(共22张PPT)
Unit
3
Sports
and
Fitness
应用文（词句应用）
假定你是李华，你的笔友Amy最近写了一封e-mail给你，表达了因体重过重带来的烦恼。请你安慰Amy，
并给她建议，内容包括：
1.
表达安慰；
2.
给出建议；
3.
你的祝福
注意：1.
词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
应用文写作
写作结构：
首段：表明写作意图（写作背景+写信目的）
先安慰，接着写作题图：就如何强身健体提出建议；
中间段：具体建议及理由：
a.
平衡饮食
b.
经常锻炼
c....
尾段：希望建议是有帮助的。
I
(do)
hope
that
my
suggestions
are
helpful/useful/beneficial.
首段：写信背景+写信目的
I'm
sorry
to
heart/that
you
are
now
having
trouble/difficulty
in
doing
sth,
such
problems
are
quite
normal.
Perhaps
the
following
suggestions
are
helpful./Now
I'm
writing
to
give
you
some
advice
Learning/Knowing
that
you...,
I
quite
understand
that.
If
you
want
to
do...,
please
refer
to
the
following.
I'm
glad/delighted
to
receive
your
letter
asking
for
advice
on....
here
are
some
tips/suggestions/advice
to
help
you.
Practical
and
effective
measures
must
be
taken
immediately
to
improve
the
current
situation.
尾段：
I
do
hope
that
my
suggestions
are
helpful/useful/beneficial.
I
hope
you
will
find
these
suggestions
beneficial/constructive.
and
I
believe,
with
your
effort,
you
can
manage
to
do
sth.
...
I
think
you
can
make
it
if
you
following
the
suggestion
above.
I
hope
these
suggestions
will
be
of
use
to
you.
Remember:
where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
I
sincerely
hope
my
advice
will
be
of
some
help
to
you.
If
there
is
more
I
can
do
to
help,
please
let
me
know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
中间段可用句式或连接词
1.
As
far
as
I'm
concerned,
there's
no
need
for
you
to
do
sth.
2.
why
no
do
sth.?
if
you
do
this,
you
can...
3.
you
may
as
well
do
sth.
/you
had
better
do
sth.
你不妨做.../你最好做...
4
Only
in
this
way/by
doing
so+倒装句
5.
in
addition/additionally,
it
will
be
a
wise
choice
if
you
do
sth.
连接词：
1.For
one
thing...and
for
another
(thing)…一则，...再则,
...
On
the
one
hand,...
on
the
other
hand,...
一方面，...但另一方面,
...
2.
First
of
all/
To
begin
with...
Second
(ly)
/
Besides/
What’s
more.../In
addition/Additionally
Moreover/Furthermore此外/
More
importantly更重要的是
Finally(最后)/Most
importantly(最重要的是，)
How
to
naturally
lose
weight
a
balanced
diet
work
out
regularly
rather
than
be
positive
about
even
if/though
make
a
difference
句式：
强调句和倒装句
Application:
首段
1.
得知你担心你的体重，我非常理解你有多焦虑不安。因此，
我写信给你一些建议。
_________________
that
you
are
worried
about
your
weight,
I
quite
understand_________
upset
and
anxious
you
feel.
Learning/Knowing
how
____________________________________________________________________.
such
problems
are
quite
normal.
Perhaps
the
following
suggestions
are
helpful.
I'm
sorry
to
learn
that
you
are
now
having
trouble
with
your
weight
利用已给句式仿写：
Application:中间段(2--3个建议)
2.
平衡饮食（理由）
你最好能平衡饮食,
少糖少脂，多吃水果。(建议)
keep
a
balanced
diet
had
better
do
sth.
be
low/poor
in
You'd
better
keep
a
balanced
diet
which
is
poor
in
sugar
and
fat
and
eat
more
fruits.
In
this
way/by
doing
so,
you
will
be
healthier.
这样做的话，你能更健康。(理由)
Application:
中间段
3.
经常锻炼（理由）
经常锻炼不但能增强体质，还能让你苗条。
Working
out
regularly
will
not
only
built
up
your
strength,
but
also
allow
you
to
be
slim.
Working
out
regularly
is
a
wise
choice,/It
is
a
good
choice
to
work
out
regularly,
which
will
not
only
build
up
your
strength
but
allow
you
to
be
slim.
Not
only
will
working
out
regularly
built
up
your
strength,
but
it
will
allow
you
to
be
slim.
