【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life! 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版（2024）Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life!e
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Fred给你发来一封电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to be your new penfriend. I want to know more about you. How many people are there in your family What’s your room like I like rabbits best. What are your favourite animals I study at a nice school. Do you like your school What’s your favourite place at school Why Can you tell me
Yours,
Fred
1.邮件应回答所有问题，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80左右。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred，
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是王华，请按下面表格要求写一封信，向你的新笔友Mike介绍一下你自己，你的家人，你的学校和你最喜欢的科目及原因。
要求：
(1)60词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名，班级和学校；
(3)短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Yourself ●age: …… ●hobby: ……
2. Your family ……
3. Your school ● small/ big…… ●There is/ are……
4. Your favourite subject and reasons. ●My favourite subject is…… Because……
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you.
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Looking forward to your reply (期待你的答复).
Yours,
Wang Hua
3．阅读表格，请根据表格内容以“My friend’s busy day”为题，介绍你朋友一天的忙碌生活。
Name Tom Age 13
Time His activity
7:00 get up; listen to the music
7:20 have breakfast; eat noodles, drink milk
7:50 go to school on foot; about 15 minutes
In the morning four lessons; a break
12:00 have lunch; have a rest
In the afternoon one lesson; basketball club
After dinner finish homework; read with parents, play computers
21:00 go to bed
要求：1、有适当的开头和结尾；2、要点齐全，语言通顺。3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
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4．器识为先，必崇德明理，五育创新并举。步入初中，同学们不仅有丰富的课程，也有精彩的课外活动。你的校园生活是怎么样的呢？
假定你是李华，请根据以下思维导图，以My School Life为题，写一篇英语小短文来介绍你的校园生活及感受。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
My School Life
My name is Li Hua.
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5．同学们进入初中已经一个学期了，相信大家的校园生活一定丰富多彩！假如你是滕飞，请根据以下导图提示，总结一下你的校园生活吧。
写作要求：
1.围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实；
2.语意通顺，表达准确，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数不少于 60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
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6．亲爱的同学，七年级上学期的校园生活即将画上句号，回顾这段时光，你的学校给你留下了怎样的印象呢 请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的学校、你最喜欢的校园一角以及你对同学和老师们的看法。
内容提示：
1. What is your school like
2. Which place do you like best Why
3. What do you think of your classmates and teachers
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A school is a place to start our dreams.
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7．假设你是第一中学七年级一班的一名学生，请你以“My School Day”为题，介绍你学校及在学校的学习和生活：
要点：
1. 非常喜爱学校，因为它看起来很现代化；
2. 有许多新朋友，每天都很开心；
3. 学校周一到周五早上八点半开始上课，放学后进行各种课外活动；
4. 喜欢做早操，因为早操有益；
5. ……
注意：
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数60 左右（开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7.
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8．假如你是李华，回顾进入七年级这半年以来多姿多彩的初中生活。请以“My New Life in the Middle School”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你的初中新生活，参加学校英语俱乐部的征文比赛。 1. 要点提示：
（1）校园大而整洁，老师和同学都很友善；（2）有七门课程，最喜欢英语；
（3）每天做运动，对身体好； （4）学校的食物很美味，爱吃蔬菜和水果；
（5）适当补充一两点相关信息或想法…… 2. 要求：
（1）语法正确，条理清晰，内容连贯；
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
（4）词数：60—80词，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My New Life in the Middle School
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’d like to tell you something about my new life in the middle school.
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9．假如你是李辉，Alice是你的笔友。请你阅读以下邮件，并根据Alice提出的问题，给她写一封邮件。
Hi there, Li Hui! I know you love your school life. Now I want to know something about your favourite subject. What subject do you like best Why do you like it What do you do to learn it well Hope to hear from you soon.
要求:
1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范;
3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Alice,
I’m happy to share my favourite subject with you.
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Yours,
Li Hui
10．时间过得真快，不知不觉一学期快要结束了，你已成为一名中学生好几个月了，你的中学生活一定丰富多彩，请结合你的校园、学习科目、课外活动、学校生活等以“My School Life”为题，介绍一下你的校园生活，并谈谈你的真实感受。
要求：
1）语言流畅、书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。
2）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用姓名，请用Mike, Mary等名字，校名统一使用Xinhua Middle School。
3）书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
4）抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
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11．校园生活丰富多彩，不仅有课上的书声朗朗，还有课下的欢声笑语。假如你是七年级二班的学生高桥，你们年级近期要举办以“My Favorite School Day”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据提示问题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
1. What school day do you like best
2. What’s your favorite subject Why
3. What do you do after school
要求：
1. 内容应包括提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 作文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名：
3. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! I’m Gao Qiao from Class 2, Grade 7. My school life is colorful.
