专题07 书面表达15篇（浙江中考最新模拟题）-2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递第三辑（答案+解析）

2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递第三辑
专题07 书面表达15篇（浙江中考最新模拟题）
一、书面表达
（2025·绍兴模拟） 有人说毕业季是充盈希望的时节，有人说它掺杂着感伤。你有着怎样的感受呢？请根据所给内容提示，写一篇题为 A Graduation Season的英语征文，拟向校刊"英语角"投稿。
注意：
1．征文必须包括所有提示内容，可根据合理的逻辑微调顺序、适当增加细节；（2）请将划线部分进行合理补充，在省略号处适当拓展；（3）词数:80—100;（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
A Graduation Season
In the past three years, none of us has grown up alone. As for me, it's not just a graduation season. First, it's a parting（离别的）season.
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2．（2025·金华模拟） 最近，某英文报正在开展以"I want to say thanks to▲"为主题的征文活动，旨在鼓励大家回顾美好时光、表达感恩之情。假如你是李华，请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
问题提示：
Whom do you want to say thanks to
Why do you want to say thanks to him/ her
What will you do to show your thanks
注意：(1) 短文需包含问题提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；(3) 词数：80左右。
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3．（2025·浙江模拟） 假设你是李华，你班交换留学生David即将返校，他对你校菜园基地非常感兴趣。请你根据以下提示写一份邮件向他做介绍。
School Vegetable Garden
Location near the playground
Activities ◆ plant vegetables ◆ water them …
Meanings ◆ learn farming skills ◆ form the habit of labor …
注意：（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等信息；（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I'm excited to know that you are interested in our school vegetable garden. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2025·临安模拟） 假如你是李华，你校英语社团将举行以"劳动(Labor)"为主题的社会实践活动，现向全校学生征集活动创意。请根据以下相关信息，给社团负责人Tom写一封邮件，分享自己的劳动经历、收获并提供一条活动建议。
Labor is meaningful! My Experiences swept the floor … My Gains(收获) develop life skills … My Idea …
注意：
1. 邮件必须包括以上所有要点，补充内容至少各一条，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：
3. 词数80词左右(邮件的第一句已给出，不计人总词数)·
Dear Tom,
Labor is an important part of our life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2025·吴兴模拟）假如你是某校学生会(Student Union)成员张华，负责下个月英国友人来你校一日研学活动。学校已安排了上午的日程，请根据以下信息，写一封邮件，向他们介绍学校的安排以及学生会为他们设计的下午的活动。
Time Activity Meaning
in the morning visit the school enjoy the beautiful environment of the school...
join school clubs (experience paper cutting, ...) learn Chinese culture ...
in the afternoon ... 　
注意：
1.邮件需包含上面表格中的全部信息，可适当发挥：
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：
3.词数80词左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school for a one-day visit next month!
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
6．（2025·鹿城模拟） 为保障青少年睡眠时间，教育部门明确重申，初中上课时间一般不早于八点。对此，校英语报组织了"When the Bell Rings after Eight"的征文活动。请你根据以下表格，结合自身实际情况，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈该政策(policy)对你生活和学习两方面的影响。
When the Bell Rings after Eight
My life ●Sleeping ● Having breakfast ●…
My study ● Listening in class ●…
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I'm glad to share my life and study when the bell rings after eight.
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7．（2025·萧山模拟） 假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Mike来信了，请根据来信内容给他回信。80词左右。
To: Li Hua
From Mike
Dear Li Hua, You introduced some places of interest in Hangzhou to me in your last letter. Thanks so much for inviting me to travel to Hangzhou and live with your family. The summer vacation is coming. I can't wait to visit Hangzhou! But I have some difficulties in communicating with Chinese. Could you please tell me what the greeting ways are for the first time What are the traditional Chinese food and the local dishes in Hangzhou While eating with your family, what am I supposed to do Besides, what clothes should I take Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答所有问题，并且适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和校名。
Hi Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2025·鄞州模拟）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办主题为"AI in Our Lives"的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下表格写一篇英语演讲稿。
AI in Our Lives
What can AI do for us ▲ search for information quickly, ... ▲ ...
