2012年高考英语书面表达题分类解析
专题03 开放式（学生版）
2012北京卷书面表达讲评
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
一、简述漫画内容
首先审图
简要表述
三、发表个人看法
【参考范文】
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一、 (2012湖北卷)
请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
【思路点拨】
【参考范文】
附录：
第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分)
阅读下列各小题，根据汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。
例：______ was that the young player performed extremely well in the table tennis tournament. (delight) 令球迷欣喜的是那位年轻的球员在乒乓球锦标赛中表现得极为出色。答案：What delighted the fans/made the fans delighted
71. With ________, some animals are facing the danger of dying out. (cut)
由于越来越多的森林被砍伐，一些动物正面临着灭绝的危险。
72. Popularly ________ American films ever made, The Godfather is a milestone of cinema. (regard)
《教父》被普遍认为是美国有史以来最好的影片之一，是电影界的一个里程碑。
【答案】regarded as one of the best
【解析】考查现在分词作状语用法。done 作状语，表示被动；doing作状语，表示主动；分词作状语可表示方式，原因，结果，伴随等（时间除外）：电影（The godfather） 与认为（regard）之间为被动关系。
73. I don’t know ________ in the novel that made him burst into tears. (what)
我不知道是小说中的什么东西使他突然泪如泉涌。
【答案】 what it was
【解析】考查强调句型用法。强调从句中的疑问词，问词+it+was is that 的用法。
74. Little ________ what she looks like; all she cares about is her job performance. (care)
她不在乎外表，她在乎的是自己的工作表现。
75. Had we not used an out-of-date train schedule, we ________ the train. (miss)
要不是用了一张过期的列车时刻表，我们就不会误了火车。
【答案】wouldn't have missed
【解析】考查虚拟语气。If 引导的非真实条件句固定结构；此题难点在于if 被省略了，是对过去的假设。
76. However ________, I could not read his handwriting. (try)
不论我怎样努力，还是没法看清他写的字。
【答案】hard I tried
【解析】考查状语从句。however引导的让步状语从句
77. In response to the audience’s great demand, the play ________ in the theatre twice a week. (put)
应观众的强烈要求，这部戏将会在这个剧院每周上演两次。
78. The soldier was absent from his camp for three days without ________. (ask)
这个士兵没有请假就离开营地三天。
【答案】asking for leave
【解析】考查介词without的用法。without doing sth.
79. Our understanding of education, work and society is ________ of the earlier generation. (different)
我们对教育、工作和社会的认识和我们上一代人的不同。
二、(2012湖南卷)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
主要内容包括：1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 ))丢失的物品；2)物品失而复得的经过；3)你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数不少于1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 )20个；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
_________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
【参考范文】
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三、(2012浙江卷)
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：
1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2.举例说明理由
注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: " Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. "___________________________________________
【思路点拨】
【参考范文】2012年高考英语书面表达题分类解析
专题03 开放式（教师版）
2012北京卷书面表达讲评
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
一、简述漫画内容
首先审图
简要表述
挖掘图中隐藏的要点使图画描述连贯
长短铅笔对短铅笔所说的话的隐含的意思是：对短铅笔的嘲笑。
His words mean laughing at the short pencil.
短铅笔为什么那样平静 有可能是：长铅笔的话让它陷入沉思。再进一步追问下去“沉思什么”
比如说：自己曾经做出的贡献、现在老了但是过着幸福的生活等等。
连贯成篇
In this picture we can see two pencils, quite different in length, forming a sharp contrast. The long pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the short pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” . The short pencil, on the other hand, remains clam. The long pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a happy life.
二、点明漫画实质
三、发表个人看法
围绕对漫画实质的理解发表个人的看法：年轻人在自信的同时请不要忽视学习老年人的长处。
【参考范文】
1.I think the long pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the short pencil by saying “You're nearing the end！”The short pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. The long pencil's words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It's true that he's approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.