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12．假如你是腾飞，你收到了一封来自英国笔友Bill的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容用英文给Bill回一封电子邮件。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；内容可适当扩充；
3. 在答题卡上填写To，From后面的信息以及称呼，落名并按四个要点来回复；
4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
5. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
To: Tengfei@student com From: Bill@happymail com
Dear Fei, How are you these days I know you study in a Chinese middle school. What’s your favorite subject What club do you join What do you like to do after school The Chinese New Year is coming. How do you celebrate it every year Write soon! Yours, Bill
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13．同学们，初中生活的画卷已缓缓展开，新篇章里藏着无限可能与精彩。请结合以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
提示：
1. What’s in your school
2. What subject do you like best And why
3. What do you often do after class —Clubs/after-school activities.
4. What do you think of your school life
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，表意准确，条理清晰，书写规范。
3.70词左右。
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14．同学们，七年级上学期即将过去，请以“My school life”为题向学校英语专栏投稿介绍一下自己的学校生活，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢什么科目和原因；
2. 你参加的学校的社团及活动时间；
3. 你在学校都做了哪些有趣的事情。
要求
1. 文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数70左右。
My school life
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15．同学们，作为一名中学生，你的学习生活肯定是紧张而忙碌的，但同时又是愉快而有意义的。假如你是李华，你将参加学校英文报“My school day life”主题征文活动，请你根据下列要点提示，简单描述你的日常生活。
写作要点：
1. 通常6:20起床，6:40吃早餐，然后7:00去上学；
2. 第一节课7:30开始上课，上午有四节课；中午11:50吃饭；下午有三节课，从4:40到5:20经常做体育运动；
3. 大约5:40到家，6:30吃完晚饭后写作业，8:00写完作业后做一些家务或者读书，9:00上床睡觉。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含全部所给信息。
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 语言流畅，适当使用连词，语法正确，书写规范。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. This is my school day life.
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This is my school day life. I’m busy but happy.
16．同学们进入初中已经一个学期了， 对学校也有了一些了解。请写一篇短文，介绍你的学校。词数70词左右。文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢去的一个地方， 介绍它在学校的具体位置和喜欢的原因；
2. 你最喜欢的一个俱乐部及喜欢的原因；
3. 你对老师和同学的印象。
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17．假设你是李华，你的国外朋友Fred向你发来2025新年祝福，同时他很想了解你的初一新生活。请你在回信中介绍你的学校生活。
参考要点：新的学校、喜欢的学科、丰富的社团生活、新的朋友……
要求：1.句意连贯，语法正确，要点齐全，
2.书写工整，卷面整洁，80—100词左右，可适当增添内容;
3.文中不出现真实信息。
Dear Fred，
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．同学们，时光荏苒，仿佛昨日你们才满怀憧憬地迈入初中大门，而今，一个学期的学习生活已悄然落幕。在这段宝贵的时间里，相信你们对自己的初中学校有了更为深刻的了解与感受。现在，请拿起你的笔，向我们简单介绍一下你的初中学校。
My Middle School What is in your school Which one do you like best Why
Buildings classroom building; a sports field; ... ...
Subjects (学科) Maths; English; ... ...
要求：
1）必须包括所给信息, 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯；
2）文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school.
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19．假如你是李明，住在石家庄，想和美国的Sam成为笔友，请你根据下表提供的内容，写一封电子邮件给Sam，做一下自我介绍。
Name Li Ming
Family members father, mother, brother…
Favorite subject English, math…
Hobbies music, reading books…
Sports play basketball, go swimming…
注意：
(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2) 参考表格内容，可以适当发挥。
(3) 词数60个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I want to be your pen pal. My name is Li Ming. I live in Shijiazhuang.
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Yours,
Li Ming
20．2024年12月4日，“春节”被正式列入人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。这一消息迅速刷屏，成为全世界热议的焦点。你在国外的笔友Baker看到这则新闻后，想到中国学习的心情更加迫切。因此，请你向他写一封信，介绍一下你的初中生活，帮助他为交换生做准备。
内容包括：
1. What is your favorite subject Why
2. What do you usually do after class
3. What do you think of your school life
作文要求：
1.包含所给信息，可适当发挥，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。60词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Baker,
I am happy to tell you something about myself.
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What about you I’m looking forward to your letter.
Your friend,
Oscar
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your email! There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My room is not too big but cozy. It has a blue desk on the left and a bookshelf next to it. I also love rabbits! They are cute and gentle.
