8B Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Brainstorm: Which places would you like to visit
Guide the students to talk about which places they have ever been to. Then fill in the chart.
Places they have ever been to
Interesting places
Famous places
Web celebrity places
Amusement places
Population, Weather, History, times you have been, Things to eat or to do
others
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense:
Person:
Details:
Structure:
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作:A place you will never forget.
写作要求:1.语句通顺,语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格5个方面内容,可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词,高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
4. 80词左右。
The first draft
A place you will never forget.
The second draft
A place you will never forget.
8B Unit 9 Marking ladders
Title My last weekend.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : My opening paragraph started with my feeling about the place. (1 point)
Para : I have described at least four points: who, when, where and what (9 points)
Para : I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used Present Perfect Tense. For example, Have ever been to … (1 point)
I have used “If you..., you will/can ...”sentences properly. For example, If you like Chinese food, you will find them. (1 point)
I have used One great thing about…is... For example, One great thing about Singapore is that the temperature is almost the same all year round. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example,I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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