专题05
短文改错（第03期）
【山西省运城市2022届高三上学期入学摸底测试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不计分。
July
29,
2021
marks
the
131st
anniversary
of
Vincent
Van
Gogh’s
die.
As
a
big
fan
of
Van
Gogh,
I
fulfill
my
lifelong
dream
this
summer
by
taking
a
trip
to
Europe.
I
first
traveled
to
the
Netherlands,
where
Van
Gogh
born
and
lived
for
most
of
his
life.
In
Amsterdam
I
went
to
the
Van
Gogh
Museum
but
viewed
hundreds
of
his
works,
including
much
of
his
greatest
paintings.
Before
visiting
Amsterdam,
I
drove
to
Saint-Rémy.
There
Van
Gogh,
depressing
and
lonely
as
he
was,
he
made
one
masterpiece
after
another.
My
last
destination
was
Auvers-sur-Oise,
where
continues
to
keep
the
subjects
of
Van
Gogh’s
paintings
looking
just
as
they
did
when
he
painted
them.
At
that
moment
I
had
never
felt
close
to
Van
Gogh.
【答案】1．die→death
2．fulfill→fulfilled
3．born前添was
4．but→and
5．much→many
6．Before→After
7.
depressing→depressed
8．made前的he删去
9．where→which
10．close→closer
【解析】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在欧洲参观梵高博物馆之旅。
第一处：考查名词。句意：2021年7月29日是文森特·梵高逝世131周年。空格前Vincent
Van
Gogh’s是名词所有格，后面接名词形式，故将die改为death。
第二处：考查时态。句意：作为梵高的忠实粉丝，今年夏天我去欧洲旅行，实现了我毕生的梦想。根据时间状语this
summer可知用一般过去时。故将fulfill改为fulfilled。
第三处：考查时态与语态。句意：我第一站去的是荷兰，那是梵高出生的地方，也是他大半生生活的地方。be
born出生于，且事情发生在过去。故在born前添was。
第四处：考查连词。句意：在阿姆斯特丹，我去了梵高博物馆，看了他的数百幅作品，包括许多他最伟大的画作。根据语境可知，这里是并列关系而非转折关系。故将but改为and。
第五处：考查形容词。句意：在阿姆斯特丹，我去了梵高博物馆，看了他的数百幅作品，包括许多他最伟大的画作。much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词。名词paintings是可数名词的复数形式。故将much改为many。
第六处：考查介词。句意：在参观阿姆斯特丹之后，我开车去了圣雷米。分析语境可知，圣雷米是在参观完阿姆斯特丹后。故将Before改为After。
第七处：考查形容词。句意：在那里，梵高孤苦无依，创作了一幅又一幅的杰作。从句主语he，表达人的情感，所以用-ed形式形容词。故将depressing改为depressed。
第八处：考查句子结构。句意：在那里，梵高孤苦无依，创作了一幅又一幅的杰作。depressed
and
lonely
as
he
was,在句中作状语，本句主语是Van
Gogh，所以he多余。故将made前的he删去。
第九处：考查定语从句。句意：我最后的目的地是瓦兹河畔奥维尔，这里仍然保持着梵高画作的主题和他刚画时的样子。句中先行词为Auvers-sur-Oise，指物，在非限制性定语从句中充当主语，所以用关系代词which引导。故将where改为which。
第十处：考查比较级。句意：在那一刻，我觉得自己与梵高的距离前所未有地近。分析语境可知，这里有比较意味，所以用比较级形式。故将close改为closer。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Health
is
most
important
for
any
of
us.
In
order
to
stay
health,
we
need
to
know
some
common
knowledge.
Firstly,
we
should
eat
lots
of
fruit
and
vegetable
because
they
are
rich
in
fiber
and
low
in
fat.
When
a
proverb
says,"An
apple
a
day
keeps
the
doctor
away."
Secondly,
exercise
is
necessary.
Regular
exercise
can
keep
ourselves
from
getting
fat.
People
do
running
every
day
usually
have
strongest
hearts
than
those
who
don't.
Final,
form
good
living
habits.
We
should
sleep
for
about
8
hours
every
day.
Overwork
and
little
sleep
will
lead
to
ill.
What's
more,
stay
away
cigarettes.
These
are
the
things
we
should
pay
an
attention
to
so
as
to
keep
fit.
