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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版Unit 3 English Around the World
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤独 1. 参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友
2. ?(请你补充)
英语单词难记,学习英语有困难 1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2. ?(请你补充至少两点)
词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that
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Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.英语是一门重要课程。但是,有的同学因学习方法不当而学习效果不佳;有的同学因畏惧困难而放弃了英语学习。请你以“How to Learn English Well ”为题,谈谈你对英语学习的看法和学好英语的一些建议。
1.文中不能出现真实姓名。
2.100词左右。
3.书写工整,文章结构完整。
How to Learn English Well
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3.世界在发展,文化在交融,英语不仅是一门学科,更已成为人们沟通的桥梁,学好英语越来越重要,请以“How to Learn English Well”为题写一篇短文谈谈怎样学好英语。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试卷上一律无效。
参考答案:
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4.假如你是Linda,你的好友Amy在英语学习方面遇到了困难,正在向你求助,现请你结合学习英语的方法给她写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 你对英语学习的看法;
2. 提出学习英语的建议(至少3条);
3. 鼓励她,希望她取得进步。
要求:1. 字数80—120词;2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Amy,
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Yours,
Linda
5.假如你是李华,你们班将举行英语学习经验交流会。请你根据下面的提示内容,写一篇发言稿在交流会上分享。
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Good morning. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to share my opinion about learning English with you all
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That’s all. Thanks a lot.
6.假设你校英语报社正在举办题为“My Ways to Learn English”的征文活动,请结合你自身的学习经历,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你认为最有效的英语学习方法。
内容要点提示:
1. 学习英语的重要性或你最初遇到的困难 (开头)。
2. 详细介绍2-3种你认为最有效的学习方法及其原因 (正文)。
3. 发表你的观点并鼓励同学们 (结尾)。
作文要求:
1. 词数:80-100词左右。
2. 内容连贯,结构清晰,语句通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
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7.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter 来信说他对中国的中秋节很感兴趣,并且在英语学习中遇到了困难 (如记不住单词、听力差)。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
介绍中秋节的主要活动 (如赏月、吃月饼、家庭团聚);
分享你的英语学习方法 (至少两种,如制作单词卡片、听英语歌曲);
邀请他明年来中国过中秋节。
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点,并进行适当发挥;
2. 文章不少于 80 词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You said you’re interested in Mid-Autumn Festival and have trouble with English learning. I’d like to share something with you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假如你是Li Hua,你的美国笔友Robert正在学习汉语。在学习汉语的过程中,他遇到了一些困难。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封电子邮件,给他一些学习汉语的建议。
提示:
困难 建议
上课听不懂汉语老师讲的话 (1) 让老师放慢语速 (2) 通过看汉语电影和听汉语歌曲来努力提高听力
不懂一些汉语的特殊表达 通过阅读大量汉语书籍来了解这些特殊表达
要求:(1) 文章应包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 词数在90~100之间,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble in learning Chinese. But it doesn’t matter. I believe I can help you.
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9.独学而无友,则孤陋而寡闻。加入学习小组是解决“无友”和“寡闻”的重要手段。假如你和几位同学组成了英语学习小组,昨天你们讨论了如何提高英语阅读和写作能力。请你根据下面的笔记写一篇英文短文,总结你们的讨论结果,并在英语课上和大家分享。
How to improve English reading and writing abilities ★read often ★ join a reading club ★keep a diary ★write passages and ask the teacher to mark them
要求:
1.要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3.不少于100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to improve English reading and writing abilities
Yesterday, our English study group talked about how to improve English reading and writing abilities. Here are the results of our discussion.
