2022届高三英语二轮复习:高考短文改错解析(含答案)

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短文改错解题分析
2021-2013高考短文改错设错点分布
设错点分布 主谓一致 时态一致 名词单复数一致 代词一致 语意一致 冠词 介词 形容词 副词 非谓语动词
2013新课标I 1 1 1 2 1 2 1 1
2013新课标II 1 1 1 1 2 1 2
2014新课标I 1 1 1 1 2 3
2014新课标II 1 2 1 1 1 2 1 1
2015新课标I 3 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
2015新课标II 1 2 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
2016新课标I 2 1 3 1 1 1 1
2016新课标II 2 1 1 2 1 1 1
2016新课标III 1 1 3 1 1 1 1 1
2017新课标I 1 1 1 1 1 1 2 1
2017新课标II 1 1 1 1 1 2 1 2
2017新课标III 1 1 2 1 1 2 1
2018新课标I 1 1 1 3 1 1 1 1
2018新课标II 2 1 2 1 1 1 2
2018新课标III 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 2
2019新课标I 1 3 2 1 3
2019新课标II 1 1 1 1 1 2 1 1
2019新课标III 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 3
2020新课标I 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 2
2020新课标II 1 1 2 3 2 2
2020新课标III 1 1 1 2 2 1 1 2
2021全国甲卷 1 1 2 1 1 2 1 1
2021全国乙卷 4 1 1 1 1 2
短文改错第一讲 五大一致性问题
一. 主谓一致
短文改错中主谓一致的考查是命题的常见内容之一。错误的设置一般都比较隐蔽,因为中文中不涉及主谓一致的问题,所以学生在这方面比较容易出错。做题时首先要分析出句子的主语是什么。可以充当句子主语的有名词、代词、数词、不定式短语、动名词短语、主语从句、定冠词加形容词形式。
1. But as soon as the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away with the jacket. (07四川)
2. Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.(06安徽)
3. But the most wonderful thing about Jack were his musical ability.(05江苏)
4. Having fun with their friends make them happy .(05湖北)
5. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.(11重庆)
6. After hearing your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm.(10重庆)
7. Now my friend Ann, together with me , are going to do field study and the findings will be used as materials for our research.(12重庆)
8. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. (12陕西)
9. Good night and remember, you , dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. (13浙江)
10. The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. (14大纲)
11. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! (14陕西)
12. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.(14辽宁)
13. To begin with, farmers doesn’t use harmful chemicals on organically grown foods.(17上海)
14. To care the elders not only involve a child and a family, but also benefits the society and the country. (17上海春季高考)
15. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples.(20新课标III)
16 Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire.One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble (21全国甲卷)
过手训练
1. One day, while my friend and I was traveling through Germany, we were very hungry but we only had a little money. (08安徽)
2. Both my parents miss you a lot. So do our friend, Cathy.(08福建)
3. John Brown is a London taxi driver who love going to the Theatre.(08陕西)
4. The pay were 10 cents per envelope.(08浙江)
5. With such stories it make people think about life, and therefore attracts the audience.(08重庆)
There exist now a park that has a small river running through.(09全国I)
When I got back, it were already 6 p.m. (09全国II)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per week. (11辽宁)
Here are the information about Manchester University. (06陕西)
Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.(14四川)
At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well."(18新课标III)
My dream school look like a big garden. (14新课标II)
He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. (16浙江)
二. 时态语态一致
在一篇结构完整,语意连续的短文中,时态语态的使用也应该连贯一致,但是英语表示时间时,主句和从句时态可能不一致,却仍表明完整正确的意思。这就要求学生对英语敏感,准确判断句中动作的时态和语态。
1. One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a table of four and each person had ordered a different kind of fish. (07 辽宁 )
2. All the students on the playground cheer me on ,” Come on !” I was so encouraged that I ran faster and faster till I caught up with all the runners .(07浙江)
3. We had to sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what teachers were saying.(07 陕西)
4 . I left school as soon as I can and started work.(07 陕西 )
5. We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel before. ( 06 全国I)
6. My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.(10陕西)
7. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so far away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. (12浙江)
8. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the pictures we had taken together. (13辽宁)
9. Do you want to know why we move last week (13浙江)
10. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took our fishing poles and headed for the lake.(13陕西)
11. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. (14新课标II)
12. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. (15新课标I)
13. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .(15新课标I)
14. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.(15新课标II)
15. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.(15四川)
16. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. (15浙江)
17. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!(17新课标II)
18. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. (17新课标III)
19. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. (17新课标III)
20.During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there.(18新课标I)
21.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. (16新课标II)
22. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. (20新课标I)
23.Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice.(20新课标II)
24. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. (20新课标III)
25. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. (21全国乙卷)
26. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship.(21全国乙卷)
27. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others.They kept very much to themselves.(21全国甲卷)
过手训练
1. It is five years now since I graduate from No. 3 High School. (08辽宁)
2. I win a national prize for painting last week. (08全国I)
3. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city as well. (08四川)
