考前冲刺训练——短文改错
(一)
I
still
remember
the
first
day
I
come
to
this
new
school.Everything
was
new
to
me,what
made
me
realize
I
was
no
longer
a
small
child.I
had
to
depend
on
me.Luckily,I
made
several
good
friend.Their
interests
were
similar
with
mine.I
had
great
English
teacher,Maggie.
She
let
me
know
the
important
of
English.So
I
decided
to
learn
English
hardly.Although
it
was
very
difficult
at
first,but
with
the
help
of
my
teacher,I
made
rapidly
progress.Just
as
the
old
saying
goes,“Where
there
is
a
will,there
is
a
way.”
(二)It
is
clear
shown
that
many
middle
school
students
have
physical
and
mental
problems.
68%
of
the
students
surveying
have
studying
anxiety
as
well
as
poor
eyesight
too.And
a
larger
percentage
lacks
sleep.
52%
are
short
of
physical
exercise.
42%
of
the
students
won't
obey
our
parents
or
teachers.Personally,I
think
we
student
should
balance
our
physical
exercise
and
studies.Without
sound
body,one
can't
achieve
anything.However,too
much
attention
has
been
paid
only
on
studies.As
a
result,I
suggest
we
are
given
less
homework
or
more
time
for
out?of?classroom
activities.Only
in
this
way
can
we
live
a
happy
and
healthy
life.
(三)For
ages,sailors
have
said
that
it
is
a
good
luck
to
see
dolphins
swum
alongside
boats.
Their
presence
meant
that
land
is
near,
which
will
be
vital
informations
if
a
boat
and
its
crew
are
in
danger.
Some
dolphins
have
protected
sailors
which
suffer
shipwreck
from
sharks.
There
is
no
wonder
that
these
unique
and
fascinating
creatures
have
long
known
as
our
friends.
Dolphins
are
thought
to
be
intelligent
animals
because
of
its
quick
ability
to
learn.
They
seem
to
communicate
with
each
other
through
a
combination
of
whistles
and
clicks.
While
scientists
don't
know
exact
what
they
are
talking
about,
it
is
thought
that
dolphins
are
telling
each
other
that
food
is
nearby,
or
warning
each
other
of
approaching
dangerous.
(四)
Last?winter?vacation,my?parents?and?I?went?back?to?our?hometown,where?I?spend?my?
childhood.Walking?slow?in?the?quiet?small?town?reminded?me?of?the?good?old?day.I?
went?from?street?to?street,in?the?search?of?my?childhood?footprints.Suddenly,I?found?
me?at?the?gate?of?the?primary?school?on?which?I?studied?for?six?years.As?I?entered,I
?was?surprised?find?that?the?old?classroom?building?was?gone.But?it?was?filling?with?
my?childhood?memories!I?felt?such?sad?that?tears?ran?down?my?cheeks.It?was?just?like?the?feeling?I?had?while?a?good?friend?left?me?forever.
(五)Last
Saturday
I
went
to
the
Great
Wall
with
some
of
my
friends.
In
our
way
up,
we
saw
many
volunteers
working
in
the
sun.
They
helped
the
elders
with
their
bags,
took
photo
for
some
tourists
and
answered
people's
questions.
Because
they
were
very
tired,
they
didn't
stop
to
have
a
rest.
Just
at
the
moment,
we
saw
a
little
boy
standing
alone,
cried.
We
went
over
and
asked
what
is
the
matter.
From
his
answer
we
knew
he
couldn't
find
her
mother.
We
told
him
not
to
worry
and
then
we
tried
to
get
in
the
touch
with
his
mother
with
the
phone
number
he
had
given
us.
Twenty
minutes
late,
his
mother
turned
up,
and
thanked
us
again
and
again.
That
day
we
enjoyed
the
beauty
of
the
Great
Wall,
and
felt
the
warm
of
the
society.
If
everyone
can
reach
out
helping
hand
to
others,
the
world
will
be
more
harmonious.
(六)Last
week
I
noticed
Jack
coughing
on
our
math
class.
See
this,
I
offered
to
take
him
to
a
clinic.
There
the
doctor
asked
Jack
how
he
had
coughed
sometimes
for
long
time.
