Unit 10 I've had this bike for three years写作学案

8B Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
I. Teaching procedures.
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Brainstorm: What is your favourite thing Why is it your favourite How long have you had it
Guide the students to talk about what their favourite things are and why they are special and the story or memories about their favourite things.Then fill in the chart.
My favourite thing...
Name
How did you it
How long have you had it
Why is it special
Stories or memories about it,
Feelings
2.Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：My favourite thing.
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格5个方面内容，可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
4. 80词左右。
The first draft
My favourite thing
The second draft
My favourite thing
8B Unit 10 Marking ladders
Title My favourite thing.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with the name and the time about my favourite thing. (1 point)
Para ： I have described the favourite thing including: who, when, why and the story or memories about my favourite thing. (9 points)
Para ： I have summarized the feeling about the my favourite thing. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used present perfect tense of verb (have done) . For example,I have had it for 6 years. (1 point)
I have used the sentences properly. For example, I like it so much because it is meaningful and important for me, (1 point)
I have used although, but, however properly. For example, Although it is kind of old, I still love it so much. (1 point)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example,I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question marks after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 20
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