2022届高考英语难点专题短文改的十项一致讲义（无答案）
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短文改错的十项一致
传统比例：8：1: 1（改词：多词：少词）
1.主谓、人称和数的一致及名词前面的冠词是否用错或漏掉了。
2.时态和语态的一致。
3.名词和代词的一致。
4.比较级和最高级比较对象和比较范围的一致。
5.修饰成分与被修饰成分的一致。
6.连词与所连接的两部分在行文逻辑上的一致。
7.功能词（介词、助动词、冠词、连词等）与实义词（名词、动词、形容词、副词）搭配关系的一致。
8.定语从句引导词与先行词的一致。
9.限定动词或短语与非限定动词搭配关系的一致。
10.行文逻辑的一致。
短文改错的命题手段
一、词法
（一）动词错误
1. 谓语动词的时态错误，主要考点为上下文之间、复合句的主从句之间动词时态的一致性，虚拟语气中时态的运用。
e.g. I thought that he will come tomorrow.
2. 主谓一致错误。
e.g. Nobody except my parents know anything about it.
3. 语态错误。
语态方面的错误主要涉及及物动词和不及物动词，主动表被动，现在分词和过去分词的辨别。
e.g. The bike outside is belonged to him.
4. 短暂性动词和延续性动词错误。
短暂性动词不可和一段的时间状语连用，常见的短暂性动词有：lend, borrow, start, join, close, come, go等等。
e.g. They have got in touch with each other for a year.
5. 非谓语动词错误。
非谓语动词错误主要表现在不定式符号的留舍、动词分词及原形的误用。
e.g. They were made do the job from morning till night.
6. 无谓语动词错误。
有些句子似乎很完整，但仔细分析可以发现句中本是谓语的动词，由于其形式错误而造
成句子没有谓语动词，或者根本就没有谓语。
e.g. When everything ready, the party began.
练习：
1. I will send you the photos we take last week.
2. The colour TV sets produced in their factory are selling to several countries.
3. I didn’t lose heart and kept running. All the students on the playground cheer me on “Come on” !
4.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister.
5.My friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me.
（二）名词错误。
1. 可数名词的数与不可数名词。
e.g. The professor gave us some good services.
2. 名词格的错误。
e.g. The next day he came to borrow a book of my father.
Three days journey made all of us tired.
练习：
1.Christie was one of my best friend at high school.
2.He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.
3.Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas…
4.It felt strange to travel without any luggages.
5.In one test I got only 36 percent of the answer correct.
（三）冠词错误。
冠词错误主要涉及不定冠词、定冠词和零冠词的使用，使用不定冠词a 还是 an 区别。
1. 定冠词与不定冠词的误用。
2. 冠词漏用。
3. 冠词多余。
4. 不定冠词a, an 误用。
练习：
1.He is playing piano now.
2. The old man died of the cancer.
3.She is such a honest girl that all of us like her.
4.It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody.
5.I wish you wonderful time on your birthday.
（四）形容词、副词错误。
1.形容词、副词的误用。
e.g. What he said sounded quite perfectly.
2. 形容词、副词比较等级的误用。
e.g. Teachers should receive further education to catch up with the later technology.
3. 比较等级的修饰语错误。
e.g. I was angry, but they were very angrier.
练习：
1.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.
2.In some places you may borrow as more books as you need, but to others you are limited to a certain number of books.
3.So what I learned from the job was much more important as what I earned.
（五）代词错误。
1. 人称代词、物主代词、反身代词的误用或不一致。
e.g. He didn’t do her homework yesterday.
2. 不定代词的误用。
e.g. He and his children felt tired but neither of them would stop for a rest.
3. 关系代词、连接代词的误用。
e.g. He came to tell us that he had seen there.
练习：
1. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!
2.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.
3.It is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.
4.I am glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.
5.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me,…
（六）介词错误。
1.介词误用错误。
e.g. He is good in English.
2. 多用介词。
e.g. He said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally.
3. 遗漏介词。
e.g. I disagree him about how we ought to deal with the matter.
练习：
1. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange.
2.We practise for three times every week and often watch football matches on TV together.
3.Can you tell me about what I should do
4.My home is about three kilometers far away from the National Stadium.
5.I am writing to thank you with your help.
6.After the autumn arrives, the city look as an old man with leaves falling from the trees.
