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进门小练笔1. ……the + 形容词 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )最高级 + 名词 +(that)+ I have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc)Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen.姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen.刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。2. Nothing is + 形容词比较级 than to do sth Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to protect our environment.没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge.没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。3. An advantage of sth/doing sth is that + 句子(……的一个优点是……)An advantage of keeping pets is that you will never feel lonely. 养宠物的一个优点是你不会感到寂寞。An advantage ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.使用太阳能的一个优点是它不会制造任何污染。An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。4. The reason why + 句子 + is that + 句子(……的原因是……)The reason why we ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。5. The + adj/adv的比较级+（n.） + 主谓, the + adj/adv的比较级+（n.） + 主谓 (愈……愈……)The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。6. By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着……，……能够……)By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。By reading, we can broaden our horizon.通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。7. sth/doing sth en ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )able(s) + Object(宾语)+ to do主动 / to be done被动 (……使……能够……)Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.（宾语us与feel 之间是主动关系）听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Travelling enables our life to be enriched.（宾语life与enrich之间是被动关系）旅行能丰富人们的生活。Watching movies enables our horizon（视野） to be broadened.（被开阔）看电影能开阔视野。同学们再看看下面这两个例句是不是就一目了然了：The light enables Damin to see better.The light enables fish to be seen better.8. have a great influence on ~~ (对……有很大的影响) Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。9. do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对……有害) Reading does good to our mind. 读书对心灵有益。 Overwork does harm to health. 工作过度对健康有害。10. Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。11. Since + Subject(主语) + 一般过去式，Subject(主语) + 现在完成式。 Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中，他一直很用功。12. It is of importance that... ....是很重要的 精讲精练作文一、开头类：语文作文常言题好一半文，英语也一样，好 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的开头也就是一篇成功作文的一半，a good beginning is half done, 想想阅卷老师要批全年级许多作文，如果每篇上来都像串通好了一样的I think I think, 这会是如何郁闷的感觉，always put yourself in the other’s shoes, 写作文的时候也要换位思考，替批分的老师想想。如果这个老师，在进行了一上午枯燥的批阅过程后，猛然间，读到一个缤纷绚烂的开头，被深深shock到，被deeply impressed到, 那会是何等的惊艳！下面就来欣赏一些容易吸引眼球的闪亮开头。开头一：名人名言+谚语俗语记住，一篇120字左右的作文里，出现1-2句名言点缀一下即可，切忌为求华丽生搬硬套。在用到名言的时候，大致有这么4种：1. A proverb says，……2. It goes without saying that ……3. As a classic proverb goes that ……（推荐！）4. there is much truth in the saying “……”（俗话说得好……）推荐背诵的名人名言+谚语：在论述努力学习一类的作文中可用到以下这些：Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。（强调多做练习的重要性……）Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。（学习要坚持不懈）It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。A journey of a t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )housand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。（强调脚踏实地的重要性）Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。（学习，是要去做的）Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（做学问要实践）Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。（学习是个积累的过程）One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。（强调治学要严谨）An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。（不好好学习你就悲剧了）As a man sows, so shall he reap. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。（声明天道酬勤的真理）All work and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。（也要说说学习不能过度）开头二：数字统计，用报告说话要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。 不妨试用下面的句型： 1. According to a recent survey,…..2. A recent survey shows that ……开头三：描述身边现象/生活现状/社会现象在写到一些要求对某类热点民生话题的作文时，开头可以这样写1. An increasing ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )number of people are beginning to realize that ……（比如意识到环保、节能、低碳的重要性）2. Many indivi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )duals, if not the most, hold the idea that …… （比较高阶的一种，词漂亮又有插入语，推荐！）3. Now, it is generally accepted/commonly thought that ……4. Nowadays, many people are living under the idea/thought that ……5. …… has caused wide public concern recent years（描述某件引起广泛关注的话题时）6. . …… is now bein ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g questioned by more and more/a increasing number of people（写到某些举措不得人心，或者你持反对态度的时候，可以这么写）开头四：介绍某些人、事、物1. When speaking of/When it comes to ……（万能公式）2. ……，described as ……，is ……e.g. Microblog, descr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ibed as a completely new form of communication, has now caught on quickly among teenagers by enabling the users to update their latest status within just a few words.3. It seems ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )that …… is ……（sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight）（比如说说科技的飞速发展，电脑、网络的兴起等等）4. For many/most of us, …… is ……e.g. For most of us, a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap.开头五：气势磅礴的排比1.For ……,it is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )…… .For ……, it is …… .And for ……，it is……（从多方面多角度去描述你要写的东西，前两个要为第三个蓄势，观点最后亮）e.g. For baseball fa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ns, 2009 was the year of the Yankees. For job seekers, it was the year of the Great Recession. And for people who track baby names, it was the year of the vampire. 