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Unit 7 Will people have robots
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作公开课课件
一、教学目标
1. 巩固一般将来时意义、结构和语用功能；
2.能够运用一般将来时谈论未来生活，同时完成题为“My life
in 20 years”的写作任务。
3.通过对人生理想的讨论，让学生树立人生理想，并为之努力；
4.能积极参与合作学习，学会分享互助。
二、教学重点
1. 巩固一般将来时意义、结构和语用功能；
2.能够运用一般将来时谈论未来生活，同时完成题为“My life in
20 years”的写作任务。
三、教学难点
1.通过对人生理想的讨论，让学生树立人生理想，并为之努力；
2.能积极参与合作学习，学会分享互助。
Let's sing!
Tomorrow will be better!
After listening to the song ,discuss What the life will be like in the future
My life in twenty years
free time activities
friends
job
pets
places to live
dressing
Free talk:Guess
Groupwork:Make predictions
How will you be different in the future
Maybe 20 years from now
look job place to work place to live
sports clothes things do on weekends I will be more beautiful.
I will have lots of money.
I won’t go to school.
I will have a big house.
……
In 20 years
3a Complet Jill's article about " what life will be like in the future".
方法指导：首先,阅读备选单词,明白每个单词的意思;阅读并整体把握短文大意。
其次，分析有空格的每个句子，根据句意及上下文意来判断每个空格应填的词。
最后，再通读一遍短文，看是否通顺合理。
In 20 years, I think I'll be a newspaper reporter. I'll ____in Shanghai, because there will be ___jobs in that city. As a reporter, I think I will ____lots of interesting people, so I'll have more friends. I'll have ___pets, though, because I'll have ____free time. And my apartment will be no good for pets because it'll be too small. So I'll probably just ___a bird. During the week, I'll ___smart clothes. On the weekend, I'll ____less smart but I'll be more comfortable. In the future, people will ____more so they'll probably have fewer vacations, but I think I'll ____a holiday in Hong Kong when possible. One day I'll even go to Australia.
meet work live look keep wear more less fewer take
Answer the questions:
1. Why will she live in Shanghai
2. Will she have meet lots of interesting people
3. Will her apartment be good for pets Why
4. What kind of clothes will she wear on the weekend
5. Will people have more vacations
Because there will be more jobs.
Yes,she will.
No,it won't.Because her apartment will be too small.
She will wear less smart and more comfortable clothes.
No,they won't.
Answer the questions:
1. Why will she live in Shanghai
2. Will she have meet lots of interesting people
3. Will her apartment be good for pets Why
4. What kind of clothes will she wear on the weekend
5. Will people have more vacations
Because there will be more jobs.
Yes,she will.
No,it won't.Because her apartment will be too small.
She will wear less smart and more comfortable clothes.
No,they won't.
job
places to live
friends
pets
She’ll be a newspaper reporter.
She’ll meet ...,so she’ll have more friends.
She’ll have fewer pets…She’ll probably
just keep a bird.
She’ll live in Shanghai, because...
dressing
During ..., she’ll wear smart clothes.
On the weekend, she’ll look less smart…
free time activities
She’ll take a holiday in Hong
Kong when possible.
Jill’s life
in
twenty
years
Summary:
3b:Complete the chart about your life 20 years from now. You can add more items.
What will your … be like job
home
free time activities
neighborhood
pilot
in an apartment
keep some plants
near a park
Write about your life 20 years from now. Use 3a and 3b to help you.
In ten years, I think I’ll be a … ________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
Writing task
人们总是憧憬这美好的未来，希望生活会越来越好。请发挥你的想象力，想象20年后，你的生活将会发生怎么样的改变。请你从工作、家庭、业余生活、朋友等方面展开联想，以一篇题为”My life in 20 years”的文章，谈谈20年后的生活情况。
要求：1. 内容完整，语句连贯，语法准确；
2. 词数70个左右。
【一、写作指导】
本文为写自己未来二十年后的工作及生活，因此，时态应用一般将来时态(will+v.)。
首先，根据3b中自己所填表格中的内容，来想像一下自己的生活、工作、家庭、业余活动、自己周围的生活环境等。
将上述几个方面逐条写出来，并注意恰当运用连接词，以使文章连贯通顺。
最后，通读一遍短文，检查是否有错误。
【第二步：思路点拨】
【第三步：列提纲】
1．开头： 总述并引起下文。
参考句型： (1) What will the life be like in 20 years
(2) My life in 20 years will be …
2．主体： 详细描述自己20年之后的职业、居住地周围环境、业余活动等。
参考句型：(1)I will be a….(2) I will live in….
(3)There will be….
3．结尾：总结全文，首尾呼应。
参考句型：That' s my life in 20 years.
the structure(结构) of this article
beginning:
title标题
body
ending:
My Life in 20 Years
job: what, where, how…
look: build, clothes…
home: house, family, pets…
free time activities: sports,
hobbies, travel …
give reasons
第四步：巧衔接。
本文要描述自己20年后的生活，自然会多次用到句型 I will，这种平行结构的重复使用可以达到连接上下文的目的。另外，本文是从不同角度畅想未来生活，所以可用and，then，even，what's more等表示语义增进，以使行文过渡自然、流畅。
第五步：检查修改，成篇章。
My life in the future is colorful and meaningful.
In 20 years, I think I’ll be a pilot. I’ll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing. I want to live with them. I’ll live in a large apartment. As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I’ll keep some plants in my apartment. There’ll be a park near my home. I’ll take a walk after dinner. I like chess, so I can also play chess with my friends in the park.
I’m sure my dream will come true. Because of my hard work, the life in the future will get better and better.
more/fewer more/less
Job people pollution robot fresh water paper planet car clean air city free time building money tree
1. Put the words in the correct columns
in the chart.
Self Check
1. more后面可跟可数名词或不可数名词；
2. fewer后面跟可数名词；
3. less 后面跟不可数名词；
more/fewer more/less
job, people
robot， planet
car, city
building, tree
pollution,
fresh water
paper clean air
free time money
方法指导方法指导
2. Fill in the blanks in the conversation.
Girl: Mom, what will the future ____ like
Mom: Well, no one knows what the future will be _____.
Girl: But _____ I be beautiful like you _____ I be a pilot I want to fly up into the sky.
Mom: You’re already beautiful. And
you should study hard. Then you
_____ be a pilot.
Girl: OK. I must study harder then.
Mom: But you should also remember that ______ will ____both good and bad things in life.
Girl: Oh, I’m not scared, Mom, because you ______ help me!
Homework
1. Rewrite a better composition.
2. Exchange and enjoy your group
members’ compositions.
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