(共70张PPT)
Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.了解范文的关键信息和结构。
2.判断电影评论的写作手法及写作风格，并归纳总结电影评论的语言特点及基本结构。
3.写一篇电影评论。
目 录
NO.1 学新知 / 点滴积累充盈“语料库”
NO.2 促写作 / 写作增分途径“多仿写”
课时检测
学新知 / 点滴积累充盈“语料库”
NO.1
1．Beauty offers to replace her father and be trapped in the castle.
美女提出代替她父亲，被囚禁在城堡里。
★trap vt.困住，使陷入危险中；诱捕；诱骗 n．陷阱
[用法感知]
①Two survivors were cut free after being trapped for twenty minutes.
两名幸存者受困二十分钟后才被解救出来。
②(“交通”主题佳句)What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians are trapped in the traffic jams because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.
更糟糕的是，由于近年来汽车数量的不断增加，一些司机、骑车的人和行人受困于交通堵塞。
③You can fall into a trap when you are greedy.
当你贪婪的时候，你会掉进陷阱。
[归纳点拨]
(1)trap sb.into (doing) sth. 使某人陷入(做)某事的圈套；
诱骗某人(做)某事
be/get trapped in 被困在……中
(2)fall into a trap 落入陷阱/圈套
fall into the trap of doing sth. 落入……的圈套
set/lay a trap for 为……设圈套
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④He felt he had been trapped into (accept) the terms of the contract.
⑤Don't fall the trap of investing all your money in one place.
⑥The old man was trapped the burning house at that moment.
accepting
into
in
(2)替换加蓝词汇
⑦The thought of being stuck in the car with the possibility of car trouble along the way is enough to make me consider staying home.
______________
trapped/caught
2．In one vivid scene, Beauty looks in the mirror and her face is transformed into the Beast's.
在一个生动的场景中，美女看着镜子，她的脸变成了野兽的脸。
★transform vt.使转化，使改观
[用法感知]
①(“环境保护”主题佳句)With more and more trees planted, the local people have succeeded in transforming the bare hill into a green one.
随着植木越来越多，当地人成功地把光秃秃的山变成了绿油油的山。
②In recent years, the movie industry has undergone a dramatic transformation.
近年来，电影业经历了一场戏剧性的变革。
[归纳点拨]
(1)transform ...(from ...) into ... 把……(从……)变成……
(2)transformation n. 改变
transformation from sth. to/into sth. 从……到……的转变
[应用融会] (单句语法填空)
③Vigorous development of automobile industry has transformed that country a farm-based society into an industrial power.
④The place has been transformed from a quiet farming village ____a busy city in the past years.
⑤The way in which we work has undergone a complete ______________(transform) in the past decade.
from
into
transformation
促写作 / 写作增分途径“多仿写”
NO.2
■写作项目——Write a film review
本单元的写作任务是写一篇电影评论，属于夹叙夹议的议论文。影评一般包括对影片的背景、故事梗概、观众印象最深的部分等的介绍以及对影片的评价。叙述电影情节时运用生动形象的语言，更要简洁流畅。评论电影时要观点鲜明，条理清晰。
由教材学写作
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点。评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论的中心点只能有一个，要注意点面结合。对要评论的电影先做一个总体介绍，如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等，这是“面”的介绍；然后结合某一个情节、某一段对话或者某一个场面进行具体分析，这是“点”的评论。如课文开篇就点明了《美女与野兽》这部电影的导演、参演人员等背景信息，
为后文进一步介绍这部电影做铺垫。第三段就处理主题的方式以及一些巧妙的特效作了具体介绍，并举例进行说明，为读者描绘了一幅美丽的电影场景，让读者在欣赏的过程中也学到了一些电影知识。
三、学靓丽表达
叙述电影情节时，经常使用一些形容词或动词，使得画面感很强，让人仿佛身临其境。如第一段第二句直接用is代替acts，语言表达更形象生动，同时也刻画出演员在表现美女和野兽时的传神表演。第二段使用abnormal一词刻画出野兽的外在特点，与下文点明他曾是一位英俊的男子形成对比。第三段使用clever一词表达了在使用特效方面的独到之处。
[仿写训练] (完成句子)
①My parents thought to be interested in ballet.