Application:尝试把两个建议放一起
这不但能增强体质，还能让你变得苗条又苗条（理由）
平衡饮食和经常锻炼能有大作用（建议）。
A
balanced
diet
and
regular
exercise
can
__________________________
.
make
a
big
difference.
It
can
not
only
build
up
your
strength
but
also
allow
you
to
be
slim
and
healthy.
改成倒装句：
Not
only
can
it
build
up
your
strength
but
it
also
can
allow
you
to
be
slim
and
healthy.
Application:中间段
4.
足够的睡眠（理由）
足够的睡眠对你来说是有好处的.（建议）
谚语说得好：早睡早起让人健康、富有、聪明。（理由）
Enough
sleep
is
of
great
benefit
to
you.
Just
as
the
saying
goes:
Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
makes
a
man
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
适当增加细节（结合文章）：
老实说，如果我是你，我会更考虑健康而不是体重。
To
be
honest/Honestly
speaking,
if
I
were
you,
I
would
think
more
about/focus
more
on/pay
more
attention
to
fitness
rather
than
weight.
我认为，通过对自己和自己的身体保持积极的态度，我变得更快乐，更健康
I
agree
that
only
by
being
positive
about
yourself
and
your
body,
you'll
become
happier
and
healthier.
I
agree
that
only
by
being
positive
about
yourself
and
your
body,
will
you
become
happier
and
healthier.
Application:尾段
我希望我的建议是有用的。记住：有志者事竟成。
I
hope
these
suggestions
will
be
of
use/useful
to
you.
Remember:
where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.
可以取代划线部分的有：
be
of
help/helpful
to
be
of
benefit/beneficial
to
尝试其他形式的结尾
Combination
one:
Dear
Amy,
Learning
you
are
having
trouble
with
your
weight.
such
problems
are
quite
normal.(安慰)
Perhaps
the
following
suggestions
are
helpful.
____________,
you'd
better
keep
a
balanced
diet
poor
in
sugar
and
fat
and
eat
more
fruits.By
doing
so,
you
will
be
healthier.(建议1和理由)
____________,it
is
a
good
choice
to
work
out
regularly,
which
will
not
only
build
up
your
strength
but
allow
you
to
be
slim(定语从句).(建议2和理由)
Honestly
speaking,I
agree
that
only
by
being
positive
about
yourself
and
your
body,
will
you
become
happier
and
healthier.(倒装句)
(增加的细节)
I
do
hope(强调句)
these
suggestions
will
be
of
use
to
you.
(100词)
Yours,
Li
Hua
To
begin
with
What's
more
Combination
two:
Dear
Amy,
Knowing
that
you
are
worried
about
your
weight,
I
quite
understand
how
upset
and
anxious
you
feel.
Actually,
things
would
improve
if
we
followed
the
suggestions
below.
Firstly,
a
balanced
diet
and
regular
exercise
make
a
difference,
which
not
only
helps
you
watch
your
figure
but
also
contributes
to
a
healthy
life.
Besides,
have
you
thought
about
avoiding
sugary
drinks
and
fruit
juice?
Sugar
is
the
first
cause
of
gaining
weight.
Frankly
speaking,
if
I
were
you,
I
would
focus
more
on
fitness
rather
than
weight.
A
good
healthy
body
is
worth
more
a
crown
in
gold.(谚语：健康比黄金做的皇冠更贵重。)
All
the
best,
I
hope
these
suggestions
are
beneficial!
Yours,
Li
Hua
What's
wrong
with
the
composition?
学生词句赏析和修改：
1.
To
begin
with,
it
would
be
wiser
to
balance
your
diet.
You
should
add
healthy
foods
to
your
meals.
(傅梦语)
2.
Additionally,
you
should
hold
a
positive
attitude,
which
can
reduce
your
pressure.
(傅梦语)
3.
More
importantly
is
doing
sports.
Not
only
do
you
play
sports
can
lose
weight,
but
also
can
get
fit.
4.
A
balanced
diet
is
of
great
benefit
to
keep
fit.
It
does
cause
us
to
have
wellness.
学生词句赏析和修改：
7.
You
had
better
raise
a
balanced
diet.
Only
in
this
way
you
have
opportunity
to
get
a
healthier
and
slimer
body.
5.
Working
out
regularly.
And
it
will
help
you
build
up
your
strength
and
your
anxiety
may
be
relieved
by
doing
so.
(刘倩)
6.
You
are
supposed
to
listen
to
some
smooth
music
or
admire
the
beauty
of
nature,
which
makes
you
more
relaxed
and
learn
something
new
about
nature.(刘倩)
学生词句赏析和修改：
10.
