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读后续写之如何续写故事开头
一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
【典例赏析】
Carefully,?he
stepped
over
all
the
broken
glass.
Joyfully?he
skipped
up
the
street.
【真题再现】
Para
1：?(2016.
10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Immediately,
an
absolute
darkness
ruled
the
forest.?（时间副词衔接+环境描写）
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
【典例赏析】
Curious
to
know
what
was
inside,
he
tiptoed
into
the
dark
cave.
Unable
to
say
a
word,
he
was
rooted
to
the
spot.
【真题再现】
?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Desperate
and
hopeless,?Jane?knelt
down,
tears
streaming
down
her
face.?（并列情绪形容词）
?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:?It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Weak
as
she
was,
she
struggled
to
her
feet,
continuing
searching
for?assistance.?（状态形容词+as/though
引导的倒装句）
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:
?Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.?Afraid
that
I
might
hurt
the
lovely
small
creature,
I
automatically
let
out
a
cry
to
stop
my
horse.?(情绪形容词+从句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:
We
had
no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.?Exhausted
and
hungry,
I
wondered
if
we
could
find
our
way
back.?
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
【典例赏析】
Looking?around
him
cautiously,
he
slipped
into
the
room
and
softly
closed
the
door.
Exhausted,
he
was
glad
the
race
was
finally
over.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)
Para1:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Feeling
disappointed,?Jane?had
to
stay
alone
for
another
night.?（现在分词+情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)
Para
2:?It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Feeling
refreshed,?she
continued
to
walk
along
the?stream?to
find
the
way
out.（现在分词+状态形容词）
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
【典例赏析】
As
he
walked,
he
whistled
Although
he
was
afraid,
he
jumped
right
in.
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
【典例赏析】
At
the
end
of
the
lane?he
suddenly
stopped.
At
the
sight
of
the
snake,
the
little
girl
screamed
at
the
top
of
her
voice.
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
【典例赏析】
“Let’s
see
who
gets
there
first!”?Rachel
shouted,
as
she
pedaled
fast
and
zoomed
past
Jenny.
“Hold
on
tight!”?My
father
yelled.
We
just
finished
bucking
in
as
the
coaster
jerked
into
motion.
This
was
my
first
roller
coaster
ride.
【真题再现】
(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.?"Get
into
the
car."?Paul
shouted
at
Mac.?
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
【典例赏析】
Mark
is
a
studious
boy
who
loves
reading.
His
classmates
often
tease
him
for
being
too
hardworking
and
they
call
him
Mr.
Smart.One
afternoon,
while
studying
at
home…
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
【典例赏析】
The
moment
she
saw
how
she
did
for
her
Science
test,?tears
started
welling
up
in
Tina’s
eyes
and
falling
down
her
cheeks.
9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
【典例赏析】
I?closed
my
eyes
to
enjoy
the
gentle
breeze
and
the
sounds
of
the
clashing
waves.?Gently
opening
my
eyes,
I
saw
my
parents
taking?a
relaxing
stroll
along
the
beach.
The
cave
was
dark
and
everything
was
silent.
I
couldn’t
even
see
my
hand
in
front
of
my
face.?I
knew
this
adventure
was
going
to
be
something
that
I
would
never
forget.
【真题再现】
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:?We
drove
through
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.?I
looked
out
of
the
car
window,
winding
rivers,
lofty
mountains,
sunny
beaches
and
deep
valleys
holding
me
entirely
in
their
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）
10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
【典例赏析】
Furry?started
wagging
his
tail
and
running
around
in
circles?when
he
saw
his
master
taking
a
leash
out
from
the
drawer.
Furry
was
all
ready
for
his
evening
walk.
【真题再现】
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?The
next
day
we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.?Dad?exchanged
a
glance
with
me.
Why
not
camp
to
satisfy?Mom???（动作描写+问句衔接）
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
【典例赏析】
BOOM,
CRASH!?The
wind
was
howling
outside
of
my
house.
We
were
having
a
terrible
thunder
storm.
I
was
very
scared.
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考
【典例赏析】
Have
you
ever
been
on
a
self-driving
trip??Let
me
tell
you
an
exciting
trip
my
family
took
this
summer.
Why
does
trouble
always
follow
me
around?
Do
I
have
a
"kick
me"
sign
on
my
back
or
something?
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）??
【检测训练】
1.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys
like
to
be
considered
to
be
brave,
but
what
kind
of
things
can
be
considered
to
be
brave?
It
is
not
a
question
that
can
be
answered
by
words,
but
by
the
actual
deed.
A
boy
with
the
name
Henry
gave
us
a
good
example.
Ronny
and
Henry
were
two
friends
in
the
same
class.
They
always
played
together
and
went
home
together.
One
day
as
Ronny
and
Henry
were
going
home
after
school,
they
saw
some
people
fighting
in
the
street
corner.
Ronny
said
excitedly,
“Some
people
are
fighting!
Let’s
go
and
have
a
look!”
But
Henry
refused,
“It’s
none
of
our
business.
We’d
better
go
home
and
don’t
get
close
to
them.
Also
our
parents
are
expecting
to
have
dinner
with
us
together
at
home
and
I
don’t
want
them
to
worry
about
me.”
“You
are
a
coward,
and
afraid
to
go,”
said
Ronny,
and
off
he
ran
to
the
spot
with
some
other
boys.
Henry
had
to
go
home
alone
and
didn't
think
about
it
anymore.
But
Ronny
thought
Henry
was
a
coward
and
told
all
the
boys
that.
They
laughed
at
him
a
great
deal.
From
then
on,
they
looked
down
upon
Henry
and
didn’t
want
to
play
with
him.
Henry
was
sad
but
he
wasn’t
angry
with
Ronny
for
his
rude
behavior,
because
he
had
learned
that
true
courage
was
shown
most
in
bearing
misunderstanding
when
it
was
not
deserved,
and
that
he
ought
to
be
afraid
of
nothing
but
doing
wrong.
Thus,
he
just
ignored
the
other
boys’
laughter
and
continued
to
stick
to
his
thought
and
go
to
school
and
study
as
well.
However,
Ronny
didn’t
invite
Henry
to
go
home
with
him
anymore.
Instead,
he
had
his
new
friends
who
also
thought
Henry
was
a
coward.
Every
day
after
school,
they
didn't
go
home
directly
but
went
to
the
river
or
somewhere
to
play
games
and
had
lots
of
fun.
注意：
1.
所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
Paragraph
1:
A
few
days
later,
something
terrible
happened
to
Ronny.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
At
that
moment,
Henry
happened
to
pass
by.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
A
few
days
later,
something
terrible
happened
to
Ronny.
That
afternoon
after
school,
Ronny
was
bathing
with
some
of
his
new
friends
in
the
river
happily.
Suddenly,
he
was
stuck
in
the
mud
and
couldn’t
get
out.
He
struggled
hard
but
he
was
still
trapped.
He
screamed
for
help,
but
all
in
vain.
The
boys
who
had
called
Henry
a
coward
got
out
of
the
water
as
fast
as
they
could.
They
were
so
scared
and
did
not
even
try
to
help
him.
At
that
moment,
Henry
happened
to
pass
by.
He
heard
the
screams
and
ran
to
the
river
as
soon
as
possible.
Seeing
Ronny
was
almost
drowned,
Henry
took
off
his
clothes
immediately
and
jumped
into
the
water
without
any
hesitation.
He
reached
Ronny
just
as
he
was
sinking
the
last
time.
