高考英语Summary writing 概要写作课件（18张PPT）
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(共18张PPT)
Summary writing
概要写作
Basic knowledge about summary writing
1.What is summary writing
2.What are the rules in scoring (得分)
It is a short form of reading. You are asked to use the key information to express the original meaning.
A summary writing
During World War II, in Amsterdam Anne
and her family hid away everywhere because
they were Jewish. Anne also had to make her
diary her best friend and told everything to it
so that she could not feel lonely.
档次 评分标准
第一档 (1-3) 没有理解原文,造成概要内容与原文主题不符。有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。多个句子抄自原文
第二档 (4-6) 理解有误差,仅涵盖半数要点。一有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第三档 (7-9) 理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但不影响意义表达。应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文内容连贯。一出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第四档 (10-12) 理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。一所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。—比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。有个别整句抄自原文。
第五档 (13-15) 理解准确涵盖全部要点。-能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。一完全使用自己的语言。
Task reading in our exam
Dogs can catch a cold and get it over if you do the followings.
Para 1
feed them healthy food
Para 2
keep them warm
Para 3
make them drink more water
Para 4
treat them with steam
What is exposition
An exposition is a kind of writing style. Usually there is a topic, and people will introduce / explain / describe / analyze… it objectively from different aspects(方面).
Task reading in our exam
Dogs can catch a cold and get it over if you do the followings.
Para 1
feed them healthy food
Para 2
keep them warm
Para 3
make them drink more water
Para 4
treat them with steam
A topic
Different aspects
Writing in the exam
1.Read the whole passage for the topic.
2.Read each paragraph for the key information.
In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’s 21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell off some steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online. “And sorry about the focus,” he wrote, “it was a selfie(自拍).” That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”, according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.
Oxford Dictionaries declared “Selfie”. In recent years, the act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject center-stage, has won great popularity with everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining it.
But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world’s most beautiful, and dangerous places has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior, such as hanging from a tall building, standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will never stop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. In fact, there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several government shave now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks because selfie-sticks have become a growing safety concern for our guests,” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks’ entrances.
The topic
The girl is selfieing.
Underline the key part(s)
Para1
In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’s 21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell off some steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online. “And sorry about the focus,” he wrote, “it was a selfie(自拍).” That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”, according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.
Key information
Key information
Para 2
Oxford Dictionaries declared “Selfie”. In recent years, the act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject center-stage, has won great popularity with everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining it.
Underline the key part(s)
Key information
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world’s most beautiful, and dangerous places has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior, such as hanging from a tall building, standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will never stop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. In fact, there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several government shave now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
Underline the key part(s)
Key information
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks because selfie-sticks have become a growing safety concern for our guests,” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks’ entrances.
Underline the key part(s)
Selfie
Para 1
That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”
Para 2
In recent years, the act has won great popularity with
everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S.
President Barack Obama joining it.
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior. Several governments have now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers.
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks .”
How to use your own words
Tip1
1. The boy felt depressed.
2. The boy was sad.
Tip2
1.Chalie Chaplin has a sense of humor.
2.Chalie Chaplin is humorous.
Tip3
1.Today we invite some teachers to our classroom.
2.Today some teachers are invited to our classroom.
Tip 4
1.When the students see the teachers, they feel excited.
2.Seeing the teachers, the students feel excited.
Words
Part of speech
Order
Grammar
Selfie
Para 1
That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”
Para 2
In recent years, the act has won great popularity with
everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S.
President Barack Obama joining it.
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior. Several governments have now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks.”
One possible version
The passage tells us something about “selfie”. The word “selfie” was first used by an Australian man in 2002. (point 1) Today, more and more people are crazy about taking selfies, including some famous people. (point2) But the popularity of selfie has caused some safety problems. Therefore, some governments show great concern about visitors’ safety. (point 3) Walt Disney also doesn’t allow visitors to use selfie-sticks in its theme parks. (point 4) (66 words)
Summary Writing
Show your
is right here waiting for you
Thank you , bye
Summary writing
概要写作
Basic knowledge about summary writing
1.What is summary writing
2.What are the rules in scoring (得分)
It is a short form of reading. You are asked to use the key information to express the original meaning.
