高考英语书面表达概要写作课件（19张PPT）

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过程性概要写作
summary
What is a summary
A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of the whole passage, not the details.
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写作特点
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考纲要求
1. 考纲要求
概要写作。提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Workaholics live for their work, often spending many extra hours at work, and often taking work home to complete. It's fine to live in a work-hard culture, but when work becomes the only reason for a persons existence above more important things( such as family and friends), the issue becomes critical. That's the problem more and more Americans are faced with.
Americans are working more hours per week than in years past, and with many companies reducing employees, more and more workers are worried about their own jobs. Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers don’t even bother to take vacations, partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do. Besides, it is obvious that part of the matter is financial. More and mgre people begin to define success in terms of financial measures. The higher ones income is, the more respect one gets. Finally, people nowadays live and work in a connected environment ---e-mails, instant messaging, fax machines, and cell phones---making hard for them to truly get time away from their work, even when they are on holiday.
When work becomes the only reason for being---when it becomes the only thing people think about, the only thing that truly makes people happy, many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids. Divorce rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up. Undoubtedly, it is time to do something.
To reduce workaholism, you must stay away from work once in a while. There are many ways to do that: Spend time with family and friends: Call home often to stay connected; Learn to say no to new assignments Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape: Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect. It will take some effort, but for yourself and those you love, you really should make the effort. Have a try and you won't regret it.
Writing Style:
Narration
Argumentation
Exposition
Exposition
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Read for style
Topic:
workaholic phenomenon
This exposition tells us a social phenomenon
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Read for topic and predict
Reading tip 1: pay attention to the most frequently-appeared words, or similar words.
Workaholics live for their work, often spending many extra hours
at work, and often taking work home to complete. It's fine to live in
a work-hard culture, but when work becomes the only reason for a
persons existence above more important things( such as family and
friends), the issue becomes critical. That's the problem more and more
Americans are faced with.
Workaholics
problem
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Paragraph 1
Key point: More and more Americans are faced with the problems of .....
The number of workaholics in America is ......
Writing tip 1 : Some similar sentence structures can help you to restate.
Americans are working more hours per week than in years past, and with many companies reducing employees, more and more workers are worried about their own jobs. Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers don’t even bother to take vacations, partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do. Besides, it is obvious that part of the matter is financial. More and more people begin to define success in terms of financial measures. The higher ones income is, the more respect one gets. Finally, people nowadays live and work in a connected environment ---e-mails, instant messaging, fax machines, and cell phones---making hard for them to truly get time away from their work, even when they are on holiday.
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Paragraph 2
Reading tip 2: Liking words can help you to find the key points.
going after money;
Key points: Americans are working more hours
Supporting reasons: fears losing the job;
The reason why.....are...
connected techonogy
Writing tip 2 : You can try to combine the key points together by changing part of speech(转变词性).
damage our health
When work becomes the only reason for being---when it becomes the only thing people think about, the only thing that truly makes people happy, many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids. Divorce rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up. Undoubtedly, it is time to do something.
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Paragraph 3
Undoubtedly, it
is time to do something.
......not only ......, but also ........
Key point: extreme workaholic
Results: break the family;
Writing tip 3 : Some linking words can be used in the sentence.
Reading tip 3: transitional sentence can help you to predict the following passage .
To reduce workaholism, you must stay away from work once in a while. There are many ways to do that: Spend time with family and friends;Call home often to stay connected; Learn to say no to new assignments; Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape;Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect. It will take some effort, but for yourself and those you love, you really should make the effort. Have a try and you won't regret it.
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Paragraph 4
Aiming at .......,you can make efforts to take various ways, which will be worthwhile.
Reading tip 4: Punctuation(标点符号)can help you to find the key points .
Key Points:
take efforts worthwhile
To reduce workaholism, you must stay away
from work once in a while.
many ways
Writing tip 4 : some advanced
sentence structures will be helpful.
Para. Key points
1 The number of workaholics in America is increasing
rapidly.
2 The reasons why Americans work more hours are fears losing job, going after money and connected environment.
3 Extreme workaholics not only break the family, but also damage health .
4 Aiming at reducing workaholism,you can make efforts to take various ways, which will be worthwhile.
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key points
Para.1:
Para.2:
Para.3:
Para.4:
workaholic phenomenon
three reasons
problems/harmful effects
ways/suggestions
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Structure of the passage
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some linking words
表并列、递进： not only...but also, ...
表原因：because (of) ,the reason why....,
表结果：as a result, consequently,...
表总结：therefore, in conclusion, ...
......
The number of Americans (who are) becoming workaholic is increasing. (要点一)
The reason why Americas work more hours are avoiding losing jobs, going after money as well as communication technologies. (要点二)
Not only will workaholism break people's families, but also damage their health.(要点三)
Aiming to solve the problem, you can make efforts to take a series of measures, which is worthwhile.
(要点四)
表结果：as a result, consequently,...
表总结：therefore, in conclusion, ...
The number of Americans (who are) becoming workaholic is increasing. (要点一) The reason why Americans work more hours are fears losing jobs, going after money as well as communication technologies. (要点二) Not only will workaholism break people's families, but also damage their health.(要点三) Aiming to solve the problem, you can make efforts to take a series of measures, which is worthwhile.(要点四)
therefore
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A possible version
Assignment:
Finish your article , and then polish them.
Finally, please review the steps to write a summary in your best handwriting.
Thank You So Much !