Jack
nodded
his
head
immediate.
The
doctor
then
wrote
a
prescription
with
instruction
on
how
to
take
the
Chinese
medicine.
When
Jack
tasted
the
medicine,
he
almost
brings
it
up.
I
comforted
him
with
an
old
saying
“Good
medicine
for
health
tastes
bitter
to
the
mouth”.
Jack
managed
to
swallow
them
unwillingly.
But
when
he
had
recovered
three
days
later,
he
felt
amazing
at
the
effect
of
the
Chinese
medicine.
(七)As
a
lucky
student,
I
attended
the
2018
National
English
Summer
Camp
holding
in
a
beautiful
city
of
South
West
from
July
24
to
29,
it
was
sponsored
by
the
English
Weekly.
Over
100
students
and
20
English
teaching
experts
from
all
over
the
province
take
part
in
it.
All
the
campers
must
speak
English.
During
the
sixth
days,
a
series
of
English
activities
were
organized.
We
also
visited
some
places
of
interest
as
well.
Therefore,
we
had
a
colorful
farewell
party.
The
camp
provided
us
for
a
great
number
of
value
opportunities
to
speak
English,
make
friends
and
exchange
learning
experience.
At
end
of
the
camp
I
found
myself
English
improved
a
lot.
(八)Recently
we
had
a
class
meeting
on
the
topic
of
My
Chinese
Dream.
Some
mentioned
the
inspired
Chinese
Dream
was
put
forward
by
President
Xi.
And
others
talked
enthusiastically
about
his
understanding
of
the
Chinese
Dream.
We
all
believe
that
this
dream
will
come
true
in
the
future.
I
also
talked
about
my
own
dream.
I
had
always
wanted
to
be
a
doctor.
Not
only
can
doctors
save
people’s
life
but
also
they
are
doing
a
respectable
job.
Doctors
can
also
help
people
to
live
a
better
life
without
their
professional
knowledge.
To
realize
my
dream,
I
can
try
to
work
hard
from
now
on.
I
must
learn
as
much
as
I
can
get
into
a
good
medical
college,
where
I
can
prepare
myself
adequate
for
the
job
of
a
doctor.
I
believe
hard
work
is
that
it
takes
to
accomplish
my
goal.
(九)Last
Friday,
the
evening
fell,
but
my
parents
hadn’t
come
back
home
yet.
I
stopped
doing
my
homework
but
decided
to
make
a
meal
for
my
family
instead
of
just
wait.
It
was
my
the
first
cooking.
I
went
online
to
find
information
on
how
cook
home-style
dishes.
With
the
step-by-step
direction,
I
managed
to
make
a
dish.
Then
I
tried
to
cook
other.
When
my
Parents
got
home,
they
were
amazing
to
see
the
tasty
dishes
I
made.
Immediately
my
mum
took
pictures
for
them
and
my
dad
gave
me
a
big
hug.
I
real
enjoyed
the
meal
that
evening.
(十)I
am
the
shared
bike.
I’d
like
to
be
on
the
street
to
serve
for
people.
They
can
ride
me
just
via
a
mobile
app.
But
horrible
things
happen
a
few
days
ago.
Several
people
stole
some
of
us
with
paying
their
bills
on
the
app
but
treated
us
badly.
They
broke
my
saddle
and
even
threw
my
friends
everywhere.
We
felt
angry
for
which
those
bad
guys
had
done.
Thanks
to
some
kindly
people,
we
received
careful
“treatment”.
Now,
you
help
as
well
as
the
whole
society’s
attention
is
what
we
need
most.
We
are
designed
to
help
people
who
are
stuck
the
heavy
traffic.
We
are
neither
toy
nor
private
vehicles.
Please
obey
the
basic
rules.
(十一)Dear
Editor,
Recently
our
school
has
set
up
a
rule
that
no
student
allowed
to
take
their
mobiles
into
class,
which
has
aroused
a
lot
of
discussions
among
we
students.
Many
of
the
students
feel
strong
against
the
rule,
arguing
that
the
mobile
had
become
a
necessary
part
of
our
life.
They
also
consider
that
a
must
for
us
to
get
relaxing
from
our
busy
studies.