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10.假设你是李华,你校即将迎来一批意大利交换生,学校为了帮助他(她)们学习中文,请你作为学生代表进行一次以学习经验为主题的演讲。请你从以下两种演讲主题中选择一个,根据经历,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求:(1)发言稿需涵盖所选主题的方框中所有要点;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校信息等;(3)词数100左右,发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Speech ATopic: Learning Experience Sharing ★what good ways to learn (make a study plan; study with a group; …) ★how to deal with difficult words (a way) Speech BTopic: Reading Experience Sharing ★how to choose a great book (great writers; beautiful language; …) ★which to choose, paper books or e-books (a choice and a reason)
Good afternoon, our dear teachers and students from beautiful Italy! Welcome to our school!
Today I’m more than happy to be here to give a speech on the topic of
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Thank you for listening. Wish you all have a nice day!
11.假如你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查。请按下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况。
项目 内容
你对英语的认识 1. 英语在全世界被广泛使用; 2. 英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化; 3. 在日常生活中多说英语能增强我们的自信心
你目前的英语水平 1. 能用英语与同学进行交流; 2. 到目前为止,已经学会了十首英文歌; 3. 去年在校歌唱大赛中获奖
你英语学习中存在的问题 1. 不能正确地运用语法规则; 2. 写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己; 3. 我发现很难记住较长的句型
要求:
1. 词数80-100。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
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12.假如你是Henry,你的朋友Tom在学习英语方面遇到了困难,向你倾诉并寻求帮助。请你给他写一封信,根据他的困难,并结合你的个人经历给出建议,来告诉他你是如何学习英语的。100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Tom的困难 你的建议
听不懂他人讲话,内心非常焦急 尽可能多听多练,熟能生巧;不要怕犯错误,积极主动参与:做笔记并及时复习;加入英语俱乐部……
常犯语法错误,不敢开口讲英语
阅读速度很慢,且伴有发音错误
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning.
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13.班级决定在周五下午召开以“你最喜欢的学习方式”为主题的班会,请你按照下面表格要求写一篇发言稿。先简单介绍大家喜欢的学习方式,再介绍当下流行的共享学习室,最后说说你喜欢的学习方式及原因。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Ways of learning Learning online Learning in groups Learning alone in the library or at home
2. Introduce the shared study room quiet and private with some tables and chairs in it with special areas for eating, resting or chatting
3. Introduce what way of learning you like and why you like it ① ② ...
要求:
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适
当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数80~100,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Today I will talk about my favorite way of learning.
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Hope everyone can be a good learner.
14.学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论,下面表格里列出了两种学习方式。假如你是李华,请选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出你认为的不足之处。
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages fixed(固定的) learning plans learn faster develop students’ teamwork spirit support each other personal learning plans learn more quietly improve the self-control ability form the habit of thinking
Disadvantages … …
要求:
(1)不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather
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I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
15.你的笔友Tom正在学习中文,并且对中国传统节日很感兴趣,并打算来你家过春节。请你写信向他分享学习中文的好方法,介绍一下中国的春节,并告诉他从机场到你家的路线。
ways of learning Chinese 1. listen to the tapes. 2. read as much as you can 3. keep a diary in Chinese. …
Spring Festival 1. clean the house 2. family members get together to eat a big dinner 3. visit relatives …
route (路线) 走出机场后右转,沿和平路走,右边有一家大超市,你家就在超市旁边。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well.
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I hope my advice can be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Ming
16.亲爱的初三同学,经过两年多的初中学习,你一定在英语学习方面有很大收获和成长,请你结合以下提示,以“How to Learn English”为题写一篇英文短文,把你的英语学习经验介绍给初一、初二的同学们。
提示:
(1) Why should you learn English
(2) What is your advice to them
要求:
(1) 短文须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
(3) 词数80词左右。(题目和开头已给出,不计入词数。)
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world.
