2021年中考话题写作讲义1：school life

真题再现：
Write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic
“Changes
in
my
school”.
Use
the
following
points
as
a
reference.
What
changes
have
taken
place
in
your
school?
What
do
you
think
of
these
change?
初稿：
Changes
in
my
school
When
we
talk
about
our
school,
we
usually
have
a
lot
to
say①,
including
the
teachers,
the
students
and
so
on.
We
all
believe
that
the
school
is
an
important
part
in
our
life②.
It
teaches
us
knowledge
and
helps
us
grow
up③.
We
love
it
so
much④.
However,
in
recent
years,
the
environment
there
has
been
seriously
polluted,
and
we
feel
worried⑤.
We
could
see
the
clean
playground
in
the
past,
but
now
it
becomes
a
new
one
with
rubbish
everywhere⑥.
As
we
know,
the
polluted
environment
is
bad
for⑦
our
health.
Therefore,
we
must
take
some
actions
before
things
get
worse⑧.
As
students,
we
spend
longer
time
at
school⑨.
So,
love
our
school
and
protect
the
environment
to
make
it
a
better
place.
1.
单纯使用时间状语从句
2.
单纯使用宾语从句
3.
五大基本句型+并列句的使用
4.
五大基本句型
5.
五大基本句型
6.
五大基本句型
7.
短语使用过于简单
8.
五大基本句型+单纯使用时间状语从句
9.
五大基本句型
Changes
in
my
school
When
talking
about
our
school,
we
usually
have
a
lot
to
say①,
including
the
teachers,
the
students
and
so
on.
There
is
no
denying
that
it
plays
an
important
role
in
our
life②.
We
must
admit
it
is
school
that
makes
us
knowledgeable
and
helps
us
grow
up③.
We
love
it
more
than
anything
else④.
However,
in
recent
years,
the
environment
there
has
been
seriously
polluted,
which
makes
us
worried⑤.
The
clean
playground
that
we
could
see
in
the
past
has
become
a
new
one
with
rubbish
everywhere⑥.
As
we
know,
the
environment
has
a
great
influence
on
our
health.
Therefore,
effective
measures
must
be
taken
before
things
get
worse⑦.
As
students,
the
time
we
spend
in
school
is
much
longer
than
that
at
home⑧.
So,
love
our
school
and
protect
the
environment
to
make
it
a
better
one.
①
固定句型：
When+doing…,
sb
…
译为：当……时，某人……
考点链接：原句：What
do
you
want
to
be
when
you
grow
up?
替换为：What
do
you
want
to
be
when
growing
up?
②
固定句式：
There
is
no
denying
that…
译为：不可否认……
考点链接：原句：I
think
the
most
important
thing
in
a
friendship
is
to
respect
each
other.
替换为：There
is
no
denying
that
the
most
important
thing
in
a
friendship
is
to
respect
each
other.
③
强调句
It
is/was
+
被强调部分
+
who/that
+
其他
译为：是……
考点链接：原句：The
Beatles
have
reminded
the
biggest
selling
group
in
the
world
with
one
billion
CDs,
tapes
and
records
sold.
替换为：It
is
the
Beatles
that
have
reminded
the
biggest
selling
group
in
the
world
with
one
billion
CDs,
tapes
and
records
sold.
④
比较级表最高形式
We
love
it
more
than
anything
else.
译为：我们都爱它。
考点链接：原句：But
I
think
shopping
is
the
most
important.
替换为：But
I
think
shopping
is
more
important
than
anything
else.
⑤
非限制性定语从句
句子,
+
which…
译为：……的
考点链接：原句：Dongfang
International
School
was
set
up
in
1954.
As
it
is
one
of
the
best
schools
in
the
city,
it
attracts
excellent
students
from
both
home
and
abroad.
替换为：Dongfang
International
School,
which
is
one
of
the
best
schools
in
the
city,
was
set
up
in
1954,
and
it
attracts
excellent
students
from
home
and
abroad.
⑥
固定短语：
have
an
influence
on….
译为：对……有影响
⑦
固定句型：
…
effective
measures
must
be
taken
before
things
get
worse.
译为：在情况变得更糟糕前，必须采取有效措施。
A.
句型替换训练
1.
原句：I
want
to
start
my
own
business
after
I
graduate
from
university.
替换为：I
want
to
start
my
own
business
___________
___________
__________
________.
2.
原句：We
can’t
deny
that
water
is
important
in
our
life.
替换为：__________
_________
___________
________
that
water
plays
an
important
role
in
our
life.
B.
句子翻译：
1.
是母亲给了我生命。(It)
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2.
我们和伙伴们玩耍时，这使得童年更加五彩缤纷。(which)
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C.
语法改错训练。
1.
It
took
Jack
two
hours
climb
the
mountain.
_____________
2.
The
tomatoes
I
picked
are
more
redder
than
yours.
_____________
3.
They
have
never
had
the
chance
to
be
there
ago.
_____________
D.
实战演练。
Write
at
least
60
words
about
the
topic
“This
time
next
year”.
你是否想过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？