She said it was the best gift she has ever had.(10全国I)
However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.(11全国II)
I still remember when I was a child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall sleep.(12重庆)
Thank you for all you had done for me. (12四川)
I was only four when she passes away. (13新课标I)
Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly.(14四川)
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.(14浙江)
Since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please .(14新课标I)
Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. (15新课标I)
Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.(18新课标II)
Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.(16新课标I )
Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! (14陕西)
An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive.(10四川)
It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. (10陕西)
Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. (19新课标III)
三.名词的单复数一致
单复数互改是高考英语改错题的基本题型之一,改动的依据有:一是根据名词前的修饰限定成分;二是根据上下文的逻辑关系。
1. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air.(07 浙江)
2. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.(06福建)
3. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.(06湖北)
4. One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of the lunches we brought from our homes.(11全国I)
5. Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late for work. (11四川)
6. She said,"I have been practising for three weeks now, but I still can't get used to it-in fact, I've nearly killed three peoples."(10四川)
7. Chiristie was one of my best friend at high school.(10全国II)
8. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.(13辽宁)
9.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.(14辽宁)
10. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. (14四川)
11. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . (15新课标I)
12. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.(15陕西)
13. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” (17新课标I)
14. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet.(17新课标II)
15. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! (14陕西)
All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football.(19新课标I)
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.(19新课标II)
I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.(19新课标III)
Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. (20新课标I)
Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. (20新课标II)
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. (20新课标III)
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.(21全国乙卷)
Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own.(21全国甲卷)
过手训练
1. But they called back or sent greeting card from different places. (08辽宁)
2. I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for the first time in my life. (08四川)
3. I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. (08天津)
4. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope.(08浙江)
5. And there are many meaningful things that are worth thinking of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family.(08重庆)
He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.(10全国I)
You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics.(12重庆)
They have all sorts of course.(06陕西)
The fruits are small in size, but juicy and tasty. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors (14新课标I)
For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. (14新课标II)
If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. (16新课标II)
It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.(16新课标II)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . (16新课标III)
After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. (18新课标II)
At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well."(18新课标III)
Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. (18新课标I)
四. 代词的性、数一致
代词误用主要是要求判断代词同它所指代的词在单复数、格、性或人称上是否一致,其运用是否符合上下文的语气及逻辑关系以及作形式主语或形式宾语时it 的用法是否正确。
1. Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed ! (07 浙江)  
2. But, to my surprise, when he got home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. (07 四川)
3. In our Greece unit, we have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. (06 浙江)
4. He thought the poor animal was injured, so the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. (07 四川)
5. I was about to answer him when I noticed that the last plate on my tray began to fall. They fell noisily to the floor seconds later, spreading its contents on the carpet. (07 辽宁)
6. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.(11四川)
7. Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one. ” (13浙江)
8. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.(12新课标)
9. It is such a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(12陕西)
10. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.(14四川)
11. Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.(17新课标II)
12. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.(17新课标III)
13. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. (18新课标II)
14. As children, they should take care of its elders in material and spirit. (17上海春季高考)
15.Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us but failed.(20新课标I)
16.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.(20新课标II)
17.I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food.(20新课标III)
过手训练
1. We chose the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree.(08安徽)
2. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. (08福建)
3. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievements. (08全国II)
4. My parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks. (08四川)
5. I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries in the future.(08天津)
6. And there are many meaningful things that are worth thinking of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American families. It is quite different from those in China.(08重庆)
7. Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money.(08浙江)
8. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. (12四川)
9. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. (13陕西)
10. On the first day of camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.(06天津)
11.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, and he was strong and powerful.(13新课标全国卷I)
12. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. (15浙江)
13. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. (16新课标III)
14. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. (16四川)
15. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. (16新课标III)
16. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. (11陕西)
17. I had done myself homework but I was shy. (18新课标III)
18. Now I really enjoyed studying because I’m growing old and know what I want it.(07 陕西)
19. I read your e-mail to my parents and showed them the photo you sent it to me.(06 江西)
20. He wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it.(08陕西)
21.I’m sure you will find one you like it.(06陕西)
22. Five minutes later.Tony saw parents. (15新课标II)
23. They were two reasons for the decision.(19新课标II)
24. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.(19新课标III)
25.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time : car magazines and musical instruments.(17新课标III)
26.Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy.(20新课标II)
27.Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.(20新课标III)
28. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own.(21全国甲卷)
五. 语意一致
语意一致主要是指两方面:
一). 一些易混词的误用。易混淆的词既包括词义相同或相反的同义词,近义词,也包括词形相似,意义有别的词组。易混词或词组的辨析是高考改错题中不容忽视的部分。
二). 我们要根据上下文来判断句与句之间是并列关系、转折关系、选择关系、递进关系还是其他关系,从而选择恰当的连词;在复合句中,应根据主从句之间的关系来判断连接词的使用是否 准确,要注意句子结构的完整性。
并列连词
类型 连词
并列关系 and; not only...but also...; neither...nor...; both...and...
转折关系 but; yet; however; nevertheless
选择关系 or; not...but..; either...or...; more....than
因果关系 since; as; for; so; thus; therefore
对比关系 while
比较关系 than
递进关系 further; furthermore; moreover; in addition; besides
1. We were wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily. (07 重庆)
2. Now Aigulia and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation.(11全国I)
3. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmates, my school or just everything else I love in the world . (13浙江)
4. My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are kind and polite. (06重庆)
5. With such stories it makes people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience.(08重庆)
6. I’d like to stay there for half a month, visiting places of interest or practicing my English as well.(08全国I)
7. He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put it on the animal. (07 四川)
8. Though I had difficulty walking back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. (07 福建)
9. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. (15新课标I)
10. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.(13四川)
11. We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.(14陕西)
12. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem.(14新课标I)
13. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. (13新课标I)
14. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.(13辽宁)
15. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.(13陕西)
16. I have already studied English for eight years, I can’t use it very well.(08天津)
17. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks.(16四川)
18. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. (16四川)
19. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. (17新课标I)
20. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(18新课标I)
21. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. (18新课标III)
22. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me.(19新课标I)
23. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. (19新课标II)
24. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. (20新课标I)
25.Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice.(20新课标II)
26.In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. (20新课标III)
从属连词
名词性从句
1. But before long they began to see which was happening. (12新课标)
2. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize .(10全国I)
3. Here is my idea about how a friend is like.(10重庆)
4. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(14四川)
5. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.(12陕西)
6. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone abroad for further studies .(08辽宁)
7. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.(15新课标II)
8. My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live . (16新课标I)
9. That is which other teachers say.(13辽宁)
10. This is how I need to improve in the future. (13大纲)
11. My school is organizing a basketball team and there' s just a chance which I can join it.(07全国II)
12. However, I was not lucky enough to have a teacher which didn’t take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but simply like an indication how I should study harder.(07天津)
定语从句
1. I read your e-mail to my parents and showed them the photo you sent it to me.(06 江西)
2. He wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it.(08陕西)
3. After hearing your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm.(10重庆)
4. John Brown is a London taxi driver who love going to the Theatre.(08陕西)
5. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water used in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. (12全国II)
6. The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. (13新课标II)
7. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices.(10重庆)
8. It is also a window which we can learn about American society. (08重庆)
9. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.(13新课标II)
10. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.(11重庆)
11. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan.(09辽宁)
12. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. (10陕西)
13. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. (06福建)
14. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. (16四川)
15..However, I was not lucky enough to have a teacher which didn’t take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but simply like an indication how I should study harder.(07天津)
16. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. (17新课标II)
17. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.(17新课标III)
18. As matter of fact, this is one of the reasons that organic foods are more expensive. (17上海)
19. They also had a small pond,which they raised fish. (18新课标I)
20. Respect the elderly is a Chinese tradition, what is valued by all Chinese. (17上海春季高考)
21. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.(19新课标III)
22.Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.(20新课标III)
23.Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy.(20新课标II)
状语从句
1.However, while John went back home, the tickets were still there.(08陕西)
In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.(13新课标I)
Toady I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.(07福建)
So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. (09辽宁)
In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. (09浙江)
The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.(18新课标II)
After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot.(20新课标I)
8. I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago.(12重庆)
9. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and I met under a tall tree and had our lunches. (11全国I)
10. It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. (11全国II)
11. But then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that they wouldn’t take the holiday.(10四川)
12. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently.(13陕西)
13. Since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please .(14新课标I)
14. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.(15陕西)
15. In my opinion,where in trouble,we should seek help from those we trust mostly.(21全国甲卷)
16. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. (19新课标I)
17. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. (21全国乙卷)
18. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.(18新课标II)
19.The position of the classroom with its view made me feel like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.(15浙江)
20. How do you think I should do If you are me ,would you talk to him (15四川)
21. To deal with the problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water.(12全国II)
22 .When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food, his clothes, or his room, but he has to work till he wants to live comfortable.(06广东)
23. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. (12四川)
24. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem.(14新课标I)
25. Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .(16新课标I)
26. August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only a little rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. (08福建)
27. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day.(20新课标II)
28. I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. (17新课标I卷)
29. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. (15新课标全国II)
易混词、否定词
1. I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners.(08天津)
2. One day, while my friend and I were traveling through Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little money. We decided to stop at a village market to buy something to eat.( 08安徽)
3. Hope you good health and much happiness every day! (12四川)
4. How are you those days (12重庆)
5.The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up.(06全国)
6. I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from you.(06江西)
7. Since you have visited Greece several times, I would like to know whether you have seen the old buildings here.(06浙江)
8. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. (15浙江)
9. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.(12四川)
10. Organic foods are usually more expensive, makes people unwilling to spend the extra money. Besides, they do have certain advantages.(17上海)
11. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.(18新课标I)
12. Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. (12浙江)
13. Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.(14新课标I)
14. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (19新课标I)
16. In my opinion,where in trouble,we should seek help from those we trust mostly.(21全国甲卷)
17. My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. (11新课标)
18. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. (12辽宁)
六、词义重叠
也为赘述,是指在一些固定表达中或从上下文逻辑来看用了多余的词,从而使句子表达不合规范或造成逻辑上的重复。
1. Now I really enjoyed studying because I’m growing old and know what I want it.(07 陕西)
2. Both the diet and the exercise will help me to lose weight and feel more better.(05 广东)
3. I read your e-mail to my parents and showed them the photo you sent it to me.(06 江西)
4. Gradually, I became interested in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college.(12重庆)
5. Here I am in the middle of a city, 350miles far away from our farmhouse. (13浙江)
6. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(18新课标I)
7. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times 1 asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. (18新课标II)
8. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.(18新课标III)
9. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(14四川)
10. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school.(19新课标I)
11.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. (19新课标II)
12. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.(13辽宁)
13. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.(13陕西)
14. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.(20新课标III)