【答案】1.health→healthy
2.vegetable→vegetables
3.when→as
4.
ourselves
→us
5.people后加who/that或者是do→doing
6.strongest→stronger
7.Final→Finally
8.ill→illness
9.away后加from
10去掉pay后的an
【解析】
本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了保持健康的方法。
1.考查形容词。句意：为了要保持健康，我们需要知道一些常识。stay
healthy为系表结构，意为“保持健康”，此处应用形容词作表语。故把health改为healthy。
2.考查名词。句意：首先我们应该多吃水果和蔬菜，因为他们富含纤维而且低脂肪。Vegetable“蔬菜”在具体使用中多用其复数形式，表“多种多样的蔬菜”。故vegetable改为vegetables。
3.考查定语从句。句意：正如谚语所说“一天一个苹果，医生远离你。”分析句子结构可知，此处As为关系代词，引导非限制性定语从句，作宾语，意为“正如”，一般放在句首，注意大写。故When改为As。
4.考查代词。句意：经常的体育锻炼能阻止我们变胖。分析句子结构可知，这里的宾语因与主语指代不同，不能使用反身代词，应使用宾格形式，故ourselves改为us。
5.考查非谓语动词或者定语从句。句意：每天跑步的人通常比那些不跑步的人拥有更加强壮的心脏。分析句子结构可知此处使用了限制性定语从句，先行词为people，从句缺少主语，应用关系代词who/that；或者是people与do之间为主动关系，把do改为doing使用现在分词作后置定语。故people后加who/that或者是do改为doing。
6.考查形容词比较级。句意同上。根据下文的“than”可知，此处应用比较级，故strongest改为stronger。
7.考查副词。句意：最后养成良好的作息习惯。位于句首，表示罗列顺序用副词finally“最后”，注意大写，故Final改为
Finally。
8.考查名词。句意：过度工作和睡眠不足会导致生病。短语lead
to“导致”中的to是介词，后接名词作宾语。故ill改为illness。
9.考查短语。句意：此外，我们要远离香烟。短语stay
away
from意为“远离……”，故在away后加from。
10考查零冠词。句意：这些就是为了保持健康，我们应该注意的事情。pay
attention
to“注意…”固定短语，不用冠词，故去掉an。
【云南省昆明市第一中学2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\
)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，
多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The
hero
in
my
heart
is
an
ordinary
bus
driver,
who
did
what
he
could
save
the
lives
on
the
bus.
In
a
cold
morning,
he
was
driving
on
the
freeway
while
he
had
a
sudden
heart
attack.
He
bears
the
great
pain
to
brake
the
bus
with
perseverance.
Finally,
he
was
pulled
up
on
the
emergency
lane,
bring
54
passengers
back
from
the
death
line.
Therefore,
he
was
unconscious
and
lost
his
life.
He
is
a
common
individual,
but
did
a
awesome
deed.
It
is
due
to
his
strong
sense
of
responsibility
that
he
saved
life
in
that
urgent
moment.
He
set
a
good
example
to
me
and
what
inspires
myself
in
my
life
is
the
spirit
of
being
devoted
to
others.
【答案】
1.在could后面加to
2.In→On
3.while→when
4.bear→bore
5.将was去掉
6.bring→bringing
7.Therefore→However
8.a→an
9.life→lives
10.myself→me
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述作者心目中的英雄及其英雄事迹。
1.考查动词不定式。句意：我心中的英雄是一个普通的公交车司机，他尽他所能拯救了公交车上的生命。此处需用动词不定式作目的状语。故在could后面加to。
2.考查介词。句意：在一个寒冷的早晨，他在高速公路上开车，突然心脏病发作。表示在具体某天早上，需用介词on。故将In改为On。
3.考查从属连词。句意同上。sb.
be
doing…when…为固定句型，表示“某人正在做某事……突然……”。故将while改为when。
4.考查动词时态。句意：他忍受着巨大的痛苦坚持不懈地刹车。此处陈述过去发生的事情，需用一般过去时。故将bear改为bore。
5.考查语态。句意：最后，他停在了紧急车道上，把54名乘客从死亡线上救了回来。此处he和pull
up为主动关系，was是多余的。故将was去掉。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意同上。分析句子结构可知，已有谓语动词pulled
up，此处需用非谓语动词作状语，he和bring为逻辑上的主谓关系，需用现在分词形式。故将bring改为bringing。
7.考查副词。句意：然而，他失去了知觉，失去了生命。上文提到“最后，他停在了紧急车道上，把54名乘客从死亡线上救了回来。”，下文提到“他失去了知觉，失去了生命。”，上下文之间是转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。
8.考查冠词。句意：他是一个平凡的人，却做了一件令人敬畏的事。awesome为元音音素开头，应用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。
9.考查名词。句意：正是由于他强烈的责任感，他才在那个紧急时刻拯救了生命。life为可数名词，根据上文的“54
passengers”可知，此处需用life的复数形式。故将life改为lives。
10.考查代词。句意：他给我树立了一个好榜样，在我的生活中激励我的是奉献精神。并列句中的主语从句中的主语和宾语不一致，宾语应使用宾格形式。故将myself改为me。
【四川省成都市树德中学2021-2022学年高三上学期入学考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The
other
day,
I
went
home
so
lately
that
my
mother
couldn't
afford
to
wait
me
any
longer.
So
she
began
to
have
a
lunch
by
herself.
When
I
opened
the
door,
my
mother
seemed
to
feel
a
little
embarrassing.
