Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake? 写作学案

8A Unit 8 How to make____？
Step1 Fill in the chart.
Name How to make _______________________
Ingredients
Order words
Amount
Verbs
Feeling
Tense：
Person：
Structure：
Step2 While-writing
Finish the first draft in 10 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Check their compositions by themselves according to the marking ladder.
2.Check their compositions by their classmates according to the marking ladder.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：How to make__________
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格全部信息，可适当拓展。
3.恰当使用时态，人称，祈使句、顺序词、连接词、以及一些高级词汇和不同句型使行 文流畅和丰富。
4. 70词左右。
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8A Unit 8 Marking ladders
How to make_____________
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar＆language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s Assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into _______Paragraphs. (1 point)
Para____: My opening paragraph started with an introduction about the food I want to make. (1 point)
Para____: I have given out at least 4 steps to tell the making process details. (10 points)
Para____: I have summarized my feeling about the food or recommended the recipe to readers. (1 point)
I have used order words such as: first, next, then, finally,....to make my writing in a clear order. （1point）
My handwriting is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have mainly used present tense and imperative sentences . For example: Cut the vegetables into pieces. (1piont)
I have properly one or two advanced sentences to improve the level of my writing. For example : To make the soup, you need chicken, lettuce and eggs. Let me tell you how to make a bowl of delicious food. (1 point)
My verbs are used correctly and I have used these phrases properly such as: cut....into..., pour....into...., turn on/off....,add....to... be filled with......, cover...with..., mix....and… (1 point)
I have correctly used the some ingredients for the food you made such as: milk, sauce, yogurt, onion, carrots (1point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or my classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around _________ (1point)
Total score 20
Reflections Advantages
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