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17.好的英语学习方法能让学习更高效,帮助我们节省时间、深化对知识的理解,还能让学习过程更有条理,从而更快提升英语能力。
用英语写一篇作文,要求如下:
1. 首先介绍你常用的几种学习方法(比如做思维导图、整理错题、小组讨论等)。
2. 选取其中一种方法结合自身具体的学习经历(比如为准备一场考试、学习一门新学科时运用这个方法的过程)进行详细描述。
3. 阐述从这次经历中感悟到的这些学习方法带来的好处,以及对自己学习观念的影响。
4. 词数要求:80—120词左右,语言通顺、表意清晰。
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18.新学期,同学们进入了九年级。在开学伊始制订学习计划非常重要。合理的学习计划可以帮助我们在九年级取得好成绩。校英文报将举办主题为“My Study Plans for the New Term”的征文比赛,请你根据以下提示信息,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 在校内的学习计划 (至少两个);
2. 在校外的学习计划 (至少两个);
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:preview (v.预习),go over (复习),actively (adv.积极地)
My Study Plans for the New Term
As the new term comes, we become the students in Grade 9. It’s important for us to make the study plans. Let me share my study plans with you.
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19.假设你是李珊,你的网友贝蒂给你发来电子邮件,向你诉说她在学汉语时遇到的一些困难,并希望你能给她一些建议。请你根据下面的提示内容,给贝蒂回一封邮件。
要点:
1.在学习语言时遇到问题是正常的;
2.多看或多听汉语节目,多看汉语电影,多学汉语歌曲;
3.多交一些中国朋友,多练习口语;
4.不要害怕出错,坚持不放弃。
注意:
1.句子通顺,语意连贯,符合逻辑;
2.不要逐字逐句翻译要点内容;
3.词数80~100,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Betty,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Shan
20.随着中国经济实力和国际地位的提升,汉语的使用越来越广泛,请你以“Chinese Around the World”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:
1. 汉语在国外的传播情况;
2. 到中国学习、旅行等;
3. 你对汉语发展的看法。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名;
2. 文章内容需包括以上要点,可适当发挥;
3. 词数100词左右;
4. 提示词:唐人街China Town;孔子学院 Confucius Institute
Chinese Around the World
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参考答案及试题解析
1.例文:
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封信;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的提示内容,适当添加细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以“很抱歉听说你无法适应中学生活”来引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从“朋友、学习”两个方面进行描述;
第三步,书写结语。祝福对方好运。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②in return作为回报
③On the other hand另一方面
④In addition另外
[高分句型]
①In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.(who引导定语从句)
②Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.(动名词作主语)
③In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words.(if引导条件状语从句)
2.例文
How to Learn English Well
English is an important subject, but many students struggle with it. Some use wrong methods, while others give up because of difficulties. Here are my suggestions to learn it well.
First, listen more. We can listen to English songs or news daily to improve listening skills. Second, speak bravely. Don’t be afraid of mistakes—practice with classmates or join English corners. Third, read and write often. Read English stories and keep a diary to enhance reading and writing abilities. With hard work and right methods, we’ll surely learn English well. Only in this way can we master English and open a wider world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;
②时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主,用于陈述英语学习的现状、普遍适用的方法及客观事实;
③提示:结合学生学习英语时“方法不当”“畏惧困难放弃”的问题,给出听、说、读、写方面的具体建议,强调正确方法与努力的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点明背景:指出英语的重要性及学生学习英语的常见困境,自然引出“学好英语的建议”这一主题;
第二步,中间分点阐述建议:从“多听”(听英文歌、新闻练听力)、“敢说”(不惧错误,与同学练习或参加英语角)、“勤读写”(读英文故事、写日记提升读写能力)三个维度,给出具体可操作的学习方法;
第三步,结尾总结升华:强调“努力+正确方法”的重要性,表达学好英语的信心,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①struggle with艰难应对;努力克服
②enhance提高;增强
③bravely勇敢地
④daily每日地;日常地
[高分句型]
Some use wrong methods, while others give up because of difficulties.(运用“while”表对比,清晰呈现学生学习英语的两种不同问题,使句子逻辑更鲜明,避免简单罗列)
3.例文
How to Learn English Well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:议论文,围绕“如何学好英语”展开,提出学习建议,属于学习方法类;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:紧扣题目,从听、说、读、写四个方面阐述学好英语的方法,内容完整,逻辑清晰;
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明英语的重要性,引出如何学好英语的话题;
第二步:分点阐述学习方法:听;说;读;写;
第三步:总结强调只要多听、多说、多读、多写,就能学好英语;
[亮点词汇]
① as much as possible尽可能多
② be afraid of害怕
③ make mistakes犯错误
④ in a word言而总之
⑤ as long as只要
[高分句型]
① Watching English movies is also helpful to us.(动名词作主语)
②The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.(the+比较级,the+比较级)
③In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.”(“as long as”引导条件状语从句)
4.例文:
Dear Amy,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I know you have difficulty in English study. As we know, it’s important for us to learn English well. But how to learn English well I’ll give you some advice.
First, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class because it can help you a lot. Second, you should read more English newspapers and magazines because it can improve your reading skills. Third, you should keep a diary in English every day. I think it’s the best way to practice writing.
If you listen, speak, read and write more, you’ll find it easy to learn English well, and you can make great progress.
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出朋友的问题,并提出要给出一些建议;
第二步,具体介绍学好英语的建议是什么;
第三步,最后鼓励朋友,并希望她进步。
[亮点词汇]
① have difficulty in在……方面有困难
② take notes做笔记
③ make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
① First, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class because it can help you a lot.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② If you listen, speak, read and write more, you’ll find it easy to learn English well, and you can make great progress. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5.例文:
Good morning. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to share my opinion about learning English with you all.
To learn English well, there are several effective ways. First, reading the textbook regularly helps us grasp basic knowledge. Second, reading aloud every day can improve our pronunciation and fluency. Besides, watching English movies is a fun way to enhance listening and understand cultural contexts. In class, taking notes carefully is essential for reviewing later. When encountering new words, looking them up in the dictionary is a must. What’s more, keeping a diary in English is great for practicing writing skills.
That’s all. Thanks a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“如何学好英语”,结合读课本、大声读、看英文电影、记笔记、查字典、写英语日记等提示内容展开,适当进行拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇表明身份,说明要分享英语学习经验;
第二步:详细介绍学好英语的多种方法,涵盖提示要点并适当发挥;
第三步:结束发言,表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes 记笔记
②look up 查阅;查找
③keep a diary写日记
[高分句型]
①To learn English well, there are several effective ways. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②What’s more, keeping a diary in English is great for practicing writing skills. (动名词短语作主语)
6.例文
My Ways to Learn English
As we all know, English is an important international language. Although I once struggled to remember words and lacked confidence, I didn’t give up. Here are some practical tips that worked for me.
First, I spend at least 15 minutes on English every day. I write down five new words and make sentences with them. Second, I read short English stories before sleeping—it’s fun and improves my reading. Also, I listen to English songs and sing along when I walk. It makes learning enjoyable and trains my listening skills.
With persistence, we all can make progress. Let’s keep learning and achieve our goals together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要求中的内容,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明英语的重要性,并简要提及自己过去遇到的困难;
第二步,提出学习英语的实用方法;
第三步,鼓励大家一起学习,共同实现目标。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②struggled努力,挣扎
③practical tips实用技巧
④persistence坚持
⑤achieve实现,达到
[高分句型]
① Although I once struggled to remember words and lacked confidence, I didn’t give up. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
② Here are some practical tips that worked for me. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
7.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You said you’re interested in Mid-Autumn Festival and have trouble with English learning. I’d like to share something with you.
Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. On that day, families get together for a big dinner. We eat mooncakes—they’re round and sweet, representing reunion. In the evening, we admire the full moon, which is bright and beautiful.
About English learning, I have two methods for you. First, make word cards: write English words on one side and their meanings on the other. Review them every day, and you’ll remember words easily. Second, listen to English songs you like. It helps improve your listening and remember new words.