She
hurried
to
heat
the
dishes
what
had
already
turned
a
little
cold
on
the
table.
I
stopped
her
and
saying
with
a
smile,
“It
was
not
necessary,
Mom.
I
can
eat
them.”
I
clearly
remembered
that
my
mother
had
taught
me
not
to
cause
any
trouble
to
other
at
any
time.
In
fact,
I
just
didn't
want
to
trouble
him
any
more
as
she
was
already
too
tired
from
doing
the
houseworks.
【答案】1.lately→late
2.wait后添加for
3.去掉a
4.embarrassing→embarrassed
5.what→that/which
6.saying→said
7.was→is
8.other→others
9.him→her
10.houseworks→housework
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者某天回家晚，为了不再让母亲劳累，不让母亲去热菜的事情。
1.考查副词。句意：几天前，我回家很晚，我妈妈不再等我了。此处表示“回家晚”应用副词late；lately表示“最近”不符合语境。故lately改为late。
2.考查介词。句意：几天前，我回家很晚，我妈妈不再等我了。结合句意表示“等待某人”短语为wait
for
sb.。故wait后添加for。
3.考查固定短语。句意：于是她开始自己吃午饭。结合句意表示“吃午饭”短语为have
lunch。故去掉a。
4.考查形容词。句意：当我打开门的时候，妈妈似乎感到有点尴尬。此处主语为人，应用-ed结尾形容词embarrassed，作表语；embarrassing用于修饰物，表示“令人尴尬的”。故embarrassing改为embarrassed。
5.考查定语从句。句意：她急忙把桌上已经有点凉的菜热一热。此处为定语从句修饰先行词dishes，先行词在从句中作主语，指物，故应用关系代词that或which引导，what不能引导定语从句。故what改为that或which。
6.考查动词时态。句意：我拦住她，笑着说：“没必要，妈妈。
我可以吃。”根据上文stopped可知say应用一般过去时。故saying改为said。
7.考查动词时态。句意：我拦住她，笑着说：“没必要，妈妈。
我可以吃。”此处为直接引语，说明当时的情况应用一般现在时。故was改为is。
8.考查代词。句意：我清楚地记得母亲曾教导我任何时候都不要给别人添麻烦。此处作宾语，表示“别人，其他人”应用代词others。故other改为others。
9.考查代词。句意：事实上，我只是不想再麻烦她，因为她已经做家务太累了。此处指麻烦妈妈，应用代词her。故him改为her。
10.考查名词。句意：事实上，我只是不想再麻烦她，因为她已经做家务太累了。housework为不可数名词，没有复数形式。故houseworks改为housework。
【四川省成都市第七中学2021-2022学年高三上学期入学考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear
athletes,
With
your
excellence,
your
joy,
or
your
tears,
we
created
the
magic
of
the
Olympic
Games
in
Tokyo
2020.
You
were
competing
fierce
with
each
other
for
Olympic
glory.
You
inspired
us
by
the
power
of
sport.
This
was
even
more
remarkable
given
the
many
challenges
you
had
to
face
because
of
pandemic.
In
this
difficult
time,
you
gave
the
world
the
most
precious
gifts—
hope.
For
the
first
time
since
the
pandemic
begins,
the
entire
world
has
come
together.
Sport
returned
back
to
the
centre
stage.
Billions
of
people
around
the
globe
were
united
by
emotion,
share
moments
of
joy
and
inspiration,
what
gives
us
hope
and
faith
in
the
future.
【答案】
1.
or→and
2.
we→you
3.
fierce→fiercely
4.
by→with
5.
在pandemic前加the
6.
gifts→gift
7.
begins→began
8.删除back
9.
share→sharing
10.
what→which
【解析】
本文为应用文。文章向参加2020年东京奥运会的运动员表示了衷心的感谢。
1.考查连词。句意：你们用你们的优秀、你们的欢乐和你们的泪水，创造了2020年东京奥运会的魅力。根据句意可知，此处表达并列的意思“优秀、欢乐和泪水”，应用连词and。故将or改为and。
2.
考查代词。句意：你们用你们的优秀、你们的欢乐和你们的泪水，创造了2020年东京奥运会的魅力。根据句意以及前文“With
your
excellence,
your
joy,
and
your
tears”可知，是“你们”创造了2020年东京奥运会的魅力，应用人称代词you做主语。故将we改为you。
3.
考查副词。句意：你们为奥运的荣誉而激烈竞争。修饰动词competing应用副词fiercely作状语。故将fierce改为fiercely。
4.
考查介词。句意：你们用体育的力量激励了我们。根据句意以及固定用法“用某物激励某人”可知，inspire
sb.
with
sth.，此处应用介词with。故将by改为with。
5.
考查定冠词。句意：考虑到疫情所带来的诸多挑战，这一点更加引人注目。此处指双方都知道的2020年新冠肺炎大流行，应在pandemic加上定冠词the，表示特指。故在pandemic前加the。
6.
