【单元考点培优】Unit 2 The World of Art 专题15 书面表达(含答案解析)-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版(2024)

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版
(2024)Unit 2 The World of Art
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.假如你是李华,你有一位非遗传承人朋友,请你根据以下的提示信息,向大家介绍你的朋友。
Name Mr. Wang (Wang Li)
What does he look like young, thin, tall, black hair
Traditional skill paper cutting
Tools needed scissors, paper
Steps fold (折叠) the paper, draw the pattern on the paper, use the scissors to cut the paper
What do you think of his skill Would you like to learn his skill
要求:1. 短文必须包含所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Today I will introduce my friend Mr. Wang to you.
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2.中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化,请你用英语写一封回信,向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术,要求包含以下要点,不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
中国结(Chinese knot) 剪纸
材料:丝线(silk thread) 材料:纸和剪刀(scissors)
颜色:红色 特点:剪出各种图案
形状:像花、动物等 用途:张贴在门、窗等地
寓意:带来好运 寓意:表达喜悦
1.你对传统艺术的看法(请补充)
2.你的期望(请补充)
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
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Best wishes
Yours,
Lily
3.坚定文化自信,弘扬中国优秀传统文化,是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华,近期,一批外国留学生要到你所在的学校参观访问,你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中国优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
总体介绍 中国传统文化种类多、历史悠久、影响广泛。
京剧 国粹(national treasure)之一,包含唱(singing)念(speaking)做(acting)打(acrobatic fighting);讲述了很多故事,受各个年龄段人们的喜欢。
茶文化 茶的种类多,对健康有益。
瓷器(china) 中国是瓷器之乡,技术世界领先,闻名于世。
写作要求:
1.字迹工整,书写规范,不逐字翻译,包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
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4.张先生是一位50多岁的剪纸艺人,他7岁开始学习剪纸。每年春节期间,他都义务在社区 (community) 或学校教授他人剪纸。假设你是学校报社的一名记者,请你根据以下提示,写一篇文章介绍张先生以及他的剪纸手艺。80词左右。
内容包括:
1. 介绍艺人张先生基本信息;
2. 张先生的手艺:剪纸工具 (剪刀 scissors)、剪纸作品、剪纸步骤等。(任选两点);
3. 你对张先生及其手艺的评价。
A Paper-Cutting Artist
Mr. Zhang is a skilled paper-cutting artist.
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5.假如你是Li Hua,你的英国笔友David想了解你家乡的情况和中国的传统艺术,请你给他写一封邮件,描述一下你家乡的著名景点,并介绍一种中国传统艺术(如剪纸、中国结等)。
家乡的基本情况 1.地理位置:在中国的东部 2.著名景点以及景点的体验: ①骆马湖(Luoma Lake) ②三台山森林公园:Santaishan Forest Park
介绍一种中国传统民间艺术 1.从材料、形状、用途和寓意等方面描述一种传统民间艺术形式; 2.你对传统艺术的看法
表达你对家乡的热爱 家乡很美;欢迎来到宿迁;你一定会在宿迁玩得开心。
要求:
1.包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3.词数:80词左右,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I’m very happy to tell you something about my hometown and traditional Chinese folk art.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时,传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中,有什么是你特别钟爱的吗?请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么;
2.简单介绍该传统艺术,并指出你喜欢它的原因;
3.你的期望。
注意:
1.包含以上信息,可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于 80词,已给出部分不计入总词数。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is
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7.假设你是李华。你的外国朋友Jason观看了你们小组制作风筝的视频后,来信向你询问,想了解其他中国传统手工艺品。你决定向他介绍灯笼。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:1. 象征意义:光明的未来和幸福的生活。
2. 使用场合:请自行补充一点。
3. 主要制作材料:请自行补充。
4. 描述主要制作步骤:(1)制作框架;(2)覆盖纸或丝绸;(3)进行装饰;(4)固定蜡烛。
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级及学校名称;
4. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:lantern (n.灯笼), bamboo strips (n.竹条), decorate (v.装饰)
Dear Jason,
I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts.
