Unit 7 How much are these socks? 写作量表学案

7A Unit 7 Writing：Advertisement
I. Teaching procedures
Step1 Pre-writing
Accumulate（积累）
—List the key words: 买_____________ 卖____________需要__________服装_____________
毛衣__________ 裤子___________ 鞋子____________袜子___________
短裙___________T-恤____________ 价格____________美元_____________
大的____________小的___________长的_____________短的_____________
---List the key phrases: 服装店___________________________多少钱____________________________
一双_________________________ 以优惠的价格__________________________
降价销售________________________大减价______________________________
各种颜色的毛衣_____________________________________________________
Think
Layout(谋篇布局) the structure of the composition 文章结构_____________________________
Beginning开头______________________________________________________________________
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③Body正文
④Ending结尾及结束语
建议句型
This pair of black shoes is only 20 dollars.
How much are these shoes
All the clothes in our store are on sale.
We sell all our school things at very good prices.
We have sweaters in all colors for only 30 dollars.
Socks are only 5 dollars for three pairs.
I’ll take it.
Come to Mr. Cool’s Clothes Store now.
Step2 While-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：假设你经营了一家名为 Sunshine Store的文具店请根据下表内容写一则英文促销广告。词数80词左右。
School things Color Price
notebooks all colors 12 yuan
pencil boxes black，white 20 yuan
erasers yellow 5 yuan for 3
rulers gray 2 yuan
Sale at Sunshine Store
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The second draft
7A Unit 7 Marking ladders
Title Sale at Sunshine Store
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an appeal and make a smooth transition. (1 point)
Para ： I have described the school things according to the table. (9 points)
Para ： I have advocated the potential customers to come and buy something. (1 point)
I have used different sentence patterns and expressions to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used simple present tense ( do sth) . (1 point)
I have used “how much” properly. For example, How much is this blue sweater. (1 point)
I have used cardinal number properly. For example, It’s twenty-two dollars now . (1 point)
I can find the real subject and I have used the be verb correctly. For example,The price of the skirts is only 20 dollars. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words and my punctuation. For example, I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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