考查名词的数。句意：在这艰难的时刻，你给了这个世界最珍贵的礼物——希望。此处“礼物”指后文提到的“希望”，因此用单数名词gift。故将gifts改为gift。
7.
考查时态。句意：自疫情爆发以来，全世界团结在一起。主句用了现在完成时（has
come），因此since引导的从句用一般过去时，故将begins改为began。
8.
考查固定用法。句意：体育运动回到了中心舞台。根据句意可知，此处表示“回到”应用“return
to”，back多余。故删除back。
9.
考查现在分词。句意：全球数十亿人因情感而团结在一起，分享喜悦和鼓舞的时刻，这给了我们对未来的希望和信心。句中已有谓语were
united，无连词连接动词share，因此share为非谓语；由于share与逻辑主语Billions
of
people为主动关系，故此处应用现在分词sharing做状语。故将share改为sharing。
10.
考查非限制性定语从句。句意：全球数十亿人因情感而团结在一起，分享喜悦和鼓舞的时刻，这给了我们对未来的希望和信心。分析句子可知，此处应为非限制性定语从句，先行词是前文的句子，关系词应用which，在从句中做主语。故将what改为which。
【江西省南昌市八一中学2021-2022学年高三上学期入学摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday,
I
had
a
quarrel
with
my
mother.
I
complained
that
there's
too
few
entertainment,
so
she
shared
his
story
with
me.
When
my
mom
was
young,
there
is
no
internet.
When
evenings
approached,
child
from
the
whole
neighborhood
would
crowd
into
the
only
household
that
it
had
a
television.
They
stared
for
the
small
screen
and
cheered
in
front
of
the
TV.
But
now,
iPads
and
smartphones
have
taken
place
of
televisions.
The
5G
network
enables
us
to
download
a
movie
within
seconds.
No
wonder
my
mom
often
says
we
are
the
generation
grow
up
in
a
honey
jar.
Finally,
I
felt
gratefully
for
living
in
a
country
that
all
the
people
are
well-fed.
【答案】1.few→little
2.his→her
3.is→was
4.child→children
5.去掉it
6.for→at
7.taken后添加the
8.grow→growing
9.gratefully→grateful
10.that→where
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。讲述了作者和妈妈抱怨娱乐太少，妈妈则分享了她自己所处的年代只有电视娱乐的事情。
1.考查形容词。句意：我抱怨娱乐太少，她就跟我分享了她的故事。修饰不可数名词entertainment应用little。故few改为little。
2.考查代词。句意：我抱怨娱乐太少，她就跟我分享了她的故事。此处主语为she，表示“她的”应用her。故his改为her。
3.考查时态。句意：我妈妈年轻的时候，没有互联网。根据上文When
my
mom
was
young可知应用一般过去时。故is改为was。
4.考查名词的数。句意：当夜幕降临时，整个社区的孩子都会挤进唯一一家有电视机的家庭。child为可数名词，根据后文from
the
whole
neighborhood可知数量大于一应用复数形式。故child改为children。
5.考查定语从句。句意：当夜幕降临时，整个社区的孩子都会挤进唯一一家有电视机的家庭。此处为定语从句修饰先行词household，先行词在从句中作主语，由that替代，不需要it。故去掉it。
6.考查介词。句意：他们盯着小屏幕，在电视机前欢呼。结合句意表示“盯着”可知短语为stare
at。故for改为at。
7.考查冠词。句意：但现在，ipad和智能手机已经取代了电视。结合句意表示“取代”可知短语为take
the
place
of。故taken后添加the。
8.考查非谓语动词。句意：难怪我妈妈常说我们是在蜜罐里长大的一代。分析句子结构可知grow在句中应用非谓语动词形式，与逻辑主语generation构成主动关系，故用现在分词作定语。故grow改为growing。
9.考查形容词。句意：最后，我很感激生活在一个所有人都吃得很饱的国家。此处作表语，应用形容词grateful。故gratefully改为grateful。
10.考查定语从句。句意：最后，我很感激生活在一个所有人都吃得很饱的国家。此处为定语从句修饰先行词country，先行词在从句中作地点状语，应用关系副词where。故that改为where。
【河南省天一大联考2022届高三上学期阶段性测试（一）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Would
you
like
to
be
a
greener
person
to
protect
our
environment?
Here
was
some
advice.
You
should
reduce
waste
you
produce
daily.
You
can
use
all
sides
of
the
paper
and
collecting
the
drinking
bottles.
Remember
to
the
waste
so
that
it
can
be
well
recycle.
It
would
be
better
for
you
turn
off
the
power
in
your
house
when
you
go
out.
Instead
of
driving
your
car
everywhere,
you
can
save
energy
by
either
walking
nor
riding
a
bike.