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If you want to know more about Chinese culture, please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.国际文化节召开在即,本届国际文化节的主题是“让中国文化走向世界”,假如你是李华,你将在国际文化节上介绍“中国结”及其传承人桂卫锋的故事,请根据下面信息,完成一份演讲稿。
中国结 有五千多年的历史,有不同形状和颜色,制作需要细绳和剪刀
传承人 桂卫锋,35岁
事迹 2010年开始学习; 2022年冬奥会他向世界展示了精美的作品。
你的评价 ……
参考词汇:细绳 a thin rope 冬奥会 Olympic Winter Games
写作要求:
(1) 70词左右;
(2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名与学校名;
(3) 文章开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’d like to introduce a traditional skill—the Chinese knot and its inheritor Gui Weifeng.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
9.假定你是学生李辉,你的英国朋友Nathan对中国剪纸非常感兴趣。请你根据表格中的信息用英文给他写一封电子邮件,介绍一位你熟悉的剪纸艺术家。
内容包括:
名字 Mr Cheng
年龄 40多岁
传统技艺 擅长剪纸,7岁开始学习剪纸
需要的工具 剪刀、笔、彩纸(coloured paper)
剪纸的步骤 1. 在纸上画图案;2. 剪成不同形状;3. 展开(unfold)
意见和希望 谈谈自己对剪纸技艺的看法和希望
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Nathan,
I am glad that you are interested in paper cutting. Let me tell you about a paper-cutting artist.
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Yours,
Li Hui
10.假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,向已经观看完“鸬鹚捕鱼”纪录片的外国游客推荐另外一种传统技艺,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
词数:80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示要点:
1.推荐的传统技艺;2.描述理由;3.表达期待。
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school! It is my great honor to introduce
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Thank you for listening. Hope you’ll enjoy yourselves in China.
11.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友肖恩对中国的传统文化感兴趣。请你写一封邮件介绍你最喜欢的中国民间艺术。包含以下要点,80词左右。
Dear Sean,
I hope you are doing well.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you soon in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
12.假定你是李华,想邀请外教Peter一起参观学校将要举办的中国剪纸艺术展(Art Exhibition)。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
展览时间 4月29日。
展览地点 一楼多功能厅(Multi-Function Hall)。
展览内容 中国剪纸简介、八年级学生优秀剪纸作品。
展览目的 丰富校园生活,弘扬中华民族传统文化。
要求:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清晰、意义连贯;
4. 书写规范,卷面整洁。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13.假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信,介绍李子柒在2025年春晚展示非遗技艺的情况。
(1)介绍事件;
(2)谈谈你对传播中国传统文化的看法。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
非物质文化遗产:Intangible Cultural Heritage
Dear Chris,
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Li Hua
14.假设你是李辉。你的英国朋友Tom向你咨询中国传统技艺。请你给他写一封信介绍中国某一种传统技艺(如:paper cutting;Chinese knots;shadow puppet plays等)。
要点如下:
(1)写信的目的;
(2)介绍此项传统技艺;
(3)期待对方来访一同体验。
注意:
(1)词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
You asked me about some traditional Chinese skills in your letter.
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Li Hui
15.某公众号为传播中国文化,举办“A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us”为主题的征文活动,请你选择一种中国传统手工艺品,撰写一篇文章来投稿。
内容包括:
要求:
1. 词数:80左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名或者姓名。
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
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16.艺术陶冶情操,艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以“My favourite art form”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式;
2.分享一个与之相关的故事;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇:calligraphy书法;drama戏剧;photography摄影;musical instrument乐器
My favourite art form
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17.中国结是中国特有的民间手工编结艺术,具有独特的东方特色。假如你是来自中国的交换生,现就读于英国的一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示,写一篇短文介绍中国结。
历史 出现在古代;在唐宋时期发展成为一种艺术形式;明清时期开始流行
颜色 使用各种颜色的线,红色使用最多,因为红色代表好运
用途 用作装饰品,可挂于房屋、汽车、手机等不同的地方
要求:
1.包含以上给出的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.80—100词。
参考词汇:appear出现;thread线;decoration装饰品
A Special Form of Traditional Art
—Chinese Knots
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18.假设你姐姐的婚礼将在下个月举行,为此,你打算为你的爸爸或妈妈或其他家人设计一套适合参加姐姐婚礼的服饰。请你写一篇英语短文,来介绍你选择设计衣服的风格、材质、颜色等,并说明理由。
注意事项:
1.选择为其中的一位家人设计衣服;
2.文章须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯,符合题意;
3.词数在70个左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
For my sister’s wedding,
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19.中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装(风格、材质······);
2. 喜欢的理由;
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
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20.假设你是李明,你的外国网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸,他对此很感兴趣,并且给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息,请你给他回复邮件,至少从历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术。
要求:
1. 涵盖所有要点,并做适当补充。
2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Ming
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参考答案及试题解析
1.例文
Today I will introduce my friend Mr. Wang to you. He is a young, tall and thin man with black hair. What makes him special is that he’s an inheritor of paper cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.