With
great
effort,
and
with
much
danger
to
himself,
he
brought
Ronny
to
the
shore
in
time.
Henry
was
happy
to
help
his
friend,
though
he
was
extremely
tired.
【写作分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章中的男孩亨利因为没有和朋友罗尼一起去凑热闹看别人打架，而被罗尼叫做懦夫并且受到了排挤，但亨利知道真正的勇气体现在容忍不该容忍的误解，罗尼的新朋友们也都觉得亨利是个懦夫。几天后，罗尼和新朋友们在河里洗澡时，不小心陷在泥里，他的新朋友们没有帮助他，而亨利在路过时听到了求救声后用尽他的力气帮助了罗尼。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几天后，在罗尼身上发生了可怕的事情”可知，第一段可描写罗尼遇到的可怕事情，同时承接上文中罗尼交往了一些新朋友的剧情，描写罗尼的新朋友在他遇到可怕事情时候的反应，如新朋友们看到罗尼陷入困境时一个个都赶紧离开。
②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，亨利碰巧经过。”可知，第二段可描写亨利在看到罗尼遭到不好事情时的反应。前文提到罗尼嘲笑亨利是个懦夫，但在这一段可描写亨利的勇敢救人的行为，以形成情节上的转折。
2.续写线索：罗尼陷入困境——朋友逃离现场——亨利及时出手相助——帮助罗尼非常高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
①困住；陷入：be
stuck
in/
be
trapped
in/
get
stuck
②尽快：as
soon
as
possible/
as
quickly
as
possible/
at
the
first
opportunity
③挣扎；奋斗；努力：struggle/
strive/
conflict
情绪类
①开心地：happily/with
pleasure
②徒然；无效：in
vain/
for
nothing/of
no
effect
③非常；极其；极端地：extremely/
badly/highly/greatly
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
The
boys
who
had
called
Henry
a
coward
got
out
of
the
water
as
fast
as
they
could.
（who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Seeing
Ronny
was
almost
drowned,
Henry
took
off
his
clothes
immediately
and
jumped
into
the
water
without
any
hesitation.（现在分词作状语）
2.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I
took
a
job
as
a
receptionist
for
a
veterinarian
weeks
ago.
As
an
enthusiastic
animal
lover,
I
accepted
the
position
on
the
condition
that
I
wouldn’t
have
to
assist
with
any
wounded
animals.
I
couldn’t
bear
to
see
any
creature
in
pain.
At
the
end
of
my
first
week,
we
were
about
to
close
the
office
for
the
day
when
a
young
man
in
his
thirties
ran
up
to
us
holding
a
severely
injured
Doberman
pinscher
puppy
in
his
arms
and
begging
us
to
save
his
life.
The
four-month-old
pup
had
been
hit
by
a
car.
The
doctor
and
I
rushed
back
into
the
operating
room
immediately.
The
poor
creature
was
in
critical
condition.
The
only
place
the
skin
was
still
attached
to
this
poor
little
animal’s
body
was
around
one
shoulder.
The
vet
worked
tirelessly
for
what
seemed
like
hours,
stitching
him
back
together
again.
That
was
the
easy
part.
The
puppy
had
broken
multiple
bones,
including
his
spine.
If
he
was
lucky
enough
to
survive
the
next
few
days,
we
were
quite
sure
he
would
never
walk
again.
The
day
forever
changed
my
life.
The
veterinarian
instructed
me,
and
I
became
his
assistant
in
all
things
medical.
One
of
my
first
jobs
was
to
give
that
Doberman
puppy
daily
physical
therapy.
I
moved
his
tiny
legs
on
a
regular
basis
to
keep
his
muscles
from
weakening.
Weeks
went
by
until
one
day,
I
felt
this
little
fighter
push
back
ever
so
slightly.
And
he
continued
to
push
back
till
he
could
finally
use
his
legs.
What
a
miracle!
Day
by
day,
the
little
fighter
made
a
little
bit
progress
until
the
vet
called
his
owner
telling
him
that
his
puppy
was
ready
to
go
home.
Having
accompanied
the
puppy
for
several
months,
I
could
imagine
how
excited
and
relieved
the
young
man
was.
And
I
was
sure
he
would
took
good
care
of.
Two
days
later,
the
puppy
was
taken
away
by
his
owner.
1.
所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph
1:
About
a
year
passed,
I
walked
into
the
clinic’s
crowded
waiting
room.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
I
went
on
to
be
a
vet
tech
for
14
years,
and
since
retirement,
I’ve
volunteered
at
a
no-kill
animal
shelter.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
About
a
year
passed,
I
walked
into
the
clinic’s
crowded
waiting
room.
I
called
the
name
of
the
next
client.
Suddenly,
a
huge
Doberman
who
had
been
standing
quietly
with
his
owner
on
the
opposite
side
of
the
room
broke
loose
and
rushed
toward
me.
I
found
myself
pinned
against
the
wall
with
this
magnificent
dog
standing
on
his
hind
legs,
his
front
paws
on
my
shoulders,
washing
my
face
with
abundant
and
joyful
kisses!
Paragraph
2:
I
went
on
to
be
a
vet
tech
for
14
years,
and
since
retirement,
I’ve
volunteered
at
a
no-kill
animal
shelter.
Being
a
vet
technician
and
volunteer
at
a
no-kill
animal
shelter,
I
succeeded
in
saving
more
animals,
which
often
made
me
think
of
the
grateful
huge
Doberman.
Although
many
years
have
passed,
I
still
shed
tears
in
amazement
at
the
display
of
love
and
gratitude
the
dog
had
for
me.
All
the
dogs
knew
they
had
been
rescued
by
me
and
they
were
grateful
to
me.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家兽医那里找了一份前台接待员的工作，在作者工作的第一个星期结束的时候，诊所里来了一只受重伤的杜宾犬小狗，作者成为了兽医的助手，照顾好了小狗。一年后杜宾犬再次来到诊所，热情地亲吻作者，作者退休后仍然在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者，仍然为这只狗对自己的爱和感激而流泪。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大约一年过去了，我走进诊所拥挤的候诊室。”可知，第一段可描写被作者救治过的杜宾犬再次回到诊所的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我做了14年的兽医技师，退休后，我在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者。”可知，第二段可描写作者成为志愿者后的所作所为以及感悟
2.续写线索：作者走进候诊室——杜宾犬向作者表示感激——作者退休成为志愿者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
走进：walk
into/step
into
继续：go
on/continue
to
时间逝去：pass/
go
by
情绪类
感谢：gratitude/be
grateful/
appreciation
快乐：joyful
/happy
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
Suddenly,
a
huge
Doberman
who
had
been
standing
quietly
with
his
owner
on
the
opposite
side
of
the
room
broke
loose
and
rushed
toward
me.
(运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Being
a
vet
technician
and
volunteer
at
a
no-kill
animal
shelter,
I
succeeded
in
saving
more
animals,
which
often
made
me
think
of
the
grateful
huge
Doberman.
(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My
school
had
a
tradition
during
the
ninth-grade
graduation:
a
beautiful
gold
and
green
jacket
(the
school
colors),
was
awarded
to
the
student
who
had
maintained
the
highest
grades
for
nine
years.
I
had
been
a
straight
A
student
since
the
first
grade
and
had
looked
forwards
very
much
to
owning
that
jacket.
My
father
was
a
farm
laborer
who
couldn't
earn
enough
money
to
feed
five
children.
I
was
given
to
my
grandparents
to
raise.
