2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写 课件(共20张PPT)
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(共20张PPT)
应用文写作——祝贺信
读后续写（The Girl Who Never Talked）
评讲&经典范文
一、应用文写作
假定你是李华，你观看了你的英国好友Leslie参加的学校英语演讲比赛直播。他的演讲“Success comes from hard work”获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 评论与赞赏；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可增加细节，以使内容连贯。
Dear Leslie,
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审题
1. 文体
祝贺信
2. 交际目的
英国好友Leslie参加学校英语演讲比赛荣获一等奖，写信表示祝贺
第二人称，第一人称
一般过去时，一般现在时
3. 人称时态
4. 语气
平等、热情、喜悦、友好
谋篇布局
1. 段落内容
三段：背景+情感+目的；评论赞赏；重申+期待
2. 结构
范文
Dear Leslie,
I really enjoyed watching your English speech competition on TV and I was delighted to see you win the first prize. On hearing this exciting news, I can’t wait to write to express my congratulations to you.
It did not surprise me at all when the host announced you as the winner. With an inspiring and motivational topic as well as fluent pronunciation and confident presentation, there is no doubt that you deserved to win the competition. As a famous saying goes, no pains, no gains. You have always been industrious and perseverant. Before the competition, every morning you stood in front of the mirror, practised speaking English loudly and corrected your accent again and again. Your hard work has now finally paid off. As you said in your speech, success really does come from hard work.
Congratulations once again. I wish you further success in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【背景】
【情感】
【情感】
【情感】
【目的】
【主题句】
【评论】
【赞赏】
【重申】
【期待】
语言积累
1. 开头段
①因某事向某人表达真诚的祝贺
_____________________________________________
②在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖
_____________________________________________
③祝贺你……成功
_____________________________________________
express my sincere congratulations to sb on sth
win the first place in the English speech contest
Congratulations on your success in....
④很高兴/兴奋得知……
_____________________________________________
⑤接受我真诚的祝贺
_____________________________________________
be delighted/excited to know that…
accept my genuine congratulations
①得知你被牛津大学录取了，我很高兴。
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
②我写信来对你的晋升/录取/成功/胜利表示诚挚的祝贺。
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
It is delightful for me to know that you are admitted to Oxford University.
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your promotion/ admission / success /victory.
③听到这个激动人心的消息，我迫不及待地写信来表达我的祝贺。
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
④祝贺你，我们都为你所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲！
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
On hearing this exciting news, I can’t wait to write to express my congratulations to you.
Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
2. 中间段
①有强烈的责任感 __________________
②成为这个比赛的冠军
______________________________________
③俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”
_____________________________________
④见证你的成功 __________________
⑤ 为你感到十分骄傲 __________________
⑥努力工作 ______________
⑦有机会做某事_____________
have a strong sense of responsibility
become champion of this competition
As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.”
witness your success
be greatly proud of you
work hard
have the opportunity to do sth
⑧在……中获得成功
__________________________________________
⑨实现，成真 __________________
⑩实现某人的梦想 __________________
每天练习做某事 ____________________
有很大的帮助／好处 ____________________
把课余时间都用于参加社交活动
___________________________________________
come true
achieve one’s dreams
be of great help/benefit
practice doing sth every day
succeed in doing sth/be successful in doing sth
devote your spare time to taking part in all kinds of social activities
①我知道这肯定要归功于……
______________________________________________
②这是对于你的……应得的奖励。______________________________________________
I know this is surely owing to...
It is a reward you richly deserve for your...
①再次祝贺 __________________
3. 结尾段常用语
①我希望你的未来是辉煌的。
______________________________________________
②再次真诚地祝贺你！ ______________________________________________
③请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最美好的祝愿。
______________________________________________
④预祝你取得更大的成功！
______________________________________________
I hope your future will be glorious.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Please accept my sincerest congratulations and best wishes.
I wish you still further success!
congratulations again
⑤对你而言，这是一个特殊而欢乐的时刻，我为你取得的成就感到骄傲。
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
⑥希望你再接再厉，梦想成真。
_________________________________________________
This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.