Yes, I like my school very much. My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. I often read there after class.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干提示，回答Fred的问题，介绍自己的家庭情况、房间布置、喜欢的动物和学校情况，注意内容齐全，保证语句通顺，无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭信息以及房间的摆设以及喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍自己的学校情况和最喜欢的学校设施；
第三步，表达对成为笔友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① next to 紧挨着
② look forward to sth./doing sth. 期待某事/做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. (there be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. (because引导原因状语从句)
2．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you. My name is Wang Hua. I’m 12 now. I like reading and music. I live with my parents and younger sister. We have a small but cozy home. I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment. It’s very big and there are many buildings. My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己和家庭；
第二步，简单介绍自己的学校；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②learn about了解
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment.(which引导定语从句)
②My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.(because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
Hello, everyone! This my friend Tom. He is 13 years old.
Every day, he usually gets up at 7:00. He likes to listen to the music. At 7:30, he has breakfast. He likes eating noodles and drinking milk. He goes to school on foot at 7:50. It’s about 15 minutes’ walk.
At school, there are four lessons in the morning. There is a break between lessons. He has lunch at 12:00. Then He has a rest. In the afternoon, there is only one lesson. Then he goes to his basketball club.
After dinner, he always finishes his homework first. Then he usually reads with his parents or plays computers. At 21:00, he goes to bed on time.
His day is busy, but he feels happy!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示内容介绍Tom的日常安排，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼，引出要介绍的主人公——Tom；
第二步，根据表格详细介绍Tom的日常活动；
第三步，书写结语，给出评价。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②listen to the music听音乐
③have a rest休息
③on time按时
[高分句型]
His day is busy, but he feels happy! (but连接的并列句)
4．例文
My School Life
My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. I am 12 years old. I am tall and friendly. My school life is very colorful.
From Monday to Friday, I go to school on foot. We usually start our class at 8:00 a.m. and our class ends at 5:00 p.m. My favorite subject is English because I think it’s very interesting. There are also many interesting after-school activities. We can play jianzi or go to the library.
I really love my school life. I enjoy the time with my classmates.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，具体描述自己的学校生活情况；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① from...to...从……到……
② on foot步行
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because I think it’s very interesting.（原因状语从句）
5．例文
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
My school is big and beautiful with a big playground and a library. We have many subjects like Chinese, Math and English. English is my favorite because it’s interesting. I join the art club. I can draw pictures with my club members after school.
On school days, I get up early, then go to school. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. After school, I do my homework and sometimes play basketball. My school life is busy but enjoyable.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍学校的环境、学习的科目和加入的俱乐部；
第二步，介绍上学日常，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up early 早起
②do one’s homework 做作业
③enjoyable adj. 令人愉快的
[高分句型]
English is my favorite because it’s interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．范文：
A school is a place to start our dreams.
My school is large and beautiful. It has many classrooms, a library, a playground, and a garden. The place I like best is the library. It is quiet, and there are many interesting books to read. I enjoy spending time there, especially when I need some peace.
As for my classmates and teachers, I think they are friendly and helpful. My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. They make me feel comfortable and encourage me to do my best.
I’m happy to be a part of this school!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息“内容提示”的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍学校的整体环境和设施；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的校园一角，并给出理由；
第三步，描述同学和老师的特点，表达对他们的积极看法。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②as for至于
③be a part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. (并列句)
②I think they are friendly and helpful. (宾语从句)
7．例文
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. I have many new friends and I am happy every day. School starts at 8:30 a.m. from Monday to Friday. After school, we have different activities. I like doing morning exercises because they are good for us.
I love my school day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，结合要点，介绍自己的学校、在校的学习和生活；
第二步，总结，表达对学校的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of 很多，大量
② from...to... 从……到……
③ be good for 有益于……
[高分句型]
I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. (because引导原因状语从句)
8．例文
My New Life in the Middle School
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I’d like to tell you something about my new life in the middle school. My school is big and tidy. I love it very much. Our teachers and classmates are very nice. We have seven subjects at school. And my favourite subject is English. I play sports every day. I think it’s good for my health. We have breakfast, lunch and dinner at school. The food is delicious. I like fruit and vegetables best. We also have many kinds of activities. For example, we have School Day, Sports Day and New Year’s Party. In my free time, I like reading and telling stories with my classmates. All in all, I love my school very much.
