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题型过关第6讲 书面表达
一、 准备阶段（审题 & 构思）
1、仔细审题，明确要求 (Read the Instructions Carefully):
题目类型： 是书信（Email/Letter）、日记（Diary）、通知（Notice）、介绍（Introduction）、看图写话（Picture Story）还是其他？
写作目的： 是邀请？感谢？描述？建议？还是讲述经历？
内容要点： 题目中明确要求写哪些内容？通常会有几点提示（如：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 活动 4. 感受）。务必把所有要点都涵盖进去！ 这是得分的关键。
格式要求： 书信需要称呼和落款；日记需要日期和天气（有时可省略）；通知有特定格式。格式分不能丢！
字数要求： 大概多少词？初一通常60-80词左右。写太少会扣分，写太多也可能暴露更多错误或浪费时间。心中有数，写到要点即可，不必强求写满。
2、确定人称和时态 (Decide on Person & Tense):
人称： 题目要求用第几人称写？介绍自己用第一人称（I, we）；介绍他人用第三人称（he, she, they）；书信根据对象决定（给朋友写信可以用I和you）。
时态： 描述经常做的事情用一般现在时；描述过去发生的事情（如日记、经历）用一般过去时；谈论计划或将来安排用一般将来时（will / be going to）。时态要统一！ 除非明确需要转换（比如现在计划做某事，后面会描述过去）。
3、列提纲/打腹稿 (Outline Your Ideas):
根据内容要点，快速在草稿纸上或心里列出几个关键词或短句。想好开头、中间（按要点展开）、结尾分别写什么。
例如：题目要求介绍周末计划。
开头：This weekend, I'm going to have a busy/relaxing time.
要点1 (周六上午)：go to the library, borrow books
要点2 (周六下午)：play basketball with friends
要点3 (周日)：visit grandparents, have lunch together
结尾：I think it will be a great weekend!
二、 写作阶段（清晰 & 准确）
1、开门见山，点明主题 (Start with a Clear Topic Sentence):
开头句很重要！直接点出你要写什么。避免绕弯子。
例如：I want to tell you about my school life. / Last Sunday was a special day for me. / Here is the plan for our class trip.
2、围绕要点，逐条展开 (Develop Each Point Clearly):
把审题时列出的要点，用完整的句子表达出来。一个要点写1-2句即可。
使用连接词，让文章流畅 (Use Linking Words): 这是让文章读起来通顺的关键！常用简单的有：
顺序：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ...
并列：and, also
因果：because, so
转折：but
例如： First, I will go to the library on Saturday morning. I want to borrow some storybooks. Then, in the afternoon, I am going to play basketball with my friends. It's my favorite sport.
3、使用熟悉、正确的句子 (Use Simple and Correct Sentences):
优先用会写的、确保正确的句子！ 初一阶段，能用简单句清晰表达意思就很棒。不要为了追求“高级”而写自己没把握的复杂句。
主谓宾结构要完整： I like English. (主语I + 谓语like + 宾语English) 比 English like. 好一万倍！
注意单复数： He plays basketball. (第三人称单数加s) / They play basketball.
注意be动词： I am... / He/She/It is... / You/We/They are...
注意常见动词过去式： go -> went, do -> did, have -> had, see -> saw, eat -> ate 等。
4、适当丰富细节 (Add Simple Details - Optional but Good):
在保证要点和正确性的前提下，可以加一点点简单的细节让文章更生动。
例如：不是只说 I played basketball. 可以说 I played basketball with my best friend Tom for an hour. We had a lot of fun. (加了和谁玩、玩了多久、感受)。
5、自然结尾 (End Naturally):
写一句总结感受或展望的话。
常用结尾：I had a great/wonderful time! / I hope you can come! (邀请信) / I'm looking forward to your reply. (书信) / That's all for my plan. / I think it will be fun/interesting.
1．中国幅员辽阔，山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出“一生必去的50个地方”，松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观，写一篇英语短文介绍。
写作要求：
1.必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
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2．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中，有什么是你特别钟爱的吗？请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么；
2.简单介绍该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因；
3.你的期望。
注意：
1.包含以上信息，可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于 80词，已给出部分不计入总词数。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是学生张华，你正在逛动物园时遇到市英语电视台的记者采访，她问了你几个问题。请你根据记者的提问，写一篇英语短文：介绍你喜爱的动物及原因；列举些你看到的动物园规章制度并谈谈你对保护濒危动物的建议。
内容包括：
1. What animals do you like best and why
2. Say some rules of the zoo (at least 2 rules).
3. Your advice about saving animals.
要求：
1. 短文要包括所有的内容要点，条理清楚；行文连贯，可适当拓展；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数不少于70，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
It is Sunday today. I come to the zoo to watch the animals.