I really hope you can come to China next year to celebrate Mid-Autumn Festival with my family. We’ll have a great time!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍中秋节的主要活动、分享英语学习方法以及邀请来中国过中秋节的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“对Peter对中国中秋节感兴趣和对英语学习有困难进行回应”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“中秋节的主要活动”和“英语学习方法”两个方面重点介绍相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望Peter明年来中国过中秋节”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 聚集
②have trouble with 在……方面有困难
③represent 代表
[高分句型]
①I really hope you can come to China next year to celebrate Mid-Autumn Festival with my family.(动词不定式作目的状语)
8.例文
Dear Robert,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble in learning Chinese. But it doesn’t matter. I believe I can help you.
First, it’s difficult for you to understand what your Chinese teacher says in class. In my opinion, you could talk to your teacher about it so that she can speak more slowly. Besides, you can try to improve your listening by watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs.
Second, you find some special expressions hard to understand. I think you can learn about them by reading lots of Chinese books. The more you read, the better you will understand.
I think the best way to learn a language is to use it. So try to use Chinese as often as possible.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点和开头部分已给出,考生应注意要求中的内容,不遗漏要点,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引入,表达关切与帮助意愿;
第二步,针对问题,分点给出详细建议;
第三步,表达希望这些建议能有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①have some trouble in doing sth.在做某事方面有困难
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③besides此外
④as often as possible尽可能经常地
[高分句型]
① In my opinion, you could talk to your teacher about it so that she can speak more slowly. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
② The more you read, the better you will understand. (运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”表示“越……越……”的结构)
9.例文
Yesterday, our English study group talked about how to improve English reading and writing abilities. Here are the results of our discussion.
First of all, we think reading often is the key. Reading different kinds of English materials like stories, newspapers and magazines can help us get more vocabulary and understand sentence structures better. Also, joining a reading club is a great idea. We can share our reading experiences with others there and get different ideas, which will make reading more interesting.
When it comes to writing, keeping a diary every day is very useful. It allows us to practice using the words and sentence patterns we’ve learned. Moreover, we should write passages regularly and ask the teacher to mark them. The teacher’s advice can help us find our mistakes and improve our writing skills quickly.
In a word, we believe that by following these methods, we can improve our English reading and writing abilities step by step.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,介绍提高英语阅读和写作能力的方法;
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②join a reading club加入一个阅读俱乐部
③get different ideas收获不同的想法
④when it comes to涉及到
⑤keep a diary记日记
⑥step by step逐步地
[高分句型]
①We can share our reading experiences with others there and get different ideas, which will make reading more interesting.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②When it comes to writing, keeping a diary every day is very useful.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③It allows us to practice using the words and sentence patterns we’ve learned.(定语从句)
④In a word, we believe that by following these methods, we can improve our English reading and writing abilities step by step.(that引导的宾语从句)
10.范文1:
Good afternoon, our dear teachers and students from beautiful Italy! Welcome to our school!
Today I’m more than happy to be here to give a speech on the topic of learning experience sharing. Firstly, you need a good study plan which tells what to do clearly and makes full use of time. Secondly, I have benefited a lot from studying with a group. In a group, you can practice speaking, listening and writing skills with others. Besides, take notes in the lessons so that you can review them later. What’s more, guess the meaning of difficult Chinese characters from the context instead of using a dictionary immediately. It will be helpful to improve your reading ability. Good learning habits make you a good learner.
Thank you for listening. Wish you all have a nice day!
范文2:
Good afternoon, our dear teachers and students from beautiful Italy. Welcome to our school!
Today I’m more than happy to be here to give a speech on the topic of reading experience sharing. I strongly recommend books by some great writers in China, such as Lu Xun and Lao She. Their works will help us better understand the society in different periods in China. Secondly, books with beautiful language can undoubtedly improve your writing. Besides, consider your own interests when choosing. It’ll make the reading experience more enjoyable. On the other hand, I prefer paper books to e-books. A real book allows me to feel the weight of the pages and the smell of paper. Read more books, and you’ll gain more wisdom.