7.I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.
8.Chinese food is famous with its wide variety .
9.In other words, we would be separated for long time.
10.Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.
二、句法
（一）句型错误
1. 固定句型错误。
固定句型的错误主要表现在固定搭配上的错误、结构上的错误等。
e.g. He was about to get on the bus then he heard someone calling him.
2. 简单句错误。
(1) There be 句型错误。
e.g. There had a discussion on how to solve the problem yesterday.
(2) 祈使句错误。
e.g. Working hard and you will succeed in the future.
(3) 感叹句错误。
e.g. How beautiful flowers he gave me！
(4) 强调句错误。
强调句错误主要表现在句型混乱、与定语从句混淆。
e.g. It was two years ago since he began to learn English.
3.复合句错误。
复合句的错误主要表现在各种从句的连接词使用的错误，即连接词的遗漏、误用等。
e.g. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in Qingdao.
练习：
1. His words made all of us were happy.
2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall but also give us a sense of team spirit.
3. We had to sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what…
4. When he was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family.
5. The clever boy made a hole in the wall, through it he could climb out.
（二）逻辑错误。
1.单句的逻辑错误
e.g.1.This was a lie, and his teacher didn’t know.
2. Clever as she is, but she works hard.
2上下文中的逻辑错误。
a.有时从单句中根本看不出错误，但是联系上下文， 便可看出行文逻辑上的错误。
b.上下文的错误有时还表现在时态不一致、人称不一致、前后矛盾等错误。
e.g. There were many great people in history. But many of them are poor in childhood.
Schools were few and not good. They couldn’t depend on it for a good education.
练习：
1 .So I helped them go to the nearest hospital .I stayed here for one and a half hours.
2. Tom and Jack went to the same school and then to the same university. So they hadn’t met each other since then.
3.I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners.
4.That was very nice of you,Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.
5.I am going to attend my first lesson this afternoon, for I ’ve got some preparation to make.
6.It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it.
7. The angel touched his eyes, but he could see everything clearly.
8.It looked as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a gusest.
口诀：短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。
名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少。
动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了。
连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。
介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到。
句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词。
词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。
短文改错阶段训练
一.单句改错
A.每题有一个错误
1. This river is more longer than that one.
2. How beautiful flowers he gave us yesterday﹗
3. It is a great fun playing golf.
4. Although he is clever, but he studies hard.
5. Tom asked Mary if she knew the man was speaking to her.
6. He showed us how operate the machine.
7. I’m looking forward to see you again.
8. Unfortunately, he found no room to live.
9. Tom accepted a letter from his friend the other day.
10. I lent him the book I bought it last week.
B.每题均有两处错误
1. One and a half year later, I now think English a fun to learn.
2. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really successful experience, which is worth remembering forever.
3. I had to wait several minutes, made me late in getting home, but I had to keep patience.
4. I decided I would become an inventor and designed an amazed new product which would become a household name.
5. Is teaching kids English as interested as you were expected in college
6. I want you to keep myself informing of how things are going with you.
7. With development of mobile phones, the short message service is becoming more and more popular for us nowadays.
8. Have they ever thought of plastic bags do harm our environment
9. On ceremony we made a statement which as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty to our society from now on.
10. Weather permitted, we will go to camping tomorrow.
C.每题均有三个错误
1. On the evenings I can watch news on TV or reading newspapers. What’s worse, I can go to bed earlier.
2. As soon as you were invited, it is good manner to refuse or accept the invitation, either by writing nor by telephoning.
3. Mothers try to help or even protecting their children in every way, which left their sins or daughters too comfortable to deal with challenges them.
4. I hope you can learn anything from this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside and outside the school.
5. In recently years, mobile phones have become popular with students. Quite a few use it to keep in touch with their family and friends, which, of course, was convenient.
二.整篇改错（共计16处错误）
By midday the sun was such strong that Jim could not go any further. He looked around, and there were no trees provided shade nearby, so he stopped under a big rock. After drinking rest of his water, he took down his shirt, rolled it up and put it under his head like a pillow. Then he laid down to sleep. It was late in the afternoon when he wake up. He was just about to jump up before he felt something moving near his feet. He looked down; 6-foot-long black snake was move across his legs. He’d ever seen a snake except for on TV or in photographs. Jim just watched it, too scared to do everything else. The snake moved across his legs; he hesitated for a moment, then moved on, and disappeared under the rock. Jim jumped on his feet, paused only to pick up his shirt, and ran off down the path.