What worries do you have about AI ▲ workers may lose jobs, ... ▲ ...
What do you think of AI ▲ ...
写作要求：
1) 文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3) 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
AI in our lives
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular and has changed our lives greatly.
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9．（2025·宁波模拟） 假如你是Chen Jie, 你的外国朋友Lee浏览你校公众号(official account) 后，对学生活动版块非常感兴趣。请你阅读他的邮件与学校公众号截屏，给他写一封回信。
To: Chen Jie@ Subject: Share Your School Activities! Hi there! How's everything going Well, I read through your school official account the other day. And I was very interested in the students' activities like Science Club. What did you do and learn How did you feel Please choose two of them to share with me. Take care and hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Lee
注意：
1. 词数80-100左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 回复需符合要求，包含所提内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息。
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
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How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Chen Jie
10．（2025·定海模拟）丰富多彩的课间活动促进了学生的身心健康。假设你是李华，请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让到访的国际交流生了解你们学校的课间活动情况及你对课间活动的感受与收获。
Activities Feelings & Benefits
rest eyes, walk around, chat, … relaxed, improve friendship, …
注意：
(1) 短文必须包含表中所给的全部信息， 可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。
短文开头：
In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term.
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11．（2025·丽水模拟） 假如你是李华，你的美国网友Cindy计划利用暑假来中国体验中国文化。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个合适的夏令营。
I like reading and I'm interested in Chinese culture.
Literature Camp ●learn about the stories of some Chinese poets and their poems ●role play some scenes from Journey to the West ●… Traditional Culture Camp ●learn some traditional handicrafts, like making paper cutting ●experience the local culture by visiting places of interest ●…
注意：
1. 邮件需包含所选夏令营相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
How is it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2025·金衢山模拟） 时光荏苒，转眼间大家已是九年级学生，回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否察觉自己的生活发生了很多改变？请你根据下表提示，以"Changes in My Life"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈自从上初中后发生的变化，以及对这些变化的看法。
注意：(1)短文必须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；(2)词数：80-100。文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
主题 Changes in My Life
内容 In the past Now
Become outgoing find it difficult to make new friends have lots of friends
Become confident worry about the tests do well in all the subjects
Opinions ...
Changes in My Life
It is more than two years since I went to middle school and there have been many changes in my life during the past two years.
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13．（2025·台州模拟） 假设你是校英语社团的编辑李华，你校将举办主题为"Enjoy English. Enjoy Chinese
Traditional Art!"的表演比赛。请根据提示，用英语写一篇活动通知。
Time 2:00-4:00,Friday afternoon, April 25th
Place school playground
Purpose improve spoken English spread Chinese culture …
Activities show art performance: paper cutting, kite flying... give a general introduction in English about your work...
注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息：（3）词数：80~100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Our school is going to hold a performance competition called "Enjoy English. Enjoy Chinese Traditional Art!"
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If you're interested in it, please come to the English club beforeApril21st to sign up.
14．（2025·舟山模拟）丰富多彩的课间活动促进了学生的身心健康。假设你是李华，请根据下表提供的信息，
写一篇短文，让到访的国际交流生了解你们学校的课间活动情况及你对课间活动的感受与收获。
Activities Feelings & Benefits
rest eyes, walk around, chat, … relaxed, improve friendship, …
注意：(1)短文必须包含表中所给的全部信息，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：(3)词数80左右：短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。
短文开头:In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term.
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15．（2025·富阳模拟） 假如你是张华，你的英国好友Alan和家人暑假将来富阳旅游，请根据以下信息，写一封邮件，为他们推荐一处合适的富阳打卡点。
We love nature. We're interested in Chinese history and culture. We also want to try some local food.