Beside
take
a
bag
along
when
shopping
to
avoid
using
too
many
plastic
bag.
Last
but
not
least,
never
spit
in
the
public.
It
is
real
easy
to
be
an
eco-friendly
person.
【答案】was→is
all→both
collecting→
collect
recycle
→
recycled
在you后加to
nor→
or
Beside→
Besides
bag→bags
去掉the
real
→really
【解析】本文是一篇说明文，主要讲的是如何成为一个更环保的人来保护我们的环境的一些建议。
1.
考查一般现在时。句意：这里有一些建议。通篇是一般现在时，因此Here后为is，故将was改为is。
2.
考查代词。句意：你可以用纸的两面和收集饮料瓶。纸是有两面，因此用both，而all指的三者或三者以上，故将all改为both。
3.
考查动词原形。句意：你可以用纸的两面和收集饮料瓶。根据句意可知，use
both
sides
of
the
paper和collect
the
drinking
bottles两个动作并列，都位于can后，因此collecting应用原形，故将collecting改为
collect。
4.
考查过去分词。句意：记住不要浪费，这样可以很好地回收利用。根据语境可知，东西是被回收，因此句子用被动语态，即can
be
done，recycle应用过去分词，故将recycle改为recycled。
5.
考查不定式。句意：你出去的时候最好把家里的电源关掉。It
is+形容词+for
sb.
to
do
sth.为固定短语，意为“某人做某事是……的”，因此turn
off应用不定式，故在you后加to。
6.
考查固定短语。句意：你可以通过步行或骑自行车来节省能源，而不是开车去任何地方。either…or…为固定短语，意为“或者……或者……”，故将nor改为
or。
7.
考查连词。句意：此外，购物时带一个袋子，以避免使用太多的塑料袋。根据句意可知，后面是对前面的补充说明，beside意为“在……旁边”，besides意为“另外”，故将Beside改为Besides。
8.
考查名词的复数。句意：此外，购物时带一个袋子，以避免使用太多的塑料袋。bag为可数名词，many后应用复数，故将bag改为bags。
9.
考查固定短语。句意：最后但并非最不重要的，永远不要在公共场合吐痰。in
public为固定短语，意为“在公共场合”，故去掉the。
10.
考查副词。句意：做一个环保的人真的很容易。修饰形容词easy应用副词，故将real改为really。
【陕西省汉中市2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次校际联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some
Senior
3
students
can't
study
efficient
because
of
staying
up
late.
What's
the
more,
many
have
anxiety,
that
also
leads
to
the
inefficiency
of
studying.
In
respect
of
the
problem,
I
have
some
suggestion
for
them.
First,
they
should
have
enough
sleep,
which
is
of
great
important.
Besides,
striking
a
balance
between
study
and
relaxation
are
necessary.
Finally,
it's
a
great
idea
for
them
to
spend
more
time
do
sports.
In
my
opinion,
more
attention
should
paid
to
Senior
3
students’
health.
I
suggest
they
take
care
of
them
so
that
they
can
stay
healthy
but
study
well.
【答案】1.efficient→efficiently
2.去掉the
3.that→which
4.suggestion→suggestions
5.imporatnt→importance
6.are
→is
7.do→doing
8.should后接be
9.them→themselves
10.but→and
【解析】
这是一篇说明文。一些高三学生因为熬夜而不能有效地学习。更重要的是，许多人还焦虑，这也导致了学习效率低下。关于这个问题，作者给出了一些建议。
1.考查副词。句意：一些高三学生因为熬夜而学习效率低下。此处应用副词efficiently修饰动词study。故efficient改为efficiently。
2.考查固定搭配。句意：此外，许多人还焦虑，这也导致了学习效率低下。what's
more“此外，况且”为固定搭配。故去掉the。
3.考查定语从句。句意：此外，许多人还焦虑，这也导致了学习效率低下。此处引导非限制性定语，关系词在从句中作主语，指代先行词anxiety，应用关系代词which，that不能用于非限制性定语从句。故that改为which。
4.考查名词。句意：关于这个问题，我有一些建议给他们。
suggestion为可数名词，且有some修饰，应用其复数形式。故suggestion改为suggestions。
5.考查名词。句意：首先，他们应该有足够的睡眠，这是非常重要的。be
+of
+importance=be
important。故important改为importance。
6.考查主谓一致。句意：此外，在学习和放松之间取得平衡是必要的。动名词作主语谓语动词为单数第三人称。故are改为is。
7.考查动名词。句意：最后，花更多的时间做运动对他们来说是个好主意。spend+时间/金钱+（in）doing
sth，为固定短语，应用动名词作宾语。故do改为doing。
8.考查语态。句意：在我看来，应该更多地关注高三学生的健康。pay
attention
to“注意”为固定短语，本句将attention提前，构成被动语态。故should后接be。
9.考查代词。句意：我建议他们照顾好自己，这样他们既能保持健康，又能好好学习。主语与宾语表达同一个人时，宾语用反身代词。故them改为themselves。
10.考查连词。句意：我建议他们照顾好自己，这样他们既能保持健康，又能好好学习。根据句意，前后表示并列关系，应用并列连词and。故but改为and。
【四川省眉山市仁寿第一中学南校区2021-2022学年高三上学期入学考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分；
The
other
day
I
as
well
as
my
parents
were
eating
in
a
restaurant
when
we
noticed
a
foreigner
coming
in.