我的父母亲认为一个男孩喜欢芭蕾是不正常的。
②In a word, this is to a common problem.
总之，这是一个解决常见问题的妙方。
it was abnormal for a boy
a clever approach
具体写作指导
Write a film review
——写一篇电影评论
第一步：构思谋篇
Tense Present simple tense
Person First and third person
Main points Part 1：Give basic information about the film(the film‘s name, film’s type, director, lead actor, release time, story background, etc.)．
Part 2: Provide information about the storyline and give your opinion of the film.
Part 3: Express your comment, or recommend the film to readers.
续表
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 如何简要介绍电影？
①It is a comedy-drama adventure film, of the same name.
它是一部喜剧冒险电影，改编自一本同名小说。
②The film the remote deserts of western China.
这部电影的背景是中国西部遥远的沙漠。
adapted from a novel
is set in
第二部分 如何叙述电影情节？
①It a big, fat panda that can perform martial arts.
它讲述了一只可以表演武术的胖熊猫的故事。
tells a story concerned with
②The movie is about one of the most incredible emergency landings in China's civil aviation history.
这部电影讲述的是一位机长完成了中国民航史上最不可思议的紧急降落之一。
③ the main character's growth story of fighting against his own destiny.
电影的主题是主角与自己的命运相抗争的成长故事。
a captain who completed
The theme of the film is
第三部分 如何对电影作出评论或推荐？
①It is a great animated film.It is elegantly drawn and the action sequences .Teenagers, even adults, like watching it.
它是一部极棒的动画电影，它的画面优雅，动作充满了活力。青少年，甚至是成年人都喜欢看。
are packed with energy
② , it is Rowan Atkinson's good performances that impress people most.So I hope _________________
some day in the future.I bet you'll love it.
就我而言，给人印象最深刻的是罗温·艾金森的精彩表演。所以我希望你将来有一天能喜欢这部电影。我打赌你一定会喜欢的。
As far as I'm concerned
you can enjoy this
film
[针对练笔]
英语课上，老师让大家观看电影《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)并进行评论。请你根据提示完善讨论稿，并作为小组代表发言。
Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.
Forrest Gump is an American film, ①___________________________
(它是根据小说改编的) written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately ②_________
(天生智商较低), but he is an open-minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that ③________________________
(他最终取得了巨大的成功)．Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire.
which is adapted from the novel
born with
a lower IQ
he has achieved great
success at last
The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.What's more, it conveys a message that ④___________________________________
(我们应该以积极的态度对待生活)．No matter what difficulty we meet in life, ⑤ (我们不应该放弃)．Besides, the use of the language is striking, which also makes the film a success.
we should take a positive attitude
towards life
we should not give up
写作素材储备
(一)写作常用句式
1．影片概述
①The main characters are ...
②The film tells us a real story.
③The film ...directed by ...is a story about ...
④The story takes place in ...
⑤The film ...is about ...
⑥The film ...is set in ...
⑦The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.
2．正面的评价
①This is a very touching film/a must-see.
② ...gives an amazing performance in the film.
③My favourite part of the film is ...
④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it!
⑤People like the film not just because ...but also because ...
⑥One of the keys to the film's success is ...
3．负面的评价
①However, many people have complained that the film is too ...
②Another common complaint is that the film ...
③I'm disappointed with the film because ...
(二)主题语段
1．电影介绍
Journey to the West is a classic Chinese animated film. It tells the legendary story of Sun Wukong and others protecting the Tang Monk's journey to the West. Full of humor and excitement, it showcases the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
《西游记》是一部中国经典动画电影。它讲述了孙悟空等人保护唐僧去西天取经的传奇故事。这部影片充满了幽默、惊险(的情节)，展现了中国传统文化的魅力。
2．电影评价及推荐
Life Is Beautiful is a classic that combines comedy and tragedy. It portrays the cruelty of war and the glory of humanity from a unique perspective, full of love and hope. Highly recommended!