There
would
never
be
a
school
sports
jacket
for
us.
This
scholarship
jacket
was
my
only
chance.
One
day
in
May,
I
happened
to
overhear
in
the
office.
Mr.
Schmidt,
my
history
teacher,
and
Mr.
Boone,
my
math
teacher
arguing
about
me.
“I
refuse
to
do
it!
I
don't
care
who
her
father
is；her
grades
can't
match
Martha's
at
all.
I
won't
lie
or
falsify
(伪造)records.”
said
Mr.
Schmidt
angrily.
But
Mr.
Boone's
voice
sounded
calm.
“Joann's
father
is
not
only
on
the
Board
(董事会),
he
owns
the
only
store
in
town:
we
could
say
it
was
a
close
tie
and…”
Shaking
and
sad,
I,
waited
a
few
minutes
and
walked
away.
The
next
day
when
the
principal
called
me
into
his
office.
“Martha,”
he
said,
“There's
been
a
change
in
policy
this
year
regarding
the
scholarship
jacket.
This
year
the
Board
has
decided
to
charge
fifteen
dollars,
which
still
won't
cover
the
complete
cost
of
the
jacket.
So
if
you
are
unable
to
pay
the
money
for
the
jacket,
it
will
be
given
to
the
next
one
in
line.”
Standing
with
all
the
dignity
I
could
find,
I
said，“I'll
speak
to
my
grandfather
about
it,
sir,
and
let
you
know
tomorrow.”
I
cried
on
the
way
home.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph
1:
By
the
time
I
got
home,
my
eyes
were
red
and
swollen.
I
found
my
grandpa
in
the
bean
field.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
I
dragged
into
the
principal’s
office
the
next
day,
sad
and
disappointed.
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【参考范文】
Paragraph
1：
By
the
time
I
got
home,
my
eyes
were
red
and
swollen.
I
found
my
grandpa
in
the
bean
field.?Sensing
something
wrong,
he
asked
me
what
happened
with
great
concern.?I
murmured
the
principal’s
words,
a
surge
of
regret
gnawing
at
my
heart.
I
really
hated
to
see
my
gray-haired
Grandpa’s
disappointment.
Grandpa’s
eyes
rounded
in
disbelief.?Time
ticking
by,
he
heaved
a
long
sigh,
“My
child,
an
award
bought
can’t
be
called
an
award.”?I
nodded
understandingly.
But
who
knew
how
reluctant
and
bitter
I
was?
Paragraph
2：
I
dragged
into
the
principal’s
office
the
next
day,
sad
and
disappointed.?My
head
still
lifted
with
dignity,
I
tried
to
fight
back
the
tears,
stammering,
“I
cannot…afford
the
jacket,
sir.”?Staring
into
my
eyes,
the
principal
suddenly
grinned,
“I
have
good
news
for
you.”
I
looked
at
him
in
confusion.
“The
board
decided
that
an
award
cannot
be
bought
just
for
the
sake
of
winners’
dignity.”
His
eyes
brimmed
with
smiles.
I
pinched
my
hand
only
to
find
I
was
not
dreaming.
Only
at
that
moment
did
I
believe
that
Mr.
Schmidt
and
my
grandpa
were
right:
never
can
awards
be
falsified
or
bought.
(162
words)
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的学校在九年级的毕业典礼上会奖励一件漂亮的金绿色的夹克给9年来成绩最好的学生，作者一直是优等生，渴望得到那件夹克，但是偶然听到Mr.
Schmidt老师和校长争论夹克到底给她还是Joann。后来祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。校长最后也把夹克奖给了作者。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“当我回到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆地里找到了祖父。”可知，第一段可描写作者告诉了祖父发生的一切，祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。
②.由第二段首句内容“第二天，我拖着沉重的脚步走进校长办公室，既伤心又失望。”可知，第二段可描写作者伤心地告诉校长自己买不起夹克，但是校长最后还是把夹克奖给了作者。
2.续写线索：找到祖父——告诉发生的事——作者心理情绪——祖父叹息感慨——走到校长办公室——告诉校长买不起——校长更改主意——作者得到夹克
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.低声说：murmur/
say
in
a
low
voice/
mutter
②.看着：stare
into/
look
at/
watch
情绪类
①.难以置信：in
disbelief/
incredibly/
unbelievably
②.失望：disappointment/
despair/
frustration
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1].
Sensing
something
wrong,
he
asked
me
what
happened
with
great
concern.
（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2].
I
pinched
my
hand
only
to
find
I
was
not
dreaming.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作find的宾语）
[高分句型3].
Only
at
that
moment
did
I
believe
that
Mr.
Schmidt
and
my
grandpa
were
right:
never
can
awards
be
falsified
or
bought.（运用了部分倒装句和由that引导的宾语从句作believe的宾语）
4.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In
our
kitchen,
there
was
a
wooden
table
and
three
chairs
—
one
for
Dad,
one
for
Mom,
and
one
for
me.
In
the
cellar
(地窖),
the
very
last
jar
of
apple
jam
lay
quietly
on
the
shelf,
waiting
to
be
turned
into
an
apple
pie
when
Dad
came
back.
Mom
sat
at
one
end
of
the
table.
I
sat
in
the
middle
between
her
and
Dad.
I
tried
not
to
look
at
Dad’s
empty
place.
Dad
had
gone
to
the
city
to
look
for
work
for
a
long
time.
Every
night,
I
lay
awake
in
bed
and
waited
for
the
train
to
stop.
Waited
to
hear
the
creaky
(嘎吱作响的)
gate
Dad’s
going
to
fix
when
he
came
home.
Waited
to
hear
the
sound
of
his
work
boots
dropping
on
the
step
by
the
kitchen
door,
and
his
voice
calling,
“I’m
home!”
Every
night,
as
I
lay
there,
I
stared
at
the
window
and
the
curtains
Mom
made
from
empty
flour
sacks
(麻布袋).
Every
night,
Mom
came
to
kiss
me
good-night
—
after
the
train’s
gone
by.
She
had
been
listening,
too.
“Go
to
sleep.
Your
dad
will
be
home
soon.
Maybe
for
Thanksgiving.”
Time
dragging
by,
it
finally
came
the
day
before
Thanksgiving.
I
went
to
sleep
with
the
sound
of
train
wheels
in
my
head,
whispering,
“Maybe
tomorrow,
maybe
tomorrow.”
Early
the
next
morning,
the
smell
of
coffee
woke
me.
I
ran
into
the
kitchen.
There
he
was!
Dad
lifted
me
onto
his
shoulders
and
pretended
to
stagger
from
my
weight.
“How’s
my
boy?
You’ve
gotten
so
big
that
I
can
barely
lift
you
up
anymore.”
He
put
me
down,
and
I
stared
at
the
two
sacks
on
the
table.
One
said
FLOUR
—
I
knew
that
word.
I
tried
reading
the
other:
S-U-G-A-R.
Dad
whistled
admiringly
and
winked
at
me.
Mom
and
I
had
been
practicing
my
letters
most
days.
I
could
see
that
Mom
was
pleased
with
me.
“I’m
going
to
bake
a
pie
for
your
dad’s
homecoming
dinner.
Jimmy,
bring
me
that
jar
of
apple
jam
from
the
shelf
in
the
cellar.”
Mom
smiled
at
me.
注意:
1.