He
seats
himself
at
a
table
by
the
window.
Soon
a
waitress
came
and
wanted
to
take
her
order.
However,
the
foreigner
couldn’t
got
his
needs
across.
Seeing
this,
I
went
up
immediate
to
offer
some
helps.
We
communicated
with
simple
English
for
a
while
but
I
later
knew
why
the
waitress
couldn’t
understand
him.
The
foreigner
actually
wanted
roast
Beijing
duck,
but
he
had
a
wrong
Chinese
pronunciation.
Hearing
my
explanation,
the
waitress
couldn’t
help
to
laughing.
The
foreigner
himself
also
laughed.
【答案】1.
were→was
2.
seats→seated
3.
her→his
4.
got→get
5.immediate→immediately
6.
helps→help
7.
with→in
8.
but→and
9.
roast前加a
10.去掉to
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我和父母在一家餐厅吃饭时帮助外国友人正确点餐的故事。
1.考查主谓一致。句意：几天之前当我和父母在一家餐厅吃饭的时候，我们注意到一位外国人进来了。从句主语为a
foreigner为第三人称单数，谓语动词应用was。故were改为was。
2.考查一般过去时。句意：他在靠窗的一个位置坐下了。由前一句可知，故事发生在几天前，应用一般过去时。故seats改为seated。
3.考查形容词性物主代词。很快，一位女服务员来了，想点菜。由前一句可知，该外国人为男士，代词应为his。故her改为his。
4.考查动词。句意：然而，他并不能表达自己的需要。情态动词can后面加动词原形。故got改为get。
5.考查副词。句意：看到这些，我立即起身提供一些帮助。修饰动词短语go
up时应用副词。故immediate改为immediately。
6.考查不可数名词。句意：看到这些，我立即起身提供一些帮助。help为不可数名词，不能加s。故helps改为help。
7.考查固定搭配。句意：我们用英语交流了一会。in
English为固定搭配，表示用英语交流。故with改为in。
8.考查连词。句意；我们用英语交流了一会，稍后我知道了服务员不能明白他的意思的原因。前后两句话为顺承关系，不表示转折的意思。故but改为and。
9.考查不定冠词。句意这个外国人实际上想要一只北京烤鸭。此处泛指“一只北京烤鸭”，中心名词duck为可数名词，roast是以辅音音素开头的词，前面要加不定冠词a。故roast前加a。
10.考查固定搭配。句意：听了我的解释，服务员忍不住笑了。can’t
help
doing为固定搭配，意为“忍不住做某事”。故去掉to。
【宁夏青铜峡市高级中学2021-2022学年高三上学期开学考试】短文改错
I
can’t
live
without
music.
It
may
not
sound
practically
because
things
such
as
food,
water
and
air
is
much
more
important
than
music
for
human
beings.
However,
I
think
the
thought
of
change
the
world
by
spreading
the
joy
of
music
is
not
that
ridiculous.
Cimorelli
is
one
of
my
favorite
band.
I’ve
downloaded
the
great
many
of
their
songs.
Whenever
I
feel
down
or
disappointing,
I
listen
to
them
because
the
lyrics
(歌词)
are
positive
and
meaningful.
Thanks
to
their
songs,
I
have
realized
the
important
of
helping
others
and
that
being
different
is
not
something
to
be
ashamed.
I
also
liked
singing.
Although
I’m
not
really
good
at
it,
but
I
still
enjoy
it.
I
love
music
and
I
believe
that
great
music
can
change
people’s
lives.
【答案】1.
practically
→
practical
2.
is
→
are
3.
change
→
changing
4.
band→
bands
5.
the
→
a
6.
disappointing
→
disappointed
7.
important
→
importance
8.
ashamed后加of
9.
liked→
like
10.