Thank you for listening. Wish you all have a nice day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:考生应注意需要从两个演讲主题中选择一个,根据表格提示信息写一篇英文演讲稿,发言稿需涵盖表中所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分享学习方法;
第二步,分享如何处理难字的方法;
第三步,书写结语,表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of充分利用
②benefit a lot from从……受益
③take notes记笔记
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Firstly, you need a good study plan which tells what to do clearly and makes full use of time. (which引导的定语从句)
②Besides, take notes in the lessons so that you can review them later. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
11.例文:
English is widely used all over the world. English helps us understand different cultures in the world. Speaking more English in our daily life can improve our confidence.
At present, I can have conversations with my classmates in English. I have learned ten English songs so far. I won the prize in the school singing contest last year.
However, I have some problems learning English. I can’t use the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember longer sentence patterns. Despite these difficulties, I’ll keep working hard to improve my English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”,谈及过去的经历时用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,需涵盖“对英语的认识”“当前英语水平”和“学习中存在的问题”三部分,可适当补充细节使内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。简要介绍英语的重要性;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——当前英语水平、学习中存在的问题、学习中存在的问题等均要一一阐述;
第三步:书写结语。可总结学习态度或表达改进决心。
[亮点词汇]
①all over the world世界各地
②so far迄今为止
③express myself clearly清晰表达自我
[高分句型]
①Speaking more English in our daily life can improve our confidence. (动名词作主语)
②I often find it hard to remember longer sentence patterns. (find+it+宾补)
12.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning. Don’t worry, many students face similar challenges. I used to struggle too, especially with listening. When I couldn’t understand others, I felt very anxious. My advice is to listen as much as possible-English songs, movies, or short stories. Practice makes perfect! Don’t be afraid of making grammar mistakes. I used to avoid speaking for the same reason, but trying to speak more, even with errors, really helped me improve. Remember, everyone makes mistakes when learning! For reading and pronunciation, I found reading aloud every day very useful. It builds speed and helps correct pronunciation. Taking notes on new words and reviewing them often is key too. Maybe joining an English club would give you more practice. Keep trying, Tom! You can do it!
Best wishes,
Henry
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对Tom在学习英语方面遇到的困难表示遗憾;
第二步,对Tom提出的困难根据自己的亲身经历给出详细的建议;
第三步,书写结语,提出鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②as much as possible尽可能多
③try to do sth尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①When I couldn’t understand others, I felt very anxious. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning. (that引导的宾语从句)
13.例文:
Hello, everyone! Today I will talk about my favorite way of learning.
There are many ways of learning. Some people like learning online, which is convenient. Some prefer learning in groups, as they can discuss with others. Others like to learn alone in the library or at home for a quiet environment.
Nowadays, there is a popular shared study room. It is quiet and private, with some tables and chairs in it. There are also special areas for eating, resting or chatting.
My favorite way of learning is learning in groups. Because I can exchange ideas with my classmates, learn from others and improve my understanding.