《美丽人生》是一部融合了喜剧和悲剧元素的经典之作。它以独特的视角描绘了战争的残酷与人性的光辉，充满了爱与希望。强烈推荐大家观看！
(三)写作模板
The film ， directed by ， is about ．
stars in the film ...
The film tells of a story ．
The film is touching and instructive， .
It is worth watching. ．
电影名
导演
主题
演员
介绍故事梗概
感想
推荐
课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1．A classic movie which was called The Shawshank Redemption ________________________________(给我留下了深刻印象)．
2．The Silk Road, (追溯到汉代), was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world.
made/left a deep impression on me
dating back to the Han Dynasty
3．The movie (由……导演) James Cameron, who is famous for the film Titanic.
4．The film is ___________________________________________
(不仅仅是一个爱情故事，更是一部具有教育意义的影片)．
5．Many famous old artists (都表演得很精彩)．
is directed by
not just a love story but also an educational film
all perform wonderfully
6． (值得一看) the TV play series.
7．The animated film, Uproar in Heaven, ___________________
(改编自中国古典小说《西游记》), which is set in the Tang Dynasty, about 1,400 years ago.
It is worthwhile to watch/watching
is adapted from the
classical Chinese novel called Journey to the West
8．The film is (……的完美结合) traditional Chinese elements and creative artistic design, and you will find it strikingly beautiful and extremely imaginative as well.
a perfect combination of
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校英语报于电影周期间征文，主题为“Movie Review”。请你用英语就自己喜欢的电影作品写一篇评论并投稿，内容包括：
1．简要介绍；
2．给出评论；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：发人深思的thought-provoking
参考范文：
Nezha: Birth of the Demon Child has undoubtedly become a successful cartoon movie in China in recent years.
The movie is adapted from a famous Chinese fairy tale. Different from the previous version, this movie adopts a unique way to unfold the story. The theme of the film is the main character Nezha's growth story of fighting against his own destiny. Apart from the fantastic scenes, many inspiring lines like “I'm the master of my own destiny” impress the audiences greatly.
The film is thought-provoking. It also reflects people in real life who hold their destiny in their own hands and stick to their dreams.
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为80左右。
Lynn Marchessault and her two children packed up their car in Georgia and settled in for a five-day ride.They were going to meet up with Lynn's husband in Alaska.
Because of regulations, they had to stick to a strict five-day schedule to reach their destination.Unfortunately, once they entered Canada, things began to take a turn for the worse.Lynn's phone didn't have signal without an Internet connection, so they had no GPS.Not to mention, her windshield wipers (雨刮器) wouldn't work, she was having an extremely difficult time driving in the snow, which she had never done before, and she wasn't allowed to stop anywhere for help because of the travel restrictions.
Thankfully, a woman named Teena noticed her crying in her car at a gas station.Upon hearing Lynn's story, she decided to take a look at their tires.She found that Lynn had summer tires.That's why she was having so much trouble driving in the snow.Teena helped Lynn get to a tire shop, where the owner helped her swap out her wheels for some that were better suited to the winter weather and changed her wipers — even though it was Sunday and the business was actually closed.
Lynn got back on the road, only to stop at a hotel that was meant only for oil field workers.But when Andy, the hotel manager, saw that Lynn was struggling, he bent the rules to let the mom and her kids spend the night so they didn't have to get back on the road in cold weather.
Unable to bear driving another three days alone, Lynn decided to hire a driver to take them the rest of the way to the Alaskan border, another 1,000 miles away.She reached out to Teena to see if she could help her find someone.Between Teena and the power of social media, they were connected with Gary Bath, a Canadian Ranger (护林员) who offered to help them get to Alaska!
(前文描写了Lynn 带着她的两个孩子开始了为期5天的公路旅行，去见她的丈夫。在没有GPS和雨刷故障的情况下，她在雪地里开车遇到了困难，幸亏得到了Teena和Gary等陌生人的帮助。请根据所给开头提示语及线索进行续写，重点描写一下与Gary的有效对话以及Lynn 的感悟)
Over the course of their three-day drive, Lynn and Gary had great conversations.