I wish you the best of luck and every happiness.
读后续写
主题和情节（不偏离方向）
语言水平决定高下
内容丰富（注意衔接；实在动作为主，减少评价性、感悟式、铺陈式的语言）
使用高级语言（恰当的高级词汇，丰富的句型结构，复杂的语法现象）
The Girl Who Never Talked
I never really felt like I fit in. I was a freshman in high school and my only close friend was Bella, whom I had known since kindergarten. Bella is and will always be one of my best friends and we often play together. However, she had other close friends too, but I didn’t. I was on the volleyball team, and on the court I knew exactly who I was and where I was supposed to be. I loved all of my teammates, but when we were sitting in the stands before and after games I would just sit there quietly, totally unsure of myself.
At school, no one spoke to me and I didn’t know how to get along with them. It seems like the only time anyone talked to me was just to jokingly say, “You are so quiet! Do you ever talk ” I wanted to talk, but I just couldn’t find the words. I never felt like I knew what to say in a big group of people. All of these made me upset.
One Saturday after our game, Bella was supposed to come over and spend the night at my house. We always had a lot of fun together. I wished that I could talk to the other girls the way I talked to her. But before we left the gym that day, some of the other volleyball girls invited her to go to the movies with them. Since Bella had already made plans with me, they asked if I would like to go to the movies with them too. I agreed and was happy to have a chance to join them.
One of the moms drove us, and we all piled into the back seat of her Suburban—Rhiannon, Destinee, Christine, Bella, and me. I was kind of nervous at first, but once it was just us five, I came out of my shell. It turned out that I really wanted to fit in.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk.
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk. “What if nobody responds to me What if I mess up again ” All of these terrible thoughts whirled up in my mind. But as we drove along, merry giggles echoed in the car, dispelling some of the unease inside me. At the sight of the girls’ eyes twinkling with amusement, I gradually let down my guard, “I really enjoy the time together with you.” To my surprise, the awkward silence I was waiting for did not appear. What greeted me was the enthusiastic response from the girls. “Yes, I feel like we had been friends for many years.” Christine and Destinee replied with excitement, “We should do this more often!” Their words filled my heart like warm streams, melting all my disbelief and confusion.
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier. The time spent on that Saturday was deeply printed in my mind. Our laughter along the way was just a spiritual resource, offering continuous support to me when I was afraid to talk with others. More importantly, I realized the strength of friends. When in school, I had friends to play with; when I came across a problem on study, they were always trying to help; when in trouble, I had friends to turn to for help. With all of my friends aside, I am more confident than before and I have made great progress in my study now. Friends really benefit me a lot.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk. Other girls chatting, laughing and expecting me to utter a word, with hesitation I could just open and then close my mouth repeatedly but say nothing finally, only to smile and listen quietly. For that, they showed their understanding and tolerance, but a wave of self-blame seized me tightly—why couldn’t I express myself bravely However, the next second, a familiar hand took hold of mine, bringing endless power to my sinking heart. I felt Bella’s encouragement and heaved a sigh of relief. A broken sentence was stammered out from my mouth in a trembling voice. With surprise and sincere pleasure, the girls welcomed my participation in the chat, one of whom even spoke her mind, “I like your incredibly soft voice!”
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier. That night, I was just like an exploded bomb, enjoying the awesome experience talking with my friends, which I’d never had before. During the whole night, Bella kept staring at me with overwhelming ecstasy, moved for my change. However, I acknowledged that it was her that I should really be grateful to, who gave me the courage to break the ice. Now, at school, we five girls usually spent time together, studying and playing, happiness always lingering around us. Also, with their company, I attempted to make my first presentation in front of the whole class, and I did it. Thanks to my friends, especially Bella, the girl who never talked had faded away forever.
