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倒装在写作中的运用
写作小专题(一)
本微课适合高三学生
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1.Only after her mother came to help her for the first few months was she allowed to begin her project. (Book 4 unit 1)
2.Not all cultures greet each other the same way, nor are they comfortable in the same way with touching or distance between people. (Book 4 unit 4)
3.Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting were the impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris. (Book 6 unit 1)
遍地开花的倒装
news
films and television
text book
倒装在句子的作用
function
sentence
Tom
Tom is such a kind man that
everyone likes him.
Such a kind man is Tom that
everyone likes him.
kind
1.强调(特征,方式,时间,原因。。。)
1:Only in this way can you hope to improve your English.
2.Not until the last moment did he tell me the truth.
3.Had it not been for your help, I would have been really embarrassed yesterday!
有通知在墙上写着:请节约用水!
On the wall is a notice saying, “Please Save Water!”
2.增强描述效果,有画面感
Up went the arrow into the air.
飕的一下箭射上了天。
3.与上下文紧密衔接,句子保持平衡
在国庆期间我去了香港,那里住着我的祖父母。
During the National Day holiday, I went to Hong Kong, where live my grandparents.
4. 简洁
期末考试临近,大家都如此的努力,我也是。
As the final examination was around the corner, every one worked hard, so did I.
了解并掌握倒装句各种句式的用法, 不仅会提高我们对英语语言的欣赏能力, 对英语句子表达能力的提高也将大有裨益。
文章
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车终于来了,我们大大地松了口气。一上车,玛丽就开始找钱买票,但是她翻遍了口袋却没找到钱。这时候她才想到她把钱包落在家里了。于是我帮她付了钱,她一脸感激并向我道谢。第二天,当我走进教室的时候,有东西吸引了我。你猜什么?桌上放着一张卡片,写着 ,“非常感谢你,昨天要不是你的帮助,我真的是太尴尬了.”
例举高三(10)班课堂续写小片段练习
A:1.Finally a bus came, and we all sighed with great relief. 2.Mary searched her pockets for the money as soon as she got on the bus . Unfortunately, she failed. 3.Then she came to realize that she had left her wallet at home. Seeing that, I paid for her, and she thanked me with a look of gratitude. The next day when I entered my classroom, something drew my attention. You know what 4.A card was on my desk and it read, “Thank you from the bottom of my heart. 5.If it had not been for your help, I would have been really embarrassed yesterday!”
B: 1.Finally there came the bus, and we all sighed with great relief. 2.Hardly had Mary got on the bus when she searched her pockets for the money. Unfortunately, she failed. 3.Only then did she come to realize that she had left her wallet at home. Seeing that, I paid for her, and she thanked me with a look of gratitude. The next day when I entered my classroom, something drew my attention. You know what 4.On my desk was a card, reading , “Thank you from the bottom of my heart. 5.Had it not been for your help, I would have been really embarrassed yesterday!”
compare
B:Finally there came the bus, and we all sighed with great relief. 2.Hardly had Mary got on the bus when she searched her pockets for the money. Unfortunately, she failed. 3.Only then did she come to realize that she had left her wallet at home. Seeing that, I paid for her, and she thanked me with a look of gratitude. The next day when I entered my classroom, something drew my attention. You know what On my desk was a card, reading , “Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Had it not been for your help, I would have been really embarrassed yesterday!”
compare
C: Finally there came the bus, and we all sighed with great relief. 2.The moment Mary got on the bus, she searched her pockets for the money. Unfortunately, she failed. 3.It suddenly occurred to her that she had left her wallet at home. Seeing that, I paid for her, and she thanked me with a look of gratitude. The next day when I entered my classroom, something drew my attention. You know what On my desk was a card. It read, “Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Had it not been for your help, I would have been really embarrassed yesterday!”
适当!自然!
适当用一些倒装句式会使文章表达更生动、并增色不少。
小试牛刀
--- 2020高考续写原题
跟踪练习
Practice
“I’m going to miss you so much,Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy.” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box. she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. _________________________________________
1.闻了一会儿,小狗又走近了一点,然后它发出了一声愉快的叫声。看起来它似乎已经走出了悲伤,爸爸妈妈好像也一样。
2.一看到这个小东西,Poppy往后退了一点点,但是当它知道这是一只可爱的狗狗的时候,它是如此的高兴,以致于它飞快地摇动自己的尾巴。
3.小男孩是如此的惊讶以致于都说不出话来了。
4.小男孩一走进家门,他就大喊,“妈妈,我回来了!”
尝试运用
1.闻了一会儿,小狗又走近了一点,然后它发出了一声愉快的叫声。看起来它似乎已经走出了悲伤,爸爸妈妈好像也一样。
--After sniffing a while, she got a bit closer and then she let out a cheerful bark. Gradually, it seemed that she walked out of the sorrow, so did the parents.
2.一看到这个小东西,Poppy往后退了一点点,但是当它知道这是一只可爱的狗狗的时候,它是如此的高兴,以致于它飞快地摇动自己的尾巴。
3.小男孩是如此的惊讶以致于都说不出话来了。
4.小男孩一走进家门,他就大喊,“妈妈,我回来了!”
---Upon seeing this little thing, Poppy stepped back a little bit, but when he realized it was a sweet dog, so happy was she that she wagged her tail quickly.
---So surprised was the boy that he lost his tongue.
---No sooner had the little boy stepped into the house than he yelled, “Mum, I'm coming back.”
=Hardly had the little boy stepped into the house when he yelled, “Mum, I’m coming back.”
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