3. 高考实战演练
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
（一）
Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have the rest. The air was hot and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Piece of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out of the open window. If I ran out to catch them, big drops of rain began to fall. When I came back into the house, it was raining harder or harder. I tried very hard close the window. Then I heard a loud crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of to find that a big tree has fallen down and broke the top of the back room.
（二）
When our six children were total young, suppertime was always being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell. They wanted one child or another to come out and played. Finally we had good idea. We hung a sign on the front door that was read: we’re having e back later. That night, we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. But as soon as we began dinner, the doorbell rings. On the front door stood a five-year-old boy from across the street. He looked up at us and said, “ I just want to know which the sign says.”
(三)
My father is a good husband who usually goes to work at 7 am and come back at 7 pm on time. Besides, yesterday evening, he didn’t come back as usual. So we waited him to have supper in the sitting room. But he still didn’t come back after two hours. Worrying about him, Mom tried to get in a touch with him. But there was not answer on the phone. Three hours late, there was finally a knock on the door. Mom ran to it in angry. When she opened the door, Dad appeared, completely drunk. Mom was about to shout at him while Dad shouted loudly, “I love my wife”. He repeated this sentence again and again. Heard this, Mom took Dad to the bedroom and put him in bed gently with a smile on his face.
(四)
When I found out that my train would three hours late, I changed my mind and would get a bus instead. I was about to rush out of the train station while a well- dressed old man took me by my arm, “Young lady,” said the gentleman, “Shouldn’t you find out the bus schedule after you rush out catch the bus ”. I stared at him with my mouth opened. How did he read my mind Before I can say a word, he added, “You see, my train is also running late. A same idea came to me. But I think a good conversation that can help pass the time. Before you know it, your train will be there.”
(五)
The coming winter vacation is for everyone time to be spent on things that interest him the most, yet the most of us won’t bother drawing a detail plan beforehand to make him full and meaningful. My plans for winter vacations over the years worked wonderfully good, so, here it goes once again for this year. First, find some time to devote to study will definitely be it. Another important issue is to find a part-time job somewhere in order to lose some social experiences. Yeah, that’s we lack the most! Besides, during the vacation, it’s necessary to pay some visit to our relatives and friends like, especially during New Year’s time.
(六)
I saw a accident happen on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off his motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I thought it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
附录：短文改错的“13条”
一、语法
1．动词
。谓语动词的时态（时态一致、时态误用）
He graduated from the school in Chengdu and work there.
。谓语动词的语态
They made to work all day.
。非谓语动词（该用非谓语而用谓语或该用谓语而用非谓语；doing/done；to是介词还是不定式符号）
He went into the classroom, smiled to us.
She got used to live in the countryside.
2．名词
。可数不可数 Could you give me some advices
。单数复数 We have sent hundreds of book to the country.
3．冠词
。该不该有冠词的问题（涉及到添词或删词） I went into my room to have rest.
。特指和泛指 A same idea came to me.
4．代词
。反身代词 He could take care of him at the age of 8.
。不定代词（some-/any-/every-/no-；one/it/that） I don’t have something important to tell you.
。人称一致（第几人称及数） The boy didn’t do her homework yesterday.
。代词的格 She teaches our English.
5．形容词副词
。原级、比较级、最高级 Lucky, he passed the exam.
I was angry, but they were very angrier than me.
6．词性误用及修饰词错误 He feels very happily.
7．句子成分的完备性 Chengdu is a good place to live.
8．主谓一致 Neither you nor he are right.
9．复合句
。并列复合句 I wanted to give up, and she told me to wait a little longer.
。主从复合句（引导词）He was about to get on the bus while he heard someone calling me.
10. 平行结构 Listening to music not only makes me relaxed but also give me happiness.
二、语义
11. 行文逻辑（反义表达、起承转合）I disagreed that smoking is harmful to us.
三、语法或语义
12. 删除冗言（中国式英语的词法问题，有时也可能是语法问题）
Although he is young, but he knows a lot.
13. 固定搭配（可能是语法搭配，也可能是用词方面的搭配、短语搭配，尤其是介词搭配）
It is kind for you to help me.