Gary told her that he was happy to drive them to Alaska to meet her husband and let her kids meet their dad.He drove like a hero through the conditions that had caused her so much anxiety.Lynn was planning to pay for Gary's trip back home, but by the time they made it to Alaska, Gary's community had already donated and paid for a
flight to get him home safely! Difficulties may occur to all of us.However, there are many kind-hearted people around us.So we should be grateful to the world, because we need each other to get by.
[阅读拓展训练]
It isn't easy to climb the Old Man of Hoy, one of the tallest in the United Kingdom.It is even more dangerous if you happen to be a blind climber, as Jesse Dufton is.The 34-year-old was born with a rare genetic disease (遗传病) that left him with less than 20 percent of his vision (视觉), which then kept dropping over the years.He chooses to climb, because it's better than sitting at home feeling sorry for
himself.“Climbing is not the most dangerous thing I do on an average day; crossing the road on the way to work is far more risky than Hoy.”
Dufton has been climbing mountains since childhood.As a skilled climber, his father would take him out at weekends.He was always physical then, always up for adventure.He played sports at school, though quickly grew frustrated (沮丧) with many of them.“Badminton was a joke for someone like me, and even blind cricket — with a ball
with a bell in it — annoyed me.” Instead he was attracted to climbing and skiing, and insists that climbing is one of the safer activities for a blind person to undertake.“True, you can't see the handholds, or the footholds.You can't see where the opportunities are, or where to place your hands and your gear (齿轮), so you just have to take it slowly.You search around until you can feel for something to hold onto, and then basically repeat the process over and over again.To keep calm in these situations helps.”
It was Jesse himself who made a documentary happen.He told the filmmaker Alistair Lee about his pastime, believing it might be worth capturing on film.“I realized my story was quite unusual，” he says, adding that he felt almost duty-bound to share it.“If somebody like me watches it, and they find it inspirational, then it wouldn't be right for me to keep that from them, wouldn't it？”
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了一位盲人攀岩者Jesse Dufton坚持攀岩的故事，后来他拍了一个纪录片分享自己的故事，鼓励更多残疾人。
√
1．What is more dangerous in Jesse Dufton's eyes
A．Losing eyesight gradually.
B．Daily routines in his life.
C．Climbing the Old Man of Hoy.
D．Staying at home all day.
解析：细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句中的“crossing the road on the way to work is far more risky than Hoy”可知，在Jesse Dufton眼中，他的日常活动更危险。
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2．What's the second paragraph mainly about
A．Dufton's passion for climbing.
B．Skills needed for climbing.
C．Father's influence on Dufton.
D．The limited choice for disabled people.
解析：段落大意题。根据第二段首句“Dufton has been climbing mountains since childhood.”以及“Instead he was attracted to climbing and skiing, and insists that climbing is one of the safer activities for a blind person to undertake.”可知，本段主要讲述了Dufton对攀岩的热情。
√
3．Jesse persuaded Alistair Lee to make a documentary to .
A．show his unique talent for climbing
B．inspire more people with disability
C．give credit to the brave climbers
D．educate people about risky sports
解析：细节理解题。根据最后一段尾句“If somebody like me watches it, and they find it inspirational, then it wouldn't be right for me to keep that from them, wouldn't it？”可知，Jesse说服Alistair Lee拍摄一部纪录片是为了激励更多残疾人。
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4．From the story, we may infer Jesse Dufton is .
A．responsible and helpful
B．caring and careful
C．patient and brave
D．adventurous and optimistic
解析：推理判断题。通读全文，再结合第一段第二句“It is even more dangerous if you happen to be a blind climber, as Jesse Dufton is.”以及最后一段尾句可知，Jesse Dufton是一个勇于冒险、积极乐观的人。Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.了解范文的关键信息和结构。
2.判断电影评论的写作手法及写作风格，并归纳总结电影评论的语言特点及基本结构。
3.写一篇电影评论。
1．Beauty offers to replace her father and be trapped in the castle.