Hope everyone can be a good learner.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍大家喜欢的学习方式和当下流行的共享学习室,谈谈自己喜欢的学习方式及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,导入正文;
第二步,介绍大家喜欢的学习方式和当下流行的共享学习室,谈谈自己喜欢的学习方式及原因;
第三步,介绍当下流行的共享学习室;
第四步,谈谈自己喜欢的学习方式及原因;
第五步,表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① prefer doing 更喜欢做
② exchange … with 与...交换
③ learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
① Others like to learn alone in the library or at home for a quiet environment.(使用非谓语动词)
② Some prefer learning in groups, as they can discuss with others.(使用as引导的原因状语从句)
14.例文
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there’s no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability because I have to depend on myself. What’s more, it can also help me form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. For example, when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,围绕喜欢的学习方式展开。
②时态:时态为一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中自主学习的优点、缺点的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出对学习方式的阐述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借已给开头表达喜欢自主学习;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从优点、缺点方面,说明自主学习;
第三步,书写结语。表达期望,结束短文。
[亮点词汇]
①personal learning plan个人学习计划
②self-control ability自控能力
③form the habit of养成……的习惯
④disadvantage缺点
[高分句型]
①First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. (when引导时间状语从句,so that引导目的状语从句,说明自主学习制定计划的好处)
②Second, I will learn more quietly because there’s no one disturbing me. (because引导原因状语从句,说明安静学习的原因)
③However, it also has disadvantages. For example, when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates. (however转折,for example举例说明缺点)
15.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well.
First, you can listen to tapes to improve your listening. Second, read as much as you can to enlarge your vocabulary. Third, keeping a diary in Chinese is also a great way to practice writing.
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Before it comes, people clean the house. On New Year’s Eve, family members get together to eat a big dinner. During the festival, people visit relatives and have a lot of fun.
When you arrive at the airport, turn right. Walk along Heping Road. There is a big supermarket on the right. My home is right next to the supermarket.
I hope my advice can be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主旨,告知汤姆有学好中文的好方法,并具体列举了听磁带练听力、多阅读扩大词汇量、用中文写日记练写作这三种方法;
第二步,介绍中国最重要的节日,详细描述了春节前打扫房子、除夕夜家人团聚吃大餐、节日期间走亲访友的习俗;
第三步,为方便汤姆找到自己家,清晰地给出了从机场出发的路线指引,包括右转、沿和平路走以及自家位于超市旁边的信息;
第四步,结尾表达美好祝愿,希望建议对汤姆有帮助,并期待与汤姆见面。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚
②improve one’s listening提高某人的听力
③enlarge one’s vocabulary扩大某人的词汇量
④the most important festival最重要的节日
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well.(动词不定式to learn Chinese well作后置定语)
②When you arrive at the airport, turn right.(when引导时间状语从句)
16.例文:
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. So it will be helpful for us to master it. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make. Third, we should read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should keep a diary in English.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明英语的重要性,引出关于学习英语的建议
第二步,具体介绍如何学好英语;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②be afraid of害怕
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make.(“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构)
②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.(“as long as”引导条件状语从句)
17.例文
Useful English Learning Methods
Good learning methods can make English study more efficient. I often use mind maps to organize grammar points, keep error notebooks for mistakes, and join group discussions to practice speaking.
Last term, I used mind maps to prepare for the English final exam. I listed tenses as the main branch, then added sub-branches like usages, signal words, and example sentences. This helped me clearly see the connections between different tenses.
From this experience, I found mind maps made complex knowledge easier to remember. They also taught me that organizing information well is as important as memorizing it. Now I use such methods regularly to improve my English quickly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,介绍英语学习方法;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主,描述常用学习方法和当前习惯;涉及过去经历时使用“一般过去时”;
③提示:介绍常用英语学习方法,结合具体经历说明方法的作用及带来的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,指出好的学习方法能提升英语学习效率,并列举三种常用方法。
第二步,选取“思维导图”这一方法,结合上学期准备英语期末考试的具体经历,描述使用过程。
第三步,总结该方法带来的好处及对自身学习观念的影响,说明现在会定期使用这类方法提升英语。
[亮点词汇]
①efficient高效的
②organize整理;组织
③sub-branch分支;子分支
④connection联系;关联
[高分句型]
①I often use mind maps to organize grammar points, keep error notebooks for mistakes, and join group discussions to practice speaking. (运用排比结构列举三种学习方法,句式整齐,条理清晰,体现了方法的多样性。)
②From this experience, I found mind maps made complex knowledge easier to remember. (使用“find+宾语+宾语补足语”结构,简洁明了地表达从经历中得出的结论,符合英语表达习惯。)
18. My Study Plans for the New Term
As the new term comes, we become the students in Grade 9. It’s important for us to make the study plans. Let me share my study plans with you.
