Unit 1 What’s the matter? Writing 知识点讲解+巩固练习（含范文）

Unit 1 What’s the matter?

话题分析
本单元的写作任务是会写针对健康问题提出合理化建议的短文。在写作过程中，要求同学们熟悉人体部位的表述，掌握描述人体的不适等健康问题。要注意关键词语的正确使用，并能够针对健康问题运用情态动词should和shouldn’t提出更加正确、具体和深入的合理化建议。
写作目标
能表达生活中存在的健康问题，并就这些提出建议；能描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。
1. 能用＂have...＂表达健康问题及意外事故。
2. 能描述健康问题的状况或意外事故发生的过程及病情或受伤的程度。
3. 能用 ＂should/shouldn’t＂ 提建议。
4. 写作微技能：不同句式的表达。
一、词汇积累
（一）健康问题类短语
1. 牙痛 ___________________　　　　　 2. 头痛 ___________________
3. 肚子痛 ___________________ 4. 背痛 ___________________
5. 喉咙痛 ___________________ 6. 流鼻血 ___________________
7. 感冒 ___________________ 8. 发烧 ___________________
9. 咳嗽 ___________________ 10. 感到恶心 ___________________
（二）意外事故短语
1. 摔倒 _____________________ 2. 割伤 _____________________
3. 撞到头 _____________________ 4. 膝盖受伤 _____________________
5. 背受伤 _____________________ 6. 手臂受伤 _____________________
（三）措施短语
1. 躺下来休息 _____________________ 2. 喝热的蜂蜜水 _____________________
3. 看牙医 _____________________ 4. 拍X光 _____________________
5. 量体温 _____________________ 6. 在……敷药 _____________________
7. 用绑带包扎 _____________________ 8. 在水下冲 _____________________
9. 去医院 _____________________ 10. 休息几天 _____________________
11. 去看医生 _____________________ 12. 切除 _____________________
（四）其他短语
1. 怎么了 _____________________ 2. 下车 _____________________
3. 使……惊讶 _____________________ 4. 同意做某事 _____________________
5. 造成麻烦 _____________________ 6. 习惯于…… _____________________
7. 冒险 _____________________ 8. 用尽；耗尽 _____________________
9. 离开，从……出来 _____________________ 10. 掌管；管理 _____________________
11. 坚持做某事 _____________________ 12. 放弃 _____________________
13.做决定 _____________________ 14. 考虑做某事 _____________________
二、句子积累
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. I sat in the same way for too long without moving. The bus driver stopped the bus without thinking twice.（without doing sth没有做某事）
我一直在做作业没有休息。
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2. But to his surprise, they all agreed to go with him.（to one’s surprise 使……惊讶；出乎……意料）
让我感到惊讶的是，他能独自穿越这片森林。
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3. Thanks to Mr. Wang and the passengers, the doctors saved the man in time.（thanks to多亏；由于；in time及时）
多亏了黄老师，快速送我到医院，我才及时得到治疗(receive treatment)。
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4. He bandaged himself so that he would not lose too much blood.（so that 因此）
我早起是为了赶上早班车。
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5. His love for mountain climbing is so great that he kept on climbing mountains even after his experience.（so... that... 如此……以至于……）
这蛋糕是如此美味，以至于我吃了好多，肚子痛了。
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6. Aron is used to taking risks.（be used to doing sth习惯于做某事）
我习惯于早上喝一杯水。
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（二）根据健康问题或生活中的伤害事故，提出建议。（提建议的句式有should，shouldn’t，Why not...? Why don’t you... ? What/How about...?等）
1. Tina fell down from her bike and hurt her knee.
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2. Steve ate too much at the party so that he had a stomachache.
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3. Mr Smith got hit by a ball when he was walking.
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【参考答案】
一、词汇积累
（一）1.have a toothache
2.have a headache
3.have a stomachache
4.have a sore back
5.have a sore throat
6.have a nosebleed
7.have a cold
8.have a fever
9.have a cough
10.feel sick
（二）1.fall down
2.cut oneself
3.get hit on the head
4.hurt one’s knee
5.hurt one’s back
6.hurt one’s arm
（三）1.lie down and rest
2.drink hot tea with honey
3.go to the dentist
4.get an X-ray
5.take one’s temperature
6.put some medicine on...
7.put a bandage on...
8.run under the water
9.go to the hospital
10.rest for a few days
11.go to a doctor
12.cut off
（四）1.what’s the matter
2.get off
3.to one’s surprise
4.agree to do sth
5. get into trouble
6.be used to
7.take risks
8.run out (of)
9.get out of
10. be in control of
11.keep on doing sth
12.give up
13.make decisions
14.think about doing sth
二、句子积累
（一）1. I did my homework all the time without having a rest.
2. To my surprise, he could go through the forest himself.
3. Thanks to Mr Huang, he sent me to the hospital quickly and I received treatment in time.
4. I get up early so that I can catch the early bus.
5. The cake was so delicious that I ate too much and had a stomachache.
6. I am used to drinking a glass of water in the morning.
（二）略
（一）
（2019﹒山东德州）树立自我保护意识，健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护健康成长所手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生，写一篇文章，内容包括：①陈树你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的；②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。