For a result, he made it.
Only by the way can we solve the problems.
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传统比例：8：1: 1（改词：多词：少词）
1.主谓、人称和数的一致及名词前面的冠词是否用错或漏掉了。
2.时态和语态的一致。
3.名词和代词的一致。
4.比较级和最高级比较对象和比较范围的一致。
5.修饰成分与被修饰成分的一致。
6.连词与所连接的两部分在行文逻辑上的一致。
7.功能词（介词、助动词、冠词、连词等）与实义词（名词、动词、形容词、副词）搭配关系的一致。
8.定语从句引导词与先行词的一致。
9.限定动词或短语与非限定动词搭配关系的一致。
10.行文逻辑的一致。
短文改错的命题手段
一、词法
（一）动词错误
1. 谓语动词的时态错误，主要考点为上下文之间、复合句的主从句之间动词时态的一致性，虚拟语气中时态的运用。
e.g. I thought that he will come tomorrow.
2. 主谓一致错误。
e.g. Nobody except my parents know anything about it.
3. 语态错误。
语态方面的错误主要涉及及物动词和不及物动词，主动表被动，现在分词和过去分词的辨别。
e.g. The bike outside is belonged to him.
4. 短暂性动词和延续性动词错误。
短暂性动词不可和一段的时间状语连用，常见的短暂性动词有：lend, borrow, start, join, close, come, go等等。
e.g. They have got in touch with each other for a year.
5. 非谓语动词错误。
非谓语动词错误主要表现在不定式符号的留舍、动词分词及原形的误用。
e.g. They were made do the job from morning till night.
6. 无谓语动词错误。
有些句子似乎很完整，但仔细分析可以发现句中本是谓语的动词，由于其形式错误而造
成句子没有谓语动词，或者根本就没有谓语。
e.g. When everything ready, the party began.
练习：
1. I will send you the photos we take last week.
2. The colour TV sets produced in their factory are selling to several countries.
3. I didn’t lose heart and kept running. All the students on the playground cheer me on “Come on” !
4.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister.
5.My friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me.
（二）名词错误。
1. 可数名词的数与不可数名词。
e.g. The professor gave us some good services.
2. 名词格的错误。
e.g. The next day he came to borrow a book of my father.
Three days journey made all of us tired.
练习：
1.Christie was one of my best friend at high school.
2.He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.
3.Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas…
4.It felt strange to travel without any luggages.
5.In one test I got only 36 percent of the answer correct.
（三）冠词错误。
冠词错误主要涉及不定冠词、定冠词和零冠词的使用，使用不定冠词a 还是 an 区别。
1. 定冠词与不定冠词的误用。
2. 冠词漏用。
3. 冠词多余。
4. 不定冠词a, an 误用。
练习：
1.He is playing piano now.
2. The old man died of the cancer.
3.She is such a honest girl that all of us like her.
4.It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody.
5.I wish you wonderful time on your birthday.
（四）形容词、副词错误。
1.形容词、副词的误用。
e.g. What he said sounded quite perfectly.
2. 形容词、副词比较等级的误用。
e.g. Teachers should receive further education to catch up with the later technology.
3. 比较等级的修饰语错误。
e.g. I was angry, but they were very angrier.
练习：
1.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.
2.In some places you may borrow as more books as you need, but to others you are limited to a certain number of books.
3.So what I learned from the job was much more important as what I earned.
（五）代词错误。
1. 人称代词、物主代词、反身代词的误用或不一致。
e.g. He didn’t do her homework yesterday.
2. 不定代词的误用。
e.g. He and his children felt tired but neither of them would stop for a rest.
3. 关系代词、连接代词的误用。
e.g. He came to tell us that he had seen there.
练习：
1. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!
2.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.
3.It is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.
4.I am glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.
5.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me,…
（六）介词错误。
1.介词误用错误。
e.g. He is good in English.
2. 多用介词。
e.g. He said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally.
3. 遗漏介词。
e.g. I disagree him about how we ought to deal with the matter.
练习：
1. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange.
2.We practise for three times every week and often watch football matches on TV together.
3.Can you tell me about what I should do
4.My home is about three kilometers far away from the National Stadium.
5.I am writing to thank you with your help.
6.After the autumn arrives, the city look as an old man with leaves falling from the trees.
7.I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.
