Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 写作学案

9B Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
I. Teaching procedures
Step1 Pre-writing
Brainstorm: Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Guide the students to talk about some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Then fill in the chart.
1)What happened
2)When did it happen
3)Where did it happen
4)How did it make you feel Why
5)What did you learn from it
Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad.
winning/losing a competition
getting good/bad grades on an exam
performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people
getting into a fight with your best friend
Your first trip outside your hometown
Guide the students to discuss the tense, person, details and structure of the composition.
Tense：
Person：
Details：
Structure：
Step2 Post-writing
Students finish the first draft in 15 minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their compositions by themselves.
2.Students check their compositions by their classmates.
3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class.
4.Students finish the second draft in class.
II. Analyze the topic
话题写作：Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad.Use the chart to help you.
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.所写内容应包含表格5个方面内容，可适当拓展。
3. 恰当使用连接词，高级词汇和多样句型使行文更加流畅和丰富。
4.100词左右。
The first draft
Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad.
The second draft
Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad.
9B Unit 11 Marking ladders
Title Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ： My opening paragraph started with an introduction to Some Experiences that Made Me Feel Very Happy or Sad. (1 point)
Para ： I have described at least five points . ( 10 points)
Para ： I have summarized the topic. (1 point)
I have used some advanced vocabularies and variety sentences to make my writing more fluent and plentiful. (2 points)
My layout is tidy and clear. ( 1 point)
Grammar and language I have used simple past tense) .For example, it happened on a cold morning. (2 points)
I have used make sb.+adj. properly. For example,it made me really sad.
I have used -ing properly. For example, speaking in front of many people made me nervous. (2 points)
I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher or classmates. (1 point)
I have checked my punctuation. For example, for example, I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. I have used question mark after Wh-questions. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score 25
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