(共40张PPT)
扶余一中
孟广娇
Twinkle, twinkle, little ____
How I wonder what you___
Up above the world so ____
Like a diamond in the_____
Little Star
rhythm
rhyme
repetition
star
are
high
sky
In your opinion, what may this article talk about
A Few Simple Forms of English Poems
Nursery
rhyme
童谣
List
poem
清单诗
Haiku
俳句
Cinquain
五行诗
Tang
Poem
唐诗
What’s the main idea of the article
Find out the five forms of poems.
First reading
concrete imaginative,delight,rhyme and rhthm ,a lot of repetition, not make sense, contradictory, easy
Second reading
Underline rhyming words and repetition.
Nursery
rhyme
Poem A
characteristics
Hush, little baby, don’t say a word,
Papa’s going to buy you a mockingbird.
If that mockingbird won’t sing,
Papa’s going to buy you a diamond ring.
If that diamond ring turns to brass,
Papa’s going to buy you a looking glass.
If that looking-glass gets broke,
Papa’s going to buy you a billy-goat.
If that billy-goat runs away,
Papa’s going to buy you another today.
word
sing
ring
brass
glass
broke
goat
away
today
bird
Poem A
Hush
When do people usually sing this nursery rhyme
Second reading
Underline repeated phrases or rhyming words.
flexible line length
repeated phrases
some rhyme, some don’t
List
poem
Poem B
Poem C
characteristics
Our first football match
We would have won…
if Jack had just scored that goal,
if we’d had just a few more minutes,
if we had trained harder,
if Ben had passed the ball to Joe,
if we’d had thousands of fans screaming,
if I hadn’t taken my eye off the ball,
if we hadn’t stayed up so late the night before,
if we hadn’t taken it easy,
if we hadn’t run out of energy,
We would have won…
if we’d been better!
Our first football match
We would have won…
if Jack had just scored that goal,
if we’d had just a few more minutes,
if we had trained harder,
if Ben had passed the ball to Joe,
if we’d had thousands of fans screaming,
if I hadn’t taken my eye off the ball,
if we hadn’t stayed up so late the night before,
if we hadn’t taken it easy,
if we hadn’t run out of energy,
We would have won…
if we’d been better!
Poem C
Second reading
5 lines
a strong picture
in a few words
Cinquain
Poem D
Poem E
Find out more characteristics.
characteristics
Line1.
Line2.
Line3.
Line4.
Line5.
a noun
the topic
two adjectives
describe the topic
three verbs ending with -ing
the topic's action
four words
deeper descriptions
a word
another name for the topic
Brother
Beautiful, athletic
Teasing, shouting, laughing
Friend and enemy too
Mine
Poem D
Line 1: a noun ---- the topic
Line 2: two adjectives describing the topic
Line 3: three verbs+ing----the topic’s action
Line 4: four words --- the deeper description
Line 5: a word----another name
Summer
salty
Drying
drooping
dreading
Week
in
week
out
Endless
Sleepy
Cinquain
Poem E
Second reading
Count whether there are 17 syllables
What picture can you think of
17 syllables
a clear picture
minimum of words
Haiku
Poem D
Poem E
characteristics
A fallen blossom
is coming back to the branch.
look, a butterfly!
7
17 syllables
5
5
Poem F
Haiku
Second reading
Poem H.
Get the main idea and guess the title
translation from the Chinese
Tang
poem
characteristics
Poem H
Where she awaits her husband,
On and on the river flows
Never looking back,
Transformed into stone.
Day by day upon the mountain top,
wind and rain revolve.
Should the traveller return,
this stone would utter speech.
(by Wang Jian)
The poem tells a story about a woman who was waiting on the ________ top for her _______. Year after year, the wife became a ______ which looks like a woman watching into far distance.
Second reading ---Poem H
mountain
husband
stone
望夫石
望夫处，江悠悠。
化为石，不回头。 山头日日风复雨，
行人归来石应语。
repeated phrases
some rhyme
5 lines
a strong picture
17 syllables
a clear picture
translation
from
the Chinese
strong rhyme and rhythm
a lot of repetition.
Five forms
Five forms
Nursery rhyme
List poem
Summary
Haiku
Tang poem
Cinquain
③
④
①
②
⑤
Love is giving ,
Love is living ,
Love is taking someone’s load,
Love helps them along the road.
Love is caring,
Love is sharing,
Love will seek the best for others,
Love treats everyone as brothers.
Love
Sweet, warm
Saying, helping, giving
Bring happiness, bring hope
Forever
First autumn morning,
The mirror I stare into
Shows my father’s face.
