Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. 写作学案

9A Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
I. Teaching procedures
Step1 Pre-writing
Brainstorm: 3a What kind of music or movies do you like best What is your favorite song / movie Guide the students to talk about the music or movies he/she likes best. Then fill in the chart.
The Song/Movie That I Like Best.
Favorite kind of music / movie
Why I like this kind of music / movie
Favorite song / movie
Why I like this song / movie
How this song / movie makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to / watch this song / movie
Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：The Song/ Movie That I Like Best. .. Use the chart to help you.
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯,100词左右。。
2.所写内容应包含表格6个方面内容，可适当拓展。
3.恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
The first draft
The Song/ Movie That I Like Best.
The second draft
The Song/Movie That I Like Best.
9A Unit 9 Marking ladders
Title The Song/Movie That I Like Best.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an introduction to the movie that I like best. (1 point)
Para ： I have described at least six points. ( 10 points)
Para ： I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (2 points)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used simple present tense ..For example, I like movies that are exciting. (2 points)
I have used Relative Clauses with that/ who/ which properly. For example, I like actors that are funny/who make me laugh. (2 points)
I have used Relative Clauses with which properly. For example, I like moves which are full of energy. (2 points)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example, for example, I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 25
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