Longmen Town ●Sun Quan, a famous emperor ●many kinds of local food ●ticket: 80 yuan each ●…
Huang Gongwang's Retreat（隐居地） ●Huang Gongwang, a famous artist ●lots of local restaurants ●enter for free ●…
注意：
1.邮件需包含所选地方至少3点信息。可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
Glad to know that you are coming to my city soon.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
A graduation season
In the past three years, none of us has grown up alone. As for me, it's not just a graduation season.
First/ Firstly, it's a parting season/ it's a season to say goodbye. How sad I feel! My friends and I often encourage each other and our friendship is stronger and stronger. So it's really hard to say goodbye to my close friends.
Second/Secondly, it's a thankful season. I want to say thanks to my teachers/ parents. They care about me every day. What's more, they help me patiently to bring out the best in me. Maybe I should say thanks to myself, too. Now, I learn to understand others better. And I study much harder than before.
Third/ Thirdly, it's a hopeful season. I hope that our future will be bright and beautiful.
2．One possible version:
I want to say thanks to my English teacher
I want to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Liu. She has made a great difference in my English-learning journey.
Miss Liu always uses interesting methods to teach us, which makes her classes lively and engaging. When I was too shy to answer questions in class, she encouraged me with a warm smile and kind words. She also gave me extra help after class whenever I had problems with my English.
To show my thanks, I'll make a beautiful handmade card for her, on which I'll write down all my gratitude. And I'll work harder and try to get better grades in English to make her proud.
3．One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm excited to know that you are interested in our school vegetable garden. I'd like to introduce it to you.
Our school vegetable garden was built near the playground 2 years ago. We can do a lot of activities there. We plant different kinds of vegetables. After that, we work with classmates, watering and taking good care of them. We can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, and so on. Although it is a bit tired, all of us enjoy it.
From the vegetable garden, we learn some farming skills. We can also form the habit of labor by planting vegetables, which is good for the growth of students.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．Dear Tom,
Labor is an important part of our life. Here are my experiences and suggestion.
Last week, I did some housework like making the bed, sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.
For the coming activity, I have a great suggestion. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍自己的劳动经历、收获和建议。时态是一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍劳动的重要性；然后介绍自己劳动的经历；最后介绍劳动的收获和建议。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：an important part of；do some housework；make the bed；sweep the floor；do the dishes；help with...；not only...but also...；help to do；free from；the importance of；learn about；the value of等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如动名词做主语Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.；动名词做主语和宾语从句I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.等。连词not only...but also；also；and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．Dear friends,
Welcome to our school for one day visit next month! In the morning, you'll first tour our campus to enjoy the beautiful environment, including our garden and library. Then, you can join school clubs like paper cutting or tea art to experience Chinese culture.
In the afternoon, we've designed two activities. First, you'll attend a Chinese calligraphy class, where teachers will guide you to write your name with a brush. This helps you feel the rhythm of Chinese characters. Later, we'll have a dumpling-making competition! You'll learn to wrap dumplings and taste the homemade ones, understanding the meaning of family reunion in Chinese culture.
We believe these activities will give you a full understanding of our school and Chinese traditions. Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍 学校的安排以及学生会为他们设计的下午的活动。时态是现在完成时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍早上的活动和医院；然后介绍下午的活动和意义；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：welcome to；guide sb. to do sth.；help sb. do sth.；learn to do；the meaning of；a full understanding of；look forward to doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：祈使句Welcome to our school for one day visit next month! In the morning,现在完成时In the afternoon, we've designed two activities.；定语从句First, you'll attend a Chinese calligraphy class, where teachers will guide you to write your name with a brush.；宾语从句We believe these activities will give you a full understanding of our school and Chinese traditions.。first，then，later，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．One possible version:
Sample:
I'm glad to share my life and study when the bell rings after eight. The policy has brought good changes to me.