Mr. Wang needs only simple tools—scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters.
I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it’s both fun and valuable. Maybe someday I can make my own paper cuts to decorate my home during festivals!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍非遗传承人朋友的个人信息;
第二步,阐述剪纸艺术的具体流程;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己对友人技艺的看法和从中获得的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①intangible cultural heritage无形的文化遗产
②turn...into...把……变成……
[高分句型]
①What makes him special is that he’s an inheritor of paper cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage. (what引导的主语从句;that引导的表语从句;which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I would love to learn this skill from him because it’s both fun and valuable. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2.例文:
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art is paper-cuts. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put them on doors, windows, etc. Paper-cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Lily
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中所列举的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍中国历史五千年,引出主题;
第二步,介绍中国结和剪纸两种传统艺术;
第三步,表达对传统艺术的看法和期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of 由……组成
②pattern 图案
[高分句型]
①I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. (宾语从句)
②I hope more and more young people like them and develop them. (宾语从句)
3.例文
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. Today, I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. And they also have a wide influence.
Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera includes singing, speaking, acting and acrobatic fighting. It tells stories of history, politics, society and daily life. And it’s loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let’s talk about tea. In China, there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health.
The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china-making technology is the best in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,分别介绍京剧、茶文化以及瓷器;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a wide influence具有广泛的影响力
②people of all ages各个年龄段的人
③many different kinds of许多不同种类的
[高分句型]
①Our china-making technology is the best in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.(并列句)
4.范文:
A Paper-Cutting Artist
Mr. Zhang is a skilled paper-cutting artist. Mr. Zhang is a paper-cutting artist in his fifties, but he is very healthy. He likes paper cutting and he began to learn paper cutting at the age of seven. Every Spring Festival, he voluntarily teaches others paper cutting in the community or at school. He could cut out various shapes with his scissors, such as people, animals, flowers. He held many exhibitions and his works were very popular. People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.
In my opinion, love of paper-cutting techniques makes me deeply impressed. I hope that one day I can learn paper cutting like Mr. Zhang.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出剪纸艺术家张先生;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍张先生的个人信息及其剪纸手艺;
第三步,书写结语。总结并对张先生的手艺进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s+整十基数词复数 在某人几十岁时
②bring sb. sth. 带给某人某物
③make sb.+adj. 使某人……
[高分句型]
①He likes paper cutting and he began to learn paper cutting at the age of seven. (并列句)
②People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I hope that one day I can learn paper cutting like Mr. Zhang. (含that引导的宾语从句)
5.例文
Dear David,
I’m very happy to tell you something about my hometown and traditional Chinese folk art.
My hometown Suqian is a beautiful city in the east of China. When you visit Suqian, go for a walk by Luoma Lake. The view along the lake is wonderful. Then go to Santaishan Forest Park to see the amazing flowers. It’s also nice to walk around the park and take in the forest air.
Paper-cutting is one of the traditional Chinese folk art. We just need a pair of scissors or a knife and some paper. The paper-cuts are in the shape of flowers, bird, fish and landscapes. We use them to express our wishes. At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck. I think traditional Chinese folk art is an important part of Chinese culture. I hope young people like it and learn more about it.
Welcome to Suqian. You will have a great time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,点明分享家乡与民俗艺术;
第二步:描述家乡景点:骆马湖、三台山森林公园;介绍剪纸艺术:工具材料、图案主题、文化象征及价值;
第三步:书写结语,欢迎来访。
[亮点词汇]
①go for a walk去散步
②walk around四处走
③take in吸入
④have a great time玩得高兴、过得愉快
[高分句型]
①I think traditional Chinese folk art is an important part of Chinese culture. (宾语从句)
②I hope young people like it and learn more about it.(宾语从句)
6.例文:
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper cutting. It’s a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper.
I’ve been practicing paper cutting for more than five years. It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. Firstly, it’s a perfect way to train me to be patient and careful. Secondly, paper cutting works are great presents for my family and friends on special occasions.
Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点,写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是什么;
第二步,介绍喜欢这种传统艺术的原因;
第三步,表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②fell in love with爱上
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it.(It固定句型)
7.参考范文:
Dear Jason,
I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. So I’d like to introduce lanterns.
Lanterns symbolize a bright future and a happy life in Chinese culture. They are commonly used during the Lantern Festival, when people hang them everywhere to create a festive atmosphere.
Making a lantern isn’t too difficult. First, form a frame with bamboo strips, which determines the shape of the lantern. Then, cover the frame with paper or silk. After that, it’s time to decorate it. You can paint beautiful patterns like flowers or animals on it. Finally, fix a candle inside. When the candle is lit, the warm light makes the lantern look charming.
Hope you’ll have a chance to make one by yourself someday!
If you want to know more about Chinese culture, please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封书信作文;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:根据题目要求,需涵盖灯笼的象征意义、使用场合、制作材料和制作步骤,并适当补充细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍灯笼的象征意义和使用场合;
第二步,介绍灯笼的主要制作材料;
第三步, 描述主要制作步骤;
第四步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① symbolize 象征
② festive atmosphere 节日氛围
③ paint beautiful patterns 绘制美丽图案
[高分句型]
When the candle is lit, the warm light makes the lantern look charming.(when引导的时间状语从句)
8.例文
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’d like to introduce a traditional skill—the Chinese knot and its inheritor Gui Weifeng. The Chinese knot has a history of over 5,000 years. It comes in various shapes and colors and is made with a thin rope and scissors. Gui Weifeng, who is 35 years old, began learning it in 2010. He showed his wonderful works to the world at the 2022 Olympic Winter Games, which amazed people around the globe. I believe that Gui Weifeng’s efforts not only make the traditional Chinese knot known globally but also help our culture shine brightly in the international arena.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,考生适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入主题;
第二步,介绍介绍中国结和传承人桂卫锋相关信息;
第三步,最后表达对桂卫锋努力的认可,阐述其对中国结文化传播和中国文化弘扬的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②around the globe全球
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Gui Weifeng, who is 35 years old, began learning it in 2010. (who引导的定语从句)
②I believe that Gui Weifeng’s efforts not only make the traditional Chinese knot known globally but also help our culture shine brightly in the international arena. (that引导的宾语从句)
9.例文
Dear Nathan,
I am glad that you are interested in paper cutting. Let me tell you about a paper-cutting artist.
Mr Cheng is over 40 years old. When he was 7 years old, he began to learn paper cutting. So he is good at it. Mr Cheng uses his hands to turn the paper into beautiful shapes. Only some simple tools, such as scissors, pens and coloured paper, are required for paper cutting. First, he draws the patterns on the paper. Second, he cuts the paper into different shapes. Then, he unfolds the paper and we can see the beautiful paper cutting.
I love Mr Cheng’s paper cuttings because they are very beautiful. I hope that one day I can learn paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇介绍剪纸艺术家的说明文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,围绕剪纸艺术家的基本信息、剪纸工具及流程展开,可适当增加细节,以使内容连贯;
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示内容简介剪纸艺术家的基本信息。
第二步,详细介绍剪纸所需工具和流程。
第三步。最后阐述对其作品的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②be good at 擅长
③turn... into... 把……变成……
[高分句型]
①Mr Cheng uses his hands to turn the paper into beautiful shapes.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②Only some simple tools, such as scissors, pens and coloured paper, are required for paper cutting.(such as 用于举例)
10.例文
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school! It is my great honor to introduce another amazing traditional Chinese skill—Chinese paper-cutting. With a history of over 1,500 years, this art uses red paper to create beautiful patterns like flowers, animals, and Chinese characters. People often put them on windows during festivals to bring good luck.
I recommend it because: First, it shows China’s rich cultural heritage through creative designs. Second, you can try cutting simple patterns yourself—it’s fun and meaningful! Finally, it’s a perfect souvenir to take home. I believe experiencing this ancient art will help you better understand Chinese culture.
Thank you for listening. Hope you’ll enjoy yourselves in China.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸能介绍另一种惊人的传统汉语技巧——剪纸。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——剪纸的历史、用途和文化价值、推荐的理由和期待等均要一一阐述;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①creative designs创造性的设计
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①I believe experiencing this ancient art will help you better understand Chinese culture. (宾语从句)
11.例文
Dear Sean,
I hope you are doing well. I’m happy to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, and I’m excited to share my favourite Chinese folk art with you—Chinese New Year paintings.