续写词数应为150左右:
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing
this,
I
took
the
steps
two
at
a
time
to
the
cellar.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Never
mind,
boy,
accidents
happen,”
Dad
said
and
wiped
my
tears.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Possible
version
1:
Hearing
this,
I
took
the
steps
two
at
a
time
to
the
cellar.
The
next
second
I
was
in
front
of
the
shelf.
I
stood
on
tiptoe
and
took
down
the
jar
carefully.
I
could
hear
Dad
and
Mom
laughing
upstairs
and
Mom’s
hands
slapping
the
dough.
Wanting
to
join
them,
I
hurried
up
the
steps,
and
my
foot
caught
on
the
middle
one.
I
put
out
my
hand
to
steady
myself,
but
I
tumbled
down.
The
jar
slipped
through
my
fingers
and
smashed
on
the
floor.
The
jam
we’d
been
saving
and
saving
flew
everywhere.
Wrong-footed,
I
burst
into
tears
and
heard
Dad’s
footsteps
closer
and
closer.
“Never
mind,
boy,
accidents
happen,”
Dad
said
and
wiped
my
tears.
These
words
seemed
to
have
magic
and
gradually
I
settled
down.
Through
the
shirt,
I
could
smell
the
dust
of
the
train
and
the
city
as
well
as
that
of
Dad’s.
How
I
wished
I
hadn’t
hurried.
“Next
time
I
will
be
more
careful,”
I
thought
to
myself.
Having
swiftly
dealt
with
the
mess,
Dad
lifted
me
onto
his
shoulder
and
went
back
to
Mom.
“Now
out
of
the
kitchen,
you
two,”
Mom
said,
“I'm
going
to
bake
my
mama’s
sugar
pie,
without
apple
jam!”
I
followed
Dad
out
and
helped
him
fix
that
old
creaking
gate
until
Ma
called
us
in
for
Thanksgiving
dinner.
Possible
version
2:
Hearing
this,
I
took
the
steps
two
at
a
time
to
the
cellar.
“No
problem.”
I
jumped
at
the
request
and
rushed
downstairs.
The
jar
just
stood
quietly
on
the
shelf,
but
it
seemed
a
bit
high.
I
climbed
up
the
chair
nearby
and
extended
my
arms
as
long
as
possible.
When
I
just
grasped
the
jar,
I
lost
my
balance
and
fell
down.
I
couldn’t
help
crying.
What
made
me
sad
was
not
the
pain
but
the
jam
—
now
scattered
everywhere.
There
came
Dad’s
footsteps
and
Mom’s
voice,
“Are
you
hurt?”
I
shook
my
head
slightly.
She
helped
me
up
and
asked
me
to
go
upstairs.
With
heavy
footsteps,
I
moved
slowly
and
tears
welled
up
in
my
eyes.
“Never
mind,
boy,
accidents
happen,”
Dad
said
and
wiped
my
tears.
“But
I
ruined
your
homecoming
dinner.”
Sorrow
overwhelmed
me
and
I
kept
sobbing.
“No,
my
son,”
Dad
smiled
gently,
“My
homecoming
dinner
is
not
about
pies,
but
about
you
and
Mom.”
Hearing
this,
I
stopped
sobbing,
“But
what
can
we
eat
tonight?”
“How
about
an
apple
pie
without
apple
jam?”
Mom
came
upstairs
and
cut
in.
Dad
and
I
exchanged
a
glance
and
nodded.
After
a
while,
I
found
myself
sitting
in
the
chair,
but
this
time,
I
sat
in
the
middle
between
Dad
and
Mom.
(We
can
go
without
apple
jam.
Why
not
make
a
pie
with
apple
jam?)
(…but
this
time,
I
sat
with
Dad
on
the
left
and
Mom
on
the
right.)
Possible
version
3:
Hearing
this,
I
took
the
steps
two
at
a
time
to
the
cellar.
“Yes!
Madam.”
I
saluted,
acting
as
if
I
were
a
solider.
I
ran
downstairs
as
fast
as
my
legs
could
carry
me.
After
a
while,
I
jumped
upstairs
with
the
jar
in
both
hands,
humming
a
joyful
tune.
But
after
I
handed
the
jar
to
Mom,
things
went
crazy.
Mom
was
busy
slapping
the
dough
and
asked
me
to
pass
her
the
sugar.
Instead
of
scooping
a
bowl
of
it,
I
held
the
sack
up.
Just
at
that
very
moment,
the
sugar
sack
slipped
away
and
all
the
sugar
ended
up
on
the
mud
floor.
Realizing
I
spoiled
Dad’s
homecoming
dinner,
I
burst
into
tears.
“Never
mind,
boy,
accidents
happen,”
Dad
said
and
wiped
my
tears.
“I
meant
to
help,”
I
whimpered,
“but...
I
should
have
scooped
some
of
it...”
Dad
squatted
down
and
brushed
the
hair
out
of
my
eyes.
“Next
time
it
will
just
be
fine.”
I
looked
into
Dad’s
eyes
and
nodded.
Dad
lifted
me
onto
his
shoulder
and
turned
to
Mom,
“Dear,
can
we
make
a
sugar-free
apple
pie?”
Mom,
who
had
been
watching
us
lovingly,
replied
“Of
course!”
and
began
to
work
on
it.
On
that
Thanksgiving
evening,
beside
the
wooden
table
sat
three
of
us,
I
myself
between
Mom
and
Dad.
Though
sugar-free,
the
apple
pie
tasted
sweeter
than
ever
before.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。所给文章为记叙文，以苹果酱和苹果派为线索。作者家的厨房中有一张木桌和三把椅子，分别是爸爸的妈妈的和作者的。爸爸出门务工，每当地窖中的最后一瓶苹果酱被放到桌上，等待被做成苹果派的时候，就是爸爸回家的时候。作者和妈妈每个晚上都在等爸爸回家。感恩节的时候爸爸终于回家了，妈妈要给爸爸做苹果派，并让作者去把地窖的苹果酱拿出来。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写
第一段首句内容为“听到这话，我一两步走到地窖”。可知，第一段可描写作者听了母亲话后去地窖拿苹果酱的经历。
第二点首句内容为“没关系，孩子，意外总会发生的，”爸爸说着擦干了我的眼泪。可知，第二段可能描写作者在拿苹果酱时发生了意外后，爸爸妈妈给作者的安慰。
2.续写线索：急匆匆拿果酱——摔了一跤——爸爸安慰——妈妈接着做水果派
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①形容加快步伐/步伐很快：take
the
steps
two
at
a
time/hurry
up
the
steps
②突然…起来：burst
into
tears/
burst
into
laughter
情感类
平静下来：settle
down/calm
down
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
How
I
wished
I
hadn’t
hurried.（用虚拟语气表达后悔，惋惜的情绪）
[高分句型2]
Having
swiftly
dealt
with
the
mess,
Dad
lifted
me
onto
his
shoulder
and
went
back
to
Mom.（分词短语作状语，可模仿性高）
[高分句型3]
I
followed
Dad
out
and
helped
him
fix
that
old
creaking
gate
until
Ma
called
us
in
for
Thanksgiving
dinner.（until引导的时间状语从句）
5.
阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It
was
an
Art
lesson.
Rachel
sat
at
the
desk
watching
her
classmates
busy
preparing
the
water
jars
and
paints.
She
understood
why
Mrs.
Weston
asked
her
to
sit
down
and
got
Lisa
to
fetch
everything
for
her.
It
was
always
a
disaster
when
Rachel
tried
to
do
Art!
Rachel
sighed
and
reached
out
to
dip
her
brush
in
some
black
paint
and—oh,
no!