You
do
have
a
balanced
diet.
Because
you
do
keep
fit.
8.
Rather
than
cutting
out
the
foods,
you
add
healthy
foods
to
your
meals.
(杨雅莉)
9.
You
may
as
well
exercise
more.
Never
will
you
find
a
better
way
to
work
out
weight
problems
than
exercising.(陈欣)
10.
What's
more,
you
need
to
develop
a
good
attitude
to
life
which
will
give
you
more
efforts
to
deal
with
the
weight
problems
that
you
face.
(陈欣)
学生词句赏析和修改：
14.
It
is
eating
too
much
that
the
reason
why
you
are
fat.
12.
Especially
important
is
working
out
regularly.(黄瑞珊)
（完全倒装句）
13.
By
being
positive
about
yourself
and
your
body,
you
will
become
both
happier
and
healthier.(黄瑞珊)
学生词句赏析和修改：
15.
You
may
as
well
have
a
balanced
diet.
I
think
it
is
useful
to
keep
fit.
(何宇杰)
16.
What's
more,
you'd
better
keep
a
positve
mind，
____________________________________________.
(何宇杰)
which
allows
you
to
be
more
confident
and
optimistic.Unit
3
Sports
and
Fitness
应用文写作（单元词句应用）
假定你是李华，你的笔友Amy最近写了一封e-mail给你，表达了因体重过重带来的烦恼。请你安慰Amy，
并给她建议，内容包括：
1.
表达安慰；
2.
给出建议；
3.
你的祝福
注意：1.
词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________一、写作结构：
首段：表明写作意图（写作背景+写信目的）：
先安慰，接着写作题图：就如何强身健体提出建议；
中间段：具体建议及理由：
a.
平衡饮食
b.
经常锻炼
c....
尾段：希望建议是有帮助的。
I
(do)
hope
that
my
suggestions
are
helpful/useful/beneficial.
（一）首段：写信背景+写信目的
1.
I'm
sorry
to
heart/that
you
are
now
having
trouble/difficulty
in
doing
sth,
such
problems
are
quite
normal.
Perhaps
the
following
suggestions
are
helpful./Now
I'm
writing
to
give
you
some
advice
2.
Learning/Knowing
that
you...,
I
quite
understand
that.
If
you
want
to
do...,
please
refer
to
the
following.
3.
I’m
writing
to
share
my
views
on
this
problem,
which
I
think
may
be
helpful
to
you.
4.
I
would
like
to
make
some
constructive
suggestions/offer
you
the
following
suggestions,
hoping
to
help
you.
5.
I'm
glad/delighted
to
receive
your
letter
asking
for
advice
on....
here
are
some
tips/suggestions/advice
to
help
you.
6.
I’m
more
than
delighted
to
receive
your
letter
asking
for
my
advice
on...
（二）尾段：
1.
I
do/sincerely(真诚地)
hope
that
my
suggestions
are
helpful/useful/beneficial.
2.
I
hope
you
will
find
these
suggestions
beneficial.
and
I
believe,
with
your
effort,
you
can
manage
to
do
sth.
...
3.
I
think
you
can
make
it
if
you
following
the
suggestion
above.
4.
I
hope
these
suggestions
will
be
of
use
to
you.
Remember:
where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
I
sincerely
hope
my
advice
will
be
of
some
help
to
you.
If
there
is
more
I
can
do
to
help,
please
let
me
know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
（三）中间段可用句式或连接词
1.
To
begin
with,
it
would
be
wiser
to
do...
2.
As
far
as
I'm
concerned,
there's
no
need
for
you
to
do
sth.
3.
you
may
as
well
do
sth.
你不妨做.../you
had
better
do
sth.
你最好做...
4.
Only
in
this
way/by
doing
so+倒装句
5.
in
addition/additionally,
it
will
be
a
wise
choice
if
you
do
sth.
连接词：1.For
one
thing...and
for
another
(thing)…一则，...再则,
...
On
the
one
hand,...
on
the
other
hand,...
一方面，...但另一方面,
...
2.
First
of
all/
To
begin
with...
首先
Besides/What’s
more.../In
addition/Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore此外
More
importantly更重要的是
Finally最后/Most
importantly最重要的是，
二、本单元尽可能多的词句应用到此应用文：
1.
安慰：______________________________________________________________________________________
写作目的____________________________________________________________________________________
2.
平衡饮食（理由）____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
经常锻炼（理由）____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
更多建议和理由
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
5.
结尾：______________________________________________________________________________________
