8A Unit 1 where did you go on vacation
Step 1: Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.
Where did you go
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Did you go with anyone
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How was the weather？
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What did you do every day
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What food did you eat
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What did you like best
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Did you dislike anything
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How did you feel about the trip
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Step 2: 常用句型
I went to…on vacation. It was sunny and hot. We visited……
It was /looked wonderful. Everything was excellent. We took quite a few photos there.
I bought something/nothing for…… The people were friendly.
We had a great time there. I hope to visit it again. I like this place because……
For dinner, we had……it was…… What a great time….hope to go to… again.
Step 3:
写作话题：My vacation to……
假设你是林涛，今年暑假外出度假，游览了许多地方，请你以My vacation to …… 为题，写一篇80词左右的游记，内容包括：1.旅游景点； 2.天气和活动；3.感受……
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含以上3个方面，可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更流畅,语言更丰富。
4. 70词左右。
The first draft
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The second draft
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_________________________________________________________________________________________8A Unit 1 Marking ladders
Title My vacation to_____________________
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ：My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic: My vacation to… (1 point)
Para ：I have described at least three points (scenic spots, weather and activities, you feelings) (10 points)
Para ：I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used past tense (v-ed) e.g.I went to Beijing this summer vacation. I took many wonderful photos. (1 point)
I have used different sentence structures to make may writing more attractive. e.g. What a great time! Do you want to go there Everything tasted really good. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. e.g. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score 20
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