Unit 10 I'd like some noodles写作导学案

7B Unit 10 I’d like some noodles
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Brainstorm: What kind of food would you like to eat
Guide the students to talk about the different foods they like. Guide the students imagine you have a restaurant and then write an ad for your restaurant. Then fill in the chart.
Different kinds of food
vegetable
meat
drink
Others
Lisa’s Dumpling House
What sizes of bowls Price Specials Price
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：Lisa’s Dumpling House. Use the chart to help you.
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格4个方面内容，可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
4. 60词左右。
The first draft
Lisa’s Dumpling House
The second draft
Lisa’s Dumpling House
7B Unit 10 Marking ladders
Title Lisa’s Dumpling House
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic Dumpling House. (1 point)
Para ： I have described at least five points: kinds, great specials, prices, address and phone. (9 points)
Para ： I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used Would you like… For example, Would you like to eat delicious dumplings (1 point)
I have used We have …special1… sentences properly. For example, We have three specials. Special1 has eggs and vegetables. (1 point)
I have used We have…,and…properly. For example, We have dumplings with beef and onions ,and are just 3 yuan for 10. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example, I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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