高考英语书面表达--概要写作 写的环节 课件（20张PPT）

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概要写作
写的环节
内容介绍
实践操作(写、查)
02
拓展备考
03
重难点突破
01
重难点突破
应用语言结构、词汇准确性
02
上下文连贯
03
独立表达观点
01
独立表达自己的观点
重难点突破
同义替换 （paraphrase）
要点与要点间的关系
因果关系
转折关系
对比关系
选择关系
递进关系
条件关系
due to\ on this account\ since\ result from\ owing to
accordingly\ for the reason\ therefore\ consequently
lead to \ contribute to \ result in
however\ still\ yet\ while \nevertheless...
remote to\ different from\opposed to\rather than\ inferior to
neither…nor\ either…or\ both…and
让步关系
in spite of \ despite\even if \ although\ though\ as
not only…but also\ as well as…
if\ whether
词性转换；词与词、短语、固定句式替换
重难点突破
应用语言结构、词汇的准确性
正确理解原文
相契合
确切了解固定语言搭配
确切了解固定句式知识
确切了解词汇知识
重难点突破
上下文连贯
段落与段落之间的关系 （句子承接 连接副词）
并列
递进
因果
转折
比较
时间
解释
结论
equally\additionally\as well
moreover\ what’s more\ what’ worse
since\ hence\ therefore\ thereby\
nevertheless\nonetheless\actually\in effect\on the contrary
by contrast\ in contrast to
the moment\meanwhile\before long
that is\in other words\for instance\ and so on\ and the like
in a word\on the whole\in short\briefly\to sum up\ in all
例1
Not all screen time is equally bad for …performance; watching TV and playing video games negatively impacted …
Watching Tv impacted teens in…and younger children in…; teen scores appeared to be worse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability of …
Playing video games only impacts the academic composite score in teens…been linked to declines in.. improve motor…
More research is needed. …changed…throughout the day… measurement tools
理解提高
例
范例解析
提取的要点
实践操作
例
范例解析 (写)
Not all screen time is equally bad for …performance; watching TV and playing video games negatively impacted …for ...
not equally bad
the influence varies
negatively impacted
do harm\ do bad for sb\damaging
同义替换 （paraphrase）
要点间的关系
解释关系：while\ and\ to be exact
A study reveals that the influence of screen time on children varies, while watching television and playing video games can do the harm.
实践操作
例
范例解析（写）
2. Watching Tv impacted teens in…and younger children in…; teen scores appeared to be worse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability of …
impact
affect\ influence
replace
occupy\take up \ waste
同义替换 （paraphrase）
time spent living a normal\ healthy life
time spent studying,
sleeping, talking and getting some exercises
reduce the ability
weaken\ decrease the ability
要点间的关系
对比、因果
实践操作
例
范例解析
2. Watching Tv impacted teens in…and younger children in…; teen scores appeared to be worse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability of …
affect\ influence
occupy\take up
time spent living a normal\ healthy life
weaken\ decrease the ability
要点间的关系—对比因果
TV watching exerts negative influence on teens who suffer more than younger ones, as it wastes time, weakening their powers of concentration and thinking.
实践操作
例
范例解析
3. Playing video games only impacts the academic composite score in teens…been linked to declines in.. improve motor…
impact
academic composite score
decline
improve…
同义替换
affect
academic performance
decrease
of help to
要点间的关系
解释、对比
实践操作
例
范例解析（写）
3. Playing video games only impacts the academic composite score in teens…been linked to declines in.. improve motor…
要点间的关系--解释、对比
affect
academic performance
decrease
of help to
Teens’ academic performance is affected by their playing video games, decreasing memory and sleep while of help to other abilities.
例1
4. More research is needed. …changed…throughout the day… measurement tools
理解提高
例
范例解析 （写）
同义替换
is needed
necessary\ be in need
change
vary\ develop
throughout the day
increase in time
measurement
ways to measure
要点间的关系
因果、并列
例1
4. More research is needed. …changed…throughout the day… measurement tools
理解提高
例
范例解析（写）
necessary\ be of need
vary\ develop
increase in time
ways to measure
要点间的关系—因果、并列
To keep track of children’s interactions with technology as time goes by, more studies are necessary.
interaction with technology
段与段之间的关系
理解提高
范例解析 （写）
A study reveals that the influence of screen time on children varies, and watching television and playing video games can do the harm.
TV watching exerts negative influence on teens who suffer more than younger ones, as it occupies the time spent living a normal life, weakening their powers of concentration and thinking.
Teens’ academic performance is affected by their playing video games, decreasing memory and sleep while of help to other abilities.
To keep track of children’s interactions with technology as time goes by, more studies are necessary.
总分
并列
总结
However\ Actually,
For another,
For one thing,
理解提高
范例解析 （查）
要点全面，四段共四个要点，缺一不可。
有否抄写原文。
人称时态是否正确，全文用第三人称写，四个段落全部用一般现在时，说明一个客观问题。
是否有语法、拼写错误。
衔接连贯。第二点和第三点是并列关系，都是讲述电子产品对孩子的危害，所以可以用“besides”“what’s more”“additionally”等。
词数控制。全文控制在60词左右，不少于40词，不多于80词。
理解提高
范例解析（写）
A study reveals that the influence of screen time varies, while watching television and playing video games harm. For one thing, TV watching negatively affects teens, as it wastes time, weakening their powers of concentration and thinking. For another, teens’ academic performance is affected by their playing video games, decreasing memory and sleep while of help in other ways. Actually, to keep track of children’s interactions with technology as time goes by, more studies are necessary. (79 words)
独立表达自己的观点
1
应用语言结构和词汇的准确性
2
拓展备考
高考目标
上下文连贯
3
拓展备考
高考目标
同义词替换
第一步
要点间关系
第二步
句子与句子间关系
第三步
如何写
查（要点、衔接、字数）
第四步
谢 谢