删除but或but
→
yet
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。作者介绍自己的音乐喜好。
1.考查形容词。句意：这听起来可能不太实际，因为食物、水和空气对人类来说比音乐重要得多。sound是系动词，后应接形容词作表语。故将practically改为practical。
2.考查主谓一致。句意：这听起来可能不太实际，因为食物、水和空气对人类来说比音乐重要得多。这个从句中的主语是things，为复数，所以应用be动词are。故将is改为are。
3.考查非谓语动词。句意：然而，我认为通过传播音乐的乐趣来改变世界的想法并不是那么荒谬。of为介词，后接动词ing形式作宾语，构成介宾结构。故将change改为changing。
4.考查名词单复数。句意：西莫雷利是我最喜欢的乐队之一。one
of
后接名词复数，表示...之一，故将band改为bands。
5.考查冠词。句意：我下载了很多他们的歌曲。短语a
great
many
of
表示“很多”，故将the改为a。
6.考查形容词。句意：每当我感到沮丧或失望时，我都会听他们的歌，因为他们的歌词积极有意义。disappointing和disappointed均有形容词词性，修饰物用ing形式，修饰人用ed形式。故将disappointing改为disappointed。
7.考查名词。句意：多亏了他们的歌曲，我意识到了帮助他人的重要性，以及与众不同并不是一件可耻的事。根据句意及冠词the可知，“重要性”应用名词。故将important改为importance。
8.考查介词。句意：多亏了他们的歌曲，我意识到了帮助他人的重要性，以及与众不同并不是一件可耻的事。短语be
ashamed
of表示“对...感到羞耻”，句中缺少介词of。故在ashamed前加of。
9.考查时态。句意：我也喜欢唱歌。作者在陈述自己的喜好，用一般现在时。故将liked改为like。
10.考查连词。句意：虽然我不是很擅长，但我还是很喜欢。前一句中已有Although，根据规则，后句中不能再出现but。故删掉but或将but改为yet。专题05
短文改错（第03期）
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不计分。
July
29,
2021
marks
the
131st
anniversary
of
Vincent
Van
Gogh’s
die.
As
a
big
fan
of
Van
Gogh,
I
fulfill
my
lifelong
dream
this
summer
by
taking
a
trip
to
Europe.
I
first
traveled
to
the
Netherlands,
where
Van
Gogh
born
and
lived
for
most
of
his
life.
In
Amsterdam
I
went
to
the
Van
Gogh
Museum
but
viewed
hundreds
of
his
works,
including
much
of
his
greatest
paintings.
Before
visiting
Amsterdam,
I
drove
to
Saint-Rémy.
There
Van
Gogh,
depressing
and
lonely
as
he
was,
he
made
one
masterpiece
after
another.
My
last
destination
was
Auvers-sur-Oise,
where
continues
to
keep
the
subjects
of
Van
Gogh’s
paintings
looking
just
as
they
did
when
he
painted
them.
At
that
moment
I
had
never
felt
close
to
Van
Gogh.
【湘豫名校联考2021-2022学年高三上学期8月】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Health
is
most
important
for
any
of
us.
In
order
to
stay
health,
we
need
to
know
some
common
knowledge.
Firstly,
we
should
eat
lots
of
fruit
and
vegetable
because
they
are
rich
in
fiber
and
low
in
fat.
When
a
proverb
says,"An
apple
a
day
keeps
the
doctor
away."
Secondly,
exercise
is
necessary.
Regular
exercise
can
keep
ourselves
from
getting
fat.
People
do
running
every
day
usually
have
strongest
hearts
than
those
who
don't.
Final,
form
good
living
habits.
We
should
sleep
for
about
8
hours
every
day.
Overwork
and
little
sleep
will
lead
to
ill.
What's
more,
stay
away
cigarettes.
These
are
the
things
we
should
pay
an
attention
to
so
as
to
keep
fit.
【云南省昆明市第一中学2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\
)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，
多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The
hero
in
my
heart
is
an
ordinary
bus
driver,
who
did
what
he
could
save
the
lives
on
the
bus.
In
a
cold
morning,
he
was
driving
on
the
freeway
while
he
had
a
sudden
heart
attack.
He
bears
the
great
pain
to
brake
the
bus
with
perseverance.
Finally,
he
was
pulled
up
on
the
emergency
lane,
bring
54
passengers
back
from
the
death
line.
Therefore,
he
was
unconscious
and
lost
his
life.
He
is
a
common
individual,
but
did
a
awesome
deed.
It
is
due
to
his
strong
sense
of
responsibility
that
he
saved
life
in
that
urgent
moment.
He
set
a
good
example
to
me
and
what
inspires
myself
in
my
life
is
the
spirit
of
being
devoted
to
others.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The
other
day,
I
went
home
so
lately
that
my
mother
couldn't
afford
to
wait
me
any
longer.
So
she
began
to
have
a
lunch
by
herself.
When
I
opened
the
door,
my
mother
seemed
to
feel
a
little
embarrassing.
She
hurried
to
heat
the
dishes
what
had
already
turned
a
little
cold
on
the
table.
I
stopped
her
and
saying
with
a
smile,
“It
was
not
necessary,
Mom.
I
can
eat
them.”
I
clearly
remembered
that
my
mother
had
taught
me
not
to
cause
any
trouble
to
other
at
any
time.
In
fact,
I
just
didn't
want
to
trouble
him
any
more
as
she
was
already
too
tired
from
doing
the
houseworks.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear
athletes,
With
your
excellence,
your
joy,
or
your
tears,
we
created
the
magic
of
the
Olympic
Games
in
Tokyo
2020.