总结：
1. 书写（清爽，工整，优美：字母大小均匀一致，倾角一致，平直成行，间距适中，无勾抹涂改）
2. 情节合情合理，内容充实有效
3. 使用高级语言（高级词汇、短语，非谓语动词，从句，特殊句式结构）
学以致用，研究、思考、积累、训练
应用文写作——祝贺信
读后续写（The Girl Who Never Talked）
评讲&经典范文
一、应用文写作
假定你是李华，你观看了你的英国好友Leslie参加的学校英语演讲比赛直播。他的演讲“Success comes from hard work”获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 评论与赞赏；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可增加细节，以使内容连贯。
Dear Leslie,
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审题
1. 文体
祝贺信
2. 交际目的
英国好友Leslie参加学校英语演讲比赛荣获一等奖，写信表示祝贺
第二人称，第一人称
一般过去时，一般现在时
3. 人称时态
4. 语气
平等、热情、喜悦、友好
谋篇布局
1. 段落内容
三段：背景+情感+目的；评论赞赏；重申+期待
2. 结构
范文
Dear Leslie,
I really enjoyed watching your English speech competition on TV and I was delighted to see you win the first prize. On hearing this exciting news, I can’t wait to write to express my congratulations to you.
It did not surprise me at all when the host announced you as the winner. With an inspiring and motivational topic as well as fluent pronunciation and confident presentation, there is no doubt that you deserved to win the competition. As a famous saying goes, no pains, no gains. You have always been industrious and perseverant. Before the competition, every morning you stood in front of the mirror, practised speaking English loudly and corrected your accent again and again. Your hard work has now finally paid off. As you said in your speech, success really does come from hard work.
Congratulations once again. I wish you further success in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【背景】
【情感】
【情感】
【情感】
【目的】
【主题句】
【评论】
【赞赏】
【重申】
【期待】
语言积累
1. 开头段
①因某事向某人表达真诚的祝贺
_____________________________________________
②在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖
_____________________________________________
③祝贺你……成功
_____________________________________________
express my sincere congratulations to sb on sth
win the first place in the English speech contest
Congratulations on your success in....
④很高兴/兴奋得知……
_____________________________________________
⑤接受我真诚的祝贺
_____________________________________________
be delighted/excited to know that…
accept my genuine congratulations
①得知你被牛津大学录取了，我很高兴。
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
②我写信来对你的晋升/录取/成功/胜利表示诚挚的祝贺。
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
It is delightful for me to know that you are admitted to Oxford University.
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your promotion/ admission / success /victory.
③听到这个激动人心的消息，我迫不及待地写信来表达我的祝贺。
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
④祝贺你，我们都为你所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲！
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
On hearing this exciting news, I can’t wait to write to express my congratulations to you.
Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
2. 中间段
①有强烈的责任感 __________________
②成为这个比赛的冠军
______________________________________
③俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”
_____________________________________
④见证你的成功 __________________
⑤ 为你感到十分骄傲 __________________
⑥努力工作 ______________
⑦有机会做某事_____________
have a strong sense of responsibility
become champion of this competition
As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.”
witness your success
be greatly proud of you
work hard
have the opportunity to do sth
⑧在……中获得成功
__________________________________________
⑨实现，成真 __________________
⑩实现某人的梦想 __________________
每天练习做某事 ____________________
有很大的帮助／好处 ____________________
把课余时间都用于参加社交活动
___________________________________________
come true
achieve one’s dreams
be of great help/benefit
practice doing sth every day
succeed in doing sth/be successful in doing sth
devote your spare time to taking part in all kinds of social activities
①我知道这肯定要归功于……
______________________________________________
②这是对于你的……应得的奖励。______________________________________________
I know this is surely owing to...
It is a reward you richly deserve for your...
①再次祝贺 __________________
3. 结尾段常用语
①我希望你的未来是辉煌的。
______________________________________________
②再次真诚地祝贺你！ ______________________________________________
③请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最美好的祝愿。
______________________________________________
④预祝你取得更大的成功！
______________________________________________
I hope your future will be glorious.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Please accept my sincerest congratulations and best wishes.
I wish you still further success!
congratulations again
⑤对你而言，这是一个特殊而欢乐的时刻，我为你取得的成就感到骄傲。
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
⑥希望你再接再厉，梦想成真。
_________________________________________________
This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.
I wish you the best of luck and every happiness.