要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules ___________________________________________________________
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In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【佳作展示】
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.
What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【名师点评】
1. 本文书写的内容完整、条理清楚。
2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等词汇，使文章层次分明。易于理解。
3. 作者所加的一条很好，防溺水，是当今安全隐患最大的。同时还运用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文为上等之作。
（二）
健康对每个人来说非常重要，但很多人不知道该如何保持健康。请根据以下图片及提示词语简要介绍如何才能保持健康。（补充一两个建议）80词以上。

提示词：important，need，feel active，a balanced（均衡的）diet，be good for，snack，junk food，do more exercise
All of us want to be healthy._________________________________________________________________
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【佳作展示】
All of us want to be healthy. It is very important to everybody. But do you really know how to stay healthy? Here are some useful tips. First, we should do exercise if we have time. For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper. Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less snacks. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. We have a balanced diet. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time.
If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了健康很重要，接下来介绍如何保持健康的建议，最后希望每个人都有个强健的身体。此处for example，take a walk，make sb+形容词，have a balanced diet，go to bed，wake up，pay attention to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（一）
Tom昨天晚上头痛，没睡好觉。今天早上去看病，医生说他有点感冒，并给他开了一些药，告诉他一天吃三次，要多喝水，好好休息。请根据以上提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
参考词汇：have a headache, not sleep well, go to a doctor, look him over, give him some medicine, drink some water, have a good rest, thank the doctor, go home
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（二）
近年来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素，请以＂Keep Healthy＂为题谈谈你的看法。
要求：1. 列举中小学生面临的健康问题；
2. 谈谈如何才能保持健康；
3. 词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容可适当发挥，要求语法运用正确、逻辑通顺、语言表达流畅。
提示词：junk food, be bad for, computer games, suggestions, stay away from
Keep Healthy
Today some students have more and more health problems. ________________________________________
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（三）
健康煎饼房（Health Pancake House）今日开业，这儿的煎饼不仅健康美味，而且种类繁多，有水果煎饼、鸡蛋煎饼、蔬菜煎饼，还有牛肉和羊肉煎饼。假如你是该店店长，请根据以上提示，为你的店铺写一则广告。
Health Pancake House
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参考答案
（一）
【佳作展示】
Last night, Tom had a headache. He didn’t sleep well. This morning, he went to a doctor. First the doctor looked him over and said he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and told him to eat the medicine three times a day. He also told him to drink lots of water and have a good rest. Tom thanked the doctor and went home.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Tom昨天晚上头痛，没睡好觉。接下来介绍他去看医生，医生对他的建议和要求。最后Tom感谢医生，然后回家。此处have a headache, go to a doctor, have a good rest, go home等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（二）
【佳作展示】
Keep Healthy
Today some students have more and more health problems. Now, I want to tell you how to keep healthy. It is very important for us. How to keep healthy? First, we must have a healthy diet. Most of the students like eating junk food such as fried chicken, French fries and so on. But this kind of food is bad for us. It is unhealthy food. We should eat less fried food. Second, we must have a good habit. We should get up early and go to bed early. We exercise regularly in the morning. We should stay away from computer games. Finally, We must do some housework at home. My parents are very tired, so we can help them. By following these suggestions, you will be healthy.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中小学生面临的健康问题，接下来谈了如何才能保持健康，最后总结遵循这些建议，你将会健康。此处want to do sth, keep healthy, such as, and so on, be bad for, get up, stay away from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（三）
【思路导航】
【佳作展示】
Health Pancake House
Would you like to eat pancakes? Please come to Health Pancake House. We have all kinds of pancakes. We have fruit pancakes, egg pancakes and vegetable pancakes. If you like meat, you can taste our beef pancakes and mutton pancakes. All of the pancakes are healthy and delicious. Come and try our pancakes soon. I’m sure you’ll like them.