She
knocked
over
the
jar.
The
water
spread
across
the
desk
and
drowned
the
paper.
Lisa
called
Mrs.
Weston
to
see
what
Rachel
had
done.
Rachel
went
red
in
the
face.
She
jumped
to
her
feet
to
get
a
cloth.
Her
chair
fell
over
backwards.
She
turned
round
and
her
paintbrush
caught
Lisa
across
the
face,
giving
her
a
black
moustache.
Lisa
was
so
surprised
that
she
fell
back
against
a
wire
bookstand.
It
came
crashing
down
and
the
books
went
all
over
the
floor.
How
clumsy
(笨拙的)!
Rachel
thought
as
she
went
home
on
the
bus.
The
bus
stopped
outside
her
house.
She
jumped
up
and
her
elbow
(肘部)
knocked
a
woman’s
hat
right
over
her
eyes.
Oh,
no!
Rachel
said
sorry,
got
off
and
ran
indoors.
Mum
wasn’t
in
the
kitchen
but
lay
in
bed
as
she
caught
an
awful
cold.
Rachel
offered
to
make
a
cup
of
tea
but
Mum
would
rather
wait
for
Dad.
Rachel
sighed.
She
understood
Mum
was
afraid
she
would
spill
(溅出)
it.
“But
would
you
go
to
Mrs.
Willow
for
some
cold
cure?”
asked
Mum.
Rachel
turned
to
the
door
at
once.
“But
Rachel,
Mrs.
Willow’s
house
is
full
of
beautiful
things,
so
if
she
asks
you
to
come
in,
you’d
better
say
no.”
Rachel
sighed
and
ran
out.
Mrs.
Willow
was
an
old
lady
with
white
hair
and
sharp
blue
eyes
living
in
an
old
house.
She
opened
the
door
and
invited
her
in.
Rachel
said
why
she
came
and
that
she
preferred
to
wait
outside
remembering
her
mother’s
warning.
Mrs.
Willow
insisted
Rachel
come
inside.
Rachel
took
a
deep
breath
and
stepped
in.
She
looked
round
Mrs.
Willow’s
sitting
room
and
saw
at
once
why
Mum
had
been
worried.
注意:
1.
续写词数应为150左右:
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph
1:
There
were
beautiful
things
everywhere—pretty
china
figures(瓷雕)
and
delicate
vases.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
With
a
smile
Mrs.
Willow
comforted
her
saying
it
had
been
broken
before.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Possible
Version
One:
There
were
beautiful
things
everywhere—pretty
china
figures
and
delicate
vases.
Rachel
stood
very
still,
afraid
of
knocking
something
over.
Mrs.
Willow
handed
Rachel
a
small
brown
bottle.
Rachel
couldn’t
wait
to
get
away,
feeling
any
minute
there
would
be
a
disaster.
She
thanked
her
and
turned
to
the
door
when
something
brushed
against
her
leg.
Rachel
was
so
surprised
that
she
jumped
backwards.
It
was
a
cat!
But
her
elbow
hit
a
vase
and
it
fell
to
the
floor,
broken.
How
awkward!
With
a
smile
Mrs.
Willow
comforted
her
saying
it
had
been
broken
before.
Rachel
sighed
and
stared
at
her.
“I
did,
when
I
was
young.
You
couldn’t
have
been
as
clumsy
as
I
was,”
Mrs.
Willow
said,
her
sharp
blue
eyes
shining.
“Keep
telling
yourself
you
are
a
swan
and
it
will
work.”
Rachel
doubtfully
said
that
several
times.
After
they
cleared
up
the
vase,
they
drank
tea
from
china
cups
and
ate
cakes
off
delicate
plates
and
Rachel
didn’t
break
another
thing.
It
was
a
kind
of
magic.
Rachel
smiled.
Possible
Version
Two:
There
were
beautiful
things
everywhere—pretty
china
figures
and
delicate
vases.
All
the
treasures
seemed
to
boast
a
long
history
and
thus
priceless.
“Wow,
it
is
really
a
land
of
wonder.”
Rachel
couldn’t
help
admiring
the
elegance
of
the
china
figures
and
vases.
Mom’s
words
echoing(重复)
in
her
mind,
curiosity
still
got
the
upper
hand(占上风).
She
reached
for
one
of
them,
but
unfortunately,
the
vase
slipped
off
her
hand
and
lay
in
pieces
on
the
floor.
Her
heart
missing
a
beat,
she
felt
terribly
worried.
With
a
smile
Mrs.
Willow
comforted
her
saying
it
had
been
broken
before.
Rachel
sighed
and
stared
at
her.
“No
worry
at
all.
It’ll
be
perfect
after
being
mended,”
Mrs.
Willow
said,
her
sharp
blue
eyes
shining.
“Nobody
grows
up
without
being
clumsy.”
Rachel
let
out
a
long
sigh
and
for
the
first
time
she
felt
good
about
her
clumsy
self.
She
believed
what
Mrs.
Willow
said
must
have
the
same
magic
as
her
special
cold
cure.
To
her
amazement,
she
returned
home
with
the
bottle
of
medicine
safe
and
sound.
【写作分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rachel是一个笨拙的人，总是会破坏周围的东西，一天Rachel的妈妈生病了，妈妈想让她去Mrs.
Willow家要一些感冒药，并嘱咐她Mrs.
Willow家里有很多精致的东西，最好不要进她的家门。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“到处都是美丽的东西——漂亮的瓷器和精致的花瓶。”可知，第一段可描写Rachel进了Mrs.
Willow家门后，行为举止很拘束，最后还是打碎了一个瓶子。
②由第二段首句内容“威洛太太微笑着安慰她说，它以前也坏过。”可知，第二段可描写Mrs.
Willow安慰了Rachel并很好地招待了她。
2.续写线索：Rachel害怕打碎东西——迫不及待想离开——感谢Mrs.
Willow——撞到了花瓶，花瓶碎了——Mrs.
Willow安慰Rachel——打扫花瓶——享受好的食物
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①迫不及待：can’t
wait
to
do
sth./be
eager
to
do
sth.
②打扫：clean
up/sweep
up
情绪类：
①害怕的：afraid/frightened
②感谢：thank/be
grateful
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
Rachel
was
so
surprised
that
she
jumped
backwards.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]
After
they
cleared
up
the
vase,
they
drank
tea
from
china
cups
and
ate
cakes
off
delicate
plates
and
Rachel
didn’t
break
another
thing.（after引导时间状语从句）
6.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I
am
a
doctor,
so
I
love
my
job.
I
always
have,
but
I
feel
particularly
proud
to
do
it
at
the
moment.
With
COVID-19
sweeping
through
Wuhan,
people
are
avoiding
hospitals
as
possible
they
can.
However,
pregnant
women
still
need
to
come
into
the
hospital.
Babies
still
need
to
be
born.
Right
now,
it
is
even
scarier
for
these
women,
as
they
have
to
come
in
on
their
own,
often
feeling
frightened.
Their
families
are
separated
from
them
due
to
safety
measures.
We’ve
always
provided
physical
support,
but
now
we
are
doing
so
on
a
different
level
—
we
also
have
to
keep
them
company
and
offer
emotional
support.
Unfortunately,
some
of
the
women
have
caught
corona-virus,
and
being
at
the
hospital
puts
me
at
risk.
Personally,
I
feel
protected
because
we
have
full
personal
protective
equipment,
which
we
wear
all
through
our
13-hour
shifts.