读后续写
主题和情节（不偏离方向）
语言水平决定高下
内容丰富（注意衔接；实在动作为主，减少评价性、感悟式、铺陈式的语言）
使用高级语言（恰当的高级词汇，丰富的句型结构，复杂的语法现象）
The Girl Who Never Talked
I never really felt like I fit in. I was a freshman in high school and my only close friend was Bella, whom I had known since kindergarten. Bella is and will always be one of my best friends and we often play together. However, she had other close friends too, but I didn’t. I was on the volleyball team, and on the court I knew exactly who I was and where I was supposed to be. I loved all of my teammates, but when we were sitting in the stands before and after games I would just sit there quietly, totally unsure of myself.
At school, no one spoke to me and I didn’t know how to get along with them. It seems like the only time anyone talked to me was just to jokingly say, “You are so quiet! Do you ever talk ” I wanted to talk, but I just couldn’t find the words. I never felt like I knew what to say in a big group of people. All of these made me upset.
One Saturday after our game, Bella was supposed to come over and spend the night at my house. We always had a lot of fun together. I wished that I could talk to the other girls the way I talked to her. But before we left the gym that day, some of the other volleyball girls invited her to go to the movies with them. Since Bella had already made plans with me, they asked if I would like to go to the movies with them too. I agreed and was happy to have a chance to join them.
One of the moms drove us, and we all piled into the back seat of her Suburban—Rhiannon, Destinee, Christine, Bella, and me. I was kind of nervous at first, but once it was just us five, I came out of my shell. It turned out that I really wanted to fit in.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk.
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk. “What if nobody responds to me What if I mess up again ” All of these terrible thoughts whirled up in my mind. But as we drove along, merry giggles echoed in the car, dispelling some of the unease inside me. At the sight of the girls’ eyes twinkling with amusement, I gradually let down my guard, “I really enjoy the time together with you.” To my surprise, the awkward silence I was waiting for did not appear. What greeted me was the enthusiastic response from the girls. “Yes, I feel like we had been friends for many years.” Christine and Destinee replied with excitement, “We should do this more often!” Their words filled my heart like warm streams, melting all my disbelief and confusion.
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier. The time spent on that Saturday was deeply printed in my mind. Our laughter along the way was just a spiritual resource, offering continuous support to me when I was afraid to talk with others. More importantly, I realized the strength of friends. When in school, I had friends to play with; when I came across a problem on study, they were always trying to help; when in trouble, I had friends to turn to for help. With all of my friends aside, I am more confident than before and I have made great progress in my study now. Friends really benefit me a lot.
However, my previous unsureness made me feel a little hesitant and scared to talk. Other girls chatting, laughing and expecting me to utter a word, with hesitation I could just open and then close my mouth repeatedly but say nothing finally, only to smile and listen quietly. For that, they showed their understanding and tolerance, but a wave of self-blame seized me tightly—why couldn’t I express myself bravely However, the next second, a familiar hand took hold of mine, bringing endless power to my sinking heart. I felt Bella’s encouragement and heaved a sigh of relief. A broken sentence was stammered out from my mouth in a trembling voice. With surprise and sincere pleasure, the girls welcomed my participation in the chat, one of whom even spoke her mind, “I like your incredibly soft voice!”
I smiled, knowing I finally had friends and my school life would be much happier. That night, I was just like an exploded bomb, enjoying the awesome experience talking with my friends, which I’d never had before. During the whole night, Bella kept staring at me with overwhelming ecstasy, moved for my change. However, I acknowledged that it was her that I should really be grateful to, who gave me the courage to break the ice. Now, at school, we five girls usually spent time together, studying and playing, happiness always lingering around us. Also, with their company, I attempted to make my first presentation in front of the whole class, and I did it. Thanks to my friends, especially Bella, the girl who never talked had faded away forever.
总结：
1. 书写（清爽，工整，优美：字母大小均匀一致，倾角一致，平直成行，间距适中，无勾抹涂改）
2. 情节合情合理，内容充实有效
3. 使用高级语言（高级词汇、短语，非谓语动词，从句，特殊句式结构）
学以致用，研究、思考、积累、训练