Chinese people like putting these paintings up to celebrate the Spring Festival. In Chinese culture, we think these paintings can bring good luck and happiness to the family. These paintings are my favourite because they are colourful and full of joy. On the Chinese New Year’s Eve, I always help my parents put up New Year paintings at home.
By learning this art, you can learn more about Chinese culture and improve your drawing skills.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,点出自己最喜欢的中国民间艺术;
第二步、介绍该民间艺术在中国文化中的意义以及自己喜欢的原因;
第三步、介绍自己个人经历或故事,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in…对……感兴趣
②full of充满
③put up张贴
④look forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①These paintings are my favourite because they are colourful and full of joy.(because引导原因状语从句)
12.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to visit our school’s Chinese Paper-cutting Art Exhibition. It will be held on April 29th in the Multi-Function Hall on the first floor. The exhibition includes an introduction to Chinese paper-cutting and excellent works created by eighth-grade students. Its purpose is to enrich campus life and promote traditional Chinese culture. I believe you’ll find it both interesting and meaningful. Would you like to join me Please let me know your availability.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:内容要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,邀请对方参加学校举办的中国剪纸艺术展,并说明展览的时间和地点;
第二步,具体介绍展览的内容;
第三步,介绍此次展览的目的。
[亮点词汇]
① an introduction to对……的介绍
② enrich campus life丰富校园生活
[高分句型]
It will be held on April 29th in the Multi-Function Hall on the first floor.(一般将来时的被动语态)
13.例文
Dear Chris,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture, so I’m very excited to share a wonderful event with you.
On January 28th, 2025, Li Ziqi, a famous short-video maker, showed 13 intangible cultural heritage skills on the Spring Festival Gala. In the opening show, she wore a long beautiful dress. When she spread her hands, huge butterfly wings with special designs appeared, showing traditional handicrafts like paper-cutting and embroidery, which was a mix of modern technology and traditional beauty.
This event is really meaningful and I think it is important to spread traditional Chinese culture. It not only helps the world better understand China’s long history and rich values, but also keeps these ancient skills alive.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时态和一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:直接点明Chris对中国文化感兴趣,进而引出写信目的;
第二步:详细介绍短视频创造者李子柒在春晚展示了13项非遗技艺,体现现代技术与传统美的融合;
第三步:书写结语,阐述该事件的意义,强调传播中国文化的重要性,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②share with sb.与某人分享
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I know you are interested in Chinese culture, so I’m very excited to share a wonderful event with you.(宾语从句、目的状语从句)
②When she spread her hands, huge butterfly wings with special designs appeared, showing traditional handicrafts like paper-cutting and embroidery, which was a mix of modern technology and traditional beauty.(时间状语从句、定语从句)
14.例文:
Dear Tom,
You asked me about some traditional Chinese skills in your letter. I’m delighted to introduce you to paper cutting, a beautiful and ancient craft deeply rooted in our culture.
Paper cutting, as the name suggests, involves cutting intricate designs from paper using scissors or a sharp knife. It’s amazing how a single sheet of paper can be transformed into such delicate and lively artworks. This craft is often used during festivals and celebrations to decorate homes and temples, bringing joy and good luck to the people.
I really enjoy the process of paper cutting, which requires patience, creativity, and a steady hand. It’s a fantastic way to express emotions and stories without using words. I'd love to show you how it’s done when you visit. We could even try our hands at it together, creating our own designs.
Looking forward to your visit and sharing this wonderful tradition with you.