I enjoy my new school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用形容词简单概括新的初中校园环境和师生特点，再表达出整体感受；
第二步，按照要点内容，继续介绍自己对课程的喜好以及日常活动等信息，注意行文的条理和连贯以及语法的正确；
第三步，结尾总结，补充自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②in my free time 在我的空闲时间
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①I think it’s good for my health.（宾语从句）
②In my free time, I like reading and telling stories with my classmates.（and连接并列成分）
9．例文：
Dear Alice,
I’m happy to share my favourite subject with you. My favourite subject is history. I like it because it’s interesting to learn about the past. What’s more, I can always learn something important from history stories.
I have history every Monday and Thursday. My history teacher is great fun and knowledgeable. He always makes his class interesting. I’m really interested in history, so I spend a lot of time learning it. In my free time, I not only read many books about history but also visit the history museum often. For me, it’s never boring to learn history.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：仔细阅读邮件后得出写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写此邮件的目的 (已经给出)；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目是历史，以及原因；
第三步，介绍为学习历史所做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more而且
②something important重要的东西
③be interested in感兴趣
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I like it because it’s interesting to learn about the past. (because引导原因状语从句)
10．例文
My School Life
I would like to tell you something about the life in my school. It has been one year since I came to the school.
My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. We always help each other. I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends. In school, I study English, mathematics, Chinese, physical education, biology, geography, and so on. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. Mr. Li is my math teacher. He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. I like music room. Because I love dancing. Dancing is relaxing.
I like my school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，短文必须包含写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的校园；
第二步，介绍自己的老师和同学；
第三步，介绍自己的学习科目。
[亮点词汇]
①each other互相
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①It has been one year since I came to the school. （since引导的时间状语从句）
②The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework.（though引导的让步状语从句）
11．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Gao Qiao from Class 2, Grade 7. My school life is colorful. My favorite school day is Tuesday. In the morning, we have four classes, Chinese, math, English and history. My favorite subject is Chinese. Our Chinese teacher is very kind. She often tells us interesting stories. Her class is lively and fun.
In the afternoon, there is a music class. We learn different kinds of music. We often sing happily. After school, I usually go to the school library. There are so many books there. I like reading books about science and history. Sometimes, I also play basketball with my classmates on the playground. It’s fun to play with my friends.
Tuesday is my favorite school day because I can learn my favorite subject and have a great time after school. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点；
[写作步骤]
第一步， 承接开头，介绍最喜欢的上学日是哪一天；
第二步，介绍喜欢的科目并说明原因；
第三步，介绍自己课后通常做什么；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②play basketball 打篮球
③have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are so many books there. (there be句型)
②Tuesday is my favorite school day because I can learn my favorite subject and have a great time after school. (because引导的原因状语从句)
12．例文
Dear Bill,
I’m doing well these days. It’s great to hear from you! My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers. I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends. It’s a wonderful way to relax and express myself. After school, I usually like to play basketball with my classmates. It’s both fun and a good exercise.
As for the Chinese New Year, my family and I celebrate by having a big dinner together. We exchange red envelopes and visit relatives. The streets are decorated with lanterns, and there are often fireworks. It’s a joyous time filled with traditions and happiness.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Tengfei
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回答自己最近如何；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目、加入了什么俱乐部以及课后做的事情；
第三步，最后介绍自己如何庆祝新年。
[亮点词汇]
① love doing sth喜欢做某事
② as for至于
③ filled with充满
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers（原因状语从句）
②I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends（定语从句）
13．例文
This is my first term at my new school. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a big playground, a library with lots of books, and classrooms full of friends. My favorite subject is math because it’s useful and interesting. After class, I join the Chess Club. It’s fun to play against my friends. Sometimes, I also do sports like basketball with my classmates.
I think my school life is great. I learn new things every day and make lots of friends.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校生活，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍喜欢的科目和原因，课后活动等信息；
第三步，点评学校生活，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②full of充满
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is math because it's useful and interesting.（原因状语从句）
14．范文：
My school life
I enjoy my school life very much. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new words and speaking with my friends in English. I am also a member of the basketball club, and we practice every Wednesday afternoon. Besides, I take part in the school music club, where we play different instruments together. Last week, we held a small concert, and I performed with my friends. These activities make my school life fun and exciting.
I look forward to more interesting things at school!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述日常的学校生活和兴趣。
③ 提示：根据题目要求，简洁明了地表达自己喜欢的科目、参加的活动和有趣的事情，确保内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要描述自己喜欢的学科及原因；
第二步，提到参加的学校社团并简述活动安排；
第三步，描述自己在学校参加的有趣活动；
第四步，结尾强调学校生活的乐趣，展现对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① in English用英语
② take part in 参加
[高分句型]
Besides, I take part in the school music club, where we play different instruments together. (非限制性定语从句)
15．例文
My School Day Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. This is my school day life. I’d love to share it with you.