15.Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day.(20新课标II)
16. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook.(20新课标II)
过手训练
1. My house is about three kilometers far away from the National Stadium, also known as the “Bird’s Nest”, where the opening ceremony will be held. (08福建)
2. He wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it.(08陕西)
3. It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it has a very big schoolyard. (06陕西)
4. I’m sure you will find one you like it.(06陕西)
5. The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. (13新课标II)
6. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water used in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. (12全国II)
7. He wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. (11辽宁)
8.I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. (17新课标I)
9.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools.(17新课标II)
10. When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. (17新课标III)
11. According to study, organically grown foods provide with 21.1 percent more irons and 27 percent more vitamin C than regular ones on the average.(17上海)
12. Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .(16新课标I)
13. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem.(14新课标I)
14. For an example, they ought to go back home often see their parents and accompany them. (17上海春季高考)
7. We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.”(12辽宁)
8. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! (12四川)
17. My soccer coach retired in last week.(15陕西)
18. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(18新课标I)
19. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. (16新课标III)
七、介词的误用
主要指介词与动词,形容词,名词的搭配和介词惯用词组等不正确。考查形式主要是介词的多余,缺失或错用。是短文改错中出现频率最高,也是考生最容易失分的一种错误。这一部分需要平时多积累,弄清常用介词的固定搭配。
1. Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. (12浙江)
2. Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.(07 辽宁)
3. After having a short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down.(07 重庆)
4. We also had to do plenty of homework and hand it on time.(07 陕西)
5. After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. (09全国I)
6. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. (10辽宁)
7. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets.(10重庆)
8. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.(11全国)
9. With the help of katia, a roommate of mine, I've soon got used to live without my parents around. (11重庆)
10. I look forward to see her again in the near future.(10全国II)
11. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. (12辽宁)
12. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. (13新课标I)
13. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities.(14新课标II)
14. Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.(14新课标I)
15. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(14四川)
16. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. (15新课标I)
17. My soccer coach retired in last week.(15陕西)
18. When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. (17新课标III)
19. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. (17新课标II)
20. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.(17新课标I)
21. According to study, organically grown foods provide with 21.1 percent more irons and 27 percent more vitamin C than regular ones on the average.(17上海)
22. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. (18新课标II)
23. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. (19新课标II)
24. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". (19新课标III)
25. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. (20新课标I)
26. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day.(20新课标II)
27. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in school in my hometown.(20新课标II)
过手训练
1. August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only a little rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. (08福建)
2. There are so many places I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer. (08安徽)
3. I have just got some good news to tell to you.(08全国I)
4. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time.(08全国卷I)
5. But I couldn’t explain them with English clearly.(08天津)
6. It is also a window which we can learn about American society.(08重庆)
7. We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.”(12辽宁)
8. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! (12四川)
9. The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. (13新课标全国卷I)
10. He wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.(11辽宁)
11. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. (12陕西)
12. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. (14陕西)
13. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.(14辽宁)
14. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.(14浙江)
15. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.(14浙江)
16. Please help with me and give me some advice. (15四川)
17. My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.(15浙江)
18. Now I am leaving home to college.(16新课标III)
19. What’s more, the government should provide assistance with the elderly.(17上海春季高考)
20. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need.(12全国I)
21. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. (21全国乙卷)
22. Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire.One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble (21全国甲卷)
23. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. (21全国甲卷)
八、冠词的误用
英语中冠词只有三个。从高考中英语改错题的角度来看,只能从以下几个方面出题:不定冠词a 和an 互改;不定冠词a 或 an 和定冠词the 互改;根据需要增删冠词。
1. I had a interesting dream last night. (07 浙江)
2. An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms.(07 四川)
3. What surprised us most there was the beauty of scenes.(07 重庆)
4. And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break the laws of his parents, he may go to the prison.(06 广东 )
5. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.(11全国II)
6. Tomorrow is first day of school.(13浙江)
7. Are the years you spent at school best years of your life (07陕西)
8. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. (13辽宁)
9. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.(14新课标II)
10. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside.(15新课标I)
11. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.(17新课标II)
12. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments.(17新课标III)
13. I still remember how hard first day was.(17新课标I)
14. For an example, they ought to go back home often see their parents and accompany them. (17上海春季高考)
15. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (19新课标I)
16. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.(19新课标I)
17. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.(19新课标III)
18.Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. (20新课标I)
19.For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple.(20新课标III)
过手训练
1. My house is about three kilometers away from the National Stadium, also known as the “Bird’s Nest”, where opening ceremony will be held. (08福建)
2. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as well as the 2008 Olympic Games.(08全国II)
3. One day, the school held party, where I was invited to talk about Tianjin.(08天津)
4. The play tells humorous stories that happen in the Green’s family.(08重庆)
5. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a good time for all of us.(08辽宁)
6. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. (14辽宁)
7. That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!(14陕西)
8. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. (15浙江)
9. As matter of fact, this is one of the reasons that organic foods are more expensive. (17上海)
10.As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times 1 asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. (18新课标II)
九、形容词和副词使用错误
短文改错中常出现用形容词作句子状语或用副词作句子定语或者表语的错误。还要注意检查形容词,副词的级别选用问题和附加修饰语是否使用正确。
1. I felt very proudly of myself.(07 浙江)
2. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing had happened until the class was over.(07 福建)
3. He cried,"I'm on disability pay!I don't want to be a normally person!"(09四川)
4. Still, your happiness makes him happily too.(10重庆)
5. There was Uncle Chen, a gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer.(10全国I)
6. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.(09浙江)
7. I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. (12新课标)
8. After waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. (13陕西)
9. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.(14辽宁)
10. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. (15新课标全国II)
11. Mom said,”How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” (15新课标全国II)
12. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. (15陕西)
13. I thought the biscuits were really well. (15陕西)
14. I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road. (17新课标I)
15. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. (17新课标II)
16. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.(17新课标III)
17.I felt happily that their life had improved. (18新课标I)
18. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. (18新课标III)
19. Immediate, I raised my hand. (18新课标III)
20. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. (19新课标I)
21. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. (19新课标II)
22. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. (19新课标II)
23. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.(19新课标III)
24. Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself.(20新课标I)
25. I’m surely you'll have a good time.(20新课标II)
26. See you sooner.(20新课标II)
27. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.(20新课标III)
28. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. (21全国乙卷)
过手训练
1. I said, “They’re cheap and they really taste well.”(08安徽)
2. Then John read some reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one!(08陕西)
3. I headed for the company, feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelops in five hours and earn the money.(08浙江)
4. In winter, a lot of white birds come to my city for food. They can wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long time. (06重庆)
5. My mother is very much kind and is friendly to everybody. (13大纲)
Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily.(12重庆)
Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home.(12辽宁)
8. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it.(13四川)
9. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is what other teachers say。(13辽宁)
10. I remember my grandfather very much. (13新课标全国I)
11. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! (14新课标全国I)
12. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.(14新课标全国I)
13. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.(14浙江)
14. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. (14浙江)
15. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field.(15浙江)
16. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.(16新课标I)
17. They were also the best and worse years in my life .(16新课标III)
18. When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.(16浙江)
19. Without such chemicals, they need more care to stay health.(17上海)
20. Organically grown foods also had more nutrition than regular ones because the soil is careful done in a higher standard.(17上海)
21. It is also very important for the society to develop healthy. (17上海春季高考)
22. In my opinion,where in trouble,we should seek help from those we trust mostly.(21全国甲卷)
十、 非谓语动词的误用
非谓语动词包括动词不定式、动名词和分词。在改错测试中,要求判断是用不定式、动名词还是分词。句子中有分词,就要判断这个分词是表示主动还是表示被动;是表示现在还是表示过去;是该用现在分词还是过去分词。
短文改错中出现的非谓语作主语
1. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. (14辽宁)
2. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. (13新课标卷II)