At school, I plan to preview new lessons every evening. This helps me understand what the teacher says in class the next day. I also decide to take part in class discussions actively. When I have questions, I’ll ask my teachers or classmates in time. After school, I’ll go over the knowledge I learned that day for 30 minutes every night. On weekends, I want to read more English books and watch English videos. This can improve my English skills. I hope with these plans, I can get better grades in Grade 9. I’ll try my best to stick to them!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明背景与主题,说明新学期到来且自己成为九年级学生,强调制定学习计划的重要性,并引出要分享自己的学习计划这一核心内容;
第二步,分场景详细阐述具体的学习计划,先介绍在学校的学习计划,再说明放学后的复习计划,接着描述周末提升英语的计划,从不同时间段展开,逻辑清晰;
第三步,结尾表达对计划的期望,希望通过这些计划在九年级取得更好成绩,并表明会尽力坚持执行计划的决心,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make the study plans 制定学习计划
②preview new lessons 预习新课
③take part in 参与
④go over 复习
⑤stick to 坚持
[高分句型]
①This helps me understand what the teacher says in class the next day.(what引导宾语从句)
②On weekends, I want to read more English books and watch English videos.(“and” 并列两个动词短语)
19.例文
Dear Betty,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. In your e-mail, you said you had some trouble learning Chinese. Don't worry. It's common that people have some problems while learning a language.
I think you should watch or listen to Chinese programs often. You can also see Chinese movies and learn Chinese songs. You know, a good language environment is very helpful in learning a language, so you'd better make some Chinese friends. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Keep on practising speaking Chinese and never give up. I'm sure you will make progress.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Shan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,围绕 “给 Betty 回复关于汉语学习问题” 展开,提供学习建议 ;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,阐述建议、表达观点;
③提示:文章符合书信格式,回应 Betty 汉语学习困扰,给出多方面学习建议,内容完整、逻辑清晰 。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇回应收到邮件,安抚 Betty 汉语学习有困难很正常;
第二步,详细给出汉语学习建议,包括常看 常 听中文节目、看中文电影、学中文歌曲、交中国朋友等鼓励 Betty 别怕犯错、坚持练习;
第三步,表达对 Betty 的信心,送上祝福 。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难
②be helpful in 在…… 方面有帮助
③be afraid of 害怕
[高分句型]
①It's common that people have some problems while learning a language. (it 作形式主语,that 引导主语从句,while 引导时间状语从句 )
②I'm sure you will make progress. (sure 后省略 that 的宾语从句 )
20.例文:
Chinese Around the World
With the development of China’s economy and international status, the use of Chinese is becoming more and more widespread. Chinese is spreading rapidly around the world. There are many China Towns in foreign countries, where Chinese is widely used. In addition, there are Confucius Institutes in many countries, which are dedicated to promoting Chinese language and culture. More and more people come to China to study and travel. They are attracted by China’s long history and rich culture. They learn Chinese, experience Chinese customs and taste Chinese food. I believe that with the development of China, Chinese will become more and more important in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给写作要点,介绍汉语在世界上的影响和发展,表明自己对汉语发展的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍汉语在国外的传播,如国外有很多唐人街和孔子学院;
第二步,介绍汉语的使用越来越广泛,以至于如今有很多人来中国学习和旅游;
第三步,书写结语,表明自己对未来汉语发展情况有何看法。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of... 随着……的发展
②international status 国际地位
③In addition 另外
④be dedicated to 致力于……
⑤promote 提升,促进
[高分句型]
①There are many China Towns in foreign countries, where Chinese is widely used. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
②In addition, there are Confucius Institutes in many countries, which are dedicated to promoting Chinese language and culture. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③They are attracted by China’s long history and rich culture. (被动语态)
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