You
were
competing
fierce
with
each
other
for
Olympic
glory.
You
inspired
us
by
the
power
of
sport.
This
was
even
more
remarkable
given
the
many
challenges
you
had
to
face
because
of
pandemic.
In
this
difficult
time,
you
gave
the
world
the
most
precious
gifts—
hope.
For
the
first
time
since
the
pandemic
begins,
the
entire
world
has
come
together.
Sport
returned
back
to
the
centre
stage.
Billions
of
people
around
the
globe
were
united
by
emotion,
share
moments
of
joy
and
inspiration,
what
gives
us
hope
and
faith
in
the
future.
【江西省南昌市八一中学2021-2022学年高三上学期入学摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday,
I
had
a
quarrel
with
my
mother.
I
complained
that
there's
too
few
entertainment,
so
she
shared
his
story
with
me.
When
my
mom
was
young,
there
is
no
internet.
When
evenings
approached,
child
from
the
whole
neighborhood
would
crowd
into
the
only
household
that
it
had
a
television.
They
stared
for
the
small
screen
and
cheered
in
front
of
the
TV.
But
now,
iPads
and
smartphones
have
taken
place
of
televisions.
The
5G
network
enables
us
to
download
a
movie
within
seconds.
No
wonder
my
mom
often
says
we
are
the
generation
grow
up
in
a
honey
jar.
Finally,
I
felt
gratefully
for
living
in
a
country
that
all
the
people
are
well-fed.
【河南省天一大联考2022届高三上学期阶段性测试（一）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Would
you
like
to
be
a
greener
person
to
protect
our
environment?
Here
was
some
advice.
You
should
reduce
waste
you
produce
daily.
You
can
use
all
sides
of
the
paper
and
collecting
the
drinking
bottles.
Remember
to
the
waste
so
that
it
can
be
well
recycle.
It
would
be
better
for
you
turn
off
the
power
in
your
house
when
you
go
out.
Instead
of
driving
your
car
everywhere,
you
can
save
energy
by
either
walking
nor
riding
a
bike.
Beside
take
a
bag
along
when
shopping
to
avoid
using
too
many
plastic
bag.
Last
but
not
least,
never
spit
in
the
public.
It
is
real
easy
to
be
an
eco-friendly
person.
【陕西省汉中市2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次校际联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some
Senior
3
students
can't
study
efficient
because
of
staying
up
late.
What's
the
more,
many
have
anxiety,
that
also
leads
to
the
inefficiency
of
studying.
In
respect
of
the
problem,
I
have
some
suggestion
for
them.
First,
they
should
have
enough
sleep,
which
is
of
great
important.
Besides,
striking
a
balance
between
study
and
relaxation
are
necessary.
Finally,
it's
a
great
idea
for
them
to
spend
more
time
do
sports.
In
my
opinion,
more
attention
should
paid
to
Senior
3
students’
health.
I
suggest
they
take
care
of
them
so
that
they
can
stay
healthy
but
study
well.
【四川省眉山市仁寿第一中学南校区2021-2022学年高三上学期入学考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分；
The
other
day
I
as
well
as
my
parents
were
eating
in
a
restaurant
when
we
noticed
a
foreigner
coming
in.
He
seats
himself
at
a
table
by
the
window.
Soon
a
waitress
came
and
wanted
to
take
her
order.
However,
the
foreigner
couldn’t
got
his
needs
across.
Seeing
this,
I
went
up
immediate
to
offer
some
helps.
We
communicated
with
simple
English
for
a
while
but
I
later
knew
why
the
waitress
couldn’t
understand
him.
The
foreigner
actually
wanted
roast
Beijing
duck,
but
he
had
a
wrong
Chinese
pronunciation.
Hearing
my
explanation,
the
waitress
couldn’t
help
to
laughing.
The
foreigner
himself
also
laughed.
【宁夏青铜峡市高级中学2021-2022学年高三上学期开学考试】短文改错
I
can’t
live
without
music.
It
may
not
sound
practically
because
things
such
as
food,
water
and
air
is
much
more
important
than
music
for
human
beings.
However,
I
think
the
thought
of
change
the
world
by
spreading
the
joy
of
music
is
not
that
ridiculous.
Cimorelli
is
one
of
my
favorite
band.
I’ve
downloaded
the
great
many
of
their
songs.
Whenever
I
feel
down
or
disappointing,
I
listen
to
them
because
the
lyrics
(歌词)
are
positive
and
meaningful.
Thanks
to
their
songs,
I
have
realized
the
important
of
helping
others
and
that
being
different
is
not
something
to
be
ashamed.
I
also
liked
singing.
Although
I’m
not
really
good
at
it,
but
I
still
enjoy
it.
I
love
music
and
I
believe
that
great
music
can
change
people’s
lives.