美女提出代替她父亲，被囚禁在城堡里。
★trap vt.困住，使陷入危险中；诱捕；诱骗 n．陷阱
[用法感知]
①Two survivors were cut free after being trapped for twenty minutes.
两名幸存者受困二十分钟后才被解救出来。
②(“交通”主题佳句)What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians are trapped in the traffic jams because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.
更糟糕的是，由于近年来汽车数量的不断增加，一些司机、骑车的人和行人受困于交通堵塞。
③You can fall into a trap when you are greedy.
当你贪婪的时候，你会掉进陷阱。
[归纳点拨]
(1)trap sb.into (doing) sth. 使某人陷入(做)某事的圈套；
诱骗某人(做)某事
be/get trapped in 被困在……中
(2)fall into a trap 落入陷阱/圈套
fall into the trap of doing sth. 落入……的圈套
set/lay a trap for 为……设圈套
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④He felt he had been trapped into __________ (accept) the terms of the contract.
⑤Don't fall ____________ the trap of investing all your money in one place.
⑥The old man was trapped ____________ the burning house at that moment.
(2)替换加黑词汇
⑦The thought of being stuck in the car with the possibility of car trouble along the way is enough to make me consider staying home. ________________
2．In one vivid scene, Beauty looks in the mirror and her face is transformed into the Beast's.
在一个生动的场景中，美女看着镜子，她的脸变成了野兽的脸。
★transform vt.使转化，使改观
[用法感知]
①(“环境保护”主题佳句)With more and more trees planted, the local people have succeeded in transforming the bare hill into a green one.
随着植木越来越多，当地人成功地把光秃秃的山变成了绿油油的山。
②In recent years, the movie industry has undergone a dramatic transformation.
近年来，电影业经历了一场戏剧性的变革。
[归纳点拨]
(1)transform ...(from ...) into ... 把……(从……)变成……
(2)transformation n. 改变
transformation from sth. to/into sth. 从……到……的转变
[应用融会] (单句语法填空)
③Vigorous development of automobile industry has transformed that country ____________ a farm based society into an industrial power.
④The place has been transformed from a quiet farming village ____________ a busy city in the past years.
⑤The way in which we work has undergone a complete ____________ (transform) in the past decade.
■写作项目——Write a film review
本单元的写作任务是写一篇电影评论，属于夹叙夹议的议论文。影评一般包括对影片的背景、故事梗概、观众印象最深的部分等的介绍以及对影片的评价。叙述电影情节时运用生动形象的语言，更要简洁流畅。评论电影时要观点鲜明，条理清晰。
由教材学写作
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点。评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论的中心点只能有一个，要注意点面结合。对要评论的电影先做一个总体介绍，如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等，这是“面”的介绍；然后结合某一个情节、某一段对话或者某一个场面进行具体分析，这是“点”的评论。如课文开篇就点明了《美女与野兽》这部电影的导演、参演人员等背景信息，为后文进一步介绍这部电影做铺垫。第三段就处理主题的方式以及一些巧妙的特效作了具体介绍，并举例进行说明，为读者描绘了一幅美丽的电影场景，让读者在欣赏的过程中也学到了一些电影知识。
三、学靓丽表达
叙述电影情节时，经常使用一些形容词或动词，使得画面感很强，让人仿佛身临其境。如第一段第二句直接用is代替acts，语言表达更形象生动，同时也刻画出演员在表现美女和野兽时的传神表演。第二段使用abnormal一词刻画出野兽的外在特点，与下文点明他曾是一位英俊的男子形成对比。第三段使用clever一词表达了在使用特效方面的独到之处。
[仿写训练] (完成句子)
①My parents thought ________________________________ to be interested in ballet.
我的父母亲认为一个男孩喜欢芭蕾是不正常的。
②In a word, this is ______________________ to a common problem.
