7B Unit 7 It’s raining!
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Brainstorm: How is the weather
Guide the students to talk about the weather. Then fill in the chart.
It is...
four seasons
the weather
others
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense:
Person:
Details:
Structure:
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作:Write a postcard to your friend Louis. Tell her about your vacation and what you are doing.
写作要求:1.语句通顺,语意连贯,60词左右。
2.所写内容应包含表格5个方面内容,可适当拓展。
The first draft
Dear Louis,
Thanks for your letter.
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
The second draft
Dear Louis,
Thanks for your letter.
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
7B Unit 7 Marking ladders
Title A letter
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the weather in my city. (1 point)
Para : I have described at least four points: who, personality, cans and where. (9 points)
Para : I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used present tense. For example, I am having a good time (1 point)
I have used How questions properly. For example, How’s your summer vocation going (1 point)
I have described what I am doing. For example, I am writing to you. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example,I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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