8.Chinese food is famous with its wide variety .
9.In other words, we would be separated for long time.
10.Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.
二、句法
（一）句型错误
1. 固定句型错误。
固定句型的错误主要表现在固定搭配上的错误、结构上的错误等。
e.g. He was about to get on the bus then he heard someone calling him.
2. 简单句错误。
(1) There be 句型错误。
e.g. There had a discussion on how to solve the problem yesterday.
(2) 祈使句错误。
e.g. Working hard and you will succeed in the future.
(3) 感叹句错误。
e.g. How beautiful flowers he gave me！
(4) 强调句错误。
强调句错误主要表现在句型混乱、与定语从句混淆。
e.g. It was two years ago since he began to learn English.
3.复合句错误。
复合句的错误主要表现在各种从句的连接词使用的错误，即连接词的遗漏、误用等。
e.g. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in Qingdao.
练习：
1. His words made all of us were happy.
2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall but also give us a sense of team spirit.
3. We had to sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what…
4. When he was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family.
5. The clever boy made a hole in the wall, through it he could climb out.
（二）逻辑错误。
1.单句的逻辑错误
e.g.1.This was a lie, and his teacher didn’t know.
2. Clever as she is, but she works hard.
2上下文中的逻辑错误。
a.有时从单句中根本看不出错误，但是联系上下文， 便可看出行文逻辑上的错误。
b.上下文的错误有时还表现在时态不一致、人称不一致、前后矛盾等错误。
e.g. There were many great people in history. But many of them are poor in childhood.
Schools were few and not good. They couldn’t depend on it for a good education.
练习：
1 .So I helped them go to the nearest hospital .I stayed here for one and a half hours.
2. Tom and Jack went to the same school and then to the same university. So they hadn’t met each other since then.
3.I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners.
4.That was very nice of you,Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.
5.I am going to attend my first lesson this afternoon, for I ’ve got some preparation to make.
6.It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it.
7. The angel touched his eyes, but he could see everything clearly.
8.It looked as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a gusest.
口诀：短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。
名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少。
动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了。
连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。
介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到。
句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词。
词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。
短文改错阶段训练
一.单句改错
A.每题有一个错误
1. This river is more longer than that one.
2. How beautiful flowers he gave us yesterday﹗
3. It is a great fun playing golf.
4. Although he is clever, but he studies hard.
5. Tom asked Mary if she knew the man was speaking to her.
6. He showed us how operate the machine.
7. I’m looking forward to see you again.
8. Unfortunately, he found no room to live.
9. Tom accepted a letter from his friend the other day.
10. I lent him the book I bought it last week.
B.每题均有两处错误
1. One and a half year later, I now think English a fun to learn.
2. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really successful experience, which is worth remembering forever.
3. I had to wait several minutes, made me late in getting home, but I had to keep patience.
4. I decided I would become an inventor and designed an amazed new product which would become a household name.
5. Is teaching kids English as interested as you were expected in college
6. I want you to keep myself informing of how things are going with you.
7. With development of mobile phones, the short message service is becoming more and more popular for us nowadays.
8. Have they ever thought of plastic bags do harm our environment
9. On ceremony we made a statement which as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty to our society from now on.
10. Weather permitted, we will go to camping tomorrow.
C.每题均有三个错误
1. On the evenings I can watch news on TV or reading newspapers. What’s worse, I can go to bed earlier.
2. As soon as you were invited, it is good manner to refuse or accept the invitation, either by writing nor by telephoning.
3. Mothers try to help or even protecting their children in every way, which left their sins or daughters too comfortable to deal with challenges them.
4. I hope you can learn anything from this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside and outside the school.
5. In recently years, mobile phones have become popular with students. Quite a few use it to keep in touch with their family and friends, which, of course, was convenient.
二.整篇改错（共计16处错误）
By midday the sun was such strong that Jim could not go any further. He looked around, and there were no trees provided shade nearby, so he stopped under a big rock. After drinking rest of his water, he took down his shirt, rolled it up and put it under his head like a pillow. Then he laid down to sleep. It was late in the afternoon when he wake up. He was just about to jump up before he felt something moving near his feet. He looked down; 6-foot-long black snake was move across his legs. He’d ever seen a snake except for on TV or in photographs. Jim just watched it, too scared to do everything else. The snake moved across his legs; he hesitated for a moment, then moved on, and disappeared under the rock. Jim jumped on his feet, paused only to pick up his shirt, and ran off down the path.
