陕西省某二中2013届高三英语课件：短文改错（4）
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1、贴近实际生活
2、话题有关学生学习生活
3、多以书信和日记的形式出现
4、浅显易懂，没有生僻、超纲词汇。
5、句子结构简单，基本是简单句和并不复杂的复合句。
高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
2：1：6：1
或者 1：1：7：1
多
缺
错
正
年份 测试点 全国
名词 1
动词时态
非谓语动词 2
主谓一致
形容词/副词 1
代词 1
介词 2
冠词 1
连词
正确 1
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
介词、短语要牢记
A Limerick
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误。
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
高考链接1：
Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.
likes
Not only
but also
or，either…or…，neither…nor…，not （only）…but （also）…，there be句型
二、名词数
高考链接2：
1.A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot of the hill.
2.The book will give you all the
informations you need.
sheep
information
主要是单复数错误①看修饰语②看主谓语的一致性③可数名词前无单数修饰语一定要用复数。
fish（鱼），deer，means，Chinese，Japanese等
furniture,fun,homework,paper,news,progress,trouble,work（工作），等
三、还要注意形和副
１修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词
２修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词
３比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接３：
Unfortunate，there are too many
people in my family.
Unfortunately
fortunately，luckily，obviously，natrually，
四、非谓语，细辨别
1.不定式
2.动名词作主语、宾语
3.and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致
4.现在分词和过去分词的区别等
On his way home,he suddenly heard his name calling.
高考链接4：
called
五、介词、短语要记住．
主要考查固定短语，习惯搭配。错误表现形式主要有多词、少词和搭配错误。
高考链接５：
1.The man is sitting next his son.
2.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves．
to
∧
of
∧
六、 代词格，细领悟
高考链接6：
I heard that Mr. Wang would
teach our English this term.
us
1. 人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
3．不定代词的使用．
4．Both,all,either,neither,none的使用.
5. Whose 和who’s，its和 it’s的区别．
人称 单数 复数
主格 宾格 主格 宾格
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
I
me
we
us
you
you
you
you
he
him
she
her
it
it
they
them
单数 复数
形容词性物主代词 my your his her its our your their
名词性物主代词 mine yours his hers its ours yours theirs
七、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。这些都有待于我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：
高考链接7：
I live in Beijing，that is the capital
of China.
which
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的用法错误．
高考链接8：
What a good news we’ve heard.
2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to
come tonight .
but
八、冠词连词常光顾
a
九、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误常是这类错误的考查对象。例如：
高考链接9：
And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
we
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
介词、短语要牢记
A Limerick
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
做短文改错应采取三个步骤
1.通读短文，掌握大意，观察时态
2.细读全文，逐一作答
3.复读全文，验证答案
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They
choose a big one. It was almost as taller
as the room! They put them in the corner
of the sitting room. Kate was covered it
with a lot of Christmas light.
2006高考试题目链接
The sitting room looked really
beautifully at the moment. There
was a fire burning in the fire place,
but the Christmas tree lights were
shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing
happily.
This passage is about______
A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.
文章的基本时态为
一般过去时
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1.
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2.
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3.
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4.
At---on
choose---chose
taller--tall
them---it
动词形
介词短语要牢记
还要注意形和副
代词格，细领悟
冠词连词常光顾
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5.
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6.
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7.
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas
8.
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9.
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.
＼
light---lights
beautiful
and
√
∧
singing前加were
动词形
还要注意形和副
动词形
名词数
was
＼
On Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to chose a Christmas tree.
They choose a big one. It was almost
as tall as the room!They put it in the
corner of the sitting room. Kate
covered it with a lot of Christmas
lights.
2006高考试题目链接
The sitting room looked really
beautiful at the moment. There
was a fire burning in the fire
place,and the Chistmas tree
lights were shinning brightly.
Jim and his parents were
singing and dancing happily.
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you. 1.______
I win a national prize for painting last week. 2. ______
My father was so pleasing that he suggested 3. ______
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying 4. ______
there for half a month, visiting place of interest 5. ______
or practicing my English as well. We’ve been 6. ______
第二个to删去
win--won
pleasing--pleased
staying--stay
place--places
or--and
Writing to each for nearly a year now. I have 7. ______
often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 8. ______
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that 9. ______
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 10. ______
sightseeing together.
Best wishes！
Lily
∧
each后加other
talk--talking
at--on
√
Four points that you should pay attention to
①标点符号不改.
②大小写不改.
③词序错误不改.
④在纲外生词不改
(带汉语注释的词).
Summary
What did you learn from this lesson
1.Finish the paper after class.
2.Do the proof-reading on
Page 332 & page 352.
