直是……，在那里她……）
One of her most touching actions is...（最高级 + 表语从句）
（她最感人的动作之一是）
感悟表达：
What impresses me most is her belief that...（主语从句 + 同位语从句）
（给我印象最深的是她的信念……）
Her story has taught me that kindness is a language understood by all.
（宾语从句 + 被动语态）
（她的故事告诉我，善良是一种人人都能理解的语言。）
倡议句型：
Let’s follow her example by...（祈使句 + 动名词结构）
（让我们以她为榜样）
Together, our collective efforts can turn small acts into a wave of positive change.
（比喻修辞）
（只要我们齐心协力，我们的集体努力就能把小小的行动变成一波积极的变化。）
六、强化版填空训练-根据中文提示补全句子，注意使用升级表达：
1. Yang Min, a member of the Lions Club, ____________________ (六年来一直致力于志愿服务). She visits ____________________ (阳光养老院) twice a month, ____________________ (为老人读报并修剪指甲).
2. ____________________ (最让我感动的是) her "Rainy Day Help Stand", where she ____________________ (平均每天帮助 15 位路人) with free rain gear.
3. Inspired by her, I ____________________ (报名参加学校的 "爱心辅导" 项目), where I’ll help ____________________ (贫困家庭的孩子) with their studies.
4. I also plan to ____________________ (发起旧衣捐赠活动) and ____________________ (鼓励同学们加入).
5. ____________________ (雷锋精神永不过时), and every small act of service ____________________ (是文明社会的基石).
答案示例：
has dedicated herself to volunteering for six years; Sunshine Nursing Home; reads newspapers and trims nails for the elderly
What moves me most is; helps an average of 15 passers-by daily
have signed up for the school’s "Heart Tutoring" program; children from low-income families
launch an old-clothes donation drive; encourage classmates to join
The Spirit of Lei Feng never fades; is a cornerstone of a civilized society
七、参考范文（可根据学生水平层次进行删减处理）
Small Acts, Big Heart: My Role Model Yang Min
In our fast-paced world, Yang Min stands out as a beacon of kindness. As a Lions Club volunteer for six years, she visits Sunshine Nursing Home on the 15th and 30th of each month, where she cuts hair, washes clothes, and even writes letters for the elderly. On rainy days, her "Rainy Day Help Stand" near the subway provides free umbrellas to an average of 20 strangers daily, a simple gesture that has warmed countless hearts.
What inspires me most is her belief that "kindness is a cycle". She once said, "When you help others, you’re not just changing their day—you’re planting seeds of hope." This mindset has taught me that compassion lies in consistency, not grandeur.
Motivated by her example, I’ve joined my school’s "100-Hour Volunteer Challenge". This year, I’ll tutor primary school students in English every Saturday and organize a book drive for rural libraries. I also plan to invite my peers to join a "Community Care Network", where we’ll help elderly neighbors with grocery shopping and tech support.
In the spirit of Lei Feng, Yang Min shows us that every act of service, no matter how small, is a step toward a more caring world. As teenagers, let’s embrace the power of small kindnesses—together, we can create a ripple effect that transforms society.
Writing Lesson 11 乐于助人类
学校发起 "新时代雷锋精神" 英语征文活动，请以 “Small Acts, Big Heart: My Role Model Yang Min”为题，写一篇短文。内容需包含：
人物事迹：具体助人行为 + 持续时间 + 社会影响
个人感悟：从杨敏事迹中获得的启示
行动计划：结合 "志愿服务时长认证" 等新时代公益元素
时代意义：雷锋精神在当代的价值
一．审题要点
人称：第三人称（描述事迹）+ 第一人称（感悟与行动）
时态：现在完成时（事迹持续性）+ 一般将来时（行动计划）
结构：采用 "榜样事迹→精神提炼→个人行动→时代呼吁" 四段式，增强逻辑层次感
二、提纲优化与细节拓展
段落 内容 细节/亮点（红色为可积累词汇搭配）
第一段 （榜样事迹） 杨敏的具体助人行动 volunteers at Sunshine Nursing Home every 15th and 30th of the month （每月15日和30日在阳光养老院做志愿者） has provided over 200 umbrellas to strangers through her Rainy Day Help Stand（已经通过她的“雨天帮助站”为陌生人提供了200多把雨伞）
第二段 （个人感悟） 从杨敏身上学到的品质 her quiet dedication shows that kindness is not about grand gestures but consistent care（她安静的奉献表明，善良不是大姿态，而是始终如一的关心） small acts of service can create a ripple effect in society（小小的服务行为可以在社会上产生连锁反应）
第三段 （准备建议） 结合学校志愿活动的具体计划 join the school’s '100-Hour Volunteer Challenge' （参加学校的“100小时志愿者挑战赛”） launch a book-sharing program for rural schools with my class （和我的班级一起开展农村学校图书共享计划）
第四段 （诚意与期待） 雷锋精神的当代价值 In the digital age, Lei Feng’s spirit reminds us of the power of human connection（在数字时代，雷锋精神提醒我们人与人之间联系的力量） every volunteer hour is a step toward a more compassionate world（每一个志愿者的时间都是迈向一个更富有同情心的世界的一步）