You
don’t
know
if
someone
is
carrying
corona-virus
or
not.
I
didn’t
want
to
put
my
family
in
danger
by
bringing
the
virus
home
and
possibly
passing
it
on
to
them.
As
a
single
parent
to
my
children,
Xiaohua,
12
years
old,
and
Xiaoyong,
9,
I
realized
I
had
to
make
a
very
tough
decision
about
my
family’s
safety
when
the
country
went
into
lockdown.
Giving
up
work
wasn’t
an
option
for
me.
I
wanted
to
be
able
to
look
after
the
women
who
were
feeling
poorly
and
very
scared,
but
I
could
not
leave
my
little
angels
behind
either.
At
this
point,
my
sister
suggested
that
the
children
stay
with
her
and
her
husband
for
the
time
being
and
leave
me
to
my
hospital
duties.
I
thought
it
was
a
great
idea,
so
we
set
a
date
for
her
to
pick
them
up.
When
I
explained
the
situation
to
my
angels
and
told
them
they
needed
to
stay
with
their
aunt
for
a
while,
they
both
seemed
upset,
but
agreed
to
go.
On
the
day
I
saw
them
off,
they
kept
looking
back
at
me
until
they
were
too
far
to
be
seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After
that,
my
workload
increased
because
some
of
my
coworkers
fell
ill.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A
week
later,
it
came
to
Xiaoyong’s
birthday.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
After
that,
my
workload
increased
because
some
of
my
coworkers
fell
ill.
We
had
to
work
double
shifts
and
my
life
was
dedicated
to
nothing
but
work.
Every
day
I
came
back
home
completely
exhausted
and
fell
asleep.
As
soon
as
I
woke
up,
I
needed
to
go
to
the
hospital.
I
poured
all
my
efforts
into
my
patients,
which
was
very
rewarding.
However,
it
troubled
me
that
I
didn’t
have
time
for
my
own
kids.
Xiaoyong
was
going
to
celebrate
his
birthday
soon.
I
had
to
do
something
to
make
up
for
him.
A
week
later,
it
came
to
Xiaoyong’s
birthday.
I
made
a
video
call
to
them
from
the
hospital.
I
greeted
them
on
the
screen
with
my
mask
and
goggles
on,
they
recognized
me
at
once,
shouting
excitedly.
I
took
the
phone
to
the
hall
where
my
coworkers
sang
“Happy
Birthday,
Xiaoyong!”
They
also
encouraged
him
to
be
strong,
and
a
grin
appeared
on
his
face.
My
children’s
understanding
and
my
coworker’s
support
gave
me
a
warm
feeling,
and
I
believe
nothing
could
ever
truly
separate
me
and
my
beloved
ones.
We
are
sure
to
win.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was
dedicated
to
/
was
devoted
to
②回家：came
back
home
/
returned
home
③打视频电话：made
a
video
call
/
video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble
/
worry
②兴奋地：excitedly
/
with?excitement
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1].
I
poured
all
my
efforts
into
my
patients,
which
was
very
rewarding.
(由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2].
However,
it
troubled
me
that
I
didn’t
have
time
for
my
own
kids.
(由that引导主语从句)36
读后续写之如何续写故事开头
一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
【典例赏析】
Carefully,?he
stepped
over
all
the
broken
glass.
Joyfully?he
skipped
up
the
street.
【真题再现】
Para
1：?(2016.
10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Immediately,
an
absolute
darkness
ruled
the
forest.?（时间副词衔接+环境描写）
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
【典例赏析】
Curious
to
know
what
was
inside,
he
tiptoed
into
the
dark
cave.
Unable
to
say
a
word,
he
was
rooted
to
the
spot.
【真题再现】
?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Desperate
and
hopeless,?Jane?knelt
down,
tears
streaming
down
her
face.?（并列情绪形容词）
?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:?It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Weak
as
she
was,
she
struggled
to
her
feet,
continuing
searching
for?assistance.?（状态形容词+as/though
引导的倒装句）
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:
?Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.?Afraid
that
I
might
hurt
the
lovely
small
creature,
I
automatically
let
out
a
cry
to
stop
my
horse.?(情绪形容词+从句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:
We
had
no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.?Exhausted
and
hungry,
I
wondered
if
we
could
find
our
way
back.?
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
【典例赏析】
Looking?around
him
cautiously,
he
slipped
into
the
room
and
softly
closed
the
door.
Exhausted,
he
was
glad
the
race
was
finally
over.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)
Para1:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Feeling
disappointed,?Jane?had
to
stay
alone
for
another
night.?（现在分词+情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)
Para
2:?It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Feeling
refreshed,?she
continued
to
walk
along
the?stream?to
find
the
way
out.（现在分词+状态形容词）
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
【典例赏析】
As
he
walked,
he
whistled
Although
he
was
afraid,
he
jumped
right
in.
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
【典例赏析】
At
the
end
of
the
lane?he
suddenly
stopped.
At
the
sight
of
the
snake,
the
little
girl
screamed
at
the
top
of
her
voice.
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
【典例赏析】
“Let’s
see
who
gets
there
first!”?Rachel
shouted,
as
she
pedaled
fast
and
zoomed
past
Jenny.
“Hold
on
tight!”?My
father
yelled.
We
just
finished
bucking
in
as
the
coaster
jerked
into
motion.
This
was
my
first
roller
coaster
ride.
【真题再现】
(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.?"Get
into
the
car."?Paul
shouted
at
Mac.?
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
【典例赏析】
Mark
is
a
studious
boy
who
loves
reading.
His
classmates
often
tease
him
for
being
too
hardworking
and
they
call
him
Mr.
Smart.One
afternoon,
while
studying
at
home…
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
【典例赏析】
The
moment
she
saw
how
she
did
for
her
Science
test,?tears
started
welling
up
in
Tina’s
eyes
and
falling
down
her
cheeks.
9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
【典例赏析】
I?closed
my
eyes
to
enjoy
the
gentle
breeze
and
the
sounds
of
the
clashing
waves.?Gently
opening
my
eyes,
I
saw
my
parents
taking?a
relaxing
stroll
along
the
beach.
The
cave
was
dark
and
everything
was
silent.
I
couldn’t
even
see
my
hand
in
front
of
my
face.?I
knew
this
adventure
was
going
to
be
something
that
I
would
never
forget.
【真题再现】
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
2:?We
drove
through
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.?I
looked
out
of
the
car
window,
winding
rivers,
lofty
mountains,
sunny
beaches
and
deep
valleys
holding
me
entirely
in
their
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）
10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
【典例赏析】
Furry?started
wagging
his
tail
and
running
around
in
circles?when
he
saw
his
master
taking
a
leash
out
from
the
drawer.
Furry
was
all
ready
for
his
evening
walk.
【真题再现】
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para
1:?The
next
day
we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.?Dad?exchanged
a
glance
with
me.
Why
not
camp
to
satisfy?Mom???（动作描写+问句衔接）
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
【典例赏析】
BOOM,
CRASH!?The
wind
was
howling
outside
of
my
house.
We
were
having
a
terrible
thunder
storm.
I
was
very
scared.
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考
【典例赏析】
Have
you
ever
been
on
a
self-driving
trip??Let
me
tell
you
an
exciting
trip
my
family
took
this
summer.
Why
does
trouble
always
follow
me
around?
Do
I
have
a
"kick
me"
sign
on
my
back
or
something?
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）??