COMING HOME
I left home young , I return old.
Speaking as then, but with hair grow thin;
and my children, meeting me, do not know me.
They smile and say:
Stranger, where do you come from
回乡偶书
少小离家老大回, 乡音无改鬓毛衰.
儿童相见不相识, 笑问客从何处来.
Ten little Indian boys
One little, two little, three little Indians,
Four little, five little, six little Indians
Seven little, eight little, nine little Indians,
Ten little Indian boys.
Let’s try to write a Cinquain together.
1.decide the topic (seasons, nature, friends, parents…)
2. give another name of the topic.
3.think of some adjectives to describe the topic
4.think of the actions of the topic
5.what’s your opinions and feelings of the topic
Father
Mine
Unselfish, thoughtful
Calming, laughing, guiding
Friend and teacher too
Money
Important, attractive
Printing, publishing, shopping
Easy come, easy go
Wealth
Angel
Pure, beautiful
Hoping, praying, helping
God and human too
Ours
Rubbish
Smelly, harmful
Throwing, spreading, polluting
Abandon day after day
Endless
Eyes
Bright, big
Seeing, feeling, talking
The window of heart
Mine
Grass
Green, tiny
Growing, struggling, contributing
Make the world beautiful
Endless
Students
Active, lovely
Reading, appreciating, writing
Passion and creation too
Mine
I want to teach my students how to live this life on earth, To face its struggle and its strife and improve their worth. Not just the lesson in a book or how the rivers flow, But how to choose the proper path wherever they may go. To understand eternal truth and know the right from wrong, And gather all the beauty of a flower and a song. For if I help the world to grow in wisdom and in grace, Then, I shall feel that I have won and I have filled my place. And so I ask my guidance, God, that I may do my part, For character and confidence and happiness of heart.
1. Try to imitate other poems and e-mail them to me. ajiao@
2. Surf the Internet and find more poems to appreciate. http://www.funny-poems.co.uk/
http://www.english-/
Homework(共30张PPT)
英语书面表达
写作技巧指导
扶余一中 王兆霞
brainstorm
Teenagers’
colorful life
We study .
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC .
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
Teenagers’
healthy life
We study all day.
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC.
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
写作第一步
审
健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审
travel
stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列
写作第二步
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点
如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲
stay at home
work
visit friends or parents
travel
A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.
列
A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
How do people spend their vacation We made a survey and here is our survey report.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
a nice head
a nice tail
a nice body
加
加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
写作第三步：
3 2 1 4 6 5
Second , we should keep quiet in the library.
First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us don’t like them at all.
Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.
What’s more, we ought to return books on time.
Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.
Third , we must do lots of homework.
How do people spend their vacation We made a survey and here is our survey report.
A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.
连
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
写作第四步：
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words;
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact,
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking,
关联词
Let’s play the game.
_____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____.
We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.
How do people spend their vacation We made a survey and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
连
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美
美
选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
写作第五步：
Skill One Make your sentences correct
Good good study, day day up.
We should do sports a week once.
Save the environment is our duty.
There is going to have a meeting today.
I hope I can come true my dream.
once a week
Saving
be
achieve
Skill Two Express in different ways
Our parents really wish us to work hard.
Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.
The teenagers like the computers.
The teenagers are fond of the computers.
We shouldn’t eat junk food.
We should stay away from the junk food.
When he spoke, he got more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he got.
We should learn English grammar.
It’s important to learn English grammar.
书面表达写作技巧
审
列
加
连
美
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表
达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
书面表达
以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。
Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）
My dream is to be…/to do…/to go…
I enjoy /like/prefer…
To make my dream come true, I …
If my dream comes true…
I have a dream
Have you ever watched a bike racing The riders are cool! Yeah, it’s my dream to be a professional bike rider.
I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, I’ve been riding for 5 years. Some people think it’s dangerous, I don’t think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting That is!
To make my dream come true, I’ll practice more after middle school. Also, I’ll watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.
Passage One
I have a dream
Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.
Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream Just because I admire they’re free, they can do everything they want.
When they’re flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even they’re the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it won’t be achieved any more.
It’s just a dream, in my heart.
Passage Two
Passage Three
I have a dream
My dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it.
自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。
I did a survey about whether middle
school students should run 1500 meters
every day. Here are the results.
观点 原因 你的观点
赞同 可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好
不赞同 太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡觉
All of us have holidays in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday We did a survey and here are the results.
— from Cai Piaoli
It’s nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation According to our survey, there are several ways.
— from Zhang Shiyi
All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better.
— from Liu Miao
So this year, why not consider going outside Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.
— from Wu You