When
it
comes
to
me,
like
some
other
student
I
hold
a
different
opinion.
While
a
mobile
phone
can
help
us
get
some
relief,
with
it
we
can
be
more
devoted
to
our
studies,
but
spare
more
time
to
communicate
with
those
around
us.
Therefore,
I
believe
in
this
school
rule
is
beneficial
to
every
student.
Yours,
Li
Hua
(12)My
father
is
the
man
I
respect
most.Strict
as
he
may
be,however
he
never
fails
to
show
her
care
and
consideration.Once
I
broke
a
neighbor
window.Seeing
nobody
around,I
ran
away
immediately.When
Dad
came
home,he
noticed
my
uneasiness
and
asked
me
what
has
happened.I
could
only
tell
him
a
truth.Instead
of
scold,he
praised
my
honesty
and
then
encouraged
me
to
apologize
our
neighbor.I
learned
from
this
incident
that
not
only
does
Dad
take
care
of
my
health
and
he
also
teaches
me
what
to
be
a
good
citizen.How
luckily
I
am
to
have
such
a
good
father!
(十三)I
like
travelling
and
my
dream
of
visit
Beijing,the
capital
city
of
our
country,come
true
during
the
National
Day
holidays
this
year.In
October
1st,I
went
to
Tian'anmen
Square
with
my
parents,there
we
watched
the
flag?raising
ceremony.
As
I
watched
flag
rising
slowly,I
sang
the
national
anthem,feeling
extremely
exciting.Then
we
went
to
some
other
famous
tourist
attraction,like
the
Great
Wall.Standing
on
the
Great
Wall,I
felt
very
proudly.I
thought
of
the
old
saying
that“One
who
fail
to
reach
the
Great
Wall
is
not
a
hero.”Although
I
was
tired,but
I
really
had
a
good
time.
(十四)With
the
development
of
science
and
technology,intelligent
robots
will
be
wide
used
in
the
future.
At
home,robots
will
help
people
do
some
housework
and
taking
care
of
the
elderly,babies
and
patients.In
addition
to
these
task,robots
will
even
be
able
to
play
the
chess
and
do
exercise
with
people.In
factories,robots
will
be
used
to
perform
some
dangerous
jobs
avoid
accidents.
Robots
will
change
our
future
life
by
many
ways,what
will
make
it
more
colorful
and
comfortable.Therefore,we
shouldn't
depend
on
intelligent
robots
too
much,for
they
were
made
to
help
humans
rather
than
replace
us.As
helpers
of
we
humans,robots
should
be
used
properly.
考前冲刺训练——短文改错参考答案:
(一)
I
had
great
but
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Without
sound
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good
luck
swum
meant
informations
which
swimming
means
information
who
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have
long^
known
its
exact
dangerous
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been
their
exactly
danger
(四)
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?day
in?the?search?of
me?
on
which
spent
slowly
days
myself
?in
surprised
find
?filling?
such?
?while?
to
filled
so
when
(五)In
our
way
up
photo
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cried.
is
the
matter
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photos
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crying
was
her
get
in
the
touch
late
warm
reach
out^
helping
his
later
warmth
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(六)on
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how
for
long
time.
immediate
in
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if/whether
a
immediately
instruction
brings
them
had
recovered
amazing
instructions
brought
it
amazed
(七)
holding
it
take
sixth
also
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held
which或it前加and
took
six
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for
value
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of
myself
with
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forward
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I
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life
inspiring
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have
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without
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can
try
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get
into
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but
wait.
my
the
first
cooking
how^
cook
didn’t
and
waiting
to
direction
other.
amazing
for
real
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(10)
the
shared
serve
for
people
happen
with
but
a
happened
without
and
which
kindly
you
are
stuck^
toy
what
kind
your
in或by
toys
(十一)student^
allowed
we
strong
had
is
us
strongly
has
that
relaxing
student
with
but
believe
in
this
school
it
relaxed
students
without
and
(十二)
apologize
our
(十三)
watched
flag
rising
I
really
had
a
good
time
(十四)
play
chess
some
dangerous
jobs
avoid
accidents.
many
ways,
for
they
made
to
humans,