高考英语书面表达概要写作课件（21张PPT）

(共21张PPT)
Summary Writing
概要
新高考考试说明
新题型：概要写作（25 分）
要求：基于一篇350字左右的文章写一篇60字左右的概要，
不得照抄原文当中的句子。
字数多于80或少于40扣2分
概要
What is a summary
A Summary is a brief restatement of the main facts or points of a passage or a book.
A Summary is a brief restatement of the main facts or points of a passage or a book.
No details/examples/repetition/comments
评分要点
1）理解准确，涵盖全部要点
2）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
3）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑
4）完全使用自己的语言
A. B. C.
概要
Step 1: Read for structure
What is the style of the passage
A. Narration 记叙文
B. Exposition 说明文
C. Argumentation 议论文
概要
Step 2: Read for main idea
概要
Paragraph 1:
However, ocean expert Curtis Ebbesmeyer does it in a special way—by studying movements of random floating garbage.
Ocean expert Curtis Ebbesmeyer studies ocean currents in a special way.
概要
Paragraph 1:
Ocean expert Curtis Ebbesmeyer studies ocean currents
in a special way.
in …way用…方法
employ/adopt/use
different; new; unusual; unique
way
采用；使用(…方法)
special
method; approach
1.Curtis Ebbesmeyer, an ocean expert, employs a new way
to study ocean currents.
Tip1: Change the part of speech 改变词性
Tip2: Use words of similar meaning 近义词替换
概要
Paragraph 2:
shoes
study
If he learned when and where the shoes went into water, he could learn a lot about the shoes.
inspire
概要
What happened to the shoes
fell into the water in a shipping accident
washed up on the shores
abandoned/unwanted
inspire
概要
2. ________________＿___________________________________ inspired him to carry out an experiment.
What happened to the shoes in a shipping accident
All that happened to the shoes in a shipping accident
Tip3: Simplify description by using general words
概要
Paragraph 3:
Q1.How did he track where the shoes landed
Q2: What is the result of the study
With this data, he and a colleague were able to test and improve a computer program designed to model ocean currents, and publish the findings of their study.
He asked for the beachcombers’ help in collecting
information about where the shoes landed.
With the data, he learned a lot about the patterns of ocean currents.
3.He turned to the beachcombers. With the data, he managed to learn a lot about the patterns of ocean currents.
He turned to the beachcombers.
概要
As a result of his work, Ebbesmeyer has become known as the scientist to call with questions about any unusual objects found floating in the ocean. He has even started an association of beachcombers and ocean experts, with 500 subscribers from Africa to New Zealand. They have recorded all lost objects
ranging from potatoes to golf gloves.
Paragraph 4:
As a result of his work, Ebbesmeyer has become known as the scientist to call with questions about any unusual objects found floating in the ocean. He has even started an association of beachcombers and ocean experts, with 500 subscribers from Africa to New Zealand. They have recorded all lost objects
ranging from potatoes to golf gloves.
4. He has become a famous expert in this type of research.
Tip3: Use general words instead of specific examples
概要
1. 改变词性
2. 近义词替代
3. 用概括性的词或名词性从句替代具体细节或例子
Tips to make a summary brief
概要
Ocean expert, Curtis Ebbesmeyer employs a new way to study ocean currents.
He was inspired by what happened to the shoes in a shipping accident. He carried out an experiment.
He turned to the beachcombers. With the data, he managed to learn a lot about patterns of ocean currents.
He has become a known expert in his type of research.
Main idea for each paragraph:
概要
Ocean expert, Curtis Ebbesmeyer employs a new way to study ocean currents. He was inspired by what happened to the shoes in a shipping accident. He carried out an experiment. He turned to the beachcombers. With the data, he managed to learn a lot about patterns of ocean currents. He has become a known expert in his type of research.
Brief; Complete; Correct; Coherent; No copying
1.Use transitions
衔接词
2. Combine sentences by using phrases
合并句子
概要
1. He was determined to get an iPhone SE.
He did not mind waiting for hours.
2. She was attracted by the beauty of nature.
She decided to spend another two days on the farm.
3. I have tons of homework to do every day.
I hardly have any time to hang out with friends.
Exercise 2: Sentences combining
概要
Ocean expert, Curtis Ebbesmeyer employs a new way to study ocean currents. He was inspired by what happened to the shoes in a shipping accident. He carried out an experiment. He turned to the beachcombers. With the data, he managed to learn a lot about patterns of ocean currents. He has become a known expert in his type of research.
1. Use transitions
衔接词
Step 3: Group work
2. Combine sentences by using phrases
合并句子
概要
Curtis Ebbesmeyer, an ocean expert, adopts a new way to study ocean currents. Inspired by what happened to the shoes in a ship accident, he turned to the beachcombers and gathered convincing information about the route the floating shoes travelled. Based on it, not only did he learn about the movement of ocean currents, he has also become a famous expert in this type of research.
The study
(why
and how)
P2-3
The result
P4
Topic
sentence
P1
A possible version
概要
Step 4: Assignment
1. Review what we have learned today and write a summary for passage B.
2. Evaluate your summary using the table below.
Factors 总分为25分；一个星星代表1分，
5星-好 4星-较好 3星-一般 2星-较差 1星-差
理解准确，涵盖全部要点 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
有效使用语句间连接成分，结构紧凑 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
完全使用自己的语言 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
字数60左右(不少于40不多于80); 标点规范;拼写正确;书写工整美观 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
Assessment
Thank you !