高考英语书面表达写作指导-漫画作文[课件]

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高考英语书面表达写作指导
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漫 画 作 文
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英语漫画作文
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3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…
The picture above is about …
…Let’s look at the picture above/first.
My version:
For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
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Describe the picture
The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please ” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you ”
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Describe the picture
We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicate that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
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The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
Part 3 Give your opinions
I think/believe that
As far as I’m concerned,
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
should
It is better/advisable to…
I consider it necessary…
Only in this way can….
2/3
must
have to
Do/Don’t…
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.
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In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. It’s time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.”
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From my point of view, reducing the children’s heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of children’s development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development.
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!
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1. To use linking words
表示平行、对等或选择关系
and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...
表示转折关系
but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while
表示对比关系
on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...
表示因果关系
so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to,
due to, thanks to.
表示时间、顺序关系
first, second …, then, next, finally,
for one thing ... for another, in the end,
表示递进、强调关系
besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still,
above all
表示解释、说明关系
such as, for example, for instance(例如),
in other words, and so on
表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general,
on the whole, in conclusion
1. To use linking words
(五／三)
2. To use complicated structures
People suggest that the conference be put off.
It is suggested that the conference be put off.
She walked out of the room and many students followed her.
Followed by many students, she walked out of the room
To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.
What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.
被动语态
非谓语动词
从句
The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.
倒装
So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.
Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.
强调句
It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.
Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.
虚拟语气
But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.
Not good!
Worse!
Neat!