Unit 1 What's the matter? 写作学案

8B Unit 1 What’s the matter
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
Brainstorm: What’s the matter
Guide the students to talk about their abilities and personality. Then fill in the chart.
I have...,I should...
Matter
Feeling
Ways
Others
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：假如你是Ann, 你的朋友Mary得了重感冒，请你写一封信，告诉她如何保持身体健康。不少于80字。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
The first draft
Dear Mary，
Yours，
Ann
The second draft
Dear Mary，
Yours，
Ann
8B Unit 1 Marking ladders
Title English Teachers Wanted for Our School.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic English Teachers Wanted. (1 point)
Para ： I have described at least four points: who, personality, cans and where. (9 points)
Para ： I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used can+v. (can do) .For example, Can you be friendly (1 point)
I have used If..., then ...sentences properly. For example, If your answers are “Yes”,then come and join us. (1 point)
I have used also properly. (can+also+v. ) For example, Can you also dance (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example,I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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