香港高考英语复习专题课件 DSE Writing skills

(共45张PPT)
DSE
Writing
Skills
Language
Organization
Content
Skills
Content
Language
Organization
Each
of
the
above
three
parts
gives
a
score
of
0-7,
so
21
is
divided
into
full
scores
for
an
article
.
DSE
Writing
is
divided
into
three
parts:
Content
A
well-constructed,
organized
Content
can
be
said
to
be
the
necessary
foundation
for
high-scoring
Writing.
These
5
tips
are
ideal
for
use
in
argumentative
essays
and
explanatory
essays.
“dooob”
for
Content
“dOOOb”
【D】
display
Display
some
phenomenon/experience
as
a
primer,
or
corroboration
of
the
topic.
Example:
In
Asian
countries,
a
child’s
achievement
is
traditionally
deemed
as
a
part
of
family
glory.
Thus,
an
interesting
discussion
has
arisen:
are….?
Example:
Nowadays,
in
the
wake
of
increasing
competitive
workplace
environment,
a
multitude
of
office
workers
are
exposed
to
a
great
deal
of
working
pressure.
In
order
to
relax…
【O】OTHERS
Write
OTHERS’
general
opinions,
or
quote
proverbs.(indispensable
content
to
a
high
score).
It
is
commonly
believe
that
young
people
are
the
driving
force
to
society
progress…
however…
【Negative
argument】
It
is
universally
acknowledged
that
new
things
keep
emerging
in
the
world
we
live
today…
So…
【Positive
argument】
As
an
old
saying
goes,
‘Rome
was
not
built
in
a
day’…
Thus,
【Positive
argument】
As
a
proverb
goes,’
well
begun,
half
done’
…..
【Positive/Negative
argument】
【O】OPINION
In
general,
your
point
of
view
is
used
at
the
end
of
the
first
paragraph
and
the
reaffirmation
of
the
last
paragraph.
This
is
easy
to
understand.
Your
argument
must
be
based
on
a
reason.
【O】OPINION
Advantages
can
be
a
reason
to
avoid
Disadvantages.
And
the
reason
is
best
to
have
“examples”
as
a
synonym.
When
appropriate,
add
a
bit
of
Rhetorical
Questions?,This
allows
impression
to
be
organized
and
clear.
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
more
effort
should
be
made
in
order
to…
In
my
opinion….I
am
going
to
discuss
my
viewpoints
in
the
following
paragraphs.
From
my
perspective,
I
choose
to
stand
on
the
opposite
side
of…
To
me,
this
assertion
is
biased
because…
【B】budge
Usually
the
sentences
you
budged
are
placed
in
the
last
two
paragraphs.
The
so-called
"things
must
be
reversed"
and
"nothing
is
absolute
in
the
world"
admit
that
your
views
are
indeed
"loopholes"
and
need
to
be
"closed“
.
Admittedly….
After
all…
nevertheless…
。
connection
words
Admittedly,
I
am
not
saying
that
all
people
should
keep
themselves
away
from
others…After
all,
all
people
in
the
society
need
one
another
in
a
certain
extent…
Language
Language
focuses
on
whether
the
syntax
is
correct.
The
Organization
score
points
are
the
use
of
"composite
sentences",
i.e.
whether
there
is
a
sense
of
a
nuanced
English.
(That's
the
key
to
getting
high!
)
And
What
about
Language
and
Organization?
Ability
to
use
“composite
sentences
that
are
accurate
and
variable
for
Complex
Structure，”
(even
long
difficult
sentences)
is
the
foundation
of
Level5
+.
You
can
start
with
the
"imitation”.
How
to
improve
the
"imitation
ability"
of
your
composition?
The
key
is
not
to
remember,
but
to
understand
the
split
of
some
high-scoring
sentences.
Always
do
articles’analysis,
starting
with
the
"argumentative
essays“,
as
you
understand
the
logical
relationship
between
them,
you
can
master
writing
in
a
very
short
time!
Organization
English
high-scoring
sentence
combination,
can
not
be
separated
from
the
main
sentence,
adjectives
and
modifiers,
understand
that
it
is
not
difficult
to
win
high
scores.
The
globalization
is
an
interdependent
planet.
Many
relationships
are
not
limited
to
territorial
boundaries.
A
country
is
affected
by
activities
of
other
countries.
It's
obvious,
these
three
simple
sentences.
The
Grammar
pair,
Language
can
go
to
5-6
(out
of
7),
but
Organization
is
about
4
points
(out
of
7).