In reality, we should learn from the short pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.（官方提供）
2. In this picture we can see two pencils, quite different in length, forming a sharp contrast. The long pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the short pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” . The short pencil, on the other hand, remains clam. The long pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a happy life.
The picture seems to tell us that everyone is a combination of strengths and weaknesses. When
feeling confident about our own strength, we, the young, should never ignore the advantages of the
old, who are surely in some way more experienced, practiced and skilled than us. We may be expert in
one particular area, yet it's impossible for us to be accomplished in all respects.
一、 (2012湖北卷)
请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
【思路点拨】
【参考范文】
附录：
第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分)
阅读下列各小题，根据汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。
例：______ was that the young player performed extremely well in the table tennis tournament. (delight) 令球迷欣喜的是那位年轻的球员在乒乓球锦标赛中表现得极为出色。答案：What delighted the fans/made the fans delighted
71. With ________, some animals are facing the danger of dying out. (cut)
由于越来越多的森林被砍伐，一些动物正面临着灭绝的危险。
72. Popularly ________ American films ever made, The Godfather is a milestone of cinema. (regard)
《教父》被普遍认为是美国有史以来最好的影片之一，是电影界的一个里程碑。
73. I don’t know ________ in the novel that made him burst into tears. (what)
我不知道是小说中的什么东西使他突然泪如泉涌。
【答案】 what it was
【解析】考查强调句型用法。强调从句中的疑问词，问词+it+was is that 的用法。
74. Little ________ what she looks like; all she cares about is her job performance. (care)
她不在乎外表，她在乎的是自己的工作表现。
【答案】does she care
【解析】考查部分倒装用法。否定副词置于句首倒装；little 是一个否定词，表示“几乎不，几乎没有”；其次句子时态前后要保持一致，所以助动词为does。
75. Had we not used an out-of-date train schedule, we ________ the train. (miss)
要不是用了一张过期的列车时刻表，我们就不会误了火车。
【答案】wouldn't have missed
【解析】考查虚拟语气。If 引导的非真实条件句固定结构；此题难点在于if 被省略了，是对过去的假设。
76. However ________, I could not read his handwriting. (try)
不论我怎样努力，还是没法看清他写的字。
【答案】hard I tried
【解析】考查状语从句。however引导的让步状语从句
77. In response to the audience’s great demand, the play ________ in the theatre twice a week. (put)
应观众的强烈要求，这部戏将会在这个剧院每周上演两次。
78. The soldier was absent from his camp for three days without ________. (ask)
这个士兵没有请假就离开营地三天。
【答案】asking for leave
【解析】考查介词without的用法。without doing sth.
79. Our understanding of education, work and society is ________ of the earlier generation. (different)
我们对教育、工作和社会的认识和我们上一代人的不同。
二、(2012湖南卷)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
主要内容包括：1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 ))丢失的物品；2)物品失而复得的经过；3)你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数不少于1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 )20个；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
_________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文。要求同学们根据所提供的材料，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。短文内容包括：丢失的物品；物品失而复得的经过；你的感想。可见文章的中心和重点要放在“经过”的描写之中，但是也要描写自己的感受，写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨；尤其要包含失而复得的复杂过程，是一篇夹叙夹议的作文。
【参考范文】
03 Three years ago, just before my departure with my good friend Tommy, he got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost. I used to go everywhere with company of my watch pet but the other day I could go nowhere for its sign. I was so upset and depressed that I lost any desire for doing things and I could not even recall where and how I lost it. What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirits flying higher than sky. Guess what It found its way back to my dormitory, lying on my bed with a note beside it saying: I’m sure it’s yours, so I brought it back from the library assistant. Jack. Ah, my dormmate Jack found it in the library. Can you imagine how excited I was at that moment I must offer my thankfulness to Jack for his kindness. And I also need to reflect on my carelessness.
三、(2012浙江卷)
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：
1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2.举例说明理由
注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: " Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. "___________________________________________
【思路点拨】
从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的议论文写作，主要让考生就名言Your future depends on
【参考范文】