I usually wake up at 6:20 a.m. After getting dressed and washing my face, I have breakfast at 6:40. I like bread and milk for breakfast. Then, I go to school at 7:00.
Classes start at 7:30 a.m. We have four classes in the morning. Math is my favorite subject because it’s interesting. At 11:50 a.m., it’s lunchtime. I eat with my classmates in the school cafeteria. We talk and laugh a lot.
In the afternoon, there are three classes. After school, from 4:40 to 5:20, I often play sports with my friends. We play basketball or run on the playground. It makes me feel great.
I get home at about 5:40 p.m. After dinner at 6:30 p.m., I do my homework. I finish it by 8:00 p.m. Then, I either do some housework, like cleaning my room, or read books. Reading is fun. At 9:00 p.m., I go to bed to get ready for the next day.
This is my school day life. I am busy but happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列写作要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己，并表明要分享校园生活的意图；
第二步，按照时间顺序叙述一天的日常安排；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①get dressed 穿衣服
②either … or … 要么……要么……
[高分句型]
①Math is my favorite subject because it’s interesting. (because引导原因状语从句)
②In the afternoon, there are three classes. (there be句型)
16．例文；
After one semester in middle school, I’ve got to know our school quite well. There’s a place I really like, which is the library. It’s on the second floor of the school building. I love it because it has lots of books, and I can read different kinds of stories there. My favorite club is the Science Club. We do experiments and learn about new things every week. It’s so exciting to see how things work and discover new ideas. My teachers are kind and patient. They always help me when I have questions. My classmates are friendly and fun. We play and study together. I really enjoy being part of this school community.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：注意不要遗漏写作要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己最喜欢去的一个地方，并说明它在学校的具体位置和喜欢的原因。
第二步，介绍最喜欢的俱乐部及喜欢的原因。
第三步，介绍对老师和同学的印象并书写结语，表达对学校生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get to know认识，了解
②lots of许多
③different kinds of不同种类的……
[高分句型]
①I love it because it has lots of books, and I can read different kinds of stories there.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②They always help me when I have questions.（when引导的时间状语从句）
17．Dear Fred,
I’m glad to tell you about my school life. My new school is big and beautiful. I usually get up at 6:30 and go there at 7:30. My favourite subject is English because it is interesting. I have a new friend, Tom. He is very kind and he always helps me with my study. I join the basketball club and play basketball with my friends after school. I also like to read books in the school library. I feel happy and excited about my school life. It is colorful and meaningful. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]第一步，导入话题，介绍学校生活；
第二步，具体阐述学校的生活；
第三步，书写结语，希望收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
③hear from收到……的来信
[高分句型]
My favourite subject is English because it is interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
18．例文：
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school. My school is wonderful. There are many buildings like the classroom building and the sports field. We have different subjects such as Maths and English. I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study.
I love my middle school.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了作者的中学生活；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：介绍学校的建筑、你喜欢的学科，表达对学校的热爱。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明要谈论自己的中学；
第二步，介绍学校的建筑，你喜欢的学科，说明自己最喜欢运动场的原因等；
第三步，结尾表达对中学的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful 极好的；精彩的
②such as 例如
③provide 提供
[高分句型]
①I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. (because引导原因状语从句)
②The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
19．例文
Dear Sam,
I want to be your pen pal. My name is Li Ming. I live in Shijiazhuang. I have a warm family. There are four people. They are my father, mother and brother. My favorite subjects are English and math. I often help my classmates with their English. I enjoy listening to music and reading books in my free time. I also love sports that are good for my health, especially playing basketball and going swimming. Would you like to become my pen pal
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、家庭成员、爱好、运动”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，询问对方是否愿意做自己的笔友。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
I also love sports that are good for my health, especially playing basketball and going swimming. (that引导的定语从句)
20．例文
Dear Baker,
I am happy to tell you something about myself.
My favorite subject is Chinese. I love reading Chinese classics and learning about our history and culture. After class, I usually play basketball with my friends. It’s a great way to relax and stay healthy. I think my school life is interesting and colorful. I can join different kinds of clubs and we have many activities. I hope you can come to China as soon as possible.
What about you I’m looking forward to your letter.
Your friend,
Oscar
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的初中生活，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从最喜欢的科目及课后活动等方面介绍自己的初中生活；
第三步，表达自己的感受及希望对方尽快来到中国。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②different kinds of不同种类的
③as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is interesting and colorful. (宾语从句)
②I can join different kinds of clubs and we have many activities. (and连接的并列句)
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