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4．近年来，赴中国旅游的外国游客日益增多。魏娜的学校举行了一场“英语游中国”征文大赛。假设你是魏娜，请以“The landscape of Guilin”为题参赛，并根据下方表格信息，完成一篇80词左右的短文，向外国朋友介绍桂林。
Location in the north-east of the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region (自治区)
Attractions karst landform strange stones the Lijiang River the Elephant Trunk Hill
Transport boat
Suggestions ...
The landscape of Guilin
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5．“国家喊你减肥了”近期, 国家卫健委宣布, 将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们, 你的生活习惯健康吗 你喜欢吃什么食物 你喜欢什么运动 请你根据以下提示内容, 以“My habits”为题, 写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it
3. What do you think of good habits
要求:
1, 必须包含提示中所给的内容, 并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。
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6．某学校初一年级正在进行传统文化和启润课程学习，本周主题是“How I Keep Healthy ”。请你以Peter的名义并根据以下图示写一篇短文，向课程负责人Grace投稿。
注意：
1. 短文须包含图示所有信息；
2. 词数 60 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Grace,
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Yours,
Peter
7．你的学校将举办一个“传统文化故事节”，而你将代表班级参加其中的讲故事比赛。请以“My favourite fantasy story”为题，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍一个你喜欢的奇幻故事。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Title
Plot
What you learn
My favourite fantasy story
Today I’d like to introduce my favourite fantasy story to all of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、书面表达-电子邮件
8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你家的情况。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你家的房子及你在房子里的活动。
1. 房子位于一个美丽的小镇，有两层。
2. 一楼有厨房、客厅和餐厅，你经常在客厅看电视。
3. 二楼有你的卧室、书房和父母的卧室，你喜欢在书房看书。
4. 房子前面有一个花园，你喜欢在花园里种花。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 邮件格式正确，内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确。
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三、书面表达-材料作文
9．请根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家。包含所有要点，80词左右。
·Where do you live ·Who do you live with ·What’s your home like ·What’s your favourite place in your home Why
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四、书面表达-书信作文
10．你叫Sandy，你想邀请你的美国的笔友Mike来你的家乡参观，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封邀请信，并向他介绍你的家乡和你的家。
你的家乡 现代化城市，位于江苏省东南部，名胜古迹……
你的家 离市中心不远，坐地铁到市中心只要15分钟；公寓在五楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……因为……
你的邻居 善良，友好。乐意帮助他人：1.……；2.……
你的想法 我的家乡适宜居住…… (发挥1-2点)
要求：
1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2) 必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3) 词数：80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I would like to invite you to my hometown.
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Yours,
Sandy/ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
一、 准备阶段（审题 & 构思）
1、仔细审题，明确要求 (Read the Instructions Carefully):
题目类型： 是书信（Email/Letter）、日记（Diary）、通知（Notice）、介绍（Introduction）、看图写话（Picture Story）还是其他？
写作目的： 是邀请？感谢？描述？建议？还是讲述经历？
内容要点： 题目中明确要求写哪些内容？通常会有几点提示（如：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 活动 4. 感受）。务必把所有要点都涵盖进去！ 这是得分的关键。
格式要求： 书信需要称呼和落款；日记需要日期和天气（有时可省略）；通知有特定格式。格式分不能丢！
字数要求： 大概多少词？初一通常60-80词左右。写太少会扣分，写太多也可能暴露更多错误或浪费时间。心中有数，写到要点即可，不必强求写满。
2、确定人称和时态 (Decide on Person & Tense):
人称： 题目要求用第几人称写？介绍自己用第一人称（I, we）；介绍他人用第三人称（he, she, they）；书信根据对象决定（给朋友写信可以用I和you）。
时态： 描述经常做的事情用一般现在时；描述过去发生的事情（如日记、经历）用一般过去时；谈论计划或将来安排用一般将来时（will / be going to）。时态要统一！ 除非明确需要转换（比如现在计划做某事，后面会描述过去）。
3、列提纲/打腹稿 (Outline Your Ideas):
根据内容要点，快速在草稿纸上或心里列出几个关键词或短句。想好开头、中间（按要点展开）、结尾分别写什么。
例如：题目要求介绍周末计划。
开头：This weekend, I'm going to have a busy/relaxing time.