But
if
you
can
apply
adjectives
and
modifiers,
with
the
main
sentence,
written
into
a
compound
sentence,
both
parts
get
6-7
points
is
possible.
Look
at
the
example
above!
The
word
"relationship"
can
shine
on
the
【adjective】!
Think
of
the
re-stateship
between
nations:
it
can
be
economical
、social
、religion、political、cultural、military
……
Think
again,
can
you
combine
three
sentences
into
one
sentence?
The
process
of
globalization
is
an
unprecedented
（前所未有）interdependent
planet
where
economical,
social,
religion,
political,
cultural
and
military
relationships
are
not
limited
to
territorial
boundaries
and
no
countries
or
states
or
entities
are
not
affected
by
outside
its
direct
control.
（39
words）
A
compound
sentence
is
almost
40
words,
plus
some
starting
and
turning
connective
words,
and
then
combine
a
few
more
compound
sentences,
filled
with
200
words.
If
your
Language
6-7,
Organization
7,
these
paragraphs
are
easy
to
take
level
5
or
above.
For
examples
First
and
foremost,
Hong
Kong
is
a
renowned
city.
The
scenery
of
Victoria
Harbour
is
mesmerizing
and
stunning.
Countless
of
skyscrapers
and
tall
towers
were
built
along
the
harbor
front.
This
sentence
is
good
in
words.
Language
6
points,
but
Organization,
4
points
(because
the
candidate
only
knows
simple
sentences).
So
how
do
you
score
7
points
in
both
columns?
First
and
foremost,
Hong
Kong
is
a
renowned
city.
The
scenery
of
Victoria
Harbour
is
mesmerizing
and
stunning.
Countless
of
skyscrapers
and
tall
towers
were
built
along
the
harbor
front.
Turn
3
sentences
into
1
"composite
sentence"!
Turn
the
third
sentence
into
the
adjective
for
the
second
sentence.
As
follows:
First
and
foremost,
Hong
Kong
is
a
renowned
city.
The
scenery
of
Victoria
Harbour
is
mesmerizing
and
stunning.
Countless
of
skyscrapers
and
tall
towers
were
built
along
the
harbor
front.
First
and
foremost,
Hong
Kong
is
a
renowned
city
for
its
mesmerizing
Victoria
Harbour
and
stunning
scenery
embellished
【Use
adjective
skills】by
countless
skyscrapers
and
tall
towers
built
【Use
adjective
skills】along
the
harbor
front.
First
and
foremost,
Hong
Kong
is
a
renowned
city.
The
scenery
of
Victoria
Harbour
is
mesmerizing
and
stunning.
Countless
of
skyscrapers
and
tall
towers
were
built
along
the
harbor
front.
You
could
possibly
send
me
some
brochures.
Be
sure
that
they
contain
the
information
on
membership
and
associated
fee.
If
the
brochures
are
not
available,
please
provide
me
the
contact
details
of
any
such
clubs.
So,
I
can
make
my
own
enquiries.
This
English
is
a
very
good
passage
in
daily
speaking,
the
logic
is
clear
and
easy
to
understand.
However,
if
used
in
DSE
writing,
even
if
the
grammar
is
all
right,
Language
5;
Organization
4-5.
You
could
possibly
send
me
some
brochures.
Be
sure
that
they
contain
the
information
on
membership
and
associated
fee.
If
the
brochures
are
not
available,
please
provide
me
the
contact
details
of
any
such
clubs.
So,
I
can
make
my
own
enquiries.
The
first
sentence
of
the
"brochures"
is
a
"noun"
that
can
be
turned
into
a
"description
phrase"
that
describes
the
"brochures".
And
a
total
of
four
sentences,
too
long,
become
a
sentence!
Linked
to
a
logical
relationship
with
a
"modifier".
As
follows:
You
could
possibly
send
me
some
brochures.
Be
sure
that
they
contain
the
information
on
membership
and
associated
fee.
If
the
brochures
are
not
available,
please
provide
me
the
contact
details
of
any
such
clubs.
So,
I
can
make
my
own
enquiries.
If
so,
you
could
possibly
send
me
some
brochures
containing
the
information
on
membership
and
associated
fee,
or
at
least
provide
me
the
contact
details
of
any
such
clubs
so
that
I
can
make
my
own
independent
enquiries.
(38
words)
You
could
possibly
send
me
some
brochures.
Be
sure
that
they
contain
the
information
on
membership
and
associated
fee.
If
the
brochures
are
not
available,
please
provide
me
the
contact
details
of
any
such
clubs.
So,
I
can
make
my
own
enquiries.