Unit 5 What are the shirts made of? Section B>写作课件25张

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Unit
5　What
are
the
shirts
made
of?
Writing　
学习目标
一、语言能力
能够运用一般现在时的主动语态、被动语态等介绍一些特产、食物或艺术品等，并通过讨论可以收集和组织写作材料。
二、文化品格
了解自己家乡的一些特产、食物或艺术品，热爱家乡，努力学习，为家乡发展奉献出自己的一份力量。
三、思维品质
学生能够通过分析，思考，表达出自己家乡的一些特产，食物和艺术品等。
四、学习能力
通过系统复习激活已储备的相关写作知识，再通过讨论问题及模仿，总结并掌握简单介绍某一产品的特点的写作方法。
佳篇品读
Pre-writing
My
city
Suzhou
is
famous
for
its
silk
quilts.
These
quilts
are
made
of
silk.
They
are
made
by
workers
in
many
silk
factories
in
the
city.
The
silk
quilts
are
used
for
keeping
people
warm
and
comfortable
in
bed.
They
are
special
because
they
are
light
and
soft
to
touch.
Many
people
from
all
over
the
world
come
to
Suzhou
to
visit
the
silk
factories
and
buy
not
only
the
silk
quilts
but
also
many
other
silk
products
too.would
you
like
to
come
to
my
city?If
you
come
to
Suzhou,I
will
show
you
around
the
city.You
can
buy
all
kinds
of
silk
products.
话题概述
文体
常见作文话题
人称
根据佳篇品读及本单元所学进行话题概述
单元话题内容
时态及语态
本单元以“________”为话题，要求同学们能够运用
_______
时的_______语态及_______语态谈论并描述物品的相关信息(制作的原材料、生产地、用途等)，文章应主要使用______人称和______人称，文章题材应为_________。本单元常见的作文话题有：介绍家乡的一种特产；介绍一种传统艺术品；介绍一种你最喜欢的物品等。
谈论产品
一般现在
主动
被动
第一
第三
说明文
Pre-writing
表达储备
短语链
句式链
被动语态
词汇链
Pre-writing
亮点词汇
Materials:
wood,
silk,
paper,
gold,
silver,
steel,
glass,
cotton,
bamboo…
Makers:
worker,
farmer,
craftsman…
（工匠，手艺人，技工）
description
words:
popular,
special,
traditional,
local,
delicious,
comfortable,
lively,
famous,
difficult,
…
表达储备
短语链
句式链
被动语态
词汇链
Pre-writing
短语翻译
以……而出名
由……制成的
由哪里制造的
由谁制造的
被用来做……
据说……
……的象征
被视为……
be
famous
for
be
made
in
be
made
by
be
used
for
doing
sth
It
is
said
that…
be
made
of
/from
the
symbol
of…
be
seen
as…
Pre-writing
表达储备
短语链
句式链
被动语态
词汇链
Pre-writing
翻译句子
通榆以糖葫芦而闻名。
华为手机是由中国制造的。
据说它有100多年的历史。
纸是由木头制成的。
糖葫芦是被用来吃的。
它是由手工制作的。
它被视为幸福和团圆的象征
Tongyu
is
famous
for
Tanghulu.
Huawei
mobile
phone
is
made
in
China
.
It
is
said
that
it
has
a
history
of
more
than
100
years
.
Paper
is
made
from
wood.
Tanghulu
is
used
for
eating.
It
is
made
by
hand.
It
is
seen
as
the
symbol
of
happiness
and
reunion(团圆）.
Pre-writing
表达储备
短语链
句式链
被动语态
词汇链
Pre-writing
一般现在时被动语态
肯定句结构
否定句结构
一般疑问句结构
主语
+
am
/is
/
are
+过去分词
主语
+
am
/is
/
are
+not
+过去分词
Am
/Is
/
Are
+
主语
+过去分词
Pre-writing
3a
What
are
some
special
things
that
your
hometown
or
city
is
famous
for?
Discuss
with
a
partner
and
take
notes.
pair
Work
while-writing
What
the
product
is
What
it
is
made
of
/
from
Who
it
is
made
by
Where
it
is
made
What
it
can
do
Why
it
is
special
Suzhou
made
of
real
silk
and
it
is
soft,
light
and
comfortable
silk
quilt
silk
silk
factory
workers
keep
you
warm
and
comfortable
Tell
the
body
of
your
article
Body
while-writing
How
to
write
the
beginning
of
the
article
My
city
is
famous
for
Tanghulu.It
is
a
kind
of
traditional
snacks
.I'll
tell
you
something
about
it.…
Tanghulu
is
one
of
the
most
famous
snacks
in
my
city.
More
and
more
people
like
eating
it
.Do
you
want
to
know
something
about
it.…
while-writing
How
to
write
the
ending
of
the
article
I
like
eating
Tanghulu
very
much.Are
you
looking
forward
to
eating
it？I'll
treat
you
Tanghulu.
It
is
seen
as
a
symbol
of
happiness
and
reunion（团圆）.
Come
to
Tongyu.Let's
eat
it
together.
while-writing
Beautify
your
article
while-writing
珍珠词汇，点缀文章
漂亮句型，优化文章
谚语名言，增色文章
Name:
Tanghulu
Taste:
sweet
,a
little
sour，
delicious.
Materials:
haws,
grapes,
sweet
potatoes，
ice
sugar
and
so
on
Usage（用途）:
It
is
good
food
for
all
ages.we
can
eat
it
when
hanging
out.It
is
a
good
way
to
relax
when
we
feel
tired...
Symbol:
happiness
and
reunion（团圆）
请根据所给材料，以糖葫芦为题写一篇文章。100词左右。
Maker:
craftsman（手艺人，技工）
History
:
it
has
a
history
of
more
than
800
years
while-writing
while-writing
海阔凭鱼跃，天高任鸟飞
通读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
post-writing
2019中考评分标准:
第五档:(14-15分)圆满地完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，结构合理，语言流畅，语句优美，思路清晰，逻辑性强。能使用较为丰富的句子结构和词汇，基本上无语法和词汇错误，书写规范工整。
第四档:(l1-13分)较好地完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，中心明确，结构较为合理，语宫较为流畅。意思表述清楚，虽有个别语法和词汇错误但不影响理解，书写较为规范工整。
第三档:(8-10分)基本完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，但结构欠合理，少数语句意思表述不够清楚，语法和词汇错误较少但不影响理解，书写基本规范。
第二档:(5-7分)未能按要求完成规定的写作任务，只包含提示中的部分要点，结构不合理，多数语句意思表述不够清楚，语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解，书写欠规范。
第一档:(0-4分)只写出个别词语，结构不完整，多数语句不完整或意思不明，内容不可读，语法和词汇错误很多，书写混乱。
评分要求:1以上所给的例文仅供样式参考，阅卷教师不要受例文中所述内容的限制，文章表述合理即可。
2.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中应包含提示中的两个要点:(1)个人信息与兴趣爱好:(2)梦想职业与
个人计划。每个要点，如未提及，每点扣2分。
Unit
5　What
are
the
shirts
made
of?writing
详写
写
后
凝
练
图：
具体描述
概括介绍：________is
one
of
the
most
famous
product
in
my
town
/
city
./My
city
is
famous
for….
点滴评价:It
is
special
because…
/be
seen
as
a
symbol
of…
be
made
of/from…
be
made
in…
be
made
by…
be
used
for…
It
is
said
that…
post-writing
一、根据思维导图完善3a的写作。
二、假定你是李华，自制一些中国结(Chinese
knot)。给开网店的美国
朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：
1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2.象征意义
3.价格
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
HOMEWORK