2. What do you … ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )… but …… What …… but ……？What …… but ……？（在想要勾起读者兴趣，增强文章互动性时可用这个，不同于上句的层层递进式，这个句式偏重三句并列）e.g. What do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )you use every single day, but never pay for What is truly yours but came from somewhere else What is very personal but shared with everyone The answer It’s your name.3. …… is a ……，a ……, a ……（递进式）e.g. First love, i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s a surge of adrenalin, a rush of blood, a thing of innocence and pain that lasts a lifetime.初恋是情感巨浪的汹涌，是情感在热血中的奔流，是情感纯真的表露，亦是一生中永恒的伤痛开头六：回忆式开头回忆式的写法的作用就相当于语文中的倒叙，用你的开头将读者带回到当时的情景，用在叙述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好1. I never forget/remember/bear in mind the …… day when ……e.g. I never f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )orget the sweet day when we walked down the street hand in hand.2. I remember some words said by +某位名人或熟知的人e.g. I remember some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )words by the third President of the United States, ……3. Once upon a time …… was just a ……（用于强调某人某物今非昔比时）e.g. Once upon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a time Liubei was just a peddler selling straw sandals.曾经刘备也只是个卖草鞋的小贩4. There was a time when I/we/you did sthe.g. There was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didn’t let go our hope.5. There are very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )few things/people I truly love/hate in life.（few表达你对该事物的特殊感情，再用truly进一步强调，接着要做的就是开始具体叙述你所要写之事）开头七：否定句开头有时候否定句起到的强调效果往往要好于肯定句，也更具有文采1. Perhaps no one ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )/nothing else （on Earth/in history）has such a …… as ……（用来强调描写对象的独一无二）e.g. Perhaps no one e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lse on Earth has such an affinity with the North Pole as Jean-Louis Etienne.也许这个世界上没有人会像Jean-Louis Etienne那样与北极有过如此亲密的接触2. There aren’t m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any …… （people/teenagers/citizens）who have had the honor/chance to ……e.g. There aren’t v ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ery many US citizens who have had the honor to meet a president, let alone a kid from a foreign country.3. No …… has received more praise than ……e.g. No invention has received more praise than computer.开头部分小结：一般大多数情况下能够套用的格式大 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )致有以上这么多种，但所谓水无常形兵无常势，创作的力量是无穷的，在灵感如涌泉的时候也不妨用自己独一无二的搭配写出一个独一无二的开头，要知道，作文写到最高境界就是没有格式，自成一派，信手拈来，就像一块优质的画布，但颜料还得你自己往上涂。二、文章内容类：光有个漂亮的开头还远远不够哦，文章的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中间部分也就是猪肚环节同样要写得充实潇洒，不然配在一个光鲜的开头下面，不但不能相得益彰反而显得干瘪无力，让老师的印象分也骤然下降。那接下来我们就看看如何将这“大头”部分写得出彩。要在内容部分得高分，用到的技巧大约有这几种：长短句交叉、使用插入语、用词多样准确生动又形象、关键词灵活换用不重复、句型使用多样表述地道。内容技巧一：华丽丽的长短句1. These deli ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one’s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定从，放在句子中间修饰中心词sentences, 显然要比直接+aim at好得多）2. Backham, who has be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一个非限制性定从+ 一个让步状语从句）3. However, flows o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f advertisements will not only impact the producer’s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only …… but also也是写长句时的主力军！）4. Wherever they go o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, representing China.（bear……in mind, 一个宾从&现在分词作状语）5. Almost at the same ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hoping to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.决不袖手旁观（有1个时间状语从句+1个同位语从句+1个名词&动词过去式构成的复合形容词+1个现在分词作目的状语，be no+名词表决不，动词搭配又合理，可谓长句中的典范）6．Even though Zhao ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial compensation still can not hold a candle to无法与……相提并论 Zhao’s 11 years’ torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（让步状从+非限制性定从+复合形容词+现在分词作结果状语+引用谚语）7. Sunshangx ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirming the saying that, ‘Women are no inferior to men’. （现在分词作结果状语与引用名言的完美结合，推荐）内容技巧二：神出鬼没的插入语短句中用插入语，可以充更多字数；中长句中间用插入语，让句式更整齐美观来看一些典型的插入语单词作插入语，如：besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though1.On the other hand ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), however, computer is not without its defects/disadvantages.（however作插入语，作无论如何/但是的意思，是最常用的一个插入语）2. We should, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )therefore, take advantage of the fruits of computers and avoid the opposite facet方面.（therefore作插入语，使用的频率也非常之高，同时，上句中用fruits代替了advantages, 避免了前后重复并且相当之形象）短语作插入语，如for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )example, by the way, in other words, so far, in fact, as a result等等1. China and India, for example, are neighbours.2. The Unite ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d Nations are calling for more environment-friendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world （should）switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth. 内容技巧三：适当用被动替换主动适当用被动句，更能反映客观事实，如：1. Attention should be paid to 替换 We should pay attention to2. Immediate/Instant/E ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ffective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to…… 替换 We should take immediate measures to ……3. Great/Joint effo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rt should be made to …… 替换 We should make great/joint effort to ……4. It should be pointe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d out that/It should替换never be neglected/overlooked/ignored that ……I must point out that ……/ We should never neglect/overlook/ignore that ……5. We are brought up to believe that …… 替换 We firmly believe that ……内容技巧四：关键词、高频词句的表达多样性下面来看对于表达同一个意思，有多少种不同的写法1. 