高级词汇积累
公益组织名称：the Lions Club（狮子会）、book-sharing program（图书共享计划）
志愿服务术语：volunteer hour certification（义工时间认证）、knits scarves for homeless people（为无家可归的人编织围巾）
时代精神关键词：Spirit of Lei Feng（雷锋精神）、social responsibility（社会责任）
四、遣词造句升级（附中考高频表达）
基础句型 升级句型（高分句型） 句式解析
Go to the old people’s home twice a month. For six years, Yang Min has faithfully visited Sunshine Nursing Home on the 15th and 30th of each month, where she cuts hair, washes clothes, and shares stories with the elderly. six years时间词，以及具体的活动cuts hair, washes clothes, and shares stories 都将她的精神具象化
Offer umbrellas on rainy days. She sets up a 'Rainy Day Help Stand' near the subway, providing free umbrellas and raincoats to over 20 strangers on average each rainy season. sets up发起、组织 on average each rainy season 平均每个雨季 数词将行动量化
I want to help others. Inspired by her, I’ve pledged to complete 50 volunteer hours this year, starting with mentoring primary school students in English. pledged to 发誓、承诺 starting with动名词做伴随状语 mentoring primary school students in English 辅导小学生英语（事例具体化）
五、句型总结（新增中考高频句型）
1. 事迹描述：
For years, Yang Min has been a regular volunteer at..., where she...
（现在完成进行时强调持续性）
（多年来，杨敏一直是……，在那里她……）
One of her most touching actions is...（最高级 + 表语从句）
（她最感人的动作之一是）
感悟表达：
What impresses me most is her belief that...（主语从句 + 同位语从句）
（给我印象最深的是她的信念……）
Her story has taught me that kindness is a language understood by all.
（宾语从句 + 被动语态）
（她的故事告诉我，善良是一种人人都能理解的语言。）
倡议句型：
Let’s follow her example by...（祈使句 + 动名词结构）
（让我们以她为榜样）
Together, our collective efforts can turn small acts into a wave of positive change.
（比喻修辞）
（只要我们齐心协力，我们的集体努力就能把小小的行动变成一波积极的变化。）
六、强化版填空训练-根据中文提示补全句子，注意使用升级表达：
1. Yang Min, a member of the Lions Club, ____________________ (六年来一直致力于志愿服务). She visits ____________________ (阳光养老院) twice a month, ____________________ (为老人读报并修剪指甲).
2. ____________________ (最让我感动的是) her "Rainy Day Help Stand", where she ____________________ (平均每天帮助 15 位路人) with free rain gear.
3. Inspired by her, I ____________________ (报名参加学校的 "爱心辅导" 项目), where I’ll help ____________________ (贫困家庭的孩子) with their studies.
4. I also plan to ____________________ (发起旧衣捐赠活动) and ____________________ (鼓励同学们加入).
5. ____________________ (雷锋精神永不过时), and every small act of service ____________________ (是文明社会的基石).
答案示例：
has dedicated herself to volunteering for six years; Sunshine Nursing Home; reads newspapers and trims nails for the elderly
What moves me most is; helps an average of 15 passers-by daily
have signed up for the school’s "Heart Tutoring" program; children from low-income families
launch an old-clothes donation drive; encourage classmates to join
The Spirit of Lei Feng never fades; is a cornerstone of a civilized society
七、参考范文（可根据学生水平层次进行删减处理）
Small Acts, Big Heart: My Role Model Yang Min
In our fast-paced world, Yang Min stands out as a beacon of kindness. As a Lions Club volunteer for six years, she visits Sunshine Nursing Home on the 15th and 30th of each month, where she cuts hair, washes clothes, and even writes letters for the elderly. On rainy days, her "Rainy Day Help Stand" near the subway provides free umbrellas to an average of 20 strangers daily, a simple gesture that has warmed countless hearts.
What inspires me most is her belief that "kindness is a cycle". She once said, "When you help others, you’re not just changing their day—you’re planting seeds of hope." This mindset has taught me that compassion lies in consistency, not grandeur.
Motivated by her example, I’ve joined my school’s "100-Hour Volunteer Challenge". This year, I’ll tutor primary school students in English every Saturday and organize a book drive for rural libraries. I also plan to invite my peers to join a "Community Care Network", where we’ll help elderly neighbors with grocery shopping and tech support.
In the spirit of Lei Feng, Yang Min shows us that every act of service, no matter how small, is a step toward a more caring world. As teenagers, let’s embrace the power of small kindnesses—together, we can create a ripple effect that transforms society.