要点1 (周六上午)：go to the library, borrow books
要点2 (周六下午)：play basketball with friends
要点3 (周日)：visit grandparents, have lunch together
结尾：I think it will be a great weekend!
二、 写作阶段（清晰 & 准确）
1、开门见山，点明主题 (Start with a Clear Topic Sentence):
开头句很重要！直接点出你要写什么。避免绕弯子。
例如：I want to tell you about my school life. / Last Sunday was a special day for me. / Here is the plan for our class trip.
2、围绕要点，逐条展开 (Develop Each Point Clearly):
把审题时列出的要点，用完整的句子表达出来。一个要点写1-2句即可。
使用连接词，让文章流畅 (Use Linking Words): 这是让文章读起来通顺的关键！常用简单的有：
顺序：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ...
并列：and, also
因果：because, so
转折：but
例如： First, I will go to the library on Saturday morning. I want to borrow some storybooks. Then, in the afternoon, I am going to play basketball with my friends. It's my favorite sport.
3、使用熟悉、正确的句子 (Use Simple and Correct Sentences):
优先用会写的、确保正确的句子！ 初一阶段，能用简单句清晰表达意思就很棒。不要为了追求“高级”而写自己没把握的复杂句。
主谓宾结构要完整： I like English. (主语I + 谓语like + 宾语English) 比 English like. 好一万倍！
注意单复数： He plays basketball. (第三人称单数加s) / They play basketball.
注意be动词： I am... / He/She/It is... / You/We/They are...
注意常见动词过去式： go -> went, do -> did, have -> had, see -> saw, eat -> ate 等。
4、适当丰富细节 (Add Simple Details - Optional but Good):
在保证要点和正确性的前提下，可以加一点点简单的细节让文章更生动。
例如：不是只说 I played basketball. 可以说 I played basketball with my best friend Tom for an hour. We had a lot of fun. (加了和谁玩、玩了多久、感受)。
5、自然结尾 (End Naturally):
写一句总结感受或展望的话。
常用结尾：I had a great/wonderful time! / I hope you can come! (邀请信) / I'm looking forward to your reply. (书信) / That's all for my plan. / I think it will be fun/interesting.
1．中国幅员辽阔，山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出“一生必去的50个地方”，松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观，写一篇英语短文介绍。
写作要求：
1.必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文：
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometers long, lies in North-east China. It’s a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It’s really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before discharging it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍松花江的地理位置。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍松花江都信息。
第三步，书写结语。立足于环境保护，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①charm魅力
②view景色
③protect保护
[高分句型]
①In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
2．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中，有什么是你特别钟爱的吗？请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么；
2.简单介绍该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因；
3.你的期望。
注意：
1.包含以上信息，可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于 80词，已给出部分不计入总词数。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper cutting. It’s a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper.
I’ve been practicing paper cutting for more than five years. It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. Firstly, it’s a perfect way to train me to be patient and careful. Secondly, paper cutting works are great presents for my family and friends on special occasions.
Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是什么；
第二步，介绍喜欢这种传统艺术的原因；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②fell in love with爱上
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it.（It固定句型）
3．假如你是学生张华，你正在逛动物园时遇到市英语电视台的记者采访，她问了你几个问题。请你根据记者的提问，写一篇英语短文：介绍你喜爱的动物及原因；列举些你看到的动物园规章制度并谈谈你对保护濒危动物的建议。
内容包括：
1. What animals do you like best and why
2. Say some rules of the zoo (at least 2 rules).
3. Your advice about saving animals.
要求：
1. 短文要包括所有的内容要点，条理清楚；行文连贯，可适当拓展；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数不少于70，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
It is Sunday today. I come to the zoo to watch the animals.
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【答案】One possible version:
It is Sunday today. I come to the zoo to watch the animals.
There are many animals in the zoo, for example, lions, tigers, elephants and wolves. Pandas are my favorite animals. They come from China. They are black and white and they are very cute. I always visit them when I go to the zoo. I see some rules in the zoo. We should keep quiet in the zoo. We can’t run around in the zoo and feed the animals in the zoo. We should follow these rules.
Animals are our friends. But many of them are in great danger. There are many reasons for this. People cut down many trees so they lose their homes. Also many people kill them for food or for money.
