Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world?写作学案

8B Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Brainstorm: What’s the ... animal do you think
Guide the students to talk about different animals’ features. Then fill in the chart.
The most friendly animal--- elephants
What do they lool like
Where do they live
What do they eat
What can they do
Why do they need protection
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：The most friendly animal--- elephants. Use the chart to help you.
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格5个方面内容，可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
4. 80词左右。
The first draft
The Most Friendly Animal--- Elephants
The second draft
The Most Friendly Animal--- Elephants
8B Unit 7 Marking ladders
Title The Most Friendly Animal--- Elephants
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the topic The Most Friendly Animal--- Elephants (1 point)
Para ： I have described at least four points: appearance, living place, food, abilities, living problems. (9 points)
Para ： I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the superlative and comparative sentences. For example, The elephants are one of the most friendly animals in the word. There are now fewer than 3000 elephants in the world. (1 point)
I have used ,.....phrases properly. For example, People should know about the importance of protecting animals. (1 point)
I have used attributive clause properly. The elephants mostly live in the places where the weather is wet and hot. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example,I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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