3.Read the limerick
by heart.
1、贴近实际生活
2、话题有关学生学习生活
3、多以书信和日记的形式出现
4、浅显易懂，没有生僻、超纲词汇。
5、句子结构简单，基本是简单句和并不复杂的复合句。
高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
2：1：6：1
或者 1：1：7：1
多
缺
错
正
年份 测试点 全国
名词 1
动词时态
非谓语动词 2
主谓一致
形容词/副词 1
代词 1
介词 2
冠词 1
连词
正确 1
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
介词、短语要牢记
A Limerick
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误。
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
高考链接1：
Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.
likes
Not only
but also
or，either…or…，neither…nor…，not （only）…but （also）…，there be句型
二、名词数
高考链接2：
1.A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot of the hill.
2.The book will give you all the
informations you need.
sheep
information
主要是单复数错误①看修饰语②看主谓语的一致性③可数名词前无单数修饰语一定要用复数。
fish（鱼），deer，means，Chinese，Japanese等
furniture,fun,homework,paper,news,progress,trouble,work（工作），等
三、还要注意形和副
１修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词
２修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词
３比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接３：
Unfortunate，there are too many
people in my family.
Unfortunately
fortunately，luckily，obviously，natrually，
四、非谓语，细辨别
1.不定式
2.动名词作主语、宾语
3.and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致
4.现在分词和过去分词的区别等
On his way home,he suddenly heard his name calling.
高考链接4：
called
五、介词、短语要记住．
主要考查固定短语，习惯搭配。错误表现形式主要有多词、少词和搭配错误。
高考链接５：
1.The man is sitting next his son.
2.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves．
to
∧
of
∧
六、 代词格，细领悟
高考链接6：
I heard that Mr. Wang would
teach our English this term.
us
1. 人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
3．不定代词的使用．
4．Both,all,either,neither,none的使用.
5. Whose 和who’s，its和 it’s的区别．
人称 单数 复数
主格 宾格 主格 宾格
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
I
me
we
us
you
you
you
you
he
him
she
her
it
it
they
them
单数 复数
形容词性物主代词 my your his her its our your their
名词性物主代词 mine yours his hers its ours yours theirs
七、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。这些都有待于我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：
高考链接7：
I live in Beijing，that is the capital
of China.
which
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的用法错误．
高考链接8：
What a good news we’ve heard.
2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to
come tonight .
but
八、冠词连词常光顾
a
九、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误常是这类错误的考查对象。例如：
高考链接9：
And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
we
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
介词、短语要牢记
A Limerick
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
做短文改错应采取三个步骤
1.通读短文，掌握大意，观察时态
2.细读全文，逐一作答
3.复读全文，验证答案
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They
choose a big one. It was almost as taller
as the room! They put them in the corner
of the sitting room. Kate was covered it
with a lot of Christmas light.
2006高考试题目链接
The sitting room looked really
beautifully at the moment. There
was a fire burning in the fire place,
but the Christmas tree lights were
shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing
happily.
This passage is about______
A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.
文章的基本时态为
一般过去时
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1.
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2.
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3.
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4.
At---on
choose---chose
taller--tall
them---it
动词形
介词短语要牢记
还要注意形和副
代词格，细领悟
冠词连词常光顾
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5.
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6.
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7.
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas
8.
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9.
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.
＼
light---lights
beautiful
and
√
∧
singing前加were
动词形
还要注意形和副
动词形
名词数
was
＼
On Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to chose a Christmas tree.
They choose a big one. It was almost
as tall as the room!They put it in the
corner of the sitting room. Kate
covered it with a lot of Christmas
lights.
2006高考试题目链接
The sitting room looked really
beautiful at the moment. There
was a fire burning in the fire
place,and the Chistmas tree
lights were shinning brightly.
Jim and his parents were
singing and dancing happily.
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you. 1.______
I win a national prize for painting last week. 2. ______
My father was so pleasing that he suggested 3. ______
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying 4. ______
there for half a month, visiting place of interest 5. ______
or practicing my English as well. We’ve been 6. ______
第二个to删去
win--won
pleasing--pleased
staying--stay
place--places
or--and
Writing to each for nearly a year now. I have 7. ______
often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 8. ______
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that 9. ______
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 10. ______
sightseeing together.
Best wishes！
Lily
∧
each后加other
talk--talking
at--on
√
Four points that you should pay attention to
①标点符号不改.
②大小写不改.
③词序错误不改.
④在纲外生词不改
(带汉语注释的词).
Summary
What did you learn from this lesson
1.Finish the paper after class.
2.Do the proof-reading on
Page 332 & page 352.
3.Read the limerick
by heart.