3. Respect the elderly is a Chinese tradition, what is valued by all Chinese. (17上海春季高考)
短文改错中出现的非谓语作宾语
1. My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!(15陕西)
2. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.(15四川)
3. It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.(15四川)
4. After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.(15新课标II)
5. Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. (12四川)
6. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. (15浙江)
7. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to live without my parents around. (11重庆)
8. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known. (11辽宁)
9. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong.(11浙江)
10. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer. (10全国I)
11. I look forward to see her again in the near future.(10全国II)
12. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well. (08全国I)
13. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. (08全国II)
14. We decided stop at a village market to buy something to eat.(08安徽)
15. Perhaps someone who wanted see the play would take them. (08陕西)
16. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. (08四川)
17. And there were many meaningful things that are worth think of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family. (08重庆)
18. Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. (07重庆)
19. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.(07福建)
20. I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. (13新课标全国卷I)
21. I have often dreamed of talk face to with you. (08全国I)
22. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.(16新课标III)
23. Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping。(16四川)
24. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. (16浙江)
25. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times 1 asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. (18新课标II)
26. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more.(19新课标III)
27. My mom told me how to preparing it. (20新课标I)
28. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others.(21全国甲卷)
短文改错中出现的非谓语作定语
1. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.(12陕西)
2. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. (12全国II)
3. He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first reach the factory. (11四川)
4. Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor. (11陕西)
5. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.(06 全国)
6. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.(10浙江)
7. So this problem has become a heating issue.(17上海春季高考)
8. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook.(20新课标I)
短文改错中出现的非谓语作补语
1. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. (13四川)
2. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.(12新课标)
3. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. (11全国I)
4. But , to my surprise , when he gets home , he saw the animal waiting at the door , still wore his jacket with the wallet in the pocket . (07四川)
5. I am proud of it. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. (06天津)
6. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter.(07 重庆)
7. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.(15浙江)
8. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!(17新课标II)
9. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty".(19新课标III)
10.Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. (14全国大纲)
11. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. (20新课标III)
短文改错中出现的非谓语作表语
1. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.(13浙江)
2. Other way is watch our everyday use of water and electric at home.(12全国I)
3. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. (12重庆)
4. “Boss,” he said, “that medicine really works!” “I’m pleasing to hear it,” said his boss, “but where were you yesterday ” (11四川)
5. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny.(10陕西)
6. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. (10辽宁)
7. My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested.(10新课标)
8. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. (08全国I)
9. The Story about Growth is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested.(08重庆)
10. I am very exciting to learn that you’re coming to Beijing for the Olympic. (08福建)
11. At dinner, we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving. (16四川)
12. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!(16浙江)
13. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house.(17新课标II)
14. I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.(19新课标I)
15. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. (19新课标II)
16. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. (19新课标III)
17. My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. (20新课标II)
短文改错中出现的非谓语作状语
1.“Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “ You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you ” (10浙江))
2. The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands in fear. (09四川)
3. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people we were familiar with. (08辽宁)
4.The man did as told and slept really well, wake up before the alarm had even gone off.(11四川)
5. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious. (13陕西)
6. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. (14陕西)
7. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.(11全国新课标)
8. At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.” (15陕西)
9.Organic foods are usually more expensive, makes people unwilling to spend the extra money.(17上海)
10. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. (18新课标III)
11. For an example, they ought to go back home often see their parents and accompany them.(17上海春季高考)
12. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. (19新课标I)
13. .In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. (20新课标III)