8A Unit 3 I am more outgoing than my sister.
Step 1: Make notes about two of your friends. One friend should be similar to you; the other friend should be different. Write something to describe your friends.
A friend who is similar to me A friend who is different from me
Name: Name：
1. 2. 3. 1, 2. 3.
Step 2: 请补充有关朋友友谊的名言：
A good friend is like a mirror.
Friends are like books—you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.
My best friend helps to bring out the best in me.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
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Step 3:常用表达
a good friend is like a mirror, be quitter and more serious than most kids
That’s why …… enjoy doing sth, it’s not easy for me to ……
It’s not necessary to be the same./different be different from/be the same as
bring out get better grades than he does
I don’t really care if…… be funnier than in fact be talented in
like to do the same things as me be good at truly cares about me
make sb laugh be a good listener
Step 4:
写作话题：A letter
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友David给你发了一封邮件，邮件内容给他回信。词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you I made two good friends last week, I am happy to know them. In our daily life, we will feel lonely without friends, friendship isn’t everything, but no one can live happily without it. Do you have good friends Can you tell something about them to me Could you please tell me the similarities and differences between you and your friends
Look forward to your reply.
All the best,
David
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。 2.内容齐全，可适当拓展。
3.正确使用比较级和最高级。 4. 70词左右。
The first draft
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_________________________________________________________________________________________8A Unit 3 Marking ladders
Title Friends
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point )
Para ：My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic: I have two good friends, they are …and…, (1 point )
Para ：I have described the similarities and differences between my friends and me. (10 points)
Para ：I have summarized the topic. (1 point )
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point )
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used comparatives with –(i)er and more, superlatives with –(i)est and most. E.g. He is taller than me. I am more outgoing than them. I am the shortest . (1 point )
I have used different sentence structures to make may writing more attractive. e.g.: be funnier than…,be talented in… like to do the same things as me… (1 point )
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. e.g. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score 20
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