(共19张PPT)
Using language
The Lake of Heaven
Tianchi
spring
summer
autumn
winter
Find out the main idea of each paragraph.
Paragraph1: The introduction of___________.
Paragraph2: The introduction of_______.
Paragraph3: __________about Tianchi.
Paragraph4:
Make a _______ to________________________.
Changbaishan
Tianchi
A story
wish
guarantee your love
Practical writing:
1. Changbaishan is in Jilin Province, Northeast China. Much
of this beautiful, mountainous area is thick forest.
Changbaishan is China’s largest nature reserve and it is kept
in its natural state for the people of China and visitors from
all over the world to enjoy.
What aspects
location, status(地位)
How
be located in/ lie on/ be in
/there stands/ stretch(延伸)
the longest wall/one of the wonders in the world
a famous mountain/a beautiful coastal city
an important center of economy and culture
雁荡山位于温州市东北部,被认为是中国
十大名山之一。这个美丽的山区大部分是
茂密的林区,保持着它原始的状态。
Yandang mountain, lying in the northeast of Wenzhou city,
is considered as one of ten famous mountains in China
and is called "The First Mountain in Southeast China".
Much of the beautiful mountain is thick forest, which is
kept in a natural state.
The land varies in height from 700 metres above sea level to over 2,000 metres and is home to a great diversity of rare plants and animals. Among the rare animals are cranes, black bears, leopards and tigers.
What aspects
height
attractions/something special
How to describe height/area/history/population
have a height of…/with a height of vary in height from …to
take up / cover an area of
have\with a history of/area/population/length
date from /date back to
这里的地面高度从500米到1100米不等。
它是许多珍稀动植物的生长地。雁荡山因
它多种多样的山峰,岩洞和瀑布而著名。
The height of the land varies from 500 metres to
1100 metres. And it is home to many rare plants
and animals. Yandang Mountain is famous for
its diversity of peaks,caves and waterfalls.
3. Many people come to Changbaishan to study its unique plants and
animals. Others come to walk in the mountains, to see the spectacular
waterfalls or to bathe in the hot water pools. However, the
attraction that arouses the greatest appreciation in the reserve is
Tianchi or the Lake of Heaven.
What aspects
activities attractions
something special
How
Some\Many…;some…; others….
A…while B…
do…,do… and do…
然而, 最受欢迎的景点是大龙湫瀑布,
它非常壮观。许多人来雁荡山是为了锻炼
或欣赏美景。
However, the attraction that arouses the greatest
appreciation is Dalongqiu Waterfall, where you
can absolutely enjoy yourself. Many people
come to Yandang mountain to take exercise and
appreciate the beautiful sights. How spectacular!
4.Tianchi is a deep lake that has formed in the crater of a dead volcano on top of the mountain . The lake is 2,194 meters above sea level, and more than200 meters deep. In winter the surface freezes over. It takes about an hour to climb from the end of the road to the top of the mountain. When you arrive you are rewarded not only with the sight of its crystal water, but also by the view of the other 16 mountain peaks that surround Tianchi.
What?
a special attraction
Be precise!
Be precise!
Dear Kathy,
I’m glad that you will come to China this summer.
Have you ever thought of visiting Yandangshan You should because it has special attractions.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I guarantee you will have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
景点介绍类书面表达属于描写文,写好这类文章要做到:
客观的介绍景点的历史、地理位置、面积、气候、
自然资源和居民等(要点),但可以根据题目要求加上自己的评论(次要点)。
文章要注意安排好说明顺序,描述要详略得当,重点突出,使文章错落有致。
准确掌握描述地点方位的词(从小到大)或短语。
文章主要采用一般现在时。
为使行文连贯,自然有条理,要用适当的过渡。
Homework
应用文写作:
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack 想来上海旅游,请根据以下表格中提供的信息,给他写一封电子邮件,介绍上海这座城市。
地理位置 中国东南部
人口 2415.27万
地位 中国重要的经济和文化中心
景点 东方明珠、外滩和黄浦江等
注意:
1.词数80左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: the Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠; the Bund外滩
Dear Kathy,
I’m glad that you will come to China this summer.
Have you ever thought of visiting Yandang Mountain You should because it has special attractions.
Yandangmountain________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I guarantee you will have a good time in China.
Yours,
Yours
Li Hua
Yandang mountain, lying in the northeast of Wenzhou city, is considered as one of ten famous mountains in China and is called "The First Mountain in Southeast China". Much of the beautiful mountain is thick forest, which is kept in a natural state. The height of the land varies from 500 metres to 1100 metres. And it is home to many rare plants and animals. Yandang Mountain is famous for its diversity of peaks,caves and waterfalls. However, the attraction that arouses the greatestappreciation is Dalongqiu Waterfall, where you can absolutely enjoy yourself. Many people come to Yandang mountain to take exercise and appreciate the beautiful sights. How spectacular!
介绍上海 应用文:
Dear Jack,
I’m really glad that you’re coming to Shanghai.
Now please allow me to introduce this charming city.
Located in the southeast of China, Shanghai is an
important center of Chinese economy and culture with
a population of more than 24 million. I’m sure you will
be attracted by various places of interest in Shanghai,
such as the Oriental Pearl Tower, the Bund and Shanghai
Disneyland, which welcome millions of tourists from
home and abroad every year.
Hope to see you in Shanghai and wish you a nice trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
How to improve your expressions
The places all over our city are rich in natural resources.
The castle was built in the 16th century. It has seen the
development of the city.
The small town faces a clear river on the east. It was surrounded
by the hills on the three sides.
China is a developing country . It has a population of over 1.3
billion. Half of the population here are farmers.
Shanghai is the biggest city in China. It has a number of places
of interest. Among them is the Oriental Pearl Tower.
abundant
Built in the 16th century, the castle has witnessed the development of the city.
Surrounded by hills on the three sides, the small town faces a crystal river on the east.
China is a developing country with a population of 1.3 billion, half of which here are farmers.
Shanghai is the biggest city in China, which has a diversity of
Places of interest, among which is the Oriental Pearl Tower.