I think we should do something to let more people know that it is very important to save animals. Our country should set up nature parks to save them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己最喜欢的动物及原因；
第二步、介绍动物园的一些规则；
第三步、介绍一些动物处于濒危现状的原因以及对保护濒危动物的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②keep quiet保持安静
③in great danger处于极大的危险之中
④cut down砍倒（树木）
⑤set up建立
[高分句型]
①I think we should do something to let more people know that it is very important to save animals.(宾语从句)
4．近年来，赴中国旅游的外国游客日益增多。魏娜的学校举行了一场“英语游中国”征文大赛。假设你是魏娜，请以“The landscape of Guilin”为题参赛，并根据下方表格信息，完成一篇80词左右的短文，向外国朋友介绍桂林。
Location in the north-east of the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region (自治区)
Attractions karst landform strange stones the Lijiang River the Elephant Trunk Hill
Transport boat
Suggestions ...
The landscape of Guilin
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【答案】例文
The landscape of Guilin
East or west, the landscape of Guilin is the best. Guilin is famous for its fantastic landscape both at home and abroad. Guilin is in the north-east of the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region in South China. Now let’s experience some well-known tourist attractions.
You can see the karst landform all around Guilin. So you can see hills with lots of stones in strange shapes. If you like travelling by boat, the Lijiang River is a good choice. The water in the river is cool and clean. And you can also visit the Elephant Trunk Hill there.
It often rains in Guilin. Remember to take an umbrella with you and wear comfortable trainers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍桂林及其地理位置；
第二步，介绍桂林的旅游景点；
第三步，给要去桂林游玩的朋友们一些建议，比如随身带上雨伞以及穿舒适的运动鞋。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for 以……而闻名
② both at home and abroad 在国内外
③ lots of 很多
[高分句型]
① If you like travelling by boat, the Lijiang River is a good choice. (if引导条件状语从句)
② Remember to take an umbrella with you and wear comfortable trainers. (祈使句)
5．“国家喊你减肥了”近期, 国家卫健委宣布, 将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们, 你的生活习惯健康吗 你喜欢吃什么食物 你喜欢什么运动 请你根据以下提示内容, 以“My habits”为题, 写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it
3. What do you think of good habits
要求:
1, 必须包含提示中所给的内容, 并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。
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【答案】例文：
My habits Health is very important to everyone. I have healthy habits.
I like sports. My favorite sport is running and I run every day at school. In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well.
As for eating habits, I eat fruit and vegetables with every meal because they can make me healthy. I don’t drink soft drinks because they have a lot of sugar and are bad for me.
I think we should have good habits because they are helpful for us to keep strong and happy. What’s more, they are also very important to our body and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康重要性，引入 “我的习惯” 主题；
第二步，分别阐述喜爱的运动及频率、饮食习惯及原因；
第三步，总结全文，强调好习惯对身心的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③a lot of许多
④be important to对……重要
[高分句型]
In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．某学校初一年级正在进行传统文化和启润课程学习，本周主题是“How I Keep Healthy ”。请你以Peter的名义并根据以下图示写一篇短文，向课程负责人Grace投稿。
注意：
1. 短文须包含图示所有信息；
2. 词数 60 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Grace,
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Yours,
Peter
【答案】Dear Grace,
I’m Peter. I’d like to share how I keep healthy. I love playing basketball. I exercise from Tuesday to Saturday. It makes me strong and energetic.
In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables. They provide me with essential vitamins. I stay away from junk food like hamburgers and fries. Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated. Also, I try to have three regular meals a day. By doing exercise and eating healthily, I’m in good shape.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写自己如何通过做运动来保持健康的；
第二步，再写自己在饮食方面如何保持健康的。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of在……方面
②stay away from远离……
③try to do尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables.（and连接并列成分）
②Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．你的学校将举办一个“传统文化故事节”，而你将代表班级参加其中的讲故事比赛。请以“My favourite fantasy story”为题，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍一个你喜欢的奇幻故事。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Title
Plot
What you learn
My favourite fantasy story
Today I’d like to introduce my favourite fantasy story to all of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My favourite fantasy story
Today I’d like to introduce my favourite fantasy story to all of you. The story is called “The Magic Paintbrush”. It tells about a poor boy named Ma Liang who receives a magical paintbrush. Whatever he draws with it becomes real. He uses it to help villagers by painting food, tools, and even rain during droughts. However, a greedy emperor tries to steal the brush. Ma Liang cleverly outsmarts him by drawing a storm that sinks the emperor’s ship.