3. 高考实战演练
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
（一）
Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have the rest. The air was hot and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Piece of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out of the open window. If I ran out to catch them, big drops of rain began to fall. When I came back into the house, it was raining harder or harder. I tried very hard close the window. Then I heard a loud crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of to find that a big tree has fallen down and broke the top of the back room.
（二）
When our six children were total young, suppertime was always being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell. They wanted one child or another to come out and played. Finally we had good idea. We hung a sign on the front door that was read: we’re having e back later. That night, we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. But as soon as we began dinner, the doorbell rings. On the front door stood a five-year-old boy from across the street. He looked up at us and said, “ I just want to know which the sign says.”
(三)
My father is a good husband who usually goes to work at 7 am and come back at 7 pm on time. Besides, yesterday evening, he didn’t come back as usual. So we waited him to have supper in the sitting room. But he still didn’t come back after two hours. Worrying about him, Mom tried to get in a touch with him. But there was not answer on the phone. Three hours late, there was finally a knock on the door. Mom ran to it in angry. When she opened the door, Dad appeared, completely drunk. Mom was about to shout at him while Dad shouted loudly, “I love my wife”. He repeated this sentence again and again. Heard this, Mom took Dad to the bedroom and put him in bed gently with a smile on his face.
(四)
When I found out that my train would three hours late, I changed my mind and would get a bus instead. I was about to rush out of the train station while a well- dressed old man took me by my arm, “Young lady,” said the gentleman, “Shouldn’t you find out the bus schedule after you rush out catch the bus ”. I stared at him with my mouth opened. How did he read my mind Before I can say a word, he added, “You see, my train is also running late. A same idea came to me. But I think a good conversation that can help pass the time. Before you know it, your train will be there.”
(五)
The coming winter vacation is for everyone time to be spent on things that interest him the most, yet the most of us won’t bother drawing a detail plan beforehand to make him full and meaningful. My plans for winter vacations over the years worked wonderfully good, so, here it goes once again for this year. First, find some time to devote to study will definitely be it. Another important issue is to find a part-time job somewhere in order to lose some social experiences. Yeah, that’s we lack the most! Besides, during the vacation, it’s necessary to pay some visit to our relatives and friends like, especially during New Year’s time.
(六)
I saw a accident happen on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off his motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I thought it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
附录：短文改错的“13条”
一、语法
1．动词
。谓语动词的时态（时态一致、时态误用）
He graduated from the school in Chengdu and work there.
。谓语动词的语态
They made to work all day.
。非谓语动词（该用非谓语而用谓语或该用谓语而用非谓语；doing/done；to是介词还是不定式符号）
He went into the classroom, smiled to us.
She got used to live in the countryside.
2．名词
。可数不可数 Could you give me some advices
。单数复数 We have sent hundreds of book to the country.
3．冠词
。该不该有冠词的问题（涉及到添词或删词） I went into my room to have rest.
。特指和泛指 A same idea came to me.
4．代词
。反身代词 He could take care of him at the age of 8.
。不定代词（some-/any-/every-/no-；one/it/that） I don’t have something important to tell you.
。人称一致（第几人称及数） The boy didn’t do her homework yesterday.
。代词的格 She teaches our English.
5．形容词副词
。原级、比较级、最高级 Lucky, he passed the exam.
I was angry, but they were very angrier than me.
6．词性误用及修饰词错误 He feels very happily.
7．句子成分的完备性 Chengdu is a good place to live.
8．主谓一致 Neither you nor he are right.
9．复合句
。并列复合句 I wanted to give up, and she told me to wait a little longer.
。主从复合句（引导词）He was about to get on the bus while he heard someone calling me.
10. 平行结构 Listening to music not only makes me relaxed but also give me happiness.
二、语义
11. 行文逻辑（反义表达、起承转合）I disagreed that smoking is harmful to us.
三、语法或语义
12. 删除冗言（中国式英语的词法问题，有时也可能是语法问题）
Although he is young, but he knows a lot.
13. 固定搭配（可能是语法搭配，也可能是用词方面的搭配、短语搭配，尤其是介词搭配）
It is kind for you to help me.
For a result, he made it.
Only by the way can we solve the problems.
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