8A Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater
Step 1: Think about some of the best places in your town or city.
Why are they best
Best places in my town or city Why
1. 2. 3. 1, 2. 3.
Step 2: 常用表达
the most comfortable seats close to home
buy things quickly the most popular
the shortest waiting time the best clothes store
buy things the most cheaply buy the freshest food
the newest one sit the most comfortably
S.p. is the best place to go on weekends.
The park is crowded place on weekends because…
The place where you can enjoy your time quietly is at…
Step 3:
写作话题：Best places
请用英文描述你所居住的的家乡或城市中最喜欢的三个地方并说明理由。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含至少3个方面，可适当拓展。
3.正确使用形容词和副词的比较级和最高级。
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The first draft
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The second draft
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_________________________________________________________________________________________8A Unit 4 Marking ladders
Title Best places
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point )
Para ：My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic: There are three places in my town. I like them best.… (1 point )
Para ：I have described at least three places which I like best and give the reasons. (10 points)
Para ：I have summarized the topic. (1 point )
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point )
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used comparatives with –(i)er and more, superlatives with –(i)est and most. E.g. I like Jenny’s Department Store best because it sells the most fashionable clothes. And it also has the best service. (1 point )
I have used different sentence structures to make may writing more attractive. e.g.: However, people don’t often ……S.p is the best place to go on weekends. The place where you can enjoy your time quietly is at…… (1 point )
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. e.g. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score 20
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