【检测训练】
1.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys
like
to
be
considered
to
be
brave,
but
what
kind
of
things
can
be
considered
to
be
brave?
It
is
not
a
question
that
can
be
answered
by
words,
but
by
the
actual
deed.
A
boy
with
the
name
Henry
gave
us
a
good
example.
Ronny
and
Henry
were
two
friends
in
the
same
class.
They
always
played
together
and
went
home
together.
One
day
as
Ronny
and
Henry
were
going
home
after
school,
they
saw
some
people
fighting
in
the
street
corner.
Ronny
said
excitedly,
“Some
people
are
fighting!
Let’s
go
and
have
a
look!”
But
Henry
refused,
“It’s
none
of
our
business.
We’d
better
go
home
and
don’t
get
close
to
them.
Also
our
parents
are
expecting
to
have
dinner
with
us
together
at
home
and
I
don’t
want
them
to
worry
about
me.”
“You
are
a
coward,
and
afraid
to
go,”
said
Ronny,
and
off
he
ran
to
the
spot
with
some
other
boys.
Henry
had
to
go
home
alone
and
didn't
think
about
it
anymore.
But
Ronny
thought
Henry
was
a
coward
and
told
all
the
boys
that.
They
laughed
at
him
a
great
deal.
From
then
on,
they
looked
down
upon
Henry
and
didn’t
want
to
play
with
him.
Henry
was
sad
but
he
wasn’t
angry
with
Ronny
for
his
rude
behavior,
because
he
had
learned
that
true
courage
was
shown
most
in
bearing
misunderstanding
when
it
was
not
deserved,
and
that
he
ought
to
be
afraid
of
nothing
but
doing
wrong.
Thus,
he
just
ignored
the
other
boys’
laughter
and
continued
to
stick
to
his
thought
and
go
to
school
and
study
as
well.
However,
Ronny
didn’t
invite
Henry
to
go
home
with
him
anymore.
Instead,
he
had
his
new
friends
who
also
thought
Henry
was
a
coward.
Every
day
after
school,
they
didn't
go
home
directly
but
went
to
the
river
or
somewhere
to
play
games
and
had
lots
of
fun.
注意：
1.
所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
Paragraph
1:
A
few
days
later,
something
terrible
happened
to
Ronny.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
At
that
moment,
Henry
happened
to
pass
by.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I
took
a
job
as
a
receptionist
for
a
veterinarian
weeks
ago.
As
an
enthusiastic
animal
lover,
I
accepted
the
position
on
the
condition
that
I
wouldn’t
have
to
assist
with
any
wounded
animals.
I
couldn’t
bear
to
see
any
creature
in
pain.
At
the
end
of
my
first
week,
we
were
about
to
close
the
office
for
the
day
when
a
young
man
in
his
thirties
ran
up
to
us
holding
a
severely
injured
Doberman
pinscher
puppy
in
his
arms
and
begging
us
to
save
his
life.
The
four-month-old
pup
had
been
hit
by
a
car.
The
doctor
and
I
rushed
back
into
the
operating
room
immediately.
The
poor
creature
was
in
critical
condition.
The
only
place
the
skin
was
still
attached
to
this
poor
little
animal’s
body
was
around
one
shoulder.
The
vet
worked
tirelessly
for
what
seemed
like
hours,
stitching
him
back
together
again.
That
was
the
easy
part.
The
puppy
had
broken
multiple
bones,
including
his
spine.
If
he
was
lucky
enough
to
survive
the
next
few
days,
we
were
quite
sure
he
would
never
walk
again.
The
day
forever
changed
my
life.
The
veterinarian
instructed
me,
and
I
became
his
assistant
in
all
things
medical.
One
of
my
first
jobs
was
to
give
that
Doberman
puppy
daily
physical
therapy.
I
moved
his
tiny
legs
on
a
regular
basis
to
keep
his
muscles
from
weakening.
Weeks
went
by
until
one
day,
I
felt
this
little
fighter
push
back
ever
so
slightly.
And
he
continued
to
push
back
till
he
could
finally
use
his
legs.
What
a
miracle!
Day
by
day,
the
little
fighter
made
a
little
bit
progress
until
the
vet
called
his
owner
telling
him
that
his
puppy
was
ready
to
go
home.
Having
accompanied
the
puppy
for
several
months,
I
could
imagine
how
excited
and
relieved
the
young
man
was.
And
I
was
sure
he
would
took
good
care
of.
Two
days
later,
the
puppy
was
taken
away
by
his
owner.
1.
所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph
1:
About
a
year
passed,
I
walked
into
the
clinic’s
crowded
waiting
room.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
I
went
on
to
be
a
vet
tech
for
14
years,
and
since
retirement,
I’ve
volunteered
at
a
no-kill
animal
shelter.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My
school
had
a
tradition
during
the
ninth-grade
graduation:
a
beautiful
gold
and
green
jacket
(the
school
colors),
was
awarded
to
the
student
who
had
maintained
the
highest
grades
for
nine
years.
I
had
been
a
straight
A
student
since
the
first
grade
and
had
looked
forwards
very
much
to
owning
that
jacket.
My
father
was
a
farm
laborer
who
couldn't
earn
enough
money
to
feed
five
children.
I
was
given
to
my
grandparents
to
raise.
There
would
never
be
a
school
sports
jacket
for
us.
This
scholarship
jacket
was
my
only
chance.
One
day
in
May,
I
happened
to
overhear
in
the
office.
Mr.
Schmidt,
my
history
teacher,
and
Mr.
Boone,
my
math
teacher
arguing
about
me.
“I
refuse
to
do
it!
I
don't
care
who
her
father
is；her
grades
can't
match
Martha's
at
all.
I
won't
lie
or
falsify
(伪造)records.”
said
Mr.
Schmidt
angrily.
But
Mr.
Boone's
voice
sounded
calm.
“Joann's
father
is
not
only
on
the
Board
(董事会),
he
owns
the
only
store
in
town:
we
could
say
it
was
a
close
tie
and…”
Shaking
and
sad,
I,
waited
a
few
minutes
and
walked
away.
The
next
day
when
the
principal
called
me
into
his
office.
“Martha,”
he
said,
“There's
been
a
change
in
policy
this
year
regarding
the
scholarship
jacket.
This
year
the
Board
has
decided
to
charge
fifteen
dollars,
which
still
won't
cover
the
complete
cost
of
the
jacket.
So
if
you
are
unable
to
pay
the
money
for
the
jacket,
it
will
be
given
to
the
next
one
in
line.”
Standing
with
all
the
dignity
I
could
find,
I
said，“I'll
speak
to
my
grandfather
about
it,
sir,
and
let
you
know
tomorrow.”
I
cried
on
the
way
home.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph
1:
By
the
time
I
got
home,
my
eyes
were
red
and
swollen.
I
found
my
grandpa
in
the
bean
field.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
I
dragged
into
the
principal’s
office
the
next
day,
sad
and
disappointed.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In
our
kitchen,
there
was
a
wooden
table
and
three
chairs
—
one
for
Dad,
one
for
Mom,
and
one
for
me.
In
the
cellar
(地窖),
the
very
last
jar
of
apple
jam
lay
quietly
on
the
shelf,
waiting
to
be
turned
into
an
apple
pie
when
Dad
came
back.
Mom
sat
at
one
end
of
the
table.
I
sat
in
the
middle
between
her
and
Dad.
I
tried
not
to
look
at
Dad’s
empty
place.
Dad
had
gone
to
the
city
to
look
for
work
for
a
long
time.
