2022届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写之情绪表达专题 教案

书面表达续写之情绪表达
【知识梳理】书面表达续写之情绪表达
Her
face
clouded
with
anger.
她的脸因愤怒而变得阴沉起来。
Fear
slowly
creeps
upon
her.
恐惧慢慢向她袭来。
We
shed
tears when
I
waved
good-bye
to
them.
我向他们挥手告别时，我们都流下了眼泪。
I
fell
asleep
as
soon
as
my
head hit the
pillow.
我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。
He
could
feel
his
head spinning after
only
one
drink.
他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。
Hearing
the
news,
so
desperate
was
he
that
he
drowned
sadness
in
wine.
听到这个消息，他绝望到借酒浇愁。
She put
his
head
in
hands,
greatly
annoyed.
她双手抱头，十分生气。
He scratched
his
head,
not
understanding
a
word.
他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
She dropped
her
head
in
shame.
她羞愧地低下了头。
She
sobbed,
hiding
her
face
in
her
hands.
她掩面哭泣。
The
trees
creaked
and groaned
in
the
wind.
树在风中嘎吱作响。
(On)
seeing
that,
I
breathed
a
deep
sight
of
relief.
看到这一点，我松了一口气。
Nancy gave
me
a
big
wink as
I
came
in.
当我进来时，南希向我使眼色。
He
was peeping
at her
through
his
fingers.
他从指缝里偷看她。
A
ripple
of
excitement
ran
through
them.
他们心底泛起一阵兴奋的涟漪。
We feasted
our
eyes
on the
beautiful
scenery.
我们饱览了美丽的风景。
He
unfolded
the
letter,
his
heart
thudding.
他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。
I
looked
at
her
and
felt
a
glimmer
of
hope.
我注视她，感到了一线希望。
【例题精讲】
一、词汇猜测并填空。
1.
Laughter
_______
around
the
room.
2.
A
smile
of
pleasure
_______
across
his
face.
3.
Her
smile
________the
whole
room.
4.
She
___________________
happiness.
5.
Joy
_________inside
her.
6.
His
reply
________
the
officer's
anger.
7.
The
whole
world
seemed
to
be
________
in
a
huge
grey
quilt.
lingered萦绕
flashed露出
lit
up照亮
was
overflowing
with洋溢着
welled
up
涌出
fueled
火上浇油
enveloped
笼罩
二、句子翻译。
1.
听到这个消息，Mary忍不住大笑起来。（burst,
非谓语作状语）
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2.
他们紧紧地拥抱彼此，幸福的眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。（stream
down,
with）
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3.
只要Thornton抚摸他，Buck都会欢喜得发狂。（go
wild
）
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4.
笑声在房间里萦绕，吹走了盘旋在她头上的阴云。(
gloomy
clouds,
hover,
非限制性定语从句)
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5.
没有语言能够表达我的开心。（express+特殊疑问词引导宾语从句）
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Hearing
the
news,
Mary
burst
into
laughter.
They
hugged
each
other
tightly
with
tears
of
joy
streaming
down
their
cheeks.
Buck
went
wild
with
happiness
as
long
as
Thornton
touched
him.
Laughter
lingered
around
the
room,
which
blew
away
the
gloomy
clouds
hovering
over
her
head.
No
words
can
express
how
delighted
I
am.
6.
我抑制不住愤怒而发火了。（get
the
best
of
）
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7.
她越想那个问题越生气。（the+比较级）
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8.
我拖着脚向前走，眼睛因愤怒而发红，拳头紧握
。（shuffle,
fists,
clench,
with结构
）
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9.
我用冰冷的声音大喊，使得他们惊恐地盯着我。(非谓语作状语)
____________________________________________________________
10.
Jim发现他妈妈正在拆开他的信件，他气得直跺脚。（非限制性定语从句）
____________________________________________________________
My
anger
got
the
best
of
me.
The
more
she
thought
about
it,
the
angrier
she
became.
I
shuffled
my
feet
forward,
with
eyes
red
and
fists
clenched.
I
shouted
in
a
cold
voice,
making
them
stare
at
me
in
horror.
Jim
found
his
mother
opening
his
letter,
which
drove
him
to
stamp
his
feet.
三、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In
the
doorway
of
my
home,
I
looked
closely
at
the
face
of
my
23-year-old
son,
his
backpack
by
his
side.
We
were
saying
good-bye.
In
a
few
hours
he
would
be
flying
to
France.
He
would
be
staying
there
for
at
least
a
year
to
learn
another
language
and
experience
life
in
a
different
country.
Before
his
college
graduation,
one
day
I
told
Daniel
that
the
great
failing
in
my
life
had
been
that
I
din't
take
a
year
or
two
off
to
travel
when
I
finished
college.
This
is
the
best
way
to
my
way
of
thinking,
to
broaden
oneself
and
develop
a
lager
perspective
on
life.