From this story, I learn that kindness and wisdom are more powerful than greed. We should use our talents to help others, not for selfish purposes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍自己最喜欢的故事是什么；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍故事情节；
第三步，分享自己的收获并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①tell about讲述
②try to do sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①It tells about a poor boy named Ma Liang who receives a magical paintbrush.（定语从句）
②From this story, I learn that kindness and wisdom are more powerful than greed.（宾语从句）
二、书面表达-电子邮件
8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你家的情况。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你家的房子及你在房子里的活动。
1. 房子位于一个美丽的小镇，有两层。
2. 一楼有厨房、客厅和餐厅，你经常在客厅看电视。
3. 二楼有你的卧室、书房和父母的卧室，你喜欢在书房看书。
4. 房子前面有一个花园，你喜欢在花园里种花。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 邮件格式正确，内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确。
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【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about my home.
My home is in a beautiful town. It has two floors. On the first floor, there is a kitchen, a living room and a dining room. I often watch TV in the living room. On the second floor, there is my bedroom, a study and my parents’ bedroom. I like reading books in the study. In front of the house, there is a garden. I like planting flowers in it.
I love my home very much. What about your home Can you tell me
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括房子的位置、结构、各楼层的功能以及个人在房子里的活动。考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。可以通过“我很高兴你对我的家感兴趣”等表述来引出接下来要介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍房子的总体情况；然后详细描述一楼的情况；接着介绍二楼的布局；最后，补充房子前面的花园，以及自己在花园里种花的爱好；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达“希望有一天你能来我家做客”的愿望，作为邮件的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①beautiful town美丽的城镇
②two floors两层
③living room客厅
④dining room餐厅
⑤bedroom卧室
[高分句型]
①My home is in a beautiful town.（介词短语作表语）
②On the first floor, there is a kitchen, a living room and a dining room.（there be句型，介绍某处有某物）
③I often watch TV in the living room.（介词短语作地点状语）
④I like reading books in the study.（动词-ing形式作宾语）
三、书面表达-材料作文
9．请根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家。包含所有要点，80词左右。
·Where do you live ·Who do you live with ·What’s your home like ·What’s your favourite place in your home Why
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【答案】例文
I live in a flat in a tall building in town centre. I live with my parents and grandparents. I have a younger brother, too.
My home is quite modern and comfortable. It has new furniture and big windows. The rooms are big and clean. I like living here because it is comfortable.
My favourite place at home is my bedroom. It is big and beautiful. I can do anything I like there. I often enjoy wonderful moments with my younger brother.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的居住位置和家庭成员；
第二步，具体描述家的特点；
第三步，阐述自己最喜欢的地方及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①live in 居住在
②at home 在家里
[高分句型]
①I like living here because it is comfortable. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I can do anything I like there. (定语从句)
四、书面表达-书信作文
10．你叫Sandy，你想邀请你的美国的笔友Mike来你的家乡参观，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封邀请信，并向他介绍你的家乡和你的家。
你的家乡 现代化城市，位于江苏省东南部，名胜古迹……
你的家 离市中心不远，坐地铁到市中心只要15分钟；公寓在五楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……因为……
你的邻居 善良，友好。乐意帮助他人：1.……；2.……
你的想法 我的家乡适宜居住…… (发挥1-2点)
要求：
1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2) 必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3) 词数：80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I would like to invite you to my hometown.
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Yours,
Sandy
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
I would like to invite you to my hometown. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown lies in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It is a modern city with lots of places of interest. It is comfortable to live in my hometown. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing.
There are many tall buildings in it. My home is on the fifth floor. And I have my own room. I like my bedroom best because it is tidy and makes me feel relaxed. My home is not far from the city center. It takes only 15 minutes by underground. As for my neighbours, they are kind and friendly. They are helpful, too. When my family are on holiday, they will help us collect the newspapers. And we always help each other.
I think my hometown is a wonderful place. Welcome to my hometown.
Yours,
Sandy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要有所遗漏，并要补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置，以及宜居的原因；
第二步，介绍家和邻居；
第三步，总结，并欢迎来游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②with lots of places of interest有着许多名胜古迹
③smell the flowers闻到花香
④as for至于
[高分句型]
①It is comfortable to live in my hometown. (it作形式主语)
②I like my bedroom best because it is tidy and makes me feel relaxed. (because引导原因状语从句)