A summary writing
During World War II, in Amsterdam Anne
and her family hid away everywhere because
they were Jewish. Anne also had to make her
diary her best friend and told everything to it
so that she could not feel lonely.
档次 评分标准
第一档 (1-3) 没有理解原文,造成概要内容与原文主题不符。有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。多个句子抄自原文
第二档 (4-6) 理解有误差,仅涵盖半数要点。一有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第三档 (7-9) 理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但不影响意义表达。应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文内容连贯。一出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第四档 (10-12) 理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。一所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。—比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。有个别整句抄自原文。
第五档 (13-15) 理解准确涵盖全部要点。-能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。一完全使用自己的语言。
Task reading in our exam
Dogs can catch a cold and get it over if you do the followings.
Para 1
feed them healthy food
Para 2
keep them warm
Para 3
make them drink more water
Para 4
treat them with steam
What is exposition
An exposition is a kind of writing style. Usually there is a topic, and people will introduce / explain / describe / analyze… it objectively from different aspects(方面).
Task reading in our exam
Dogs can catch a cold and get it over if you do the followings.
Para 1
feed them healthy food
Para 2
keep them warm
Para 3
make them drink more water
Para 4
treat them with steam
A topic
Different aspects
Writing in the exam
1.Read the whole passage for the topic.
2.Read each paragraph for the key information.
In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’s 21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell off some steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online. “And sorry about the focus,” he wrote, “it was a selfie(自拍).” That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”, according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.
Oxford Dictionaries declared “Selfie”. In recent years, the act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject center-stage, has won great popularity with everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining it.
But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world’s most beautiful, and dangerous places has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior, such as hanging from a tall building, standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will never stop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. In fact, there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several government shave now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks because selfie-sticks have become a growing safety concern for our guests,” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks’ entrances.
The topic
The girl is selfieing.
Underline the key part(s)
Para1
In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’s 21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell off some steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online. “And sorry about the focus,” he wrote, “it was a selfie(自拍).” That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”, according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.
Key information
Key information
Para 2
Oxford Dictionaries declared “Selfie”. In recent years, the act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject center-stage, has won great popularity with everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining it.
Underline the key part(s)
Key information
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world’s most beautiful, and dangerous places has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior, such as hanging from a tall building, standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will never stop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. In fact, there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several government shave now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
Underline the key part(s)
Key information
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks because selfie-sticks have become a growing safety concern for our guests,” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks’ entrances.
Underline the key part(s)
Selfie
Para 1
That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”
Para 2
In recent years, the act has won great popularity with
everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S.
President Barack Obama joining it.
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior. Several governments have now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers.
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks .”
How to use your own words
Tip1
1. The boy felt depressed.
2. The boy was sad.
Tip2
1.Chalie Chaplin has a sense of humor.
2.Chalie Chaplin is humorous.
Tip3
1.Today we invite some teachers to our classroom.
2.Today some teachers are invited to our classroom.
Tip 4
1.When the students see the teachers, they feel excited.
2.Seeing the teachers, the students feel excited.
Words
Part of speech
Order
Grammar
Selfie
Para 1
That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”
Para 2
In recent years, the act has won great popularity with
everyone from Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S.
President Barack Obama joining it.
Para 3
But the rise of selfie photography has also inspired a lot of risk-taking behavior. Several governments have now begun treating selfies as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
Para 4
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks.”
One possible version
The passage tells us something about “selfie”. The word “selfie” was first used by an Australian man in 2002. (point 1) Today, more and more people are crazy about taking selfies, including some famous people. (point2) But the popularity of selfie has caused some safety problems. Therefore, some governments show great concern about visitors’ safety. (point 3) Walt Disney also doesn’t allow visitors to use selfie-sticks in its theme parks. (point 4) (66 words)
Summary Writing
Show your
is right here waiting for you
Thank you , bye