总之，这是一个解决常见问题的妙方。
具体写作指导
Write a film review
——写一篇电影评论
第一步：构思谋篇
Tense Present simple tense
Person First and third person
Main points Part 1：Give basic information about the film(the film's name, film's type, director, lead actor, release time, story background, etc.)． Part 2: Provide information about the storyline and give your opinion of the film. Part 3: Express your comment, or recommend the film to readers.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 如何简要介绍电影？
①It is a comedy drama adventure film, ________________________ of the same name.
它是一部喜剧冒险电影，改编自一本同名小说。
②The film ________________ the remote deserts of western China.
这部电影的背景是中国西部遥远的沙漠。
第二部分 如何叙述电影情节？
①It ________________________ a big, fat panda that can perform martial arts.
它讲述了一只可以表演武术的胖熊猫的故事。
②The movie is about ______________________ one of the most incredible emergency landings in China's civil aviation history.
这部电影讲述的是一位机长完成了中国民航史上最不可思议的紧急降落之一。
③______________________ the main character's growth story of fighting against his own destiny.电影的主题是主角与自己的命运相抗争的成长故事。
第三部分 如何对电影作出评论或推荐？
①It is a great animated film.It is elegantly drawn and the action sequences ________________________.Teenagers, even adults, like watching it.
它是一部极棒的动画电影，它的画面优雅，动作充满了活力。青少年，甚至是成年人都喜欢看。
②________________________________， it is Rowan Atkinson's good performances that impress people most.So I hope ______________________________________________ some day in the future.I bet you'll love it.
就我而言，给人印象最深刻的是罗温·艾金森的精彩表演。所以我希望你将来有一天能喜欢这部电影。我打赌你一定会喜欢的。
[针对练笔]
英语课上，老师让大家观看电影《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)并进行评论。请你根据提示完善讨论稿，并作为小组代表发言。
Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.
Forrest Gump is an American film, ①_________________________ (它是根据小说改编的) written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately ②________________________ (天生智商较低), but he is an open minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that ③________________________________ (他最终取得了巨大的成功)．Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire.
The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.What's more, it conveys a message that ④__________________________________ (我们应该以积极的态度对待生活)．No matter what difficulty we meet in life, ⑤____________________________________ (我们不应该放弃)．Besides, the use of the language is striking, which also makes the film a success.
写作素材储备
(一)写作常用句式
1．影片概述
①The main characters are ...
②The film tells us a real story.
③The film ...directed by ...is a story about ...
④The story takes place in ...
⑤The film ...is about ...
⑥The film ...is set in ...
⑦The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.
2．正面的评价
①This is a very touching film/a must see.
② ...gives an amazing performance in the film.
③My favourite part of the film is ...
④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it!
⑤People like the film not just because ...but also because ...
⑥One of the keys to the film's success is ...
3．负面的评价
①However, many people have complained that the film is too ...
②Another common complaint is that the film ...
③I'm disappointed with the film because ...
(二)主题语段
1．电影介绍
Journey to the West is a classic Chinese animated film. It tells the legendary story of Sun Wukong and others protecting the Tang Monk's journey to the West. Full of humor and excitement, it showcases the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
《西游记》是一部中国经典动画电影。它讲述了孙悟空等人保护唐僧去西天取经的传奇故事。这部影片充满了幽默、惊险(的情节)，展现了中国传统文化的魅力。
2．电影评价及推荐
Life Is Beautiful is a classic that combines comedy and tragedy. It portrays the cruelty of war and the glory of humanity from a unique perspective, full of love and hope. Highly recommended!
《美丽人生》是一部融合了喜剧和悲剧元素的经典之作。它以独特的视角描绘了战争的残酷与人性的光辉，充满了爱与希望。强烈推荐大家观看！
(三)写作模板
The film 电影名， directed by 导演， is about 主题．演员 stars in the film ...