First, I have more time for sleep. It makes me more energetic. Now, I can enjoy a healthy meal at home and don't need to hurry to school. Thanks to enough rest, I can listen more carefully in class. It improves my study. If I go to school early, I also get more time to prepare for lessons.
In a word, starting school later benefits me a lot. It's a policy that truly understands our needs!
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据表格结合自身实际情况，写一篇英语短文。写作内容包括睡眠政策对生活和学习两方面的影响。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对原因、经历和方法三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的if引导的条件状语从句If I go to school early, I also get more time to prepare for lessons. "如果我早点上学，我也会有更多的时间准备课"等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的make sb. +形容词"使某人怎么样"，thanks to"多亏"，prepare for sth."为某事准备"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
7．One possible version:
Hi Mike,
I am so glad to hear that you will come to visit Hangzhou. Chinese people are so friendly that you don't need to worry about the problems. Meanwhile, I will offer you some advice to help you.
When meeting for the first time, you are supposed to shake hands with others or you can just smile at others. Noodles and rice are traditional food in China. You can also enjoy some local food like Dongpo Meat in Hangzhou. As for the table manners, it is impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. Besides, you shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks, either. The weather here is a little hot in summer, so you'd better bring shorts and T-shirts with you.
I hope you can have a good time in Hangzhou.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇书信作文。内容是根据邮件内容，给Mike写一封回信。描述怎样与中国人交流方，其中涉及的要点有：初次见面的打招呼方式；中国的传统食物以及杭州当地的特色菜；用餐时的礼仪及携带的衣服。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这篇书面表达整体表现良好，结构清晰，内容实用，语言表达流畅，能够较好地完成向外国友人介绍杭州注意事项的任务。文章采用总分总的结构，开头表达对 Mike 来访的欢迎，中间分点介绍见面礼仪、饮食、餐桌礼仪和天气相关建议，结尾送上祝福，逻辑分明，易于阅读 。涵盖了文化习俗、饮食、餐桌礼仪以及天气等多个方面，给出的建议贴合实际生活，能真正帮助 Mike 提前做好准备。例如提到见面时可握手或微笑、不能插筷等，具有很强的实用性。句子结构多样且合理，时态一致，指代明确，语言表达自然流畅。使用了一些连接词和短语，如 "Meanwhile""Besides"，使文章过渡自然，连贯性较好。同时，还运用了 "be supposed to""It is impolite to..." 等常用表达，体现了一定的语言功底。
8．One possible version:
AI in our lives
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular and has changed our lives greatly
We can see all kinds of AI products in our daily lives. For example, if we have any problems in learning, we will ask computers for advice. With the help of mobile phones, we can search for information quickly. Also, robots can help with housework. Thanks to them, people can fully relax themselves. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lose their jobs. Also, some students depend on AI so much that they lose the ability to do things on their own.
In my opinion, AI products have both advantages and disadvantages. I believe that if we put AI to good use, we will live a better and happier life in the future.
本文是一篇演讲稿；时态为"一般现在时"；根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。第一步，从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活；第二步，介绍对于AI的一些担忧；第三步，最后介绍自己对AI的一些看法。
在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇all kinds of各种各样的，search for寻找，depend on依赖，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如高分句型：
For example, if we have any problems in learning, we will ask computers for advice.（if引导的条件状语从句）；Also, some students depend on AI so much that they lose the ability to do things on their own.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）；I believe that if we put AI to good use, we will live a better and happier life in the future.（that引导的宾语从句）。
9．One possible version:
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
Our school held some interesting students' activities this term. Let me tell you two of them.
In April, we took part in the Science Club. We learned to use AI and made useful robots. It really made us excited. Besides, what impressed me most was the Cultural Festival. During the festival, we learned how to make Qingtuan together. In addition, we learned to act a play. It was really an unforgettable experience.
All those activities not only tell us that we should try to learn science to make our country stronger, but also remind us the traditional stories about our culture.