Once
I
had
married
and
begun
working,
I
found
that
the
eagerness
of
living
in
another
culture
had
disappeared.
Daniel
thought
about
this.
His
friends
said
that
he
would
be
insane
to
put
his
career
on
hold.
But
he
decided
it
was
not
so
crazy.
After
graduation,
he
worked
as
a
waiter
at
college,
a
bike
messenger
and
a
house
painter.
With
the
money
he
earned,
he
had
enough
to
go
to
Paris.
Last
night,
I
tossed
in
bed,
unable
to
sleep.
It
was
a
transitional
time
in
Daniel’s,
a
passage,
a
step
from
college
into
the
adult
world.
I
wanted
to
leave
him
some
words
that
would
have
some
meaning,
some
significance
beyond
the
moment.
I
failed.
Nothing
came
to
my
mind.
Maybe,
I
thought,
it
wasn’t
necessary
to
say
anything.
But
I
knew
that
it
was
necessary.
My
father
and
I
loved
each
other.
Yet,
I
always
regretted
never
hearing
him
put
his
feelings
into
words
and
never
having
the
memory
of
that
moment.
Now,
as
I
stood
before
Daniel,
still
nothing
came
from
my
lips.
No
sound
broke
the
stillness
of
my
beach-side
home.
Outside,
I
could
hear
the
shrill
cries
of
sea
gulls
as
they
circled
the
ever-changing
surf
of
Long
Island.
Inside,
I
stood
frozen
and
quiet,
looking
into
the
searching
eyes
of
my
son.
1.续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
What
made
it
more
difficult
was
that
I
knew
this
was
not
the
first
time
I
had
let
such
a
moment
pass
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Thinking
of
those
lost
opportunities.
Now
I
could
feel
my
palms
sweat
and
my
throat
tighten.
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【答案】What
made
it
more
difficult
was
that
I
knew
this
was
not
the
first
time
I
had
let
such
a
moment
pass.
My
mind
quickly
raced
back
to
a
summer
vacation
8
years
ago,
when
Daniel
would
tread
on
the
forest
with
his
three
buddies
for
the
first
time.
Bags
packed
and
tools
ready,
Daniel
waited
quietly
for
my
final
reminder.
I
just
stared
at
him
and
quietly
murmured.
“Take
care,
son.”
Another
time,
Daniel
was
to
give
a
graduation
speech
in
front
of
1,500
students.
Before
hopping
the
stage,
he
inquired,
“Mom,
do
you
have
any
word
for
me ”
“No,
son,
just
believe
in
yourself.”
I
escaped
his
searching
eyes
and
retreated
into
my
seat.
Thinking
of
those
lost
opportunities,
now
I
could
feel
my
palms
sweat
and
my
throat
tighten.
Finally,
I
mustered
up
my
courage
and
blurted
out,
“son,
I
am
so
proud
of
you
to
make
this
decision
and
experience
a
brand-new
culture.
I
assure
you
this
will
be
the
most
valuable
asset
in
your
life.
I
take
pride
in
you
because
you
possess
the
courage
which
I
failed
to
have
in
pursuing
your
dream.
Please
take
care
and
my
love
is
always
by
your
side.”
As
a
lump
formed
in
my
throat,
I
could
no
longer
continue.
My
son
was
also
touched
beyond
words
as
tears
brimmed
over
in
his
eyes.
Finally
out
came
his
mother’s
reminder
and
words
he
had
been
waiting
for
in
the
last
20
years.
【解析】本文以时间和人物为线索展开，讲述了作者23岁的儿子Daniel在离开家去法国学习，体验新生活时，作者的不舍和各种心理活动；他们母子彼此相爱。但是，作者总是遗憾从来没对Daniel说出自己的感受，对他的爱、期望和祝愿。离别前，儿子渴望作者能对他说些什么。
详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“更糟糕的是，我知道自己已经不是第一次让这样的时刻白白流逝了。”可知，第一段可描写作者以前错过的机会。
②由第二段首句内容“想到那些失去的机会，我的手心冒汗，喉咙发紧。”可知，第二段可描写作者鼓起勇气终于对儿子说出了自己的感受和对他的期望，儿子也非常感动。
2.续写线索：作者回忆过去——紧张——鼓起勇气——说出对儿子爱——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回忆：
raced
back
to/recall
②鼓起勇气：mustered
up
my
courage
/screw
up
courage
情绪类
①感动：touched/moved
②紧张：my
palms
sweat/my
throat
tighten
【点睛】[高分句型1].
I
assure
you
this
will
be
the
most
valuable
asset
in
your
life.
（you后是省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2].
I
take
pride
in
you
because
you
possess
the
courage
which
I
failed
to
have
in
pursuing
your
dream.
（because引导原因状语从句，which引导定语从句，先行词courage）
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