The film tells of a story 介绍故事梗概．
The film is touching and instructive，感想. It is worth watching.推荐．
Section 8 Writing Workshop
NO.1 学新知
1．④accepting ⑤into ⑥in ⑦trapped/caught
2．③from ④into ⑤transformation
NO.2 促写作
由教材学写作
三、①it was abnormal for a boy ②a clever approach
具体写作指导
第一部分
①adapted from a novel ②is set in
第二部分
①tells a story concerned with ②a captain who completed
③The theme of the film is
第三部分
①are packed with energy
②As far as I'm concerned; you can enjoy this film
[针对练笔]
①which is adapted from the novel ②born with a lower IQ
③he has achieved great success at last
④we should take a positive attitude towards life
⑤we should not give upUNIT 6 课时检测(八) Writing Workshop
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1．A classic movie which was called The Shawshank Redemption ________________________________ (给我留下了深刻印象)．
2．The Silk Road, __________________________ (追溯到汉代), was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world.
3．The movie ________________ (由……导演) James Cameron, who is famous for the film Titanic.
4．The film is ____________________________________________________ (不仅仅是一个爱情故事，更是一部具有教育意义的影片)．
5．Many famous old artists _________________________________ (都表演得很精彩)．
6．________________________________ (值得一看) the TV play series.
7．The animated film, Uproar in Heaven, __________________________________ (改编自中国古典小说《西游记》), which is set in the Tang Dynasty, about 1,400 years ago.
8．The film is ______________________________ (……的完美结合) traditional Chinese elements and creative artistic design, and you will find it strikingly beautiful and extremely imaginative as well.
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校英语报于电影周期间征文，主题为“Movie Review”。请你用英语就自己喜欢的电影作品写一篇评论并投稿，内容包括：
1．简要介绍；
2．给出评论；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：发人深思的thought provoking
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为80左右。
Lynn Marchessault and her two children packed up their car in Georgia and settled in for a five day ride.They were going to meet up with Lynn's husband in Alaska.
Because of regulations, they had to stick to a strict five day schedule to reach their destination.Unfortunately, once they entered Canada, things began to take a turn for the worse.Lynn's phone didn't have signal without an Internet connection, so they had no GPS.Not to mention, her windshield wipers (雨刮器) wouldn't work, she was having an extremely difficult time driving in the snow, which she had never done before, and she wasn't allowed to stop anywhere for help because of the travel restrictions.
Thankfully, a woman named Teena noticed her crying in her car at a gas station.Upon hearing Lynn's story, she decided to take a look at their tires.She found that Lynn had summer tires.That's why she was having so much trouble driving in the snow.Teena helped Lynn get to a tire shop, where the owner helped her swap out her wheels for some that were better suited to the winter weather and changed her wipers — even though it was Sunday and the business was actually closed.
Lynn got back on the road, only to stop at a hotel that was meant only for oil field workers.But when Andy, the hotel manager, saw that Lynn was struggling, he bent the rules to let the mom and her kids spend the night so they didn't have to get back on the road in cold weather.
Unable to bear driving another three days alone, Lynn decided to hire a driver to take them the rest of the way to the Alaskan border, another 1,000 miles away.She reached out to Teena to see if she could help her find someone.Between Teena and the power of social media, they were connected with Gary Bath, a Canadian Ranger (护林员) who offered to help them get to Alaska!
(前文描写了Lynn 带着她的两个孩子开始了为期5天的公路旅行，去见她的丈夫。在没有GPS和雨刷故障的情况下，她在雪地里开车遇到了困难，幸亏得到了Teena和Gary等陌生人的帮助。请根据所给开头提示语及线索进行续写，重点描写一下与Gary的有效对话以及Lynn 的感悟)
Over the course of their three day drive, Lynn and Gary had great conversations.
[阅读拓展训练]
It isn't easy to climb the Old Man of Hoy, one of the tallest in the United Kingdom.It is even more dangerous if you happen to be a blind climber, as Jesse Dufton is.The 34 year old was born with a rare genetic disease (遗传病) that left him with less than 20 percent of his vision (视觉), which then kept dropping over the years.He chooses to climb, because it's better than sitting at home feeling sorry for himself.“Climbing is not the most dangerous thing I do on an average day; crossing the road on the way to work is far more risky than Hoy.”