Best wishes,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括写信的目的、介绍传统技艺以及期待对方来访。考生需根据要求详细介绍所选的传统技艺,如历史背景、制作工艺、文化意义等,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头部分直接回应Tom的询问,明确写信的目的是为了介绍中国传统技艺;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍所选的传统技艺,如以“paper cutting”(剪纸)为例,可以从其历史悠久、制作工艺精细、图案寓意丰富、在节庆活动中的应用等方面展开介绍,让读者对剪纸这一传统技艺有全面而深入的了解;
第三步,书写结语。表达期待Tom来访中国,一同亲身体验这一传统技艺的愿望,并可以通过亲身体验更加深入地了解和感受中国传统文化的魅力。
[亮点词汇]
①deeply rooted in深深植根于
②intricate designs复杂的设计
③bring joy and good luck to给…带来欢乐和好运
[高分句型]
①Paper cutting, as the name suggests, involves cutting intricate designs from paper using scissors or a sharp knife.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
②This craft is often used during festivals and celebrations to decorate homes and temples, bringing joy and good luck to the people.(现在分词短语作结果状语)
③I really enjoy the process of paper cutting, which requires patience, creativity, and a steady hand.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.例文
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colorful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it’s a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people’s good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己喜欢中国风筝;
第二步,介绍风筝的相关信息,包括历史、制作材料、所代表的意义等;
第三步,写出总结并表示潍坊是喜欢风筝的人的好去处。
[亮点词汇]
①really interested in对……很感兴趣
②a long history of……的悠久历史
③are made of由……制成
④a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
Some of them are even painted with colorful drawings. (一般现在时态的被动语态)
16.例文
My favourite art form
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn’t like it years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach me calligraphy, but I didn’t agree. My father didn’t say a word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that I started to learn calligraphy from my father. I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness and peace.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步,分享一个与之相关的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up拿起
②at that moment就在那时
③learn sth. from sb.向某人学习某物
[高分句型]
①One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach me calligraphy, but I didn’t agree. (含有but的并列句)
②I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness and peace. (because引导的原因状语从句)
17.例文
A Special Form of Traditional Art
—Chinese Knots
The Chinese knot is a form of traditional Chinese art. Chinese knots appeared in ancient times. It became an art form in the Tang and Song dynasties. Later it became popular in the Ming and Qing dynasties.
People use colorful thread to make Chinese knots. They use red thread the most because red stands for good luck.
The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations. Also, people hang the knots in rooms. People can see Chinese knots in different parts of China. Both the young and the old like them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,介绍中国传统艺术的一种特殊形式 —— 中国结;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,在介绍中国结起源时使用一般过去时;
③提示:介绍中国结的历史、制作材料、用途及受欢迎程度。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明中国结是中国传统艺术的一种形式。
第二步,中间阐述中国结的起源发展,制作材料,用途。
第三步,结尾表明中国结在中国各地都受欢迎,老少皆宜。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②appear出现
③stand for代表
④decoration装饰
[高分句型]
①The Chinese knot is a form of traditional Chinese art.(简单直接地表明中国结所属类别,清晰明确。)
②They use red thread the most because red stands for good luck.(运用“because”引导原因状语从句,解释为何多用红线制作中国结。)
18.例文
For my sister’s wedding, I plan to design a purple qipao for my mother. My mother is tall and slim, and she has light skin. So I think a purple close-fitting qipao is perfect for her. The qipao is made of silk and has peonies on it. The silk qipao feels soft and smooth and it’s very comfortable to wear. Peonies on the qipao will make my mother look very pretty in it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“为了姐姐的婚礼,我打算为妈妈设计一件紫色旗袍。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。要点——为妈妈设计衣服、衣服的类型和材质、图案等均要一一阐述;
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②be made of由……制成
③feel soft感到柔软
[高分句型]
①So I think a purple close-fitting qipao is perfect for her. (宾语从句)
②The silk qipao feels soft and smooth and it’s very comfortable to wear. (and表并列)
19.范文:
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
Of all the traditional Chinese clothes, I like hanfu best. They’re usually loose with a belt. They’re made of different materials, like cotton and silk.
Hanfu are very beautiful. They’re suitable for people of all ages. They’re always comfortable to wear. So they’re popular with young people now.
Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world. Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢的中国传统服饰;
第二步,说明自己喜欢的理由;
第三步,提出向全世界推广的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① are made of由……组成
② are suitable for适合……
③ people of all ages各个年龄阶段的人
[高分句型]
①Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world.(动名词作主语)
②Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.(and并列句)
20.例文
Dear Eric,
You wanted to know about the Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it.
Chinese paper cutting is one of the most popular Chinese traditional art forms. It has a long history of over 1,500 years. It is usually made of red paper. It sounds easy but difficult to do it. First, the red paper is usually folded several times. Then, it is cut into different shapes with scissors. It can be like birds, flowers, Chinese characters and so on. I think Chinese paper cutting is not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. They are always seen as symbols of good wishes and a happy new year.
More and more people are interested in it. I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出写作目的是为了讲述一些有关中国剪纸的信息;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义”等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术;
第三步,书写结语。表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③know about了解
[高分句型]
①People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. (不定式作目的状语)
②I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day. (宾语从句)
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