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Chen Jie
这是一篇材料作文，要求阅读邮件与学校公众号截屏，写一封回信。写作内容包括学生活动的内容介绍和感受。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对学生活动的内容介绍和感受进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的Let引导的祈使句 Let me tell you two of them. "让我告诉你其中的两个"和主语从句 what impressed me most was the Cultural Festival. "给我印象最深的是文化节"等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的learn to do sth."学习做某事"，in addition"另外"，try to do sth."努力做某事"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
10． In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term.
Some students choose to rest their eyes by looking at the green trees outside the windows, which helps them relax. Others walk around the playground. There are also students who chat with their friends, during which they share interesting things and improve their friendship.
My favorite activity between classes is meditation, because it allows my brain to rest, enabling me to better attend the next class.
These activities are really beneficial to us.
11．One possible version:
Possible Version 1:
Dear Cindy,
How is it going I'm so glad to hear you' re coming to China this summer. Since you enjoy reading and are interested in Chinese culture, I think Literature Camp is perfect for you.
At this camp, you' ll learn about famous Chinese poets and their beautiful poems. It will make you understand Chinese culture better. You' ll also get to role-play scenes from Journey to the
West, a Chinese classical, it's both fun and educational. Additionally, you' ll have the chance to write your own poems and share them with others.
I think this camp perfectly matches your interests.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible Version 2:
Dear Cindy,
How is it going I'm glad to know that you' re planning to come to China for summer camp. I think Chinese Traditional Culture Camp is a great choice.
In this camp, you can learn some traditional handicrafts, like making paper cutting, which is a special traditional Chinese art form. Besides, you can experience the local culture by visiting places of interest. What's more, there will be Chinese folk dance performances, it's a great way to know more about Chinese culture.
I am sure you will have a good time in the Chinese Traditional Culture Camp.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据相关信息写一封邮件，推荐一个合适的夏令营。写作内容主要为文学夏令营/传统文化夏令营的活动安排。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称和第二人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对文学夏令营/传统文化夏令营的活动安排进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的原因状语从句 Since you enjoy reading and are interested in Chinese culture, I think Literature Camp is perfect for you."既然你喜欢阅读，对中国文化感兴趣，我认为文学营非常适合你"，宾语从句 I think this camp perfectly matches your interests. "我认为这个营地完全符合你的兴趣"使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的learn about"学习关于"，both and"两者都"，share with sb."和某人分享"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
12． It is more than two years since I went to middle school and there have been many changes in my life during the past two years.
In the past, I found it difficult to make new friends and often felt lonely. Now, I've become more outgoing and have lots of friends. I used to worry about tests all the time, but through hard work, I've become confident and now do well in all subjects.
These changes show how much I've grown. I've learned that challenges help us improve. Though schoolwork is harder now, I enjoy learning new things every day. I believe these positive changes will help me achieve my dreams in the future.
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇题为 "Changes in My Life" 的英语短文叙述自己上初中以后的变化。写作背景：考生现已作为初三学生，在过去的两年里发生了许多变化。内容包括：1. 简述过去自己的状态；2. 具体阐述自己上初中后的变化；3. 阐述对这些变化的观点并表达对未来的期许。注意：1. 时态以一般过去时为主；2.注意不要遗漏写作要点，详略得当，可适当拓展，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，条理清晰，语义连贯；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为80个到100个之间。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。可以使用的表达如下，例如： Looking back on the past two years of my junior high school life, I realize that many changes have taken place in my life. （运用了现在分词短语作状语以及that引导的宾语从句）； In the past, I was quite shy and found it difficult to make new friends. （运用了it做形式宾语）； However, now I have become much more outgoing. （运用了比较级）； I have gradually overcome my fears and now I do well in all the subjects.（运用了and连接的并列句）； I realize that making friends and being confident are key to a fulfilling life. （运用了that引导的宾语从句以及动名词短语作主语）；I like these changes which make my life better than before. (运用了which引导的定语从句)。
13．Dear students,
Our school is going to hold a performance competition called "Enjoy English. Enjoy Chinese Traditional Art!"