我（个人）认为：For my part；From my point of view；Personally speaking；I（firmly） hold the view that……；I’m of the opinion that ……（In my opinion & I think）2. 大多数人认为、知道Many, if not ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )most/Most, if not all, harbor the idea that ……；The majority of the people/Many individuals take the attitude that ……；It’s universally/widely accepted/acknowledged that ……；It’s shared by a large number of people that ……；There’s no one but knows that ……（Many people think that……）3. ……越来越流行to become increasingly popular;…… gain growing popularity; ……is increasingly appealing to; ……is catching on a increasing/growing number of people（……is more and more popular） 4. 关注……，重视……pour attention into …… ; take …… into account; take …… into consideration; be concerned with/about; keep oneself （well）informed of; become aware of/that ……；（pay attention to/put emphasis on）5. 据我所知，……to the best of my knowledge; for all I know/ for what I can tell （as far as I know）6. 做……是有好处的、有帮助的It pays to ……; It’s rewarding to ……; It’s of great benefit to ……; One can reap huge fruits from ……（it’s good/helpful to……）7. ……导致了give rise to; ……（greatly）contribute to……；…… is a major contributor to ……; ……lead to ……; ……result in …… （……cause……）8. 喜爱……,热衷于……be fond of/be keen on/be keen about ……（like……）9. 凡事都有两面性No garden has no weedsEverything has its pluses and minusesEverything cuts both ways…… is a double-edged swordWe should not be blind to the other side of ……（every coin has two sides ）10. 努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事 spare no effort/ make an effort to dodo one’s utmost to ……go all out to do ……do one’s bit to ……（try one’s best to do）11. …… 不尽如人意…… has/leaves a lot to be desired…… fails to meet/satisfy one’s need/demand/requirement…… is far from satisfactory…… doesn’t come up to one’s expectations（……is undesirable）12. ……就是个极好的例子，……恰好能说明我的观点…… is such a prime examplewe can cite …… as an excellent example of…… perfectly fits/illustrates my idea/description of………… perfectly serve my purpose （for example，……）13. 在某种程度上at some pointto some extent/degree; to a certain extent/degreein a sort of wayin partin a sense（partly）14. …… 无法与……相提并论；……与……相差甚远…… is not in the same class with ……there’s no comparison between …… and ………… can never approach ……三、结尾类：结尾一：我们得出了这样的结论……1. From what ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )has been discussed above, we may safely draw/come to/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …… （议论类文章的万金油式句型，非常正规、书面，不过略微缺乏新意）2. Thus, it can be included that ……/ we can find that ……3. Needless to say/Admittedly/Obviously, ……4. Therefore, it’s qui ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )te reasonable for me/us to conclude that ……（总结完之后，来点美好的期盼）结尾公式二：我们提出了以下建议……换言之，这类结尾就是在高歌，明天会更好~1.Therefore/Thus, it is high time that we did ……（提建议还用个虚拟！很高级！！！）2. Accordingly, I rec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ommend that ……（some measures should be taken）（于是乎……我建议……）3. As a result, to so ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lve the problem, I’d like to give my advice/suggestion that ……当堂检测观点类作文写作写作修改训练：VII. Writing (作文): (共20分) 99. Write at least 60 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) words about the topic ‘My Opinion on Having Lessons at Weekends’. （以“双休日上课之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) As a Grade Ni ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne student, you have lessons at weekends. Do you think it is a good idea to improve your study Why or why not Give at least two reasons to support your opinion. 作为一名九年级的学生，你双休日还要去学校上课。你觉得这是提高你学习成绩的好办法吗？请你陈述支持你观点的理由。（至少两条） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）My opinion on having lessons at weekendsAs we all know, th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere is always different opinions about have lessons at weekends among teacher, parent and student. Some people thinks it’s good to students, while others doesn’t agree. As for me, I don’t support to have lessons at weekends. First, to some students who don’t like to study, it must means a waste of time. Second, we need more time which only belong to us to put up our own study plan. For example, I can use weekends to review my last week’s lesson and prepare next week’s lessons. More important, we also need time to relax ourself after a whole-week busy study. We should also use weekends to develop our hobbies and do some sports to make us to be eased. In my view, I always firmly believe that no matter whether we agree with have lessons at weekends or disagree with it, we all need to try our best to learn knowleadge for ourselves._________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ (60 words) __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ ____________________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________记叙类作文写作 Please complete ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the topic “The_______ I will never forget” and write at least 60 words on your topics. 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