Every
night,
I
lay
awake
in
bed
and
waited
for
the
train
to
stop.
Waited
to
hear
the
creaky
(嘎吱作响的)
gate
Dad’s
going
to
fix
when
he
came
home.
Waited
to
hear
the
sound
of
his
work
boots
dropping
on
the
step
by
the
kitchen
door,
and
his
voice
calling,
“I’m
home!”
Every
night,
as
I
lay
there,
I
stared
at
the
window
and
the
curtains
Mom
made
from
empty
flour
sacks
(麻布袋).
Every
night,
Mom
came
to
kiss
me
good-night
—
after
the
train’s
gone
by.
She
had
been
listening,
too.
“Go
to
sleep.
Your
dad
will
be
home
soon.
Maybe
for
Thanksgiving.”
Time
dragging
by,
it
finally
came
the
day
before
Thanksgiving.
I
went
to
sleep
with
the
sound
of
train
wheels
in
my
head,
whispering,
“Maybe
tomorrow,
maybe
tomorrow.”
Early
the
next
morning,
the
smell
of
coffee
woke
me.
I
ran
into
the
kitchen.
There
he
was!
Dad
lifted
me
onto
his
shoulders
and
pretended
to
stagger
from
my
weight.
“How’s
my
boy?
You’ve
gotten
so
big
that
I
can
barely
lift
you
up
anymore.”
He
put
me
down,
and
I
stared
at
the
two
sacks
on
the
table.
One
said
FLOUR
—
I
knew
that
word.
I
tried
reading
the
other:
S-U-G-A-R.
Dad
whistled
admiringly
and
winked
at
me.
Mom
and
I
had
been
practicing
my
letters
most
days.
I
could
see
that
Mom
was
pleased
with
me.
“I’m
going
to
bake
a
pie
for
your
dad’s
homecoming
dinner.
Jimmy,
bring
me
that
jar
of
apple
jam
from
the
shelf
in
the
cellar.”
Mom
smiled
at
me.
注意:
1.
续写词数应为150左右:
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing
this,
I
took
the
steps
two
at
a
time
to
the
cellar.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Never
mind,
boy,
accidents
happen,”
Dad
said
and
wiped
my
tears.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.
阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It
was
an
Art
lesson.
Rachel
sat
at
the
desk
watching
her
classmates
busy
preparing
the
water
jars
and
paints.
She
understood
why
Mrs.
Weston
asked
her
to
sit
down
and
got
Lisa
to
fetch
everything
for
her.
It
was
always
a
disaster
when
Rachel
tried
to
do
Art!
Rachel
sighed
and
reached
out
to
dip
her
brush
in
some
black
paint
and—oh,
no!
She
knocked
over
the
jar.
The
water
spread
across
the
desk
and
drowned
the
paper.
Lisa
called
Mrs.
Weston
to
see
what
Rachel
had
done.
Rachel
went
red
in
the
face.
She
jumped
to
her
feet
to
get
a
cloth.
Her
chair
fell
over
backwards.
She
turned
round
and
her
paintbrush
caught
Lisa
across
the
face,
giving
her
a
black
moustache.
Lisa
was
so
surprised
that
she
fell
back
against
a
wire
bookstand.
It
came
crashing
down
and
the
books
went
all
over
the
floor.
How
clumsy
(笨拙的)!
Rachel
thought
as
she
went
home
on
the
bus.
The
bus
stopped
outside
her
house.
She
jumped
up
and
her
elbow
(肘部)
knocked
a
woman’s
hat
right
over
her
eyes.
Oh,
no!
Rachel
said
sorry,
got
off
and
ran
indoors.
Mum
wasn’t
in
the
kitchen
but
lay
in
bed
as
she
caught
an
awful
cold.
Rachel
offered
to
make
a
cup
of
tea
but
Mum
would
rather
wait
for
Dad.
Rachel
sighed.
She
understood
Mum
was
afraid
she
would
spill
(溅出)
it.
“But
would
you
go
to
Mrs.
Willow
for
some
cold
cure?”
asked
Mum.
Rachel
turned
to
the
door
at
once.
“But
Rachel,
Mrs.
Willow’s
house
is
full
of
beautiful
things,
so
if
she
asks
you
to
come
in,
you’d
better
say
no.”
Rachel
sighed
and
ran
out.
Mrs.
Willow
was
an
old
lady
with
white
hair
and
sharp
blue
eyes
living
in
an
old
house.
She
opened
the
door
and
invited
her
in.
Rachel
said
why
she
came
and
that
she
preferred
to
wait
outside
remembering
her
mother’s
warning.
Mrs.
Willow
insisted
Rachel
come
inside.
Rachel
took
a
deep
breath
and
stepped
in.
She
looked
round
Mrs.
Willow’s
sitting
room
and
saw
at
once
why
Mum
had
been
worried.
注意:
1.
续写词数应为150左右:
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph
1:
There
were
beautiful
things
everywhere—pretty
china
figures(瓷雕)
and
delicate
vases.
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Paragraph
2:
With
a
smile
Mrs.
Willow
comforted
her
saying
it
had
been
broken
before.
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6.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I
am
a
doctor,
so
I
love
my
job.
I
always
have,
but
I
feel
particularly
proud
to
do
it
at
the
moment.
With
COVID-19
sweeping
through
Wuhan,
people
are
avoiding
hospitals
as
possible
they
can.
However,
pregnant
women
still
need
to
come
into
the
hospital.
Babies
still
need
to
be
born.
Right
now,
it
is
even
scarier
for
these
women,
as
they
have
to
come
in
on
their
own,
often
feeling
frightened.
Their
families
are
separated
from
them
due
to
safety
measures.
We’ve
always
provided
physical
support,
but
now
we
are
doing
so
on
a
different
level
—
we
also
have
to
keep
them
company
and
offer
emotional
support.
Unfortunately,
some
of
the
women
have
caught
corona-virus,
and
being
at
the
hospital
puts
me
at
risk.
Personally,
I
feel
protected
because
we
have
full
personal
protective
equipment,
which
we
wear
all
through
our
13-hour
shifts.
You
don’t
know
if
someone
is
carrying
corona-virus
or
not.
I
didn’t
want
to
put
my
family
in
danger
by
bringing
the
virus
home
and
possibly
passing
it
on
to
them.
As
a
single
parent
to
my
children,
Xiaohua,
12
years
old,
and
Xiaoyong,
9,
I
realized
I
had
to
make
a
very
tough
decision
about
my
family’s
safety
when
the
country
went
into
lockdown.
Giving
up
work
wasn’t
an
option
for
me.
I
wanted
to
be
able
to
look
after
the
women
who
were
feeling
poorly
and
very
scared,
but
I
could
not
leave
my
little
angels
behind
either.
At
this
point,
my
sister
suggested
that
the
children
stay
with
her
and
her
husband
for
the
time
being
and
leave
me
to
my
hospital
duties.
I
thought
it
was
a
great
idea,
so
we
set
a
date
for
her
to
pick
them
up.
When
I
explained
the
situation
to
my
angels
and
told
them
they
needed
to
stay
with
their
aunt
for
a
while,
they
both
seemed
upset,
but
agreed
to
go.
On
the
day
I
saw
them
off,
they
kept
looking
back
at
me
until
they
were
too
far
to
be
seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After
that,
my
workload
increased
because
some
of
my
coworkers
fell
ill.
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A
week
later,
it
came
to
Xiaoyong’s
birthday.
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