8A Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
New Year is coming, it’s time to make our New Year’s resolutions.
Step 1: Complete the first two paragraphs about resolutions with the words in the box.
Resolutions____________ promises to yourself. They may___________ to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to ___________ four resolutions.
The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to___________ up a new hobby. I think singing __________ a great activity so I am going to ____________ to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to____________ to music and sing together.
Step 2: Your New Year’s Resolutions
What How Why
Ideas for personal improvement
Ideas for improving my physical health
Ideas for doing better at school
Ideas for improving my relationships with my family and friends
Step 3: 常用表达
What I am going to do to get my own improvement
How am I going to that
Why am I going to do that
I am going to …… I hope to…… I want to…… I plan to……
Doing sth is…… This will help me to It’s adj. for sb to do sth
In this way, I can……
Step 4:
写作话题：New Year’s resolutions
New Year is coming, it’s time to make our New Year’s resolutions. What are you going to do How are you going to do that and why
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.应该包含题中所有内容，可适当拓展。
3. 70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The first draft
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The second draft
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_________________________________________________________________________________________8A Unit 6 Marking ladders
Title Favorite TV shows
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point )
Para ：My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic: New Year is coming, it’s time to make our New Year’s resolutions. (1 point )
Para ：I have described resolutions for what, how and why. (10 points)
Para ：I have summarized the topic. (1 point )
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point )
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used future with be going to be/do and want to do/be. (1 point )
I have used different sentence structures to make may writing more attractive. e.g.: The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. In this way, I can…… It’s adj. for sb to do sth (1 point )
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. e.g. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score 20
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