Dufton has been climbing mountains since childhood.As a skilled climber, his father would take him out at weekends.He was always physical then, always up for adventure.He played sports at school, though quickly grew frustrated (沮丧) with many of them.“Badminton was a joke for someone like me, and even blind cricket — with a ball with a bell in it — annoyed me.” Instead he was attracted to climbing and skiing, and insists that climbing is one of the safer activities for a blind person to undertake.“True, you can't see the handholds, or the footholds.You can't see where the opportunities are, or where to place your hands and your gear (齿轮), so you just have to take it slowly.You search around until you can feel for something to hold onto, and then basically repeat the process over and over again.To keep calm in these situations helps.”
It was Jesse himself who made a documentary happen.He told the filmmaker Alistair Lee about his pastime, believing it might be worth capturing on film.“I realized my story was quite unusual，” he says, adding that he felt almost duty bound to share it.“If somebody like me watches it, and they find it inspirational, then it wouldn't be right for me to keep that from them, wouldn't it？”
1．What is more dangerous in Jesse Dufton's eyes
A．Losing eyesight gradually.
B．Daily routines in his life.
C．Climbing the Old Man of Hoy.
D．Staying at home all day.
2．What's the second paragraph mainly about
A．Dufton's passion for climbing.
B．Skills needed for climbing.
C．Father's influence on Dufton.
D．The limited choice for disabled people.
3．Jesse persuaded Alistair Lee to make a documentary to ________.
A．show his unique talent for climbing
B．inspire more people with disability
C．give credit to the brave climbers
D．educate people about risky sports
4．From the story, we may infer Jesse Dufton is ______.
A．responsible and helpful
B．caring and careful
C．patient and brave
D．adventurous and optimistic
UNIT 6 课时检测(八)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1．made/left a deep impression on me
2．dating back to the Han Dynasty
3．is directed by
4．not just a love story but also an educational film
5．all perform wonderfully
6．It is worthwhile to watch/watching
7．is adapted from the classical Chinese novel called Journey to the West
8．a perfect combination of
Ⅱ.应用文写作
参考范文：
Nezha: Birth of the Demon Child has undoubtedly become a successful cartoon movie in China in recent years.
The movie is adapted from a famous Chinese fairy tale. Different from the previous version, this movie adopts a unique way to unfold the story. The theme of the film is the main character Nezha's growth story of fighting against his own destiny. Apart from the fantastic scenes, many inspiring lines like “I'm the master of my own destiny” impress the audiences greatly.
The film is thought provoking. It also reflects people in real life who hold their destiny in their own hands and stick to their dreams.
Ⅲ.读后续写
参考范文：
Over the course of their three day drive, Lynn and Gary had great conversations.Gary told her that he was happy to drive them to Alaska to meet her husband and let her kids meet their dad.He drove like a hero through the conditions that had caused her so much anxiety.Lynn was planning to pay for Gary's trip back home, but by the time they made it to Alaska, Gary's community had already donated and paid for a flight to get him home safely! Difficulties may occur to all of us.However, there are many kind hearted people around us.So we should be grateful to the world, because we need each other to get by.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了一位盲人攀岩者Jesse Dufton坚持攀岩的故事，后来他拍了一个纪录片分享自己的故事，鼓励更多残疾人。
1．选B 细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句中的“crossing the road on the way to work is far more risky than Hoy”可知，在Jesse Dufton眼中，他的日常活动更危险。
2．选A 段落大意题。根据第二段首句“Dufton has been climbing mountains since childhood.”以及“Instead he was attracted to climbing and skiing, and insists that climbing is one of the safer activities for a blind person to undertake.”可知，本段主要讲述了Dufton对攀岩的热情。
3．选B 细节理解题。根据最后一段尾句“If somebody like me watches it, and they find it inspirational, then it wouldn't be right for me to keep that from them, wouldn't it？”可知，Jesse说服Alistair Lee拍摄一部纪录片是为了激励更多残疾人。
4．选D 推理判断题。通读全文，再结合第一段第二句“It is even more dangerous if you happen to be a blind climber, as Jesse Dufton is.”以及最后一段尾句可知，Jesse Dufton是一个勇于冒险、积极乐观的人。