The competition will take place from 2:00 to 4:00 on Friday afternoon, April 25th, at the school playground. The purpose of this competition is to improve spoken English and spread Chinese culture, creating a bridge between language learning and cultural appreciation.
There will be a variety of fascinating activities, such as art performances like paper cutting and kite flying, which highlight the beauty of Chinese traditions. Each player is required to give a clear and general introduction in English about their performance. This is not only a fantastic opportunity to show your talents but also a chance to deepen your understanding of traditional Chinese art. Don't miss this exciting event!
If you're interested in it, please come to the English club before April 21 to sign up.
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍演讲比赛。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍学校举办演讲比赛；然后介绍演讲比赛的时间、地点和目的；其次介绍演讲比赛的活动；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：take place；the purpose of；between...and...；there will be；a variety of；such as；the beauty of；be required to do；not only...but also；be interested in等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如： there be的一般将来时和状语从句There will be a variety of fascinating activities, such as art performances like paper cutting and kite flying, which highlight the beauty of Chinese traditions.；被动语态Each player is required to give a clear and general introduction in English about their performance.；祈使句Don't miss this exciting event!；状语从句If you're interested in it, please come to the English club before April 21 to sign up.等。连词such as、not only...but also、if、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
14． In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term. For us, break time is always lively and meaningful.
We rest our eyes by doing eye exercises or looking out of windows. Some students walk around the classroom, while others chat happily with friends. Many of us also do exercise in the hallway or on the playground, such as playing ball games or jumping rope to stay active and healthy. These activities help us feel relaxed and refreshed. They also improve friendship through laughter and conversations. What's more, doing exercise during breaks keeps us energetic for the next class.
It's amazing how these activities can make such a big difference!
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般现在时，首先总体介绍课间有许多活动；然后具体介绍课间活动及感受和好处；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：a lot of；between classes；do eye exercises；look out of；walk around；some...others；chat with；help sb. do sth.；feel relaxed；what's more；keep...+形容词；make a big difference等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如状语从句Some students walk around the classroom, while others chat happily with friends；动名词做主语 What's more, doing exercise during breaks keeps us energetic for the next class.；从句It's amazing how these activities can make such a big difference!等。连词while、or、such as、what's more、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
15．Dear Alan,
Glad to know that you are coming to our city soon.
I know you're interested in Chinese history and culture. So I think Longmen Town is a good choice for you. You can learn a lot about Sun Quan, a famous emperor in ancient China who played an important role in Chinese history. Also, it's a wonderful place with beautiful and quiet environment. As for local food, there are many different kinds. For example, you can enjoy Longmen beef which was loved by Sun Quan. But if you want to go there, you need to buy tickets. They're 80 yuan each.
Hope you can have a good time in Fuyang!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Alan,
Glad to know that you are coming to our city soon.
Since you are interested in Chinese history and culture, Huanggongwang's Retreat is without doubt a good choice for you. You can learn a lot about Huanggongwang, a really famous artist in Yuan Dynasty. He created a very famous painting about Fuyang. Also, it's a great place where you can enjoy clean and fresh air. As for local food, there are lots of local restaurants. So you can try different kinds of local food there. And the most importantly, you can enter for free.
Hope you can have a good time in Fuyang!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据信息，写一封邮件推荐一处合适的富阳打卡点。写作内容包括打卡地的介绍、票价等信息。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对打卡地的介绍、票价等信进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的There be句式As for local food, there are many different kinds. "至于当地的食物，有很多不同的种类"和I think+宾语从句 So I think Longmen Town is a good choice for you. "所以我认为龙门镇对你来说是个不错的选择"等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用 play an important role in "在……起到重要